Back to MY JAAN(AR FF) 1-11-13 Completed

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Armaan n ridhima are wedded n it begins like this...
More twist n turns


armaan-hello jaan kaise ho..
Ridhima-armaan aabhi toh tum gaye ho 5 min pehle...
Armaan-jaan 5min pehle tumhe pata hai 5min mein 300sec hote hain...
Aur tumhare bina 1sec bhi 1 saal lagata hai...

Ridhima-(blushing) aacha batao kyun phone kiya...
Armaan-oyee hoyyee...
Pata hai tum sharmate hua bahut aachi lagti ho...
Ridhima-armaan!!!!
Armaan-ridhimaa(husky voice)
anji-armaan!!!
Armaan-tumhari awaj ko kya hua...
Anji-armaan...
Armaan turn around n see anji...
(to ridhima) i will call u later...
(to anji) aao na anji...
Anji-armaan tum kabhi nahi sudhroge na...
Aacha choda ye lo tumne jo file mangai thi...
Armaan open the file n shocked...seeing his expression anji get curious
Anji-kya hua armaan!!!!
Armaan-tumne ye file dikhi thi kya...(scared)
anj-nahi toh direct tumhare pass le aai thi... Kyun kya hai...
Armaan-nahi kuch nahi!!!
Anji-armaan u okay...
Armaan-hain...(still in shock) Mujhe kuch kam hai i have to go...see u later...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Armaan exit n went to fire escape... N tear spill out...
Here anji got curious...

Fire escape
Armaan-mein ridhma ko kaise bataunga..
Nahi mein usse nahi bata sakta.. Nahi mein nahi bataunga...

Tym passing now every frnd of armaan know his behaviour through out the day he was stressed out n thinking of ridhima...
Armaan went home at night today ridhima didn't went to hospital as she just return from confress so get 2 days holidays. So waiting for armaan...
Arman arive home n straight went to his room n put his file in his cupboard hiding it...
Ridhima felt something odd as armaan alway comes to her firsth then he was to go to his room after ridhima force him to leave her...

Arman arive home n straight went to his room n put his file in his cupboard hiding it...
Ridhima felt something odd as armaan alway comes to her firsth then he was to go to his room after ridhima force him to leave her...
Armaan was quiet during dinner.. Ridhima want to ask him but wait for him to speak first...
Both went to their room...
Ridhim-(mind) puchun ki nahi... Bahut pareshan hai...
Ridhima-kya hua hai armaan jab se aaye ho tab se dekh rahi hun bahut pareshan ho...
Armaan lost in thoughts..
Ridhima(curiously)-armaan kya hua hai(shaking him)
armaan-kuch nahi ridhima...
Ridhima-(putting her hand on his face) aapni ridhima ko nahi bataoge...
Armaan look in her eyes...
He was about to tell her but stoped...
Armaan-kuch nahi ridhima.!!! Bus ek patient ki wajhse pareshan hun...
Ridhima i wanna sleep now.. Can we...
Ridhima nodded her head
But she was not convienced but she decieded to leave the topic for now..
N both slept in each others arm.

Next day..
Armaan went to sanjeevni... N i his way he remember he left his file at home..
So he rook u turn to return home as soon as possible..
Ridhima was managing armaan's almira after he left. As she was putting things properly she was a file back at almira.
Ridhima-armaan bhi na pata nahi yahan kis ki file dal di phir kahega mujhe file nahi mil rahi...
She take that file n it slipp of her hand n paper scatter here n there.. See was aabout to pick it up when here eyes fell on the patient name. She was shocked out of her wits.N was about to open.Armaan just came there n snach the file from her.



ar-ridhima tum meri almira mein kya kar reahi ho...
Ridhima was shocked...
Ar-tum meri almira ko haath kyun lagaya...
Ridhima just ignore his question..
Ri-armaan mujhe file dikho...
Ar-ridhima is mein kuch nahi hai...
Ri-armaan show me the file abhi!!!(strictly)
ar-mein ne kaha na ridhima. Ismein...
Ri-armaan show me the file(angryly cutting him in between)
ar-plz ridhima...
Ri-armaan tum file dikh rahe ho ki nahi...
Ar-plz ridhima i can't...
Ri-armaan kya hua hai tumhe...
Ar-mujhe kya hota mein toh perfect hun dekh! Spreading his arms..
Ri-armaan mazak mat karo batao mujhe...
Ar-dseriouly ridhima mujhe kuch nahi..
Ri(cutting him)-aagar kuch nahi hai toh dikho mujhe...
N she snatches the file n open it n was shocked...ridhima fall on her knees
Ar-ridhima..(moving to her)
ri-armaan tumne mujhse ye sab kyu chupaya... Kyun armaan kya... Mera tum par koi haq nahi hai... Kya mein tumhare liya importance nahi raktoi jo tumne ye sab mujhse chupaya... Kyun armaan kyun...
Ar-mein tumhe dukhi nahi dekhna chahata tha...
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Ar-ridhima..(moving to her)
ri-armaan tumne mujhse ye sab kyu chupaya... Kyun armaan kya... Mera tum par koi haq nahi hai... Kya mein tumhare liya importance nahi raktoi jo tumne ye sab mujhse chupaya... Kyun armaan kyun...
Ar-mein tumhe dukhi nahi dekhna chahata tha...



Now the part 4


Ri-armaan tum aise soch bhi kaise sakte ho.. Armaan tumhe brain tumor hai vo bhi last stage.. Aur u didn't told me...
Ar-sry ridhima.. Mein...
Ri-(cutting him) operation kab hai..
Ar-mein ne mana kar diya...
Ri-mein keerti mam se baat karti hun...
Ar-kis ko nahi pata is bare mein...
Ridhima look at him shocked...

2 days Before armaan's operation..
Ar-ridhima i need u to promise me something...
Ri-anything for u armaan...
Jo tum kahoge mein maanungi.. Par operation toh tumhe karwana hi padega..
Ar-mein operate karwaunga par ek shart par.. Aur kasam bhi
Ri-kaise shart.????
Ar-yehi ki aagar mera operation sucess nahi hua tho...(ridhima put her hand on his mouth) toh tum... Apni life mein aage bhadaogi... Aur mera liya khush rahne ki koshish karogi.. Plz ridhima don't say no. Its my last wish plz...
Ridhima was dumbfound of his demand...
Ri-armaan aaisa nahi ho sakta...
Ar-ridhima tumne meri kasam khai hai...
Ridhima was saying no but armaan convienced her...
Ri-tumhe kuch nahi hoga... Mein tumhare saath hi rahungi...
Ar-plz basket...

2 days later
Now armaan's operation was started...


after 3hrs of pacing from one corner to another ridhima saw dr. Coming out... . She rush to them n dr. Say with sry face...
Dr.- Sry Mrs. Malik but hum Mr.Malik ko bacha nahi paye...
Rid-nahi aisa nahi ho sakta... Aap majak kar rahe hain na...
Dikhey bahut hi ganda majak tha..
Mujhe abhi armaan se milna hai...
Dr.- sambha liya aapne aapko Mrs. Malik... Vo aab hamare bich nahi rahe...
Rid- aapko sharam nahi aati aisa ghatiya majak karte hua...
Nikki/muski- how are in shock till now... Recovered n hold ridhima...
Nikki-ridhima sambhalo aapne aapko..
Rid- nikki, muski dekho na dr. Kaisa majak kar rahe hain... Bolo na inhe ki armaan ko kuch nahi ho sakta...
Plz nikki tumhara best friend nahi ja sakta...
Vo aapni basket ko nahi chod ke ja sakta...
Muski aapne hero se kehna uthe... Plz guyiess...
All were in a bad condition... Their condition was very much painfull they lost their most loving,caring, helping n sweetest frnd... N now ridhima was lossing herself...
Dr- sry but this is for u all...
(giving them envelope...)
dr- Mr. Malik ask me to give u this envolope after operation...
Nikki- thank u dr.
They took the envelope..
N dr start to leave n turn around once again...
Dr. - yes i forgot Mr. Malik also asked for his last wish...
Muski-last wish..!!!!
Nikki- kaisi last wish..!????
Dr.- he don't want to make anyone hurt se he asked us not to let anybody see his deadbody n send his ussefull organs for donation...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oo Its Awesome dear:-) I have tears in my eyes after reading it, Why you killed Armaan? Feeling bad 4 Ridhima, Will you continue dear???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hawww u killed him...💔
continue soon plzzz
i wana read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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promo ...


om mangalam bhagwan vishnu....

"aaj se aap pati patni hua..."

"mein hamesha se armaan ki hi rahungi"

"mujhe thoda tym chaiye"


"i m sry bas.. ridhima... mein har jaya"

"kis muh se tumhare saamne aaun"
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting promo dear:-) but I m very confused.. When will u update??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice! plz update it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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da promo is confusing me! plz do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice parts
Do continue soon
thanks for the Pm

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