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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen

Superb part ayushi..i loved it ..great work and thanks for the PM

thank u dear...
my pleasure dear... and yaar update ur ff to na...



Originally posted by: monikaseth

Awesome and very nivce

thank u dear


thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen

Superb part ayushi..i loved it ..great work and thanks for the PM

thank u dear
my pleasuer and plz update ur ff to na...




Originally posted by: monikaseth

Awesome and very nivce

thank u dear




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

awesome update😊😊

loved it❤️


thank u dear tanvi




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LilApple

wow a happy twist in ar tale
m loving it
lets see how armaan handle
crazy mood swings

thank u bunny...
heheheh
mood swing dikhne padga aab toh chalo theek hai bunny ke liya ye bhi sahi hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey ayushi
it was a very sweet update
dhanu is very cute nd sweet
the way armaan was happy n jumping after hearing d new ws just way tooo cute
update super soon
nd thnx for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm part.
Cute one.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm part.
Cute one.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

thank u dear..
my pleasure dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

hey ayushi

it was a very sweet update
dhanu is very cute nd sweet
the way armaan was happy n jumping after hearing d new ws just way tooo cute
update super soon
nd thnx for d pm


thank u soo much di...
heheh armaan cute hain na... heahahhaha
my pleasure di
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Posted: 11 years ago
BACK TO U.

RECAP





armaan - suna tune dhanu... tu bada bhai banne wala hain... aur mein phir se dadda banunga.. yeeyeee

armaan stand and taking rounds with dhanu in his arms with excietment...
dhanu was gigling...
armaan then suddenly stop and move to ridhima ad settle down in front of ridhima on his knees...
and pt his head on her stomach...

and patting her stomach a little...
armaan - hello princess... mein aapka dadda hun... baby aab jaldi jaldi aapne dadda ki bahon mein aa jao... aab dadda aapna bahut besabri se intazar kar rahe hainn,... aap aakpi mamma and aapka bada bhai bhi aapka bahut intazar kar rahe hai... jaldi aana baby princess...
bring dhanu near ridhima's stomch and said...
princess dekho ye tumhara bada bhai hai...

ridhima was admiring him...







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Next morning armaan get up ealry ... and h found ridhima sleeping peacefully craddling to dhanu... dhanu was having his face deep in her neck... and ridhima have her arms encircled around dhanu and was having a full satifing smile on her face...
armaan smile seeing this and then silently tookdhanu with him who was awake by now and was now ready to make his mumma up... but befor that armaan took dhanu with him... and feeling something move away and not finding armaan on oter side ridhima have a frown on her face so not to let ridhima wake up armaan put his jacket in ridhima's armaan and feeling armaan's fragnace in it ridhima's frown disappear and then armaan little move down and kissed ridhima and now she was smiling ... she have a big smile on her face...


armaan then goes to the kitchen to make break fast for them ... dhanu was siting on the slab of the kitchen near armaan under armaan's constant gazze...
dhanu was watching his dadda noving to and fro making something...
dhanu was making baby sound in excietment when he saw that the breakfast that his dadda was making was full ready and completely placed in a tray...

dhanu - huuu... dadda.. dhanu...
armaan - hain dhanu papa ek min mein aaye aap hilna nahi baby.. okay...
dhanu nodded his head and saw where his dadda going...
armaan goes to the dinning table and pick up the pair of rose from it and place it in tray and look at dhaun ...
dhanuclaap his hand seeinf armaan look at him after puting rose in tray...
armaan smile and ruffle adhanu's hair lovinglu...
armaan - toh chale mumma ko surprise dena...
dhanu in respone raise his hand to armaan for picking him up in his arms...
armaan pick dhanu and make dhanu sit on his shoulders and then he picked up tray in his hand and bring it in the bedroom ...
ridhima was now cradling with armaan's jacket sensing it as armaan...

armaan then gently place the tray on the side table and put dhanu in his laps and the took the jacket away from ridhima and then ridhima frown again and turn her side still sleeping ...and feeling armaan she put her head on his laps... but as dhanu was already in his laps.. ridhima's head was now resting on dhanu's laps...
seeing his mumma keeping her head in his laps dhanu look at his dadda first and then he saw his mumma.
and dhanu gently put his hands on ridhima's head...
armaan saw all this and click a photoof his jaan sleeping on their dhanu's lap and dhanu stroking her hairs making face in Oh shape...
dhanu - ohhh...


ridhima wake up after sometime... and saw armaan first and then dhanu... she pass them a very beautifull smile to them and then again close her eyes ... but soon she open her eyes and saw down where her head was and saw she was sleeping in dhanu's lap... and then shw have tears in her eyes.. then ridhima turn her head down and kissed dhanu where she have kept her head a while ago...
dhanu giggle at this as he was ticklish as his mother... and armaan was enoying all this ...

after a while armaan say...
chalo basket uttho tumhara breakfast ready hai ...
ridhima open her eyes and saw a tray ready in front of her...
ridhima - tumne banaya...
armaan - yes ye mein ne aur hamara dhanu ne mil ke banaya hai...
ridhima - kya banaya hai... *excieted as kid*
armaan - tumhare fav.. fruit juice and healthy healthy Mix veggi stuff paratha...
ridhima - aur ye... *showing the rosse she took from tray*
armaan - ye toh healthy rahne ka main ingediant hai madam...
ridhima - aacha vo kaise...
armaan - mera pyaar jo hai iss mein...tumhare healthy rahne ka main ingrediant...
ridhima - i love u armaan...
armaan - i .. *cut short*
dhanu - lub u ...
ridhima - awww... i love u too my prince...
armaan - awww.. dhanu mela ko pyaal nahi kalta... *tur hi s face to other side*
dhanu move to armaan and hang on armaan's back with his hands around armaan's neck and say.. i lub u mole dadda...
armaan now was very happpy and smiling very much...

he stand up with dhanu still hanging on his back and armaan hold him from his legs and twinkle around round and round with dhanu and both dhanu and armaan was laughing their heart out and seeing them launghing so much ridhima too smile... then armaan make dhanu lie down on bed and came bending upon him and and start tickling him and he was just launghing...
dhanu - dadddaa... daaddaaa/...
armaan was still tickling...
dhanu - dadda.. mumma ... mumma daddaaa... *asking ridhima to stop his dadda*
ridhima put her hand on his shoulder and armaan stop and look at her...
ridhima - armaan usse saas lene mein dikat hogi...phir vo abhi chota hain...
armaan stop and put his head on dhanu's chest (notputtng his head weight on him just putted his head touching dhanu's Chest*...
dhanu put his hand on armaan's head.. and seeing this ridhima kept her head on armaan's arm...
and AR were having their eyes close... and dhanu seeing his father...

after sometime ridhima was getting up when armaan stop her and stand up from bed and kissed her forhead and then get settle down on the knees and kissed her tummy...
armaan - hello princess !!! gud mrng... aap kaise ho...
Armaan - baby aap ko bhukki toh nahi lagi na aab bhi... princess aab jaldi se dadda ke pass aa jao.. dadda aapni princes ka bahut intajaar kar rahe hain...
dhanu - dhanu ... dhanu...
armaan and ridhima llok at dhanu and saw him all excieted ...
armaan * to princess* - dekha princess ka ka bhai bhi aap ko bahut mmiss kar raha hai aab aap jaldi aa jao...

dhanu - dadda ... plinchch (princess) kab ayegi mela pass...
armaan - dhanu princes aabhi hamare pass thode dino mein aayegi ja bhagwan gi usse hamare pass aane denga tab...
dhanu - aul plinchch kahan hai...
ridhima was blushing now... what wll armaan let to his so cute innoccent son...
ridhima - dhanu princess toh aabhi mera pass hain par jab bhagwanji usse aane denga tab vo is duniya mein aayegi..
dhanu - aapke passh (pass) hai... mujhe dekhna hai...
armaan - dhanu aabhi aapko wait karna padega... phir aap princess ko khub pyaar karna...
dhanu - dhanu plinchch ko bahut pyaal kalega... mumma dadda jaise...
ridhima - mumma dadda jaise...
dhanu nodded and open his arms widly and say - inna shaala ( itna saara)
armaan and ridhima smile at this...



after sometime AR and dhanu were ready to leave for sanjeevni..

as armaan came out and took his car out to got saneevni...
ridhima - armaan aapni bike nikalo na.. aj bke se chalte hain...
armaan - *checking her head* - basket tum theek toh ho na...
ridhima - hain mujhe kya hoga...
armaan - nahi jab mein kahta hun toh tum mana kar deti ho ... aaur aaj
ridhima - kya hai armaan tumhe nahi jaana toh saaf bol do na...
armaan - arye basket mein ne maana kab kiya ... chalo aaj hum bike se chalte hain...
armaan then take out his bike thinnking - basket tumhare toh aabhi se sab pregnancy effect aa rahe hai... koi nahi is baar mein saare tumhare mood swing aache se dekhunga...
then armaan and ridhima goes sanjeevni on bike...
and both went to work alternativly taking care of dhanu...


In Breakfast
In Armaan's cabin... dhanu was already with him...
a waiter came in armaan's cabin and place 2 dark coffee as per armaan's taste and one extra cheese sandwishes...
armaan - arye raju(cafe helper).. ye kya hai.. tujhe pata hai na teri bhabhi ko caphachino pasand hain and ye extra chees sandwish bhi na toh mein leta hun na hi teri bhabhi...
raju - vo bhaiya.. bhabhi ne hi ye order kiya hai... vo aabhi 5 min mein aa rahi nahi...
armaan - ye basket bhi pata nahi aab kya kya khane wali hai...

ridhima enter the cabin and came to armaan and kiss him on his cheeks...
and then set on his laps...

armaan was shocked with the kiss he got and then ridhima sitting in his laps...

armaan - basket...
ridhima - hmmm...
armaan - tum...
ridhima smile seeing his expression and understandin the meaning of his expression...
ridhima - armaan tumhi toh bolte ho na.. aab hum legally right hai toh... mujhe yahin bethne ka maan hai... tumhe koi problem nahi hai na..

armaan shake his head in no... immediatly looking at her..
ridhima smile - bus toh pir... chalo aaj mein tumhe khilati hun...
she was still sitting in his laps and feeding him and armaan was feeding her... and armaan then saw dhanu looking at his parents with a pout...

armaan - awww... kya hua hamera dhanu ko ...
ridhima to look at dhanu .. and then she moved to pick up dhnau...
dhanu - was still pouting and not looking at his parents pretending to be angry not giving him any attention...

armaan - aww.. mela dhnau ko kya hua
dhanu - silent...
ridima - dhanu aapne dadda se naraz hain..
dhanu nodded...
ridhima - kyun...
armaan - dhanu ko nahi khilaya dadda ne ya mumma ne isliya...
dhanu again nodded...
ridhima - aww. ttoh chalo aab mumma and dadda dono hi aapne pyaare se prince ko saath mein khilenga...
dhanu excieted turn around and clapped...

and the malik family complete the lunch and then got back to work...
dhanu was shufling between armaan and ridhima while one was busy...
dhanu was the one who was the most happy one right now.. as he was getting the full attention of both his parents...


in Evening both AR with dhanu return home back...
the Maliks have their dinner feeding each other ...
after that they moved to their room
and ridhima went for changing in washroom ...
armaan and dhanu playing while making dhanu change and both the mallik men are bare chest...

as went armaan came home he took off his shirt and start changing dhanu's cholths... but as dhanu was not in mood to change then as armaan took his shirt of dhanu to start playing with his dadda not wanting to wear his shirt... and craling on bed here and there and armaan was moving on bed one side to other to catch dhanu ...
when armaan caught hold of dhanu ..
armaan start to tickle dhanu and dhanu was laughing...

after sometime dhanu and armaan both were just lying on the bed with armaan on his back and dhanu was lying on his side ..
but then dhnau was up and cral up to his dadda and climb his chest and lay on his dadda's chest... armaan smile seein gthis and ridhima too smile seeing all this...
yes ridhima came out after changing and vitnessed all the cute and great bonding between the father and son duo...

then ridhima too came and lay down on the other side of the bed and took armaan's hand which was resting on his cheast and put it below her head and place her head on his shoulder as on chest already dhnau was resting...

and soon all the three were sleeing peacefullly...


and next morning again the routin was same...
armaan making breakfast for ridhima and then with all the love ask her to get up and have it...
the day armaan came to know aboout the news of ridhima was again having their baby in her waiting to come to this beautifull world of his parents... and making their life a bliss...
armaan have strictly ristricted ridhima to enter in kitchen... and doing heavy work in house...
all the work was done with the help of helper ...
but the food was made by armaan only... as he don't want to take any chance in ridhima's health...
he want everything to go on smoothly...










Done already



that's it...
so guyies howz it...
do give ur valuable and motivating feedbacks and hit like...


luv u all
Aayushi
Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res

UNRES...😃😃


1st toh lemme do the victory dance..
yeay yeay yeay.. i'm 1st agn...

phew!!! thak gayee... lol..😆😆

now lemme do d honor to praise my lill aayuu..😃
aayuu baby... awsm prt...
choo chwtt juz lyk u...
u knw wen i read dhanu talking i flt lyk its u not dhanu..😊😊
aur armn ke barey mein kya kahoon.. he's d bst husbnd..
par pata hain one more thing dat i loved most of this update is d new siggiee..
AR wth kids... cutiee siggiee baby..

in shrt gr8 job.. loved it..👏
but luv u moree..🤗
t.c swthrt nd update soon...😊

Edited by --Orchids-- - 11 years ago

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