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aww dis part was sooo cute. loved the part where Ridz expresses her love feelings for Armaan. I love the bond dey share. cont soon.
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Its great do pm me whn u cont.
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hey sry guyies i m having exams so i m not able to update ... Will update after 13...
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BACK TO U.
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RECAP


ridhima tell armaan about her feelings openly and listing to his baskets heart out armaan was over cloud nine... He qas feeling heavenly... Having his cute little family on front of him... Then their cute little talk with dhanu...








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Ridhima- thank u armaan for coming in my life making it so beautiful that a sec without u by my side kill me...
Thank u for the wonderful gift u gave me in form of dhanu... Thank u for always treating me as a princess... Thanku for pampering me to no extend... Thank u for walking beside me in thick and thin...
I just love

* ding dong*
armaan- aab koun aaya...
Ridhima- armaan ... ruko mein dekhti hun..
Armaan- tum rukho basket mein jata hun...
Armaan walk to the door after giving dhanu to his basket*..

as armaan opened the door whole gang appears in front of him...
anji - hello jeeju... kaise ho aap...
nikki - anji iski basket hai na iske saath toh kaisa hoga...
atul *hugging armaan* - armaan mera bhai ... kaisa hain tu...
rahul - how are u man...
muski - kaisa hain hero.. aur heroin kahan hai ...
anji - armaan aab hum aandara aa sakte hain ya yahin khade rakhna hai humein...
armaan was a little shocked to see all of them all of a sudden...


ridhima coming while playing with dhanu as its been 5 min since armaan gone to open the door but din't return back.. so ridhima came to see who it is that armaan is taking so much tym...

ridhima - koun hai jaan... aur tum bolo kyun... *she left it incomplete as she saw gang at their door*

all - ohhh hhooo...
nikki - armaan jaan .. ho hooo
muski - hain bolo na armaan tumhari basket aapne jaan ko bula rahi hain tum bol kyun nahi rahe...
anji - hain jeeju bolo na...
ridhima was blushing badly and and to hid it she start playing with dhanu again...n

ridhima - guyies tum log kab aaye...
rahul - hum toh tabhi aaye ridhima jab aap aapni jaan ko aawaz de rahi thin...
hain na guyies...
armaan - guyies chalo aandar toh aa jao... ya yahin rahna hai...
chalo aandar chal kar baat karte hain...
ridhima - mein aabhi aai...




&&&& sry guyies i showed in part 20 that dhanu birthday have started but guyis as i process further with story i can at point of AR emotions sharing then i thought to add some festival in it... so i guess i will make dhanu birthday comes in other part... may be after 5 more part hope u all will have no issue with it... &&&&&&& do tell me &&&&&&&&&




whole gang sit down on the couch and make them self comfortable... But ine person was scared .. And that was ardhan...


Dhanu when saw so many people coming in he got scared with so many peiple around... imediatly hid himself in his dada's neck...

When gang try to talk to him he just put his face more in armaan's neck and tightly clutch armaan asking his dada to protect him... Whn armaan sense that their dhanu is getting scared he just hug dhanu closly tightly to himself with oyt hurting him...

Then with out letting known to dhanu he start making dhanu relax...


Armaan- aww.. Kya hua mela dhanu ko...
Dhanu- dhanu dall.. laga.
(dhanu ko dar lag raha h)
armaan- mela dhanu toh strong boy hai na..
Dhanu *asking armaan* - dhanu stlong boy
(dhanu strong boy hai?? )
armaan- hain mela dhanu toh stlong boy hai.. Aur mela dhanu toh kisi se bahi darta na..
Dhanu- dhanu dada pass...(dhanu ko dada ke pass rahna h)
armaan- awww... Dada toh hameaha aapne dhanu ke hi pass hain na!!
Dhanu nodded...
Armaan- dhanu toh jaanta hai na dada dhanu ko kitna pyaar kalte hain...
Dhanu extended his little hands out (showing amount of love)
Armaan- toh dhanu dada ko kitna pyaal kal ta hai..
Dhanu again extended his hands but more then before..
Armaan- toh dhanu dada ko jayada pyaar kalta hai...
Dhanu nodded his head..
Armaan- toh dhanu bachket(basket) ko pyaar nahi kalta..
Dhanu shook his head negativly..
Dhanu- dhanu bachket pyaall karta...(nahi dhanu ko bhi pyaar karta hai)
armaan- acha dhanu kis se jayada pyaal kalta hai...
Dhanu- bachket to
(basket ko)
Dhanu- acha ji.. hamara dhanu ko basket se jayada pyaar hai...toh dada ko koi pyaar nahi kalta... Dada aab dhanu se narag hai... Du dada se juada pyaar nahi karta!!!*pouting*
dhanu hug his dada immediately to show that he loves his dada too..

Armaan just smile seing their little prince way to manofy his dada... He is shoo cuteee..

Dhanu- dhanu dada inna pyaal kalta (dhanu dada ko itna pyaar karta hai again extending his arms)
armaan just can't help it an adoring and million dollor smile comes on his face.. Seing his dada showing dimple dhanu poke his fingure in armaan's cheek...
Dhanu- ohhhooo
(making sound while poking armaan's dimple)
and with this armaan's dimple widden and dhanu also smile seeing this and his cheek to same dimple as of armaan...
Armaan to poke dhanu's dimple..
Armaan- ayeee dhanu ko bhi dada jaise dimple aate hai...
Dhanu put his hands on his own cheek to see dimple and smile seing it then again he poke armaan's dimple...


And gang was seing all this with smile on their faces... With expression of adoring the bond... Everyone in the gang had expression of awww how adorable...

And unknow to armaan ridhima was also seing him with dhanu talking...

Armaan got so engross in making dhanu comfortable while talking to him that he forgot his surrondings totally... He was so lost in their little angle...

Then armaan came around to sense sensing some gaze on him... He look around to see gang looking at him then he turns and saw ridhima to having teary million dollor smile on her face...
Armaan and dhanu to smile again looking at their basket...








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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

beautiful update😊😊..loved it❤️


thank u deaar




Originally posted by: sakshilksg

beautiful part.

loved AR's convo.


thank u so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

kya hua bunny ...


Originally posted by: Rarepearl

aww dis part was sooo cute. loved the part where Ridz expresses her love feelings for Armaan. I love the bond dey share. cont soon.



thank u dear
AR are forever till eternity


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Originally posted by: Garimavirmanksg

Its great do pm me whn u cont.


thanku dear...
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thank u dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awee dhanu is so cute
he poked armaan s dimples then hie
hehehe worth watching
aur apna gang kabhi nahi sudhrega

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