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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
hey guyies plz help me out with telling me the best in my FF plz
and any suggetions u want
or any complain according to u in my FF's plz be frank and tel me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RECAP




ridhima -armaan
armaan - kya hai...*fake anger*
ridhima - i...
armaan - i...
ridhima - love...
armaan - love ...
ridhima - i love...
armaan - i love ...
ridhima - i love dhanu and ran to their bedroom with dhanu in her arms... being carefull
and armaan first keep standing there thinking what his basket said then when he got it he run after her and tries to catch her...
but when armaan enter he saw ridhima cradling dhanu and trying to make in sleep...
armaan went to his side and lay down but didn't closed his eyes and keep staring at the bond of dhanu and basket shares...
and waited paciently for dhanu to sleep so he can have tym with his basket...







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dhanu was not sleeping its an hr now ridhima was trying to make dhanku sleep on her shoulder while roaming in the room but he was playing with his mom's hais and ears... bitting ridhima's ears and nuzzling in ridhima's nape
ridhima - dhanu ... *patting his back*...sleep baby
ardhan just giggle... and again buried his head in his mommy's nape and again start biting ridhima's ear and nuzzling in her nape...
ridhima this tym seprated ardhan from hug and see him with fake anger...
but dhanu see his mom's face and give the cutest smile with the dimple revealing to ridhima... now ridhima was not able to say anything.. as she was melted seeing her dhanu being so cute and angelatic...
ridhima being in no state to say dhanu anything just smile to him and hug hum and patter his back to make him sleep but after all dhanu is armaan's son.. toh ridhima ko toh pareshan karna hi hai na...

ridhima - dhanu aab soo jao baby...
but dhanu was doing masti when ...
and armaan lied closing his eyes...


(song from drona movie - nanhe nanhe)


Ridhima -

Nanhe Nanhe Taaro Jaise Naina
Taaro Jaise Pyaare Pyaare Naina
Naino Mein Chhupa Ke Rakhe, Mithe Mithe Sapne *smiling *
Sapno Ka Shor Michhe Tu Jo Palkon Ke Niche
Sapne Churaaye Tere Chaina, Nanhe Nanhe Taaro Jaise Naina *lovingly making ardhan sleep*



Anokhi Si Kahaniya Suna Rahi Hai Chaandni, Chanda Behlaaye Tujhe Kaise
*moving to the balcony and looking at chand and patter ardhan roaming around*

Jugnu Ki Toliyo Se Raat Jhilmila Rahi, Sochati Sulaaye Tujhe Kaise
Paheliya Bani Hai Yeh Karwate
Jawab Rakh Liye Hain Tune Hi Chhupa Ke Hai Na
Nanhe Nanhe Taaro Jaise Naina, Taaro Jaise Pyaare Pyaare Naina
*looking at ardhan who is doing masti*

Naino Mein Chhupa Ke Rakhe, Mithe Mithe Sapne
* making ardhan laying in the cot as he was sleep and his fingure in his mouth*
Sapno Ka Shor Michhe Tu Jo Palkon Ke Niche
*taknig his fingure from his mouth*

Sapne Churaaye Tere Chaina, Nanhe Nanhe Taaro Jaise Naina
*touching his head to cheek lovingly looking at dhanu with little smile*


ridhima - armaan so jaye kya
but armaan was acting


Ridhima

Tu Jo Maan Le Jara Ye Aankh Jo Lagi Jara, Sapna Mile Koi Salona
*kissing his forhead and armaan can't stop to smile*

Udaasiyo Se Khelna Tu Chhod De Jo Meri Jaan, Nindiya Bane Tera Khilona
*ridhima was having tears and wipping them*

Hawaaye Sar Saraake Ye Keh Rahi, Tu Jaagta Raha To Jaagati Rahegi Raina
Nanhe Nanhe Taaro Jaise Naina, Taaro Jaise Pyaare Pyaare Naina
*lookking in his eyes very lovingly*

Naino Mein Chhupa Ke Rakhe, Hoo Mithe Mithe Sapne
Sapno Ka Shor Michhe Tu Jo Palkon Ke Niche
*lying in his arms and kissing his chest and wipping the tears secretly*

Sapne Churaaye Tere Chaina, Nanhe Nanhe Taaro Jaise Naina
*closed eyes ang lying in armaam's arm.*


armaan - basket...
Ridhima- hmmm
armaan - tum... Tum ro kyun rahin thin...
Ridhima was just silent listening to rhe armaan's heart beat placing her head on his chest...
Armaan - basket... Plz... apne armaan ko nahi bataogi...
Ridhima- armaan mein tumhe khona nahi chahati... Mujhe laga tum... *playing with his shirt buttons*
Armaan - basket mein kahin nahi jaunga.. Mein aab hamesha tumhare paass hi rahunga ... Tumhare aur hamare dhanu ke pass...
Aab mein aapni is choti si duniya se kahin nahi jana chahata...*looking at basket who's head is still down playing with the button*
Tum dono hi mera liya sab kuch ho...
Tum logo ke bina mein mar...
*Ridhima put her palm on his mouth...*
Ridhima- plz armaan...
Armaan - tum aaj tak us din ko... Kyun ridhima...*looking in her eyes *

Ridhima- armaan mein nahi janti kyun... Par aaj tak i feel insecure towards u... Mein tumhe khona nahi chahati...*hugging tightly*
.mein tumhare bina saans bhi nahi lena chahati armaan... Armaan mein tumhe bata nahi sakti ki jab tum chale gaye the toh mujhe par kya biti hai...
*sobing resting her head on his chest again*
Mein ne tumhare bina kya mehsus kiya hai... Tumhare bina tumhari ridhima bilkul tut gai thi armaan...
*armaan masaging her arms and from his other hand he was patter her head lovingly*
Tumhare saath meri har khushi chali gayi thi... Meri sans bhi chali jati aagar mujhe pata na chalta ki hamara dhanu mera aandar sansein le raha hai...
Tumhare na hote hua bhi tum mera jeena ki wajha the... Par mein ...
*sobbing very hard*
armaan just massaging her hairs... And trying to calm ridhima...
Armaan-mein ne aapni ridhima ko bahut gum diya hain na... Plz mujhe maaf kardo basket... Mein nahi janta tha ki jo mein ne kasam khai thi tumhe hamesha khush rakhne ki kabhi ansun na aane dene ki tumhari ankho mein vo itni jaldi tut ...
Ridhima- nahi armaan tumne toh aapni har kasam har wada nibhaya hai...mein hi aapna wada aapna vachan nahi nibha pai... Mein ne phere lete waqt vachan liya tha ki tumpar aane se pehle saari musibat aapne upar le lungi parrr...
Armaan - basket tumpar aai musibat ko sab se pehle mujhse takrana padega... Meri or sirf meri ridhima ke armaan se...
Ridhima- i hate u armaan i just...
Armaan smile at this and say...
Armaan - and i love u when u hate me... I love u basket i love u...*ridhima smile listening this*
Ridhima very innocently...
Ridhima- toh hamesha rulate kyun ho mujhe...*with cute puppy face*
Armaan- kya karun tumse itna pyaar karta hun ki tumhe taklif mein nahi dekh pata...
Ridhima- i love u armaan... I luv my cute little family...
*looking at dhanu*


then both sleep peacfully in eachothers arm...
next morning ridhima open her eyes feeling armaan's lips in her nape...

armaan was kissing ridhima and nuzzling...*smiling and responding to his touch*
ridhima - uthte hi badmashi shuru... *armaan smile listing his basket*
armaan - good morning basket...
ridhima - good morning armaan...*putting her palm on his face*

then ridhima get up from the bed and move towards cot... dhanu was already up and playing with the toy armaan gave him on the firstday of him coming to the world...
and giggling...
ridhima - awww mera dhanu mumma se pehle hi uth gaya...
*kissing him* good mrnging baby...
armaan comes from back and hug ridhima and put his arm's around ridhima's arm which were bellow dhanu... and kissing dhanu and ridhima both... good morning dhanu...
then ridhima move to make breakfast and armaan with dhanu went to take bath... armaan make his baby their dhanu their prince take bath with him ...

armaan - dhanu aaj daddy ke saath bathy bathy lega na...
dhanu nodded his head immediatly...
armaan smile at his reaction... make him sit on the bed and takeing his and dhanu cloths
armaan - chalo toh aaj dhanu ko daddy ready karayenga...
aaur bathy bathy mein maze kalenge...
armaan see dhanu sitting on bed and dhanu clapping his hand and...





Precap


armaan - baskettt !!!!!! shouted...

ridhima - armaan tum... kya hua armaan...

armaan - basket aabhi...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Awesome part.
I loved it a lot
you are a wonderful writer dear.
I loved the family moments.
AR's convo was superb
plz update the next part soon.
Take care!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Awesome part.
I loved it a lot
you are a wonderful writer dear.
I loved the family moments.
AR's convo was superb
plz update the next part soon.
Take care!


thank u so much for tte apprriciation...
i m glad that u like it
and thank for this wonderfull comment😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

thank u buddy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
hye mish
loved it
really cute part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
amazing update😊😊
loved ar moments❤️
waiting eagerly for ur next update...continue soon😃
and thanks for the pm😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Awesome update... Thanx for the pm:)
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww! loved da cute family moments! dhanu is such a cutie pie just like his father;)...thnx 4 pm nd cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
RECAP




ridhima - awww mera dhanu mumma se pehle hi uth gaya...
*kissing him* good mrnging baby...
armaan comes from back and hug ridhima and put his arm's around ridhima's arm which were bellow dhanu... and kissing dhanu and ridhima both... good morning dhanu...
then ridhima move to make breakfast and armaan with dhanu went to take bath... armaan make his baby their dhanu their prince take bath with him ...

armaan - dhanu aaj daddy ke saath bathy bathy lega na...
dhanu nodded his head immediatly...
armaan smile at his reaction... make him sit on the bed and takeing his and dhanu cloths
armaan - chalo toh aaj dhanu ko daddy ready karayenga...
aaur bathy bathy mein maze kalenge...
armaan see dhanu sitting on bed and dhanu clapping his hand and...







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next part

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ardhan - dada...dada...
armaan - kya !!! dhanu dubara bol na dada... dhanu bolo dada...
armaan *shout* - baskeettt...
ridhima heard armaan shouting and got scared and run to the room leaving the work she was doing...
then run to armaan
ridhima - kya hua armaan... tum theek hona... tum chila kyun rahe the,,,,,
armaan had tears..
armaan - basket...
ridhima - armaan kya hua tum ro kyun rahe ho...
armaan - basket aa... abhi dhanu ...
ridhikma *very tensed* - dhanu kya armaan ... plz bolo armaan ...
armaan - basket abhi dhanu ne dada... dada bola...*with choked voice*...
ridhima - sachi *very happily*
armaan - hain basket aabhi hamare dhanu ne mujhe dada bulaya.. dada... dhanu ek aur baar bolo na dada.. dhanu bolo dada...
ridhima - dhanu dada bolo dada...
dhanu just giggle and giggle...and clapp seeing his super super excited parents...
then trying very much but dhanu didn't spoke again...
and then both armaan and ridhima make dhanu have bath together...
while ridhima and armaan were giving bath to dhanu he was having fun...
armaan was splashing water on dhanu and dhanu was copying his dada and splasing water on his mommy with his little hands... and armaan then give company to his son and splashing water on ridhima..a. now ridhima too become naughty and she too splash water on armaan and soon the Maliks were whole drenched in water from tip to toe...

then armaan and ridhima take dhanu to the walk and then they went for shopping for their prince...
and in evening armaan was setting in the couch with ridhima in kitchen preparing dinner and ardhan on armaan's lap and playing with his father... and being tired armaan felt asleep on the couch itself with dhanu in his laps only and holing dhanu securly even in his sleep ...

when the dinner was ready ridhima came to call armaan and ardhan... but when she was about to call she was most amazing and heavenly sight in front of herself...
when ridhima came..
ridhima - armaa...*stop midway to see heavenly sight*
where armaan sleeping with the cutest smile of the world and holding their dhanu protectivle in seep and dhanu was wide awake and and standing in his laps and pokking his finger in armaan's dimple...
dhaanu was pokking his little fingur on armaan's cheek some tym on armaan's nose on armaa's face then armaan's hair pulling but when dhanu poke his fingure on armaan's dimpe armaan smiles widely even in sleep and dhanu plays with his own hands while looking at his dada's face nad making noice of 'ooo' making with mouth of 'O' shape... and then smiles...
ridhima immediatly capture this moment in her heart protectivly as well as in the camera...

She feel like falling head over heel in love with armaan all over again...
She goes and sit besides armaan and start talking to dhanu...
Where as dhanu was busy pokking armaan's cheek but in between giving expression to his bachket (basket mom)..

Ridhima- aapko pata hai dhanu aapke dada na world ke best dada and world ke best pati hai...
Aur pata hai aapke dada na superman bhi hai...
But is superman mein ek defect hai...
Ardhan looks at ridhima making o shape mouth...
*ridhima looking at armaan n carring his cheek*
ki yeh superman darta hai aapni family ko dukh mein nahi dekh sakta...
Now armaan is sleeping on ridhima's shoulder...
Ridhima took dhanu from armaan without disturbing his sleep...
Armaan wwhen feels his hands free makes his hand rest on ridhima's chest and put his head on his hand there feeling as if sleeping on pillow... Cradle more in ridhima...
Ridhima feeling armaans hand blusses to the core and when armaan cradle in her she feels complete.. Feels as if she is just made for this moment.. As if the world arounder here never existed... As she is the most luckiest soul living in heaven THE PARADISE OF THE LOVE TEMPLE...
Armaan was sleeping with such a cute face that ridhima didn't feel like breaking his dream...and slowly slowly make him lie in her laps and rufling his hairs lovingly and dhanu was sleeping on her chest now hugging his mommy tightly

and riddhima was loving this tym to every extend...
Since ridhima is very delicate she can not care much wait she feels sufocate under the weight..
But today the weight of the 2 most important person which were the part of hers body.. (ardhan came from her n armaan nad arman he was alway a half part of hers body.. Without him she is paralytic to work around )was over hers but even then she was feeling the breath of love.
Feel like a feather floating in air freely...
After sometime ridhima too felt asleep there only...
Armaan cradle in her laps and ardhan on her chest and all the three sleeping peacefully on the couch...

Next morning

Due to ardhana ridhima's cloths were disoriented and her kurta was coming uptu her stomach...
Armaam was the first one to wake up...and when he open his eyes he was ridhima and dhanu cradle in each other but one hand of ridhima was in armaans hair giving him the warmth of their love...
Armaan then hug ridhima from waist and after sometime ridhima wake up feeling cold on her stomach...
When she look down opening her eyes she found armaan nuzzling around her navel... Ridhima just massage armaan's hair in respons to his heavenly touch...
Feeling ridhima's hand massaging his scalp he just feel happy that how his basket reacted to his small touch even after all these years of marriage...
He is feeling like heaven at her gestures and hearing her moan...
Armaan start placing lines of kassionate but soft kisses near her navel...
She was wispering his name that were rearly audible to anyone. But armaan heard it as he stays in her every heartbeat...
Both of them were having lovely tym feeling and loving eachother to the core...
Soon there moment broke due to ardhan getting up... Ardhan was demanding for his feed by sucking ridhimas nake

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