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Posted: 11 years ago
This is awesome!
Dhanu is sooo sweet...
But the last part is a bit scary...I hope it's the gang and no one else...
Cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part.
holi in July...but I like it.
Dhanu is so naughty...he colored himself.
who snatched Dhanu...I think the gang.

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Posted: 11 years ago
super cute update.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
BACK TO U.

RECAP

Ab tak aapne dekha
kaise ridhima armaan ko banana rahi hoti hai ki vo dhanu ke sath holi nahi khelaga.
par dusri taraf dhanu aapne aap pa hi colour gira leta hai...
ridhima ye dekh kar ghussa hoti hain par itne mein dhanu uspar bhi colour udda deta hain... phir armaan ridhima dhanu holi kehne lagte hain..

kuch der baad jais hi vo ghar se nikalte hain
koi ridhima armaan se dhanu ko cheen leta hain...

ab aage...






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Armaan and ridhima were too shocked when dhanu was snatched away from them..
and the next moment they both were standing drenched in water from head to toe... and both looking at each other and then in front of them...

anji and nikky where standing there with dhanu in their arms and rahul atul and abhi had poured water on them..
then they all are laughing seeing armaan and ridhima's expression...
and dhanu saw his mom and dad and jump towards armaan ...

dhanu - dadda...
armaan recover from shock with this sound of his name...
and hold dhanu from nikki...

ridhima - guyes ye sab kya hai...
gang- bura na maano holi hain...heheheh

then holi started ...
a frnd of armaan a very old frnd came to his home and he just for fun brought bhang ladu's with him.. which everyone eat except padma as she came late...
and all are talli... hahahah...

atul - anjali mein tumhare colour lagaun...
anji - atul u r too cute *pinching his cheeks*
atul - nahi u are cute..
anji - atul i love u
atul - i love khushi.. hehehheh ATUL FOLLOW ANJI


muski - rahul ye sab ghum kyun raha hai
rahul - hain yaar sab do do ho gaya hai
muski - eyy rahul tu bhi do do...
rahul - ehhh... vo dekh ... BOTH WERE ROMING HOLDING EACH OTHER


nikki- ye pakdo pakdo
abhi hold niki
nikki - ayeee mujhe nahi ghar ko pakdo armaan ka ghar hil raha hai... *spotting armaan and drag abhi with her and patted armaan who is with ridhima *
nikki - oye armaan ... appna ghar pakadh vo hil raha hai
ridhima - armaan mujhe ladu aur khane hai.
armaan - nahi basket aur nahi hum na train train kheln..
ridhima - mujhe ladu chaiye...
nikki - armaan apne ghar pakad vo bhag jayega *asking armaan*
muski -oye nikki tu bhi do do... oye tu sab do do... *muski rahul to join them*
atul - armaan mera bhai... hahaahahaha


ridhima went from there taking chance and eat ladu too much... full one pack of half kg.. *too much to eat na*
and armaan was not that much high with bhang. so he was searching basket.. but even then he had little effect of bhang ...

armaan was searching his basket.. with dhanu in his arm...
and he was not able to stand properly
padam enter the party to wish AR but when she was armaan with dhanu she smile but soon her smile turn to shock...
armaan was not able to stand up but holding dhanu tightly...
padma move to armaan quickly and took dhanu ...
padma -armaan ye... tumne bhang ...
armaan - nahi maa.. mein ne nahi.. bhang nahi..
ridhima came and she haven't seen her mom and she almost lean on armaan from back and say
ridhima - armaan ye ladu aur nahi hai kya.. mujhe aur chaiye*pout*
armaan - basket
padma - ridhima tumne bhi bhang...
ridhima - maa... nahi maa mein ne toh ye ladu khaye bus..*looking at armaan*
ridhima - sachi mein .. sirf ladu
padma took ladu and took little bie..
padma - armaan ismein bhang hai
armaan - bhang..
ridhima - bhang... ladu mein
gang - bhang...
muski - matlab hum sab ne bhang khali .. hehehhehe
nikki - sab ne heheheheh
anji - hahaaha

ridhima then again shoo away...

loud girl
Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh bole re zamana kharabi ho gayi
Mere ang raja, jo tera rang laga
Toh seedhi-saadi chhori sharabi ho gayi


ridhima-
Itna maza, kyun aa raha hai (ridhima spread hand out with full smile)
Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya (ridhima then pointed to armaan and then thinking)


anji-
Itna maza, kyun aa raha hai (anji sing then joining ridhima and leaning on her shoulder as they all can't stand)
Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya (anji pointed armaan as if doubting him)

ridhima/muski-
Dugna nasha, kyun ho raha hai (muski too join in and ridhima/muski hang on armaan's/rahul's back)
Aankhon se meetha tune khilaya (eating a laddu herself and armaan/rahul too)

armaan/rahul -
Ho teri malmal ki kurti gulabi ho gayi (rounding around ridhima/muski)
Manchali chaal kaise nawaabi ho gayi, toh (ridhima/muski walking away and armaan/rahul following them)

boys-(then all boys join and girls standing at distance)
Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haa Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)

rahul/abhi-
Teri kalaai hai, haathon mein aayi hai (rahul/abhi holding hand of anji/nikki)
Maine maroda toh lagti malaai hai (boys hold girls hand at girls back while twisting them)

muski/nikki-
Mehenga padega ye chaska malaai ka (girls push boys and getting their hand off from their grip)
Upvaas karne mein teri bhalaai hai ( girls do hand action as if doing narayan god do with their hands)

armaan-
Ho bindiya teri mehtaabi ho gayi (armaan staring at ridhima coming close and ridhima dancing on her tune)
Dil ke armaanon mein behisaabi ho gayi (holding ridhima by waist and going closer)


boys-
Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haa Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)
(gang aparted AR from each other as by walking from between them)

abhi/rahul -
Kyun 'no-vacancy' ki, hothon pe gaali hai (boys holding their respective patners and doing look look)
Jabki tere dil ka kamra toh khaali hai( looking down to their heart as ranvir did)
(kamra toh khaali hai...)

nikki/muski-
Mujhko pata hai re (girs holding boys ears)
Kya chahata hai tu (girls asking with hand what boys want)

ridhima/anji-
Boli bhajan teri (girls making acting from hand as of speaking and then put one on ear and the other on air extended as in singing raag they do)
Neeyat Qawwali hai (girls start clapping hands in qawali style)

atul/armaan -
Zulmi ye haazir-jawaabi ho gayi (armaan start hitting his head and lean on atul shoulder doing drama)
Tu toh har taale ki aaj chaabi ho gayi, toh ( then move to ridhima and make her dance while he sit on his knee and head near ridhima's waist and ridhima giving tumkas)


boys
Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haa, Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)

Haan, bole re zamana kharabi ho gayi
Haan, bole re zamana kharabi ho gayi..






After sometime althought boys were also out(tali) but they have sense and took their girls home...

anji and atul goes placing their arm around eachother

rahul making muskan walk properly and muskan speaking too much

and modi carry nikky on his shoulder and nikky resisting beating him

armaan carry ridhima in his arms and ridhima first resisted then
ridhima - almaan (memorised)
armaan - basket ...(with same tone)
ridhima - almaan... tumhe pata hain almaan mein na...
armaan - tum kya basket...
ridhima - mein na... mein na...
armaan - bolo bhi basket pleash (plz) (talli himself)
ridhima - arye mujhe bolne toh do tum...
armaan - POUT...
ridhima - mein ne tumse bahut pyaal kalti hun...(extending her hand out and one of her hand hit armaan) sholly...
armaan - koi nahi...
ridhima - sholly sholly shooollyyy... (putting her head on his chest)
armaan - basket tum bahut cute ho...
ridhima - mein na again extending her arms and this tym carfully. innnaaa saara tumse pyaar karti hun...
armaan - or mein usse bhi jayada... pata hain basket..
ridhima - kya... (widening her eyes with cutness)
armaan - tum itni achi cute aur innocent ho ki...
ridhima - ki
armaan - ki mera kabhi kabhi maan karta hai mein tumhe kha lun... par phir
ridhima - phir kya...
armaan - phir mein sochta hun kha lunga toh tumhare saath kasie jiyunga...
ridhima - almaan pata hai mein tumse inna pyaal kalti hun ki mela maan kalta hai
armaan - kya
ridhima - tumhe aapne aandar aise sama lun ki kabhi tum mujhse dul na jao...
(reaching to their room)
armaan - toh mat jao na basket mujhe bhi aise hi aacha lag raha hai...yahin tumhari baho mein
ridhima - hug armaan more tightly...

and they slept talking...


next day
sun ray hit ridhima's face she.. pulled armaan more into her and buried her head in him to resist sunray hitting her face...
armaan to pull ridhima to himself more and his face was coverd with ridhima's hair and he was sleping with a smile adoring his face smelling his baskets fragnacne from her hair and feeling his basket cradling to him ...


after sometime both of them woke up with a knock on their bedroom door...
first they where as if they are imagining it.. as they live only 3 in this house they and their dhanu...but dhanu can't know with that force...
and thinking this both gets up startled...

armaan/ridhima - dhanu !!!!!!!
saying so both look at each other... and get up fast and move out to see dhanu where about,,
as soon as they open the door of their bedroom they were shocked...

padma was standing their holding their sleepy dhanu in her arms protectivly...
and dhanu was sucking his fingure as he was hungry...

ridhima took dhanu the very moment as she was him...
and after taking him in her arms she kissed him all over his face and hands...
ridhima - (teary) sry dhanu mamma ne aapka dhayan nahi raha .. ap theek toh hona beta.. mera dhanu and again kissed him...

armaan - ridhima !!!!
ridhima look at him with teary eyes... and armaan open his arms..
ridhima immediatly hug him and armaan put his arms around dhanu and ridhima holding tightly to make her feel secure...
and padma standing and admiring their love ...

armaan after sometime spoke...
armaan - dhanu bilkul theek hai basket
ridhima look inhis eyes for assurance and see the truth in his eyes...
ridhima nodded at this...
and again hug hum...


armaan after sometime aparted and spoke up...
Armaan - gud mrng ma. (touching padma's feet as she was standing there admiring their bond)
padma - jeeta raho armaan .. hamesha aise hi khus raho...
ridhima - gud mrng maa...
padma (hugging ridhima) - gud mrng meri bachi...

ridhima and padma hugging eachother and armaan seeing this with all love..
he knows how much his basket have missed her mother... just bcozz of Dr.Shashank...
armaan was having tears...padma see this and gesture armaan opening her one arm to come in hug...
armaan fastly move to hug her and they all the 3 are smiling with tears in their eyes...
and armaan wipe ridhima's tear with his fingure while still in hug...
and ridhima smile with this gesture of armaan...
his sweet simple gesture alway made her heart warmth with love and affection...

then ridhima move out of hug seeing dhanu sucking her nape now demanding for food..
padma move to go to home and AR wave her bye...
then when ridhima move to kitchen for dhanu's milk he too move to kitchen...
armaan saw dhanu sucking ridhima's nape then he wisper to ridhima..
armaan - tumhara beta meri jagha kyun leta hai hamesha...
ridhima was confused first...
then when armaan eyed to her nape where dhanu was sleeping and demanding for feed
ridhima hit armaan on his arms playfully...


after sometime when ridhima was setting in living room feeding dhanu with the bottle armaan came there and handle a lime water to her...
ridhima look at armaan
armaan - pilo araam milega headace mein mujhe pata hai headace ho raha hai tumhe...
ridhima smile at this
she just love him more then anything in this world...
armaan was sitting beside her watch dhanu...
ridhima shake her head and move her glss toward armaan
armaan look at her and raise his eye brows
ridhima - mujhe pata hai tumne nahi liya hia tumhe bhi headace ho raha hai.. lo piyo
armaan smile and drank one sip (he knows ridhima won't listen) and foward it to ridhima..
ridima to sip one sip and them move towards armaan and they share and finished their lime water...










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thank u dear.. hope u like this one tooo


Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

awesome updateSmileSmile..loved dhanu and armaan sceneHeart...waiting for the next update..continue soon..and thanks for the pmBig smile

thank u dear...my pleasure



Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

waiting for the update...Day Dreaming

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Originally posted by: Prizi

Amazinggg di Big smile



Originally posted by: Fimmy

This is awesome!

Dhanu is sooo sweet...
But the last part is a bit scary...I hope it's the gang and no one else...
Cont soon... Smile

u were soo right dear and her u go.. it was the gang only...
hope u liked this part as welll



Originally posted by: Fimmy

Superb part!

Loved it!
Cont soon! :)

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Originally posted by: AR_LOVER

awesome part

loved it

thank u


Originally posted by: AR_LOVER

awesome part

cont soon

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Originally posted by: .PheonixFire.

Very very very nice update.

Loved it.
Continue soon.

thank u dear.. u r new reader na.. i think soo welcome then dear



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Originally posted by: awesome

amazing part

dhanu is sooo cute

thank u dear



Originally posted by: LilApple

awee dhanu is cute and adorable just like me

very nice part
but small
holi wow
m wondering wt wil dhanu do

hehehhe bunny... tum bhi na...
thanku hope u like this part as well



Originally posted by: sakshilksg

nice part.

holi in July...but I like it.
Dhanu is so naughty...he colored himself.
who snatched Dhanu...I think the gang.

thank u dear
dear aab ye song hi late aaya toh can't do anything .. heheh
dhanu armaan ka beta hai toh kuch toh asar hoga hi na yaar...



thank u




Originally posted by: Ar_Asyafan

awesome update...Clap

awww...they r so cute...Blushing
yeyyy...PartyDancing
holy party time Party
eagerly waiting for the part...Embarrassed

thank u dear..
heere is the part





Originally posted by: VaaniBhandari

read till PART 10 n loved it so so much

it made me cry yet reminded of AR's eternal love
the dialogues are just too good
will read more n comment later
ty so much for pm
u write well
-vaani.Smile



thank u read hope u read all parts and loved this one too..


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Posted: 11 years ago
finally holi celebration ho hi gaya!!!😉
i still wnder is waqt holi part?? hehehehe...😆
par achcha hain.. bemausam tehyar ka maza hi kuch aur hota hain..
thnky for d part, baby..
awsmm one...
loved it..👏
btw, tumney toh dara hi diya tha..
i was thinking dhanu kidnap ho gayee..
but yeh twist toh rocking tha.. hahahaha...😆
thnk uu for this early update dear..😊
luv uu.. update soonishh..😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipeee...
First one after so long...
Luvd it a lottt...
Awesome yar...
Nd funny too ...
Luvd talli gang nd ar r so cute...
Trully luvd it to core...
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipeee...
First one after so long...
Luvd it a lottt...
Awesome yar...
Nd funny too ...
Luvd talli gang nd ar r so cute...
Trully luvd it to core...
Update soon... [:D/] 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update😊😊..the holi celebrations were amazing❤️...beautiful..waiting for the next update...continue soon..and thanks for the pm😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
cute part.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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