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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

heree is the next part

Recape

Dr. - yes i forgot Mr. Malik also asked for his last wish...

Muski-last wish..!!!!

Nikki- kaisi last wish..!????

Dr.- he don't want to make anyone hurt se he asked us not to let anybody see his deadbody n send his ussefull organs for donation...

Here is part

rid-tumhari himat kaise hui mera armaan ko...

(holding doctor through his collor)

Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho ki vo mujhe chod kar chala gaya...

Vo aapni basket ko kabhi chod kar nahi jayega...

Samjhe aap...

Aapko sharam aani chaliye aisa bolte hua...

Nikki-ridhima sambhalo aapne aapko...

Rid-dekh na nikki ye dr kya anaab-shanab baatein kar rahe hain...

Muski-sambhal ridhz aapne aapko...

Ridhz-chalo na guyies armaan ke pass vo mera intazar kar raha hoga...

(losssing balance of mind)

Aagar nahi gai toh naraz ho jayega...

Phir bolega 'tum itni late kyun aai. Jao mein baat nahi karta tumse'(making faces)

phir usse baanane mein kitna tym lag jata hai..

Bilkul bacho jaisa hai...

Mera bina ek min bhi nahi rah sakta...

(smilling while tears were still on her face flowing)

Chalo chalte hai...

Chalo na...(but nobody was moving)

atul-ridhz tum...

Ridhz- atul tum aapne bhai se nahi milaga...

Shash- ridhima beta armaan nahi hai...

Ridhi-nahi papa vo mera wait kar raha hai...

Rahul-ridhima armaan...

Ridhz- nahi rahul... Theek hai Toh Tum log ko nahi ja na toh mat jao mein ja rahi hun aapne aarmaan ke pass...

**Slaappp**

ridhima hold her check n drop on her knees. Coming back to the real world...

thanks for commenting n liking

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

nice part

but too short yaar

waana read more

so do continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

i can't believe Armaan is no more :(
this part was nice but too short!
cont soon
thnx 4 pm

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

ridhima-kyun armaan kyuna gaye tum mujhe chod ke...

mein tumhare bina nahi ji sakti armaan nahi ji sakti tumhare bina... plz wapis aa jao armaan ... aapni ridhima ke passs... tumhne mujhse wada kiya tha na ki tum hamesha mera saath raoge... plz armaan wapas aa jao...

crying uncontrolably ridhima fainted

anji - ridhzy...

nikki - ridhima

muski - ridhzy...

anji was holding her... slaping her cheeks softly ridhzy... ridhz ...

keerti - jaldi inhe ICU mein le chaliya...

dr. nikkita aap mera saath aaiye...

nikki-- ji dr. keerti

all moving with her to ICU

nurse -plz aap saab yahin rukiye...

anji - par *atul put his hand on her shoulder*

anji - atul ridhzy...

atul - anji sambhalo aapne aap ko.. nahi toh ridhima ko koun samjhayega... usse bhi toh hamari jarurat hai...

muski - hain anji is samaya ridzy ko sab se jayada hamari jarurat hai...

abhi - pata nahi ridhz ki kismat mein bhagwan ne kitna imtehaann kitna dard likha hai...

atul-pata nahi ... itni mushkilo ke baad ridhima ko khushi mili thi toh bhagawn ne vo bhi usse iss baar hamesha ke liya cheen li...

anji - bhagwan itna kathor kaisa ho sakta ha

after sometime nikki n dr.keerti comes out...

anji - dr.keerti ridhzy...

muski - bol na nikki kya hua hai ridhzy ko...

nikki - vooo,...

atul - bol na nikki...

abhi - dr. keerti ...

shashank - ridhimz theek toh hai na...

dr. keerti - doctors...dr. ridhimz vooo...

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

RECAP

after sometime nikki n dr.keerti comes out...

anji - dr.keerti ridhzy...

muski - bol na nikki kya hua hai ridhzy ko...

nikki - vooo,...

atul - bol na nikki...

abhi - dr. keerti ...

rahul - ridhimz theek toh hai na...

dr. keerti - doctors...dr. ridhimz vooo...

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nikki - ridhz is pregnent...

atul,muski,anji - what!!!!!!!!

anji - par... abh...

abhi - thats good news... ridhima bahut khush hogi...

nikki - abhi abb... vo akele kaise...

shashank - mein baat karunga ridhima se...

anji - par dad... ridhima kabhi nahi manegi...

shashank - usse maana hoga... vo akele ye nahi kar sakti... koun uska dhayan rakega...

anji - par dad vo armaan ke baby ko kabhi bhi...

shashank - nahi anji... usse karna hoga,... uski abhi puri jindagi padi hain...

all frndz look at eachother in concern...

Aftersometime ridhima gain her senses n gets up screaming armaannn...

anji - ridhima... tu theek hain na...

ridhima - di armaan... armaan kahan hai...

anji - ridhzy...

ridhima - di armaan kahan hai... nikki armaan ...

atul - ridhz armaan humein chod kar chala gaya hai...

ridhima -nahi aisa nahi ho sakta... armaan jinda hai...mera dil kehta hai ki mera armaan jinda hain...

shashank - ridhima hosh mein aao.. armaan chala gaya beta hamesha ke liya...

ridhima - nahi aap jhuut bol rahe hain jaise pichli baar kaha tha... vo mujhe chod ke nahi ja sakta...

listening this shashank leave the room

********(actualy to give u break from confusion guyies this story begins from when armaan left ridhima after shootout n then ridhima was being carried by sid till mandap to get married... armaan came there in the house of gupta's at same tym n armaan n ridhima got married at the very same instant...

armaan has been operated n this mental balance is now stable thats why he came back to his basket...)********

anji - ridhz is bar armaan

nikki - armaan sach mein chala jaya hain...

atul - hain ridhzi...

muski- ridhima aagar tu armaan ke liya kuch karna chahati hai toh...

nikki - toh tum armaan ke baby ka dhayan rakhna...

*ridhima is shocked*

muski -hain ridhima armaan ka baby...

anji -ridhzy tu maa bane wali hain...

niki - ek nanha sa armaan tera pass hain hai.. tum uska khayal rakhna...

in evening ridhima get discharged ...

anji - was doing formality...

in between ridhima gets up from the bed and leave from the hospital...

anji - chal rid...ridhzi... ridhzi...

atul - kya hua anjali...

nikki- hain tum chila kyun rahi ho...

anji - guyiesridhima yahan nahi hai...

nikki- kya...

muski - kahin kuch...

atul - nahi ... mujhe pata hai vo kahan hogi... chalo...

everybody came to Basketball court...

here was ridhima sitting on the stairs their...

mumbering -baby ye dekho yahain mein aur aapke papa pehle baar mile the... aur milte hi jhagda kiya tha...*smilling reebering the day*

she was unaware of the gang standing behind her. she was so lost in his memories n talking to baby...

ridhima - pata hain baby mein aur aapke papa sab se jayada ladte the... chutti chooti baaton pe...

par ladhte ladhte kab pyaar karne lage pata hin nahi chala...

aaur aab aap bhi aane wale ho...

baby jab paapa aayenga na.. toh hum une khub datenga...

anji - ridhz...

ridhima - arey di ... aapp... aaiye na

*everyone is shocked to see ridhima smiling*

nikki - ridhima tum theek toh ho na...

ridhima - hain guies mein theek hun...

muski - ridhz...

ridhima - mein bilkul theek hun... bus aapne armaan ke baare mein aapne baby ko bata rahi thi...

*touching stomach n looking down*

ridhima - di mein ghar ja rahi hun... abhi toh juniour armaan ko aapna ghar bhi dikhana hain...

bye guyies...

atul - ridhima,...

ridhma - atul chinta mat karo mein theek hun... mein pagal nahi hui hun... sach mein... mein bus armaan ki yaado mein rahna chahati hun

armaan ke tofe ko *touching stomach* mein bahut sambhal ke.. aur pyaar se bada karungi... ye mera armaan ka aansh hai... isse mein kabhi aapne aape se aalag nahi karungi... ye armaan ka aakhri gift tha aapni ridhima ke liya...

bye guyies...

saying so she leaves...

when ridhima went to their home... its the place where they where together from many years... where they were together throung ups n downs of the life.. which they faced with smile and alway remainded by other ones side... its the temple of armaan's love...

Here in this temple each and every corner was filled with his pure love for her... each and every cornor is like being making ridhima as if she is seeing a movie where ever she turns a place brings out the memory of their togetherness as all that happened just a minute ago.. It didn't look it happened ages ago...

she was standing in middle of the lobby n where ever she turns *rotate* she saw herself in armaan's arm or lost in him aur they being kiddishly arguing aur armaan is becoming cosy with ridhima...

when she standing there a imaage of her went from her front and entered kitchen n bedind her went armaan... se saw she is makking food and armaan is teasing her from behind doing his badmashi (as he did during shubhankar n keerti wedding tym)

then one more image of her only cross her again moving toward stairs she saw.. armaan was carring her to their room and she had her hands on his chest n around his neck... n armaan pulling her closer...

then one more image cross.. she saw in the direction image is moving n armaan sitting on couch n ridhima went and sit on his laps... n they watching romantic movies... and movie flashes romantic secne but armaan was getting cosy with her...

then another one crosses n she running to open the door n armaan was about to knock and befor that door open n ridhima hug him... he too hug with equal favour.. n burried his face in her hairs n she hids in his chest...

next second she felt dizzing n went to sit on the couch...

then ridhima went to kitchen n eat healty food...

then touchig her tummyy...

ridhima- don't worry baby mujhe pata hain aap mera saath hain is liya mein aapke papa ke baar mein sochte hua aapko nahi bhulungi... i will give u everything that u want... aapko vo sab dungi jo aapke paapa hote toh deta...

**then looking up**

ridhima- i miss u armaaan ... miss.. u our baby... baby **remember she didn't told armaan about baby**..

armaan thanku.. tumne mujhe se aapna last promise nahi todha... aab tumhari ridhima ka jeena ki wajhe di hai tumhe thank u... armaan our baby is breathing in me... he is within me... our love is gronig in me... tum papa banne wale ho armaan... kaash tum yahan hote armaan aapni ridhima ke pass toh jo khushi mein tummhari ankhon mein dekh pati vo mein ...

i love u armaan ... i miss u ... our baaby too miss u n love u ...

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

very nice!
i m not able 2 digest da fact dat Armaan is no more!
Riddhima's pregnant!!!
waiting 4 next part...cont soon
thnx 4 pm

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

RECAPE

ridhima- i miss u armaaan ... miss.. u our baby... baby **remember she didn't told armaan about baby**..

i love u armaan ... i miss u ... our baaby too miss u n love u ...

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having dinner she went to their room...

taking out armaan's shirt she wear it felling armaan's arms rapping around her n slept hugging his pillow as if she could smell him in his pillow... kissed pillow as if kissing armaan ..

ridhima - love u armaaan ... miss u...

**touching stomach**

ridhima - good nyt babby... papa n mumma love u alot...

After 2months...

Ridhima is sitting trying to kill the tym when she remember one thing...

And she moves to her room and open armaan's wadrob...

She was searching for something...

When she saw a wooden box kept there...

She picked it and moved to the bed... Keeping the box on bed she moved to her almira n take out the key from there n sit on the bed... She opened the box...

She was a paper in it...saying...

Hi basket kaise ho... Mujhe pata hai tum mujhe bahut miss kar rahi ho... Tu ye padh rahi ho iska ye matlab hai aab mein tumhare pass nahi hun...

** ridhima had tears**

Par iska ye matlab nahi ki mein tumhe dekh nahi raha... Mein jahan bhi rahun tumhe dekh sakta hun... Kyun ki mein hamesha aapni ridhima ke dill mein hi ho.. Toh wahan se dekhna mushkil nahi hai...

**ridhima smile through tears**

Chalo ye mote mote moti jaise kimti aansun pochlo.. abh mein nahi aaunga ye kam karne...

**ridhima - tum bahut bura ho armaan **

Mein janta hun basket mein bahut bura hu ki mein ne tumse wada todh diya aur yun chala gaya.. Par mein toh tumhare satth aaur kuch pal jeena chahata tha.. Hamare pyaar ko ek naya janam dena chahata tha jo hamare jeena ki wajha banta... Par bagwan ne mujhe aapne pass bula liya...

Waise basket ek secreat bataun...suna hai suwarg ki angles badi sundar hai.. Soch raha hun wahan kisi ko pata hun... Par meri kismat kharab hai... **ridhima - kyun**

Arye soch kya rahi ho... Meri kismat kharab hai mein toh wahan ja raha hun par mera dil toh tumhare pass hamesha ke liya hai... Aab mein un angles ko kya dunga...

**ridhima smile widen**

Waise basket tum aise hi hasti raha karo achi lagti ho... Basket nich kuch papers hai inhe plz meri khatir theek se padlena aur plz khush rahna aur hain sab se important baat i love u...

Ridhima finish reading the letter by armaan then she pick up another paper.. Basket mein ne iss mein ek contact no likha hai is pe call karke baat kar lena aur usse mil lena vo mera schooling tym frnd tha... Baki sab vo batayega... hey basket vo...vo mei... Pata nahi tumhara saapna pura kar paya ya nahi... Jo tumne mujhe se last days mein manga tha vo tumhe mila ya nahi ye mujhe nahi pata par... Meri ek wish thi ki agar mera pariwar hota toh mein unke naam rakhta... Ladki ka arima n ladke ka ridhan... Jo armann n ridhima ka ansh hote.. Ladki meri ladli hoti isliya uska naam mera naam se aur lakda maa ka ladla hota toh uska naam tumhare naam se... Basket meri baat maan na plz khush rahna n ho sake toh aapne bacho ko ye naam dena...

Tumhara

**Armaan**

ridhima - kya chahate ho tum mujhse armaan...

Tumne mujhse itna kuch toh le liya hai.. Meri jine ki khushi toh tum aapne saath le gaye armaan bus ek aapni nishani jo mera pass chod gaye ho ye hi aab mera jeena ki wajha hai...

Tumhari ridhima akeli pad gai hai armaan bilkul aakeli... Koi bhi hamare pyaar ko nahi samjhta... Papa bhi nahi

vo ye baat soch bhi kaise sakte hain ki mein hamare baby ko... Hamari pyaar ki nishani ko... Nahi mein aisa aapne jeta ji nahi hone dungi... Sab mujhe daya ki bhawna se dekte hain kahin bhi ja kar mujhe aacha nahi lagta .. Har jagha dam sa nikalta hai... Sirf ek sanjeevni mein jahan hamari yaadein har disha mein hai aur ek is hamare pyaar ke mandir mein, hamare ghar mein mujhe chain ki saas aati hai...

Jahan mujhe tumhara ahsas hota hai.. Aur lagta hai aab mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta kyun is mandir jaise ghar mein bus tumhara har ahsas har aahat har parchai har baat har ek yaad aur hamara pyaar aaj bhi zinda hai...

Bis yahin mein aapna sara samay botati hun hamari har baat har ahsas ko pal pal jiti hun...

Tumhari ridhima bus tumhari hai hai armaan aur hamesha tumhari hi rahegi... Aab bus hamare baby hi meri duniya banega...

Days passing by very quickly..

Now its 6 and 1/2 months of ridhima's pregnancy...

Here ridhima always take care of her self because she didn't want any complication in her pregnancy.. Because she don't want to face the loss which is now the reason for her breath a small little armaan inside her.. Their love bud.. Their juniour armaan.. She always eat on time take medicine as per given.. She never went to gupta house after armaan left her.. She not even talked to her papa as he forced her to leave the child n get married again ... Once shashank also tried to get rid of the baby.. That day ridhima cried for armaan the whole day and night... And make a promise to herself that till she is alive she won't let the shadow of shashank fall on hers n armaan's baby...

And when she was all alone she always keep her hand lovingly on her stomach caring it. N talk to baby.. Telling baby hers n armaan lovestory.. Their love for each other which knew no limit... Then she also use to say.

Ridhima- dekhna baby jab aapke papa aayenga na hum unsse gin gin ke badla lenga. Unsse vo har cheez karayenga jo unhone nahi ki itna mahine mein... N so on...

Ridhima also keeps armaan's tees on her stomach lovingly.

Ridhima- dekha baby aapke papa aap se kitna pyaar karte hain... Unka ehsas aaj bhi hamare saath hai.. Ye dekho (putting tee on stomach ) ye tumhare papa ka ehsas..

**but baby never reacted to this touch as he don't know that touch of armaan's tee. By moving**

But

Here today she was getting very restless... Her heart was beeting at very faster pace... She was not able to think what is happening to her...

Ridhima- ye mujhe kya ho raha hai...???? !aaj dil itna kyun bechain hai??? JAise koi mer dil ke bahut karib parechani main hai..???? Kyun mein aaj aapne aapko nahi rok parahi hun?????

Then she remember her tym with armaan from starting..<strong>Flash back </strong>

armaan-bull's eyes...can we have the ball plz..

Ridhima -tumhari hai.

armaan - yoo basketball naam toh batari jao...

armaan - mummy bachao aunty dara rahi hain...

armaan - mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai..

armaan - kya hua ridhima

ridhima- i hate u armaan

i hate u

armaan - i love u

ridhima- i hate u

Armaan -but i love u

ridhima- i love u.

armaan- nishan rahe jayega

ridhima- aacha hai na hamre pyaar ka nishan rah jayega

armaan - mein armaan malik ridhima gupta se wada karta hun ki mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hun..

arman - bhagwan chahe kitni baar yadash le le par hamesha tumhara naam yaad rahe.. kyunki is duniya mein tumhare ilawa kuch aur yaad rakhne layak nahi hai...

then shootout scence both falling down n lost the sense..

om mangalam bhagwan vishnu

magalam rakun vasta tuwaja

mangalam kundali kaksha..

magalayat tano hari...

pandit - aaj se aap pati patni hua..

<strong> flashback over</strong>

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awesome ff.
I'm loving it so much.
I can't believe that Armaan died and Ridz is pregnant.
I hate Shanky.
plz add me to ur pm list and update soon.
Take care!

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

part 09

RECAP

arman - bhagwan chahe kitni baar yadash le le par hamesha tumhara naam yaad rahe.. kyunki is duniya mein tumhare ilawa kuch aur yaad rakhne layak nahi hai...

then shootout scence both falling down n lost the sense..

om mangalam bhagwan vishnu

magalam rakun vasta tuwaja

mangalam kundali kaksha..

magalayat tano hari...

pandit - aaj se aap pati patni hua..

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ridhima - ridhima sirf armaan ki hai...aur usi ki rahegi...

her fone rang up...

ridhima - hello...

dr.keerti- dr.ridhima we need u her.. as u know atul-anjli have gone for lonavla. n mukan went off to patiyal.. n nikki-modi are off to their honeymoon.. so we are lagging in doctors right now n there is news of mazor accident on highway...

hearing of accident ridhima felt more restless.. don't know why.????

ridhima - mam mujhe thoda waqt chaiye.. i will be there as soon as possible...

dr.keerti- i understand dr.ridhima.. take ur tym... but come as soon as possible... see you...

after 20 min.. ridhima was standing.. infront of hospital.

ridhima(putting hand on stomach )- pata nahi baby kyun aaj mera dil bahut ghabra raha hai.. pata nahi aaisa kya hone wala hai aaj... kyun aaj aisa lag raha jaise mera andar se koi meri ruh nikal raha hai...

ridhima's pager rang off

dr.ridhima jaldi aaiye.. ICU halat bahut bigad rahi hai..

ridhima move as fast as she can.. and she wear operating gown... when she entered she see the strong gush of wind blowing around her..

ridhima- ye mujhe kya ho raha hai... aemaan ke ilawa mein ne kabhi aise...

when ridhima saw the face of the patient lying there see can see anything as the face was hidden with bandages...

when ridhima came forward to operate n touch the body to get started with her work she feel a sensation in her body a shiver ran down her spine... she look at the face but failed to see any thing except his lips n nose...

she ignor the felling and started her work...

while see was operating the patient started sinking.. at that point ridhima feel that its she who's heartbeats are sinking not of the patient...

she then with full determination started doing her operation and after 3 hrs of operation she came out...

when she came out she saw whole gang was there...

anji- ridhz.. aab uski halat kaise hai..

atul - vo theek toh hai na...

nikki - bolo na ridhima aab theek hain na usse hosha kab tak aayega...

muskki-bol na ridhima...

ridhima - mujhe bolne doge tum mein tab bolungi na... aab vo theek hai. kuch ghanto mein hosh aa jayega. he is fine now bus ek mahine tak theek se chal nahi payega... n daily activites ke liya kissi aur ko saath dena padega...

all- thank god...

Ridhima - but guyies ye hai koun jisse tum dab jante ho aur uske liya itna paresha ho aur mein nahi janti...

nikki n muski - look at her in horror.. then all look at doctor keerti..

dr.keerti - shake her head saying Ridhima don't know the person...

all look at ridhima

ridhima - kyz hua guyies.. kyon hai vo..

nikki - ridhima tum betho.. atul paani la de plz..

atul goes to take water...

keerti - dr.ridhima vo admi aur koi nahi.. dr.ar...

**left incomplete**

nurse - dr. patient is getting fits...

dr.keerti runs towards the ICU n all look tensed...

ridhima - nikki vo koun hai. bata.

nikki - ridhima vo...

ridhima - nikki tujhe iski kasam **placing her hand on her stomach**

bata nikki mera dil ghabra raha hai... bata nikki...

muski - ridhz .. vo ...

** armaan is given shocks **

here ridhima feel pain n mummer armaan...

anji - ridz vo .. vo armaan...

ridhima - nahi armaan mujhe dubara nahi chod sakta...

and ridhima run towards ICU..

nikki - ridhima.. sambhal ke...

anji - ridhzy...

muski - ridhz..

Ridhima bang in ICU n shake armaan vigrously

ridhima - utho armaan ... utho.. tum mujhe dubara chod kar nahi ja sakte... nahi ha sakte tum samjhe... ye jindagi tumhari nahi meri hai... tum bina puch mera se meri itni kimti cheez nahi le sakte samjhe tum...tumhe koi hak nahi hai... tumhe uthna hoga armaan tumhe aapni ridhima ke liya uthna hoga .. apne baby ke liya uthna hoga... samjhe tum...

and ridhima place armaan's hand on her stomach...

and baby kicked first tym feeling this Safest touch..

ridhima - aauch..

armaan unconsious - ri... ridh...ridhima...

ridhima - hain armaan...mein yahin hun..

armaan - ridhima mein... mein... maf ...aapa.. chera... kaise... dikhaun...

ridhima - armaan

armman - i.. i m.. sor...sry basket...

ridhima - armaan mein yahin hun armaan... plz aankhein kholo armaan... armaan plz... she slids on the floor beside armaan while holding his arm's... n crying.

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Edited by mishs - 12 years ago