Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144 - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
He teases? and Cinderella? Wow! And someone seems fixated on his scar 😃 Eager to see what's next - she straightaway got invited to ASR's party , will LA be there i wonder...
I always land up feeling bad for LA..she's always almost bowing out gracefully but i do enjoy Arnav and LA's friendship.
Akash and Payal are so real - i am loving them
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Posted: 12 years ago
there we get a cliffhanger. loved the flow of chapter and the characterization of khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
canderalla
ha so sweet
thanks for pm
nice update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay Gitu and Khushi drank together and shared a few thumkas too.

This is getting awesome with each chapter. I like how things are slowly easing in.

I am a little curious to know why Arnav asked Aakash, Khushi's age. But then again I am sure we'll find out sooner 😉 Cinderella..

This was so niceee and easy on the mind and heart.
🤗

(Still can't get over the fact that Gitu's here)
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Posted: 12 years ago

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this is shaping ot beautifully.


kush kiss the scar girl. should i send the footstool??



and the black towel too, please? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thankyou my dear Basanti ji ... have been waiting eagerly ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Chapter . Loving the way the story is progressing . Thanks for the PM :) The reference about cinderella and prince charming was cute :) Oooh she is so fascinated by his scar😊
Edited by anumadduri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the update!!

I honestly loved everything about it!

The way you did not drag Arnav and Lavanya's break-up and at the same time it showed that the characters are not foolish but are mature and smart.

The way Khushi did not exclaim "Aap?!" when she saw Arnav was something I really loved. Because usually that is what happens in other FF's or shows (no offense meant to both) and I really liked the fact that your FF is different and this is one real strong example to prove that (for me).

And I love the way Arnav calls her Cindrella! It's just Ah-Mazing!! Like totally! <3

Looking forward to read more'.. Please update soon :)
Edited by Tanitha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
A very nice update, NB Ji!!
It is laudable the manner in which, La-Arnav parted ways..no hard feelings, and the friendship bond intact...handled with a lot of sophistication...
Meera able to perceive that Khushi is an invaluable asset and already thinking about a promoting her, very soon...and Khushi impressed with Meera's presentation and knowledge, (not to forget that respect for Arnav went a few notches hgher, too.)..it felt good, to read about both acknowledging about the other's traits...thank heavens ,no dirty office politics..
Khushi-Arnav coming face-to-face and then him addressing her as Cinderella...she unable to take her mind off that irresistible scar...very endearing
I loved Akash..he seemed concerned about Khushi and, queried about bringing her along.. And, Arnav quizzed about Khushi's age?? My curiosity has piqued , exponentially
I love Raja Ravi Verma...his paintings seem to bring a sort of tranquilty to the environs..so, am able to comprehend Khushi's reaction ,and, Arnav owns one...
Impatient for the next..
Edited by Aanchal15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really good concept plz add me to pm list so far m loving what I read...

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