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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part
dhanu is sooo cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very very very nice update.
Loved it.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update😊😊..loved dhanu and armaan scene❤️...waiting for the next update..continue soon..and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part!
Loved it!
Cont soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awee dhanu is cute and adorable just like me
very nice part
but small
holi wow
m wondering wt wil dhanu do
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...👏
awww...they r so cute...☺️
yeyyy...🥳
holy party time 🥳
eagerly waiting for the part...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
read till PART 10 n loved it so so much
it made me cry yet reminded of AR's eternal love
the dialogues are just too good
will read more n comment later
ty so much for pm
u write well
-vaani.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
BACK TO U.

RECAP



armaan - so guyies aaj achanak kaise aana hua...
anji - armaan tumhe toh yaad nahi hoga... kal kya hai,,
armaan thought a bit and then ridhima to tought...
armaan - kal monday hain..
muskan - oye hero ye toh humein bhi pata hain aaj sunday hain toh kal monday hi hoga na
armaan smile fishily
nikii -armaan kal day kya hai
armaan - kya hain .. hain 16 march...
rahul - toh tujhe kuch yaad nahi aaya
armaan - oye rahoool.. tu sidh sidhe bata de na kal kya hai...
atul - armaan mera bhai kal holi hai holi... tu kaise bhul gaya


armaan - oh hain kal toh holi hai...hehehe sry bhul gaya tha sry
ridhima - armaan yye toh hamare dhanu ki pehli holi hain... i m so excited...
dhanu - hodi(holi)








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anji- *tring tring*
abhi- *tring tring*
muski- *tring tring*
nikki- *tring tring*

all look at there pager...shit yaar.. emergency DR.Kirti...

anji - chalo atul pehle tumhe drop kar dun phir mujhe jana hai...
atul - hain chalo.. bye guyies...
anji - bye ridz bye armaan

muskan - rahul tu mujhe sanjeevni chod dega kya...
rahul -hain chalo...
muski/rahul - bye guyies

nikki /abhi humein bhi janna hai bye guyies...


all went away.. armaan and ridhima went o see them off...
then both move inside dhanu still in ridhima's arms she was moving in when armaan from back comes after locking the door and hug ridhima around her waist and put his head on her shoulder... and closed his eyes...
feeling being in her armaan's arms ridhima releax and rest her head on his shoulder backward and closed her eyes .. as by know dhanu was sleeping... on ridhima's other shoulder...

being like this for sometime.. ridhima move out and put dhanu on bed carefully and tuck him in blanket very carefully...

and them move back where armaan was standing...
looking at ridhima how carefully she is with dhanu .. how softly she was dealling with every thing she do around dhanu...
armaan was admiring this with so much loved filled eyes that he was lost in his thoughts...

when ridhima saw this after tucking dhanu carefull and lovingly...she admire armaan's way of looking and his loved filled eyes that are making all the surrounding filled with love...only...

ridhima moved toward armaan and then hug him and put her head on his chest above his heart...
and closed her eyes...
and armaan to respond the hug and closed his eyes and put his face in his ridhima's nape... inhaling her fragnance inhis heart...
but were justing leaving this moment and feeling content..

ridhima - armaan near his heart..
armaan - hmmm...
ridhima - i love u .. armaan smile hearing those three words which he have heard so many time in a hour but even then when he heard this from her he feel as if she was confessing for first tym.. those 3 words were something that he will never get tired to hear from his ridhima
armaan - i love u too.. i love u too basket...
ridhima - armaan hum kal kya karenga...
armaan - kal ka hum subha sochenga... abhi i want to romane with my beautiful wify...
ridhim hitting armaan - armaan tum bhi na..
ridhima - mein kya basket...
ridhim a- tumm na..
armaan - mein kya basket bolo na...
ridhima - tum bahut bahut bahut aache ho... i can't think of my life without u even for a min...
armana - toh kisne kaha hai ki aisa soch... hmmm
ridhima -i love u like anything armaan .. plz never leave me..
armaan - ridhima kya tum...
ridhima - nahi armaan mein tumhe dout nahi kar rahi na hi mein insecure hun... but its just ki...
armaan - ki kya basket ...
ridhima - ki mein tumhe kho nahi sakti... tumse dur nahi ja sakti... dar lagta hai ki kahi kuch aisa na ho ki mujhe kuch... *armaan puts his hand on her mouth*
armana - bus basket... bhul jao sab... i m here... i love u and dhanu love us so much ki kuch nahi hoga kisi ko bhi...
ridhima - i love u... armaan ky a... kya.. hum... vo .. mein...
armaan - kya baat hai ridhima * u can say to me na looking direct deeply in her eyes*
ridhima - armaan plz let in mein ur arm's plz.. never let me go...
armana - never..
now both were on bed armaan looking at the celling(roof) and ridhima's hed resting on his chest.. and she was playing with her fingure on his chest drawing imaginary pattern.. armana know by this gesture that his ridhima was think for something but didn't bug her he know she will tell hum what she was thinking by her self...

after sometime

ridhima - armaan mein aabhi aai ...
armaan - kya hua
ridhima - vo mujhe shower lena hai...
armaan - ahi mein nahi chodunga
ridhima - choda na armaan
armaan - nahi mein nahi abhi toh tum bol rahi thi mein tumhe na jane du toh aab mein nahi jaane dunga...
ridhima - armaan plz.
armaan - no way...
ridhima - armaa...*cut short*
armaaan - basket agar tumhe shower lena hai toh u know i can't leave u so u have to take it with me u know...
ridhima- *blush* armaan
armaan - see this and got his answer...(now armaan knows what was ridhima thinking few min ago)

after a long rleaxing bath both came out and slept peacefully in eachothers armaan... and dhanu was not sleeping on armaan's chest.. and ridhima on his shoulder...



Next moring
armaan and ridhim were getting ready in their room when armaan moved out of the room .. taking dhanu with him... so he won't fall from staris flowing his dadda..
ridhima was curious to know why armaan went suddenly then she follow him armaan went to the living room and took out the colour and put it in the plates... ridhim was seeing this from upstairs(their room was upstairs) and
then she said

ridhima - armaan tum ye kya kar rahe ho...(she come down the stairs and armaan move toward the stairs... dhanu was romming here and there on his knees crawling...


armaan - basket aaj mein dhanu ke saath khub holi khelunga..
ridhima - ji nahi aap aisa kuch nahi karenga Mr.Malik
armaan - kyun bhai Mrs,Malik
ridhima - kyun ki dhanu abhi bahut chota hai ...
armaan -toh kya hua.. hum toh khub holi khelenga...
ridhima - armaan dhanu abhi chota hain usse allerge ho sakti hai colours se.. so no...
armaan - arye basket yar ye mera dhanu ki pehli holi hai hamare saath .. aur u know na i love holi so .. hum toh khelnga...
ridhima - tum nahi kheloga...
armaan - mein toh khelunga...
ridhima - nahi
armaan - hain
ridhima - nahi
armaan - hain
ridhima - armaan
armaan- ridhima

here dhanu try to stand up seeing his parents with the help of table and at little distance colour were kept on the table from dhanu

*giggling*

both look at the direction of sound and found dhaun full coloured .. blue. green.. pink... red.. yellow.. all the colours are on dhanu's face and body and he was clapping his hands...

armaan laungh seing dhanu and dhanu giggle more but ridhima ... ridhima was fuming in anger
armaan - *armaan stop laughing* ye tumne kya kiya...
armana - mein ne kya kiya hai ... vo toh..
ridhima - armaan ..
armaan - what
ridhima - armaan tumne yahan colours kyun rakhe the...
armaan - arye basket dekho na dhanu ko bhi holi khelni hai dekh unse khud hi...
ridhima - armaan tum ...
armaan - mein *coming close*
ridhima -*pushing armaan way as then she will lose herself* don't b smart armaan... tumne yahn colour rahe aur aab dekho dhnau ne kya kiya...
armaan - aakele hi holi shuru kar di ...*laughing
ridhima - *glaring* armaan tum nahi sudhar sakte...

dhanu was seeing his parents and then he raise his hand and his hand hit another plate kept near by and the colour flew on armaan and ridhima now...
seeing this dhanu giggle and start clapping his hands...

armaan look at ridhima first then at himself and than at dhanu and ridhima first look at armaan then herself and then dhanu ...
then both armaan and ridhima burst out laughing.. and then dhanu to clapp more...

armaan pick dhanu in his arms and
armaan - mera dhanu ko bhi holi bahut pasand hai shayad..
ridhima putting little colour on his cheeks...with her fingure...
and armaan put holi colour on dhanu's another cheek with his nose.. where colour was there(when dhanu flew colours on them)

dhanu giglle... and then armaan rubb his cheeks on ridhima's cheek to put holi colour on her .. (ridhima felt armaan's skin against her and closed her eyes)
armaan - happy holi basket... (ridhima mouth was now O shape...)
ridhima - awww...
then armaan armaan was laughing and ridihima just threw colour on him... and armaan stop and look at his basket and soon the whole living room is coloured armaan and ridhima running after eachother ...

after getting tired both stop and sit on couch where dhanu was sitting as armaan put him down when he run after ridhima...
now when both where there catching their breadth with closed eyes and resting on eachother.
ridhima siting trying to catch her breadth with her head on armaan's sholder and holding armaan's arm and armaan trying to catch his breadth with his head back on couch headrest...

dhanu stand up with his hand still coloured..and sit on armaan's stomach and patted his hand on ridhima's face
dhanu - bachket...(ridhma smile with dhanu's hand on her face and listening his cute voice) ooohhh.. (dhanu make sound when ridhima was not opening her eyes)

then dhanu patted armaan's cheek with his other hand and the other hand still on ridhima;s cheek...
armaan open his eyes and look at dhanu..
dhanu - pointing to ridhima - bachket...
armaan see towards his basket she was smiling with still closed eyes and now armaan know she was living this moment and capturing that in her heart and mind for forever...
armaan - basket dhanu daar raha...(breaking her smile)
ridhima open her eyes instantly...
dhanu - bachket (with little tears)
ridhima - awww.. mela dhanu... daar gaya tha mela dhanu..
dhanu hug ridhima tightly ( as if saying mein aapko kahin nahi jane dunga mommy)
ridhima too hug him...then aparted..
ridhima - mein yahin hun baby... mein aapko chod kar kahin nahi ja rahi hun baby... mommy bhala aapne dhanu ko chod kar kaise ja sakti hain..hmmm...
mommy love dhanu sooo much...
dhanu -(shake his head in no n said) dhanu lub mole...
ridhima smile... and armaan admiring this mother child love...

then they all three move out smiling and happily talking with dhanu after sometime and as soon as they step out of the main door.. dhanu was snatched away from Armaan and ridhima and the very next moment when they realised what took place few min ago they where shocked...

screen freez on shocked faces of armaan and dhanu


















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Posted: 11 years ago
yeayy.. i'm 1st..🥳

omg aayuuu???? holi abhi??? u're too late swthrt 😛😆
anyways, lovely update dear..
dhanu bahot cute hain par ussey kissney chin liya??!!😲
update soon dear.. t.c..
luv,
di 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

yeayy.. i'm 1st..🥳

omg aayuuu???? holi abhi??? u're too late swthrt 😛😆
anyways, lovely update dear..
dhanu bahot cute hain par ussey kissney chin liya??!!😲
update soon dear.. t.c..
luv,
di 🤗


aap blog par bhi 1st thi di...
luv u
and di song hi baad mein release hua .. so not my mistake na POUT
and thank u soo much di...
luv u too
aayu

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