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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it...The song seq was awesome!
And our talli gang toh always rocks 😆
Hihihi...ghar ko pakro...vag jayega! <<< it cracked me completely!
Hayyee! Besharam Armaan...apne bte se bhi jalta hai! 😳
Awesome part...
Cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part.
holy party and bhaang...a funny combination.
song was nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
As i said to all that i will be updating everyweek end so here i m with my update...
hope u all guyies like this...
do leave ur comments and hit like...




BACK TO U.

RECAP


gang celebrated holi at AR home and got talli and then they move to their home...
padma took care of dhanu over night
and next day she went away blessing AR
and then AR share their lime water for headace relief...







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NEXT PART

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A month leap now...

its finally dhanu's birthday
the most awited day for armaan n ridhima...


&&&& sry guyies i showed told u befor that dhanu birthday will be celebrated later so her is the part... littl bit is repeated from that part.. sry for that... hope u will enjoy this... &&&&&&&&&




In morning.
armaan gets up with the moment next to him...
armaan open his sleepy eyes to see ridhima hugging him and ridhima place a kiss on armaan's chest just above his heart as if kissing his heart and wispering something to him...
armaan closed his eyes again acting as if he is sleeping to her his basket...
ridhima - i love u soo much armaan... thanku for coming in my life and making it worth living and for showering all ur unconditional love and standing beside me all the tym when i needed someone to lean upon... and thank u for this biggest day of my life...
aaj hamara dhanu ek saal ka ho gaya...
tumahare saath aur dhanu ke saath ye ek saal kaise nikal gaya kuch pata nahi nahi laaga... tum itna pyaar jo karte ho mera se ki mujhe pata nahi nahi lagta kab waqt bit jaata hai... aur aapne piche dhar saari yaadien chod jata hai...
mein tumhare aur dhanu ke saah aaise bahut si yaadein banana chahati hun jahan bus tu mein aur hamara dhanu ho...
pichle saal vo kuch mahine jo mein ne tumhare bina bitaye hai armaan vo itne painful the ki mujhe ek ek din saadiyo ke bara bar lagta tha... mein kabhi vo sab yaad bhi nahi karna chahati.. hugging him more. *armaan to hold her and ridhima heart lightens up*
bus mein saare palon mein naai yaadein banana chahati hun...
thank u armaan for coming in my life.. thank u soo much...
mein kabhi tumhe nahi bata paungi ki tumhari ridhima tumse kitna pyaar karti hai...
bhagan na kare aaga mujhe tumhari condition pe aana padhta toh mein kabhi tumse dur nahi jaati .. kyun ki tumhari ridhima bahut selffish hai.. tumhari ridhima aapne armaan ko kabhi bhi ek pal ke liya bhi nahi chod sakti...
mein tumhari jitni achi nahi hun armaan mein bahut selffish hun...
but i love u too much ... ye mein iss zindagi mein toh tumhe nahi bata paungi ki kitna but mein bhagwan se itna jarur kahungi ki mujhe aapne har janam mein tumhe den taki mein har jaanam mein tumhe bata sakhun ki tum mera life mein kya mayne rakhte ho...
i love u soo very much
*ridhima was wiping her tears when*
armaan - i love u too basket...
ridhima - armaan tum ... kab...
armaan - jab tumne mujhe yahan kiss kiya tha.. *pointing to his heart*
ridhima - tumne sab sun liya...
armaan nodded - hain basket...
ridhima hugg him again...
armaan - aur khabardar... agar tumne meri basket ko selffish bola toh... meri basket ke khilaf mein ek word nahi sun sakta chahe vo tum hi kyun na ho samjhin...
ridhima - i love armaan
armaan - love u too...
pull ridhima to himself more closer craddling her to him more if it was possible...
both closs their eyes and saving this moment in theri heart...

then a click sond heard and door open and got closed...
and armaan felt some weight on himself...
armaan look on his shoulder and smile seen their prince... and turn and bring dhanu upon ridhima's chest and turn to other side...
ridhima - awww... mera baby prince... happy birthday dhanu...
armaan - happy birthday prince...
dhanu - aww...dhanu bilth-da... aal...( awww...dhanu ka birthday hain aaj??)
ridhima - yes baby aaj toh aapka birthday hai
armaan - aaj toh dhanu big boy ho gaya...
aab toh dhanu dada ko bhi box kar sakta hai...

ridhima- ji nahi koi boxing nahi... armaan tum mera beta ko bigado mat...
mera beta koi boxing bike racing kuch nahi karega... mera dhanu hamesha ek aacha bacha rahega... mummy ka ladla... tum isse aapna jaisa nahi bana sakte... samjhe...
armaan - jo hukum meri basket ka...
acha chalo aaj mera dhanu mommy dada ke saath ghumne jayegana...
dhanu - dhanu ghummiii...
ridhima - chalo pehle dhanu milk finish karega phil mummy dhanu ko taiyar karegi...
dhanu - milk.. ganda... dhanu nahi...
ridhima - dhanu aagar milk nahi... *but armaan cut her*
armaan - dhanu gud boy hain na... *armaan ask very cutly*
dhanu - dhanu guuld boy...
armaan - gud boy kya karte hain..
dhanu - milk.. peeta... *ridhima all the tym smiling watching it silently*
armaan - toh aab dhanu kya karega...
dhanu - mumma ... milk *asking for giving him milk*
ridhima - chalo... dhanu gud boy hai toh milk dhanu ko ek chocolate bhi milegi vo bhi... dhanu ki fav. wali...
dhanu - da.daaa... laye.. **dadaa laye the??*
ridhima - ji aapke dadaa laye the...
dhanu (hug his dadaa)... lub u dadaaa...
armaan - luv u too prince...
ridhima *pout* mujhse koi pyaar nahi karta...
dhanu *hug ridhima immediatly* luv u mole mumma..*luv u more mamma*
armaan - aach ji mumma's boy...


ridhima and armaan then together make dhanu take his breakfast and make him bath and get him read then they both to get ready themselfs...
ridhima make dhaun were suit today...

armaan - aww... mera dhanu toh aaj sachi ka prince lag raha hai...
dhanu - dhanu loz nahi ...lakta. (dhanu roz prince nahi lagta.)
armaan - nahi nahi hamara dhanu toh roz hi prince lagta hai.. akhir vo mommy and dadda ka prince hi toh hai...
dhanu claps his hands giggling and jumping in armaan's arm...

ridhima came in from washroom while drying her hair from her towel..
then putting her towel on bed ridhima came to armaan and dhanu and kissing dhanu
ridhma - awww. kya hua mera dhanu itna khush kyun ho raha hai
dhanu - bachket dadda dhanu prince... lag... (basket dadda ne bola dhanu prince lag raha hai)
ridhima - hamara dhanu toh roz hi prince lagta hai.. akhir vo mommy and dadda ka prince hai...
dhanu - awww sham...(awww...same) *dhanu spoke it listening to ridhima as she and armaan said same words to dhanu**
armaan and ridhima look at each other and smile their million dollor smile...



after sometime..
malik family were of to the shopping...
armaan was buying each and every little thing at which dhanu pointed or at the thing he was drooling over...
and ridhim athe poor soul she was try to put some sense in armaan ... to not to do soo.. as it will spoil dhanu's habit...
but armaan toh armaan hai vo kahan sunne wala hai...
and dhanu was enjoying to the utter most as his every wish and demand is being fullfilled...

and then dhanu with his little hand pointed to a parrot...
which a parrot seller was holding in cage...
*dhanu was in ridhima's arm*
armaan saw that and goes to buy a parrot for dhanu...
but ridhima stop him...
ridhima armaan ky kar rahe ho.. dekho agar tum aaise hi har cheez lete rahe na toh dhanu ki habit spoil ho gayegi...
armaan - nahi basket tum chinta maat karo.. hamara dhanu bahut samjh daar hai ...
ridhima - par armaan
armaan - ridhima mein aapne dhanu k i har khawahish puri karna chahata hun.. mein nahi chahata jaise meinne aapna bachpan gujara hai vaise hi dhanu ka bhi ho... mein ,...
ridhima - its okaay armaan par..
armaamn - plz basket *making baby face*
ridhima smile to him and
ridhima - aab mein kya kar sakti hun.. agar tum asie hi chehre banaoga toh... aur mera life ke dono imp insaan ye chahate hai toh okay...
armaan - kiss her cheek and say veru excietedly - thank u basket...
armaan - chal dhanu ... taking him in his arm's from ridhima...
armaan and dhanu move forward..
and ridhima was left behind admiring her armaan's childish ethics...
ridhima - ye bhi bilkul bacha baan jata hai kabhi kabhi... like a small baby...
my babby...

armaan when didn't found ridhima walking by his side he stop after few steps and look back and saw ridhima looking at him with dreamy smile...
armaan - chalo na basket.. mujhe baad mein dekh lena...
ridhima blush hard and move towards them and held armaan hand in her and walked forward...


After few Hr...
being full exaushted AR with dhanu make their way back to home... but armaan and dhanu were still excieted...
and armaan bring dhanu on gardern out and put parrot's cage on a tree there...
dhanu then open the cage.. and parrot flew away...
ridhima was this when she was coming...
armaan - awww. ye kya kiya dhanu aapne...
ridhima - ye kya kiya...
dhanu - bhandha... flee...kala... (vo bandha hua tha toh mein ne free kar diya)
armaan and ridhima admire dhanu... he is soo small but still he did that thing that even elders don't do... he freed a bird... which is made to flew freely in the atmosphere...
armaan and ridhima are feeling very proud of their dhanu...

After sometime armaan was making dinner as ridhima was exaushted from all day shopping and walking so she felt asleep while talking to him when they get settled on couch in living room after making dhanu have his nap...

armaan was working in kitch very quitly try not to make much noice so that ridhima may not wake up with any knid of sounds...
after he was done with making dinner. he went to dhanu's room and saw him awake and smiling and playing with his new presents that his dadda and mommy brought for him...
armaan pick dhanu up..
armaan - mera dhanu kab utha...
dhanu - tholi del pahle dadda... (thodi der pehle dadda)
armaan then took dhanu to living room and put him near ridhima.. and move to settle dinner on table befor waking up ridhima...
he settle dhanu there as he know dhanu would wake his mommy in sometime..while trying to be in her arms... and as he was thinking dhanu did the same...
and here armaan had settled the table...

dhanu was climbing in ridhima's lap holding ridhima's shoulder...
and dhanu after climbing up in his mommy's lap swa his mommy smiling in her sleep...
and he just put his both small palm on her either cheeks...
and making sound - ohhh... bachket...bachket... rubbing his palm on ridhima's cheek..
and then ridhima wake up with this and hold dhanu and kissed his cheeks..
and dhanu giggle with this...
ridhima was enjoying with dhanu and armaan was looking at them with million dollor dimple smile.. but soon he broke that moment...


armaan came in and said..
armaan - chalo basket dinner ready hai...
ridhima - armaan mujhe bahar ka nahi khana .. plz armaan...
armaan - yes basket...i know that so Chef Armaan Malik is at our service madam...
ridhima - dinner tumne banaya hai...*excited like child*
armaan - chalein dinner karne...
ridhima - hain cahlo na mein toh kab se bol rahi hun tum hi baatein bana rahe ho...
and saying so ridhima moved to the dinning area and armaan smiling move after ridhima and ridhima was going there while talking to dhanu and making faces to him...
and then they did their dinner and ridhima praise armaan's cooking..
ridhima - armaan pakka na ye tumne hi cook kiya hai
armaan - hain kyun...
ridhima - nahi bus aise him.. ye bahut tasty bana hai toh...
armaan - toh tum bolna kya chahati ho basket mein cook nahi kar sakta...
ridhima - nahi nahi... bus vo mujhe tumhari shaahi kheer yaad aa gai thi toh mujhe nahi laga tha ki ye tumne banaya hoga...
armaan - basket yaar yaad mat dhilao usse... mujhe pata nahi tumne vo khai kaise thi...
ridhima - its okay armaan .. and i must say tum kafi aachi cookng karna sikh gaye ho,... mera saath rahoge toh bahut kuch seekh jaoge...
armaan - acha ji ... vo kya hain na basket mein bhi aapko bahut kuch sikha sakta hun.. *being naughty and wink at her*
ridhima - armaan tum na .. hamesha bus badmashi hi sughti hai...
armaan - hai par sirf tumhare saath...
ridhima and armaan hug each other and dhanu make sounds.. so his parents also took him in notice...
dhanu - dhanu ... bhii... dadda dhanu ... bachket dhanuuu...

and armaan and ridhima smile at him and both of them hug him to at same time and all the three maliks share the hug...
and then they wish dhanu one last tym again...
AR - haapy birthday Dhanu once again...
dhanu - luv u *to both his parents*
and dhanu slept in armaan's lap and ridhima singing lori for him while patting his head gently...

Then armaan and ridhima to slept in each other's arms and dhanu on armaan's chest...





Originally posted by: Fimmy

Loved it...The song seq was awesome!

And our talli gang toh always rocks 😆
Hihihi...ghar ko pakro...vag jayega! <<< it cracked me completely!
Hayyee! Besharam Armaan...apne bte se bhi jalta hai! 😳
Awesome part...
Cont soon... 😊

thank u soo much dear...
heheheh nashe mein sab hilta hain bus vo nahi hilta jo nashe mein hota hai...
heheheh armaan toh armaan hain...





Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

awesome update😊😊..the holi celebrations were amazing❤️...beautiful..waiting for the next update...continue soon..and thanks for the pm😃




thank u ssooo sooo much dear...

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

waiting for the update..


Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

waiting for the update...


Sry tanvi to make u wait soo much but dear now on i will b updating onn week ends soo... will be late in updating... hope u can understand as now colleges are open from month so lots of work





Originally posted by: Ar_Asyafan

Yipeee...

First one after so long...
Luvd it a lottt...
Awesome yar...
Nd funny too ...
Luvd talli gang nd ar r so cute...
Trully luvd it to core...
Update soon...

congo dear for the first one to comment...
thank u dear soo much /...
hope u like this part as well





Originally posted by: --Orchids--

finally holi celebration ho hi gaya!!!😉

i still wnder is waqt holi part?? hehehehe...😆
par achcha hain.. bemausam tehyar ka maza hi kuch aur hota hain..
thnky for d part, baby..
awsmm one...
loved it..👏
btw, tumney toh dara hi diya tha..
i was thinking dhanu kidnap ho gayee..
but yeh twist toh rocking tha.. hahahaha...😆
thnk uu for this early update dear..😊
luv uu.. update soonishh..😃



arye di aab ho gai holi ... aab nahi hogi... POUT...
see u agree with me... festival ke vina unhe yaad karna is sooo coooll...
ehheehhehe

nahi nahi armaan ke hote hua unke dhanu ko koi kuch kaise kar sakta hain di...
hope u like this part as welll





Originally posted by: awesome

awwwh such a cute update

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

nice part.

holy party and bhaang...a funny combination.
song was nice.


thank u All very much
thank u sooo sooo much for all ur comments hope u guyies like this part as well

Originally posted by: AMMY12

cute part.

Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.


thank u dear... soo much btw how r u noe dear.. i heard u were been hospitalised... hope u are doing well now...

Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
loved dhanu n his parent convo
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Posted: 11 years ago
awwwh such a cute update
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy b.day dhanu baby...
u did ri8..
u let d bird free..
aww.. u r such a swthrt...❤️

awsm update aayuu..
juz loved it..😊

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beautiful part..
loved the way they celebrated Dhanu's b'day.
Dhanu is really very sweet,he freed the bird.
cont soon.

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