Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

just read all 5 parts

loved it

Everywhere they are together

Please PM me with updates

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836772

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Love how he calls her Cinderella! 😆

Loving the friendship between the gang and Khushi! And how Arnav seems to keep noticing her!

Can't wait for the house warming party! Is Arnav gonna be floored by Khushi's beauty?!

Awesome update!

Thanks for the PM.😃

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GodhuliLogon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

awesome.. Cinderella.. a new one from him..

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi
AWWW NICE UPDATE!!!!!!

SO ARNAV PURPOSELY INVITED AAKASH AND PAYALCOZ HE KNEW THAT THEY WOULD NOT LEAVE KHUSHI ALONE!!!!

SO KHUSHI IS OBSESSED WITH HIS SCAR!!!!!

HEY PLZZZ UPDATE TOMMOROW MORNING,

I CAN'T WAIT MORE TO READ UR UPDATE!!!!!!!

ill try but i cant promise such frequent updates as I have a 3 months old baby, so updates are dependent on a lot of factors. Thanks for commenting.

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McNinja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

I am loving the story so far. This new spin on all characters is awesome. I like this Arnav, him and his Cinderellas. And I like khushi wiling to step out of her box and try new things and getting along with the office staff.

really liking how you are unfolding the story as well- the pace, details all make it flow nicely...hope you get to update soon!

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star303

@star303

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Trust arnav to get what he wants without being obvious. That was a nice way to invite khushi. Waiting to read what happens at the party. ASR and lavanya's break up was handled very well. Oh I love your Payash!!!
thanks for the pm.

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

that was simply awesome...waiting to know what happened at the party...

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Angels11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

I like the characters in this FF. The FF writers on this forum r better at characterization than the actual CVs. So here ASR is mature & not boorish, KKG is fun loving but not OTT, Payal & Akash r not wet socks who keep calling each other ji-ji.

Good 👏

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Amrita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Khuhsiii already having crush for her boss...lovely..

Loved Payal-Aakash ..they are really sweet hearts... and yeah, Lavanya is now friends with Arnav... So, now path is cleared... Hope Arnav wll also fall in love with her soon