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PART 15

RECAP



crawling...
armaan went to ardhan and pick him up and kissed him over his face every where due to happiness then ridhima came to them and armaan forwarded dhanu in his arms and ridhima too kiss him ... and ardhan was giggling and giggling due to shower of kisses from his parents...
then armaan hug ardhan and ridhima tightly yet softly and kissed both ardhan and ridhima...
its 6 pm when all this happen ...

armana kept crawling with ardhan... and play hide and seek with him while crawling...
armaan was crawling with ardhan side by side ... and ardhan sometyms crawl faster from armaan as if they were racing with each other and when armaan remain back then ardhan stops after some distance and see back to see where is his father and smile cutly as if saying i won daddy...
then ridhima call armaan for dinner...
then armaan take dhanu and make him sit in his laps and feed him lovingly *dhanu is giggling throughly*
and through the giggle of ardhan armaan and ridhima's hearts were dancing with the happpiness that god is showering on them...






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Days were passing and its 10 months when ardhan came in their life...
Armaan and ridhima were in heaven they just enjoy with their son...
armaan always take breaks and check on both ridhima and dhanu...

one night
Armaan *while placing and making face to ardhan his dhanu in his arms* - basket mein soch raha tha...
ridhima - hmmm... she was busy admiring father son...
armaan look at ridhima and smilling to her...
armaan - basket mein soch raha tha...ki hum jab tak dhanu play school jana nahi shuru karta hum mein se koi na koi iske saath rahe...
ridhima - mein bhi ye hi soch rahi thi...
mein soch rahi thi ki jab tak dhanu play school nahi jane lage mein sanjeevni join nahi karungi...
armaan - par issse tumhari practice chut jayegi...nahi hum aisa nahi karenga...
ridhima - toh phir...
armaan - nahi basket tum practice nahi chodogi...
ridhima- kuch nahi hoga armaan its okay...
armaan - nahi ... mein nahi chahata ki tum kisi bhi mood par ya kissi bhi karan aapna sapne bich raste mein chodo... mujhe malum hai tumhe as doctor work karna itna acha lagta hai...
ridhima -armaan .
armaan - nahi ridhima mein nahi manunga.
ridhima -tum itna ache kyun ho armaan kyun tum mera bina bole sab samjh jate ho kyun mujhe kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi padhti.. bus tumhe meri ankho mein dekhni ki dar hai aur tum sabh samjhe jate ho ki mein kya cahati hun... kya sochti hun...
armaan - basket tum...
ridhima - armaan mein ne jab se tumhar saath paya hai ... tab se mera sirf ek sapna hai ki mein tumhare saath hi aapni saari zindagi bitaun... aapni saari khushi aur gum sab tumhare saath batun... hamesha tum vo pehle insan ho jisse mein aapni dil ki baat kar paun... aapne saare sapne tumhare saath bun(make) sakun...
armaan aab mera sirf ek hi samna hai... ki hum hamesha aise hi rahen haste gaate hamesha khushiyo ke bich...
armaan- i love u basket...
ridhma - i love u too armaan... luv u too...
ardhan - lub du (luv u) *baby jo har samay sunega vo hi bolega na *wink*
AR - we luv u tooo *wthout realising that dhanu spoke*
armaan - basket dhanu...*teary eyes wide smile*
ridhima - hain armaan... hamara dhanu bola...*teary eyes and smiling*
armaan - dhanu dada bolo... bola dada...
ridhima - dhanu ma bolega bolo dhanu ma... ma...
armaan - nahi dhanu dada bolega
ridhima - nahi dhanu pehle ma bolega... hain na dhanu...
armaan - nahi basket vo dada bolega
ridhima - vo ma bolega...
armaan - dada
ridhima - ma
armaan - dada
ridhima - ma
armaan - dada
ridhima - ma
armaan - basket
ridhima - armaan
armaan - basket
ridhima - armaan
ardhan - bachket (basket)
armaan - basket... dhanu ...
ridhima- dubara bolo na dhanu...
armaaan - dhanu say bashket... say dhanu..
dhanu - heheheh *he just smile seeing his parents desparation*
but dhanu keep giggling seeing his mommy and dadda...
armaan - basket tumhara beta bahut shaitan hai
ridhima -bilkul aapne daddy pe gaya hai
armana - oye hoye...
armaan was playing with dhanu and ridhima was helding one hand of dhanu and her head rested on armaan's chest

armaan - idea...
ridhima -idea...!!!!! kya idea??????
armaan - ye ki nowu r going to work and continue ur practice...
ridhima- acha aur dhanu...
armaan - u don't worry... aabout our dhanu...
ridhima - aacha
armaan - hain ek week u will go to sanjeevni and one week mein...
ridhima - aur isse kya hoga...
armaan - isse se ye hoga ki na tumhari practise chutagi...
aur ek secret bataun...*in low voice*
ridhima- hmmm *playing with dhanu's hand and head on armaan chest*
armaan - jab tum chali jaogi toh mein aur dhanu tumhe pareshan karne ka aache se plan bana payenga...*winking*
ridhima -armaan ...*punching his arm's playfully*
armaan - acha suno...
ridhima - bolo...
armaan - i love u ,...
ridhiima - love u tooo armaan...
then they slept peacefully ardhan on armaan's chest while armaan holding on him and ridhima's head on armaan's shoulder...and his other arms around ridhima...

(lolz armaan bechara toh daab gaya...but he loves sleeping like that only...)



at 5 am
ridhima strech her arm on the bed to feel armaan but to her surprise armaan was not their she open her eyes and saw both ardhan and armaan missing...
ridhima got worried...
ridhima getting of the bed start to move out ...
ridhima - armaan ... armaan kahan ho tum...armaan
ridhima go to living room... but armaan was not there
ridhima - armaan... armaan...
ridhima go to kitchen ... but armaan was not there also
ridhima - armaan kahan ho tum...
then ridhima goes towards the room searching whole house and now she was having tears in her eyes...
ridhima - kahan ho tum armaan ...
then she saw door to the balcony attached to their room was open and now she was sure armaan will be there...
when ridhima removed the curtain from the way she saw armaan making ardhan dance in his arms and talking with him..smillinh to him and ardhan was enjoying this alot...armaan's back was towards door so he can't see his basket...
as soon as ridhima was armaan she runs to him and hug hum tightly while sobing...
armaan when felt someone hugging stopped and a wide smile appears on his lips but as soon as he felt wet on his shoulder his smile fadded and turn to face her but ridhima was not lossning her grip...ardhan was now on armaan shoulder leaning back... armaan tried hard to turn in his basket grip but ridhima was not readdy to leave...
armaan - basket kya hua tum ro kyun rahi ho kya hua..
ridhima sobbing bitterly
armaan -ridhima batao na ..ridhima
ridhima - no response but tighten her grip
aarmaan - ridhima kya hua .. mujhe dar lag raha hai
ridhima - kahan chale gaye the tum...pata hai mein kitna dar gai thi...
armaan - ridhima...
ridhima - aglii baar aisa kiya toh i won't talk to u ever...
armaan - mein toh yahin tha basket bus ...
ridhima - kabhi mujhe chod kar mat jana...
armaan - shhh.. ridhima chup... koi aise rotha hai kya...
ardhan who was seeing his mother cry from long felt very sad and he himself start crying... as he can't consol his mother to stop crying he start crying knowing then his mother will surly stop...
ardhan start crying...
seeing him cry both armaan and ridhima both got tensed...
armaan - kya hua dhanu ko...
dhanu extended his arm's to ridhima asking his mom to take him in her arms
ridhima -awww... mera dhanu kyun ro raha hai...
wipping his tears... but dhanu was not stopping...
dhanu goes to his mom's arms and put his soft n little palms on his mom's eyes..
indicating to wipe away the tears as ridhima wipe away his tears.. he too tried doing same but being small can't do it... so just kept his palm on her eyes...
ridhima and armaan smiled seeing this..
dhanu - bashket ro lai ( basket ro nahi)
ridhima - was giggling at her dhanu's attempt...
ridhima - awww... mera dhanu ko aapni mommy ko rote nahi dekha ja raha ...
my baby...*hugging him and dhanu kept his head in his mommy's nape and nuzzle there*
armaan wipe away the tears...
ridhma - armaan tumhara beta bilkul tum par gaya hai...
armaan - huhhh!!! *confused*
ridhima -ye bhi mujhe udas nahi dekh sakta tumhari tarah...
aur dekho bol kar chup nahi kara sakta toh khud rona shuru kar diya...
aur aab tumhari tarah badmashi kar raha hai... bilkul aapne daddy ki tarah...
armaan was confused so ridhima showed him that adhan was nuzzling on her nape...
armaan saw this and giggle a bit then said..
armaan - oye ... dhanu...
dhanu look at his daddy...
armaan - this is my place dude...
dhanu just giggle and hide his face again in his mommy's nape and ridhima hit armaan on his arms playfull...
armaan - auch basket,... had hai aab beta mil gaya toh mujhe bhul gai... jao mein baat nahi karta...*with cute puppy face fold his arms on his chest and trun his back to ridhima*
ridhima - armaan
armaan - no reply
ridhima -armaan
armaan - kya hai...*fake anger*
ridhima - i...
armaan - i...
ridhima - love...
armaan - love ...
ridhima - i love...
armaan - i love ...
ridhima - i love dhanu and ran to their bedroom with dhanu in her arms... being carefull
and armaan first keep standing there thinking what his basket said then when he got it he run after her and tries to catch her...
but when armaan enter he saw ridhima cradling dhanu and trying to make in sleep...
armaan went to his side and lay down but didn't closed his eyes and keep staring at the bond of dhanu and basket shares...
and waited paciently for dhanu to sleep so he can have tym with his basket...




thank u all for ur lovely and motivating comments
i m glad that u all are likking my work...

hope i m not making all of u bored with my FF



MY another FF
Aadha Adhura Tera Bina(AR)

Tu sirf ''mera armaan'' ho(AR FF)



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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update😊😊...and thanks for the pm😃
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Awww Very cutie update dear:-) Loved Father son bond:-) Armaan Ridhima are Amazing:-) plz update soon:-):-)
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Lovely update... Thanx for the pm...
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thank u for loving the part... hope u keep loving the FF part of mine
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Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

great update😊😊...and thanks for the pm😃


its my pleasure dear...
and thank u for liking and wonderfull comments
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awww thank u dear...
and thanks for ur wonderfull comments...
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Originally posted by: --Rose--

Awww Very cutie update dear:-) Loved Father son bond:-) Armaan Ridhima are Amazing:-) plz update soon:-):-)


AR are just osome ...
thanku for liking the bonding i tried to shw in the part...
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Originally posted by: Savvy11

Lovely update... Thanx for the pm...



thank u for wonderfull commments...

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