Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144 - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
This is very intriguing! Do continue please!
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved all d parts..

plz pm me d next time u update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
'Like what you see Cinderella?'
Kushi turned back to stare into dark brown eyes. Before she knew her eyes automatically went to his scar. Damn!

Damn that scar!!! NB ji u are making me go obsessive about that scar for sure... 😉
and he called her Cindrella... hahahaha... apt name!!

loved the update dear... u are doing great NB!! Like where story is heading... keep writing!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
loving what i am reading.. pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am finally here with my comment on the story :)

Firstly I didn't know that you write and I am glad that you do :D

Your excerpt is super intriguing. Khushi needs an abortion. She needs it. She doesn't want it. Or am I reading too much? 😕 Now I am getting impatient to know when will this part appear in the story



15 months ago? The excerpt will come after 15 months of story time??? Kitna wait :(
Trust elders to give a bag full of food :D Khushi is their extra precious child because she was born after 11 yrs of marriage! Wow she is educated and going to stay away from parents working. Yeh huyi na baat! :D Payal is such a nice friend. She and Akash are already dating and are intimate too :P Me likey :) She is going to work in AR I hope so too that neither Khushi nor Payal get hurt :)

Now enters the hero, ASR :D

Ahem ahem. Dusky matlab La, for sure :D La doesn't seem like the type who would take any shit from ASR. Strong woman I really like :) So they are friends with benefit but La wants more but ASR has not promised for anything and she has agreed to it. But one can always hope? She wants to live with him in his apartment - a step forward in the relationship but ASR doesn't want it to go beyond the physical aspect. Nani and grandson ka 36 ka aakdaa hai :D P.S. You write gutter well :)


Shopping! 😃 Heels are killing, actually. Flats <3 But heels looks so sexy. But flats are so comfy! Sorry for the rant. I love shoes you see :D I have not tried Japanese food yet. Try karayke padi. So sweet of Akash to make Khushi comfortable around him and ensuring her that she will be fine in AR. Achcha boyfriend hai :D Chote and Nani just need a reason to make the other angry! Nani complains about his excessive work on the dining table and not getting married and our Chotte in turn gets angry coz of Nani's nagging and marriage talks. Akaash has spoken about Payal to his Nani matlab he is nice 100% Let us seen if Anjali is able to manipulate Arnav :) She didn't meet ASR - cutty 😡 Khushi is so hardworking. Me likeys. Meera is already impressed I guess. She was working so late!
Oh now I got it why she didn't meet ASR pehle. Because she has to fall and he has to catch her 😃 I take my cutty back 😆


I hate it I hate it I hate when children have to work. Mujhse sahaa nahi jaata 😭 They should play and go to school and not work. Good AR's heart is in the right place :) I hope La and Arnav could come on a decision which will be good for both. Loved to see Arnav's POV of meeting Khushi. Yes NB ji that scar! Ooo that scar! He is toh naughty teasing wala Arnav. Just the way I like 😃 He is making a conversation with her? 😲 Now this is interesting 😃 Aww kitna embarrass huyi Khushi. She left a shoe! Trust Khushi to do that! He riled her up :D He is already thinking about her. Age ka kya achaar daloge? Naam pataa karo Arnav bitwa :D Khushi apna gussa Payal par mat utaaro. So she is already day dreaming about the sexy man huh? Find out Khushi 😃


Kalyaani I want a banner too. Tu mujhse se pyaar hi nahi karti hai BTW loved the banner and the byline 😃 La and Arnav broke up :( But chalo it is good for them coz it was not leading anywhere and there was no future for La. I hope you have someone in store for La :D Glad he squeezes in some time for his brother. What if Khushi goes to London instead of Meera? One can always hope 😃 Meera is so impressed with Khushi :D Let Khushi go to London with him instead of you Meera please 😃 They meet officially now. O how shocked Khushi is! And this Arnav is teasing her again! Unke scar se Khushi ki nazre hatti hi nahi. That scar is sexy! Akash will propose Payal 👏 and she will say yes, mujhe maaloom hai 😃 Toh Arnav ki enquiry puri ho gayi? He was right about her age. He has invited her to the party too. Subtle.

Khushi toh talli ho gayi :D


She is in his home already. Eeeks! Damn the scar!

NB ji zaraa jaldi jaldi update kijiye :D


I am loving this FF. It is light uptill now and I am liking the characters and their development. Doesn't look like your first FF :D

Great going :D and I am looking forward to the next update. Translation = update asap 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love your FF. It's really well written... very intriguing and very different. You have developed all the characters beautifully ...I love your Arnie - sophisticated and also has a sense of humour. Khushi's character is evolving beautifully from a small down girl to big city girl... I'm glad she is open to new experiences. Greedily lapped up all the chapters in one go!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

I am finally here with my comment on the story :)

Firstly I didn't know that you write and I am glad that you do :D

Your excerpt is super intriguing. Khushi needs an abortion. She needs it. She doesn't want it. Or am I reading too much? 😕 Now I am getting impatient to know when will this part appear in the story



15 months ago? The excerpt will come after 15 months of story time??? Kitna wait :(
Trust elders to give a bag full of food :D Khushi is their extra precious child because she was born after 11 yrs of marriage! Wow she is educated and going to stay away from parents working. Yeh huyi na baat! :D Payal is such a nice friend. She and Akash are already dating and are intimate too :P Me likey :) She is going to work in AR I hope so too that neither Khushi nor Payal get hurt :)

Now enters the hero, ASR :D

Ahem ahem. Dusky matlab La, for sure :D La doesn't seem like the type who would take any shit from ASR. Strong woman I really like :) So they are friends with benefit but La wants more but ASR has not promised for anything and she has agreed to it. But one can always hope? She wants to live with him in his apartment - a step forward in the relationship but ASR doesn't want it to go beyond the physical aspect. Nani and grandson ka 36 ka aakdaa hai :D P.S. You write gutter well :)


Shopping! 😃 Heels are killing, actually. Flats <3 But heels looks so sexy. But flats are so comfy! Sorry for the rant. I love shoes you see :D I have not tried Japanese food yet. Try karayke padi. So sweet of Akash to make Khushi comfortable around him and ensuring her that she will be fine in AR. Achcha boyfriend hai :D Chote and Nani just need a reason to make the other angry! Nani complains about his excessive work on the dining table and not getting married and our Chotte in turn gets angry coz of Nani's nagging and marriage talks. Akaash has spoken about Payal to his Nani matlab he is nice 100% Let us seen if Anjali is able to manipulate Arnav :) She didn't meet ASR - cutty 😡 Khushi is so hardworking. Me likeys. Meera is already impressed I guess. She was working so late!
Oh now I got it why she didn't meet ASR pehle. Because she has to fall and he has to catch her 😃 I take my cutty back 😆


I hate it I hate it I hate when children have to work. Mujhse sahaa nahi jaata 😭 They should play and go to school and not work. Good AR's heart is in the right place :) I hope La and Arnav could come on a decision which will be good for both. Loved to see Arnav's POV of meeting Khushi. Yes NB ji that scar! Ooo that scar! He is toh naughty teasing wala Arnav. Just the way I like 😃 He is making a conversation with her? 😲 Now this is interesting 😃 Aww kitna embarrass huyi Khushi. She left a shoe! Trust Khushi to do that! He riled her up :D He is already thinking about her. Age ka kya achaar daloge? Naam pataa karo Arnav bitwa :D Khushi apna gussa Payal par mat utaaro. So she is already day dreaming about the sexy man huh? Find out Khushi 😃


Kalyaani I want a banner too. Tu mujhse se pyaar hi nahi karti hai BTW loved the banner and the byline 😃 La and Arnav broke up :( But chalo it is good for them coz it was not leading anywhere and there was no future for La. I hope you have someone in store for La :D Glad he squeezes in some time for his brother. What if Khushi goes to London instead of Meera? One can always hope 😃 Meera is so impressed with Khushi :D Let Khushi go to London with him instead of you Meera please 😃 They meet officially now. O how shocked Khushi is! And this Arnav is teasing her again! Unke scar se Khushi ki nazre hatti hi nahi. That scar is sexy! Akash will propose Payal 👏 and she will say yes, mujhe maaloom hai 😃 Toh Arnav ki enquiry puri ho gayi? He was right about her age. He has invited her to the party too. Subtle.

Khushi toh talli ho gayi :D


She is in his home already. Eeeks! Damn the scar!

NB ji zaraa jaldi jaldi update kijiye :D


I am loving this FF. It is light uptill now and I am liking the characters and their development. Doesn't look like your first FF :D

Great going :D and I am looking forward to the next update. Translation = update asap 😃



I farak you lazy patha. ❤️

Thank you so very much for this comments, made me feel so very happy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
K demands an update from K.
Hamari maange puri karo.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

K demands an update from K.

Hamari maange puri karo.


i second that, we want an updateee
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MentalExotica


i second that, we want an updateee



I third that. Bas!

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