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Posted: 12 years ago
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RECAP


armaan - here u go my princess... aapki armaan made special chat...smelling its delecious mouth watering fragnance clossing her eyes and enjoying it... and armaan admiring her...
then ridhima open her eyes and took a peice and forward it to armaan *as alway she do... she always make armaan eat 1st bite...*
armaan took the bite half in mouth and half hanging out and guesture ridhima to take other half by her mouth...
and ridhima tolk it with pleasure...

after finishing her chat til 3am very romanticaly both moves to their room... armaan took ridhima to room in his arms as room was upstairs...*ridhima aaj kal aise hi upar niche aati - jati hai**
A soon as armaan hit the bed he was asleep and ridhima was not comfortable and moving very much she didn't wake up armaaan as she thought armaanmust be very tired after all he didn't double duty in hospital and then planning for kid and then her carving ... but armaan wake up himself sensing uncomfortalbness in ridhima ...
armaan * opening his arm'* - idhar aao...

ridhima immediatly move in his arms... and armaan cradle in her .. and ridhima feel asleap peacefull.. as everyday...



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Next mrng...
ridhima - armaan ...
armaan - hmmm**sleepy**
ridhima - armaan its...
armaan - jerk up.. ridhima... basket... basket.. kya hua...
ridhima - armaan
armaan - basket ... chalo jaldi sanjeevni chalte hain...with tears swiming in his eyes...

ridhima - armaan...ahhh... kya hua...ahhh
armaan - basket mein tumhe aise nahi dekh sakta...
ridhima - *controlling her pin* armaan plz mat rona agar tum ro padhoge toh mera kya hoga... plz armaan tumhe toh meri himat ho na... plz armaan chup hoja... plz aapni basket ke liya..
armaan -agar...
ridhima *cut armaan* - mujhe kuch nahi hoga...mera armaan hain na mera saath toh mujhe kuch bhi nahi ho sakta... koi mera armaan ke rahte mujhe aur hamare baby ko kuch nahi kar sakta... bhagwan bhi ahi ...hain na??
armaan - hain basket... mujhe tum dono ko kuch nahi hone dunga... i promise basket...
armaan - pick up ridhima in his arms and place her in car backseat... and drove sanjeevni... and called dr.keerti in his way... and his frndz and padma too
**shashank se baat nahi karta koi bhi bcoz he wanted to kill AR child**

armaan took ridhima in OT and OT was ready as he had already informed...
armaan - was restless out side OT and again and again move towards window...when ever ridhima scream he just clutch his fist and try to harm himself but atul and abhi hold him...
arman - mein nahi sun sakta uski cheekh.. mera se bardash nahi ho raha...


after sometym a baby cring sound came out and armaan smile broadly with tears flowing down...
dr.keerti came out ...
k=dr.k - congratulations dr.armaan baby bahut healthy hai...
armaan - aur ridhima ...
dr.k - smile vo bilku theek hain aur aapse milna chahati hain akele...

armaan rush to OT..and bang in...
armaan directly rush to ridhima's bed and saw her tears flowing out due to happiness...armaan just goes and hug ridhima tightly and wispers

armaan - thank u soo much basket thank u soo muuch for giving me such a beautiful feeling in the world of being a daddy and having u in my arms...its that i can't express the joy and happiness u have given me basket... i just love u alot and now i am being greedy ... i asked god that mujhe bus ek bar aapni basket aur baby se mila do phir chahe aapne pass... *still hugging her and in response ridhima just hug him move tightly as if he will evaporate in air if she left showing him that vo kahin nahi ja sakta *

armaan - pata hain aab mein bhagwan se mangna chahata hun ki mujhe kahin nahi jana ...**aparting and looking in his baskets eyes* basket tumhari care ne .. pyaar ne ,.. mujhe greedy bana diya hai ... bahut greedy...luv u alot basket itna ki ki ... jitna hmmm *thinking and thinking in his own styke *

ridhima - jitna samundar mein paani and jitna dharti se surag ki duri , jitna aakash mein tare , jitni phoolon mein khushbu, jitni chand ki chandani , jitni bacho mein masumiyat aur jitni mera armaan ka bada sa dil...
armaan - i just love u like anything...
and both hug each other... and felt content...and warmth...
armaan after 15 min
armaan - tum theek toh hona.. thaki toh nahi.. dard toh nahi ho raha na...
ridhima - *tears flowing* nahi armaan
armaan - toh tumhare aansun kyun
ridhima - ye toh khushi ke aansun hai ... jo khushi aur compeltness tumne di hai uske... thanku sooo much...
armaan just bend down and suck her tears away...before it flow down...
ridhima - armaan
armaan --mein ne kaha tha nah ridhima mein tumhare har aansun ko behne se pehle aapne aandar sama lunga...

itne mein nurse comes with their baby...who was having tears bigger then himself...
armaan first make ridhima sit with the support of the pillow and then armaan take the baby in his arms and settle ehide ridhima... and ridhima put her head on his shoulder and keep lookingg at their angle...in disgues of their baby...

armaan - aale aale mera baby itne molte molte aanchu...kya hua.. mommy ke paach jana hai... lo mommy ke paach jao...
*kissing baby on his cheek and baby stop crying feeling secure*
armaan - lo basket aapne baby ko pyaar karlo...
ridhima took the baby in her arms...
ridhima - mera ardhan ...
armaan - nahi basket ardhan nahi rishima hai...
ridhima - nahi armaan ardhan hai
armaan - nahi basket rishima hai
ridhima - ardhan
armaan - rishima
ridhima - ardhan
armaan - rishima
ridhima - armaan
armaan - ridhima

and baby started crying again seeing his mommydaddy fighting...
armaan - dekha basket tumne mera baby ko phir rula diya
ridhima - mein ne armaan!!!!!
armaan - ridhima
ridhima - armaan
armaan - ok okay... sry basket... sry... *pappy face*
ridhima smiles then after a mintue at a sudden
ridhima - aur ye mera baby kya tha...
armaan - huhhh *confused*
ridhima - armaan hamara... ye hamara baby hai tumhara nahi... mmera nahi .. hamara...
armaan - oh sry hamara baby... hamara...*feeling complete saying hamara*
ridhima/armaan - hamara baby... hamara angle...

baby again started crying...
armaan - aab toh pata ye rishima hai.. kitna roti hai aapni mommy pe gai hai bilkul... aabhi se paani ki tanki bahani shuri kar di...
ridhima hit armaan playfull on his arms...
ridhima - auchhh basket.. acha sry...
ridhima put her fingure in baby's mouth.. and baby start sucking it...
armaan / ridhima *together* - lagta hai isse bhook lagii hai...
then they both smile loking at each other...

armaan - mein bahar jata hun tum isse feed kar do...
ridhima *held armaan's hands* - its okay armaan tum rukh sakte ho... *with blush*
armaan - ridhima mein bahar wait karta hun na.. tum uncomfortable rahogi...
ridhima - nahi armaan aab tumhare saath kaise uncomfortness...
aur waise bhi mein chahati hun ki hum har moment aapne baby ke saath equally bitayen... iits okay.. tum rukh sakte ho...
armaan just look lovingly at ridhima...

and ridhima start fedding their baby...
armaan looking here and there...
ridhima saw this and to easy down the situation she just said...
ridhima - armaan baby ne dipere gila kar diya kya plz tum change...
befor ridhima could compelet armaan was standing with dipere in his hands...
ridhima smile... and armaan hesitates first then look at ridhima who nodded her head with assurance nad smile and seeing this confidence in her armaan move forward with smile...
and start changing baby's dipere... and in process armaan's hand came in contach with ridhima's hands which were holding the baby... and both felt sensastion... and then amaan look at the baby and jump with joy..
armaan - ridhima ur wish comes true... see.. its ur prince... its ardhan... ur wish come true...
ridhima -mein ne toh pehle hi kaha tha ki ardhan hai...
armaan - its not fair .. mujhe tumhari jaise princess chaiye thi...
ridhima - armaan
armaan -but koi nahi next tym mein rishima hi mangunga...
and ridhima blush deeply at his comment...
armaan - aabhi ke liya tumhar is naughty prince se kam chala lunga...after all he is our first love symbol...

armaan and ridhima were now all done and having a galla family tym.. and ardhan was in armaan's arm and ridhima was leaning over armaan's chest with her one arm at armaan's back and one arm under armaan's arm holig their baby and aramaan's other arm was on ridhim's head which was on his chest and armana is making funny but cute and adorable faces to ardhan and ridhima was admiring him and "their" son ,...

in between a flash came and both came to real world and look up to see nikky holding camera..
nikki - and this cute innoccent and adorable family momment is registered in our camera for forever...
then all the gang came in but armaan and ridhima was shocked when...


To know what happen next stay tune... to BACK TO YOU...
luv u all
thanku soo much too all who loved my FF and comment ke liya dhanyawad ji
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
cute part.
love the bond between armaan and his child.
armaan cares for riddhima so much.
armaan can cook... something unbelievable😛
cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Wow!
A beautiful part indeed.
I loved AR's cute moments with the baby soo much.
What shocked AR?I think Shanky must have come.
Waiting eagerly for the next part.
Take care!
love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Wow! You are really doing a gr8 work der... You showed the ar bond well and it was amazing to see them fighting like tom and jerry in front of their own baby;) lol... Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update😊😊
loved ar moments❤️
and thanks for the pm😃
continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
RECAP





armaan - its not fair .. mujhe tumhari jaise princess chaiye thi...
ridhima - armaan
armaan -but koi nahi next tym mein rishima hi mangunga...
and ridhima blush deeply at his comment...
armaan - aabhi ke liya tumhar is naughty prince se kam chala lunga...after all he is our first love symbol...

armaan and ridhima were now all done and having a galla family tym.. and ardhan was in armaan's arm and ridhima was leaning over armaan's chest with her one arm at armaan's back and one arm under armaan's arm holig their baby and aramaan's other arm was on ridhim's head which was on his chest and armana is making funny but cute and adorable faces to ardhan and ridhima was admiring him and "their" son ,...

in between a flash came and both came to real world and look up to see nikky holding camera..
nikki - and this cute innoccent and adorable family momment is registered in our camera for forever...
then all the gang came in but armaan and ridhima was shocked when...





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ridhima - aap yahan kya kar rahe hain...
armaan - basket
ridhima - nahi armaan mein inka chera bhi nahi dekhna chahati ...
armaan - basket vo tumhare...
ridhima- *cutting armaan* nahi armaan ...vo mera kuch nahi lagte... jab unhone hamare baby ko... tab hi mera unse saare rishte tut gaye...
armaan -*holding her and wispering* basket plz aaj itna khushi ke din nahi...
voice - rahne do dr.armaan... dr.keerti plz jara aap meri help kar dengi..
dr.K - yes dr.shashank...


after sometym ridhima was discharged from hospital...
armaan took her to their home...
armaan open the dor for ridhima and his prince...
when armaan open the door for ridhima she saw a plate with kumkum water placed on the door ...
ridhima -armaan ye ...
armaan - ye kyun i aaj mommy basket pehli bar ghar mein kadam rakh rahi hain... with the little prince of ours..
armaan and ridhima enters the house with ridhima leaving the imprints of her foot behind and armaan's hand supporting her and their prince in his arms...
then both went to the room..

ridhima felt asleep instantly after getting exausted and armaan to slept with ardhan on his chest... and his one arm around ridhima and ridhima's head on his shouder...
when ridhima woke up she was armaan sleeping with ardhan on his chest and his one arm on ardhan holding him sercurly and one arm under hr head... she smiled and kissed armaan's dimple...and sensing ridhima's lip on his cheek his dimple gets deepens...

armaan - oye hoye lagta hai aaj kisi ko bahut pyaar aa raha hai...
ridhima - vo toh hamesha aa ta hai...
armaan - acha...
ridhima - aur kya... aab jab mera hubby itna cute.. handsome.. caring .. loving and smart hoga toh mein kaise aapne aapko rokh paungi bolo...
armaan - oye hoye... mommy malik kya baat hai...
ridhima - armaan chalo hato.. mujhe ardhan ko feed karna hai...
armaan - pehle papa malik ki wishes ki list puri karo..
ridhima -acha aur kya hain papa malik ki wish list mein ...*circling her arms around armaan*
armaan - ye ki papa malik ko mommy malik aapne se dur nahi karengi ek pal ke liya bhi.. mommy malik papa malik ko ardhan ke sab kam sikhayengi... aur aur...
ridhima - aur *looking lovingly*
armaan - aur mommy malik papa malik ko... aabhi... ek... pyaari se... cute si... sweet si... yahan *pointing to head* kiss de den
ridhima - armaan tum bhi na... *she blushed and kissed armaan*
then ridhima kissed armaan again on his cheeks respectivly and then his closed eyes and ten came near his lips and kissed him a very small yet cute and sweet kiss promising that she is there forever in whatever and whenever they will face...

ardhan was growing...
after 2 weeks armaan was getting ready for the hospital...
armaan - basket ...*from room*
ridhima - hain armaan aai...*from kitchen*
kya hua*opening rooms door*

armaan - basket ye tie laga do na plz...
ridhima - tie???? par tum kab se tie lagne lage...
armaan - vo kya hain na koi tumhare ilawa mujhe aise dekh mujhe aacha nahi lagta... i m a married man now... and whats tha,... patni war...
ridhima * smiling and put her hers behind her ears*...- patniwarata...
armaan - yee.. exactly... patniwarata pati... and a prince's dad too now...
ridhima - but mujhe mera armaan aise hi acha lagta hai...
aur waise bhi mera armaan ka charam hi itna hai ki koi ladki usse resist nahi kar sakti...
armaan smile funny on this fully...
ridhima - toh leave the tie... u look very cool and handsome as u r ...
armaan - basket mera ardhan ko chod ke jaane ka maan nahi hai...
ridhima - aur mein...*fake anger*
armaan - arey arey.. bassket *pulling her face toward himself* mein kya kabhi aapni basket ko pyaar kare bina rah sakta hun.. tum ho tabhi mein aur ardhan bhi hain... tum nahi hoti toh mein aur ardhan bhi nahi hote... hum dono ka astitve hi tum se hai... tum nahi toh hum dono bhi nahi hai...
ridhima have tears...
armaan - aur ye ansuon ki tanki baand karo yaar...*wipping her tears*
ridhima - i love u armaan ... i luv my little prince . the gift that i can ask for...
armaan - i luv u too
ridhima - chalo aab jao warna dr.Keerti se dant padegi...
armaan - ja raha hun... bye jaan... bye prince *kissing both ardhan n ridhima*

and armaan leave for sanjeevni...after 2 hrs...
tring ...tring...
ridhima - hello
armaan - hello mommy malik...
ridhima - ji papa malik
armaan - mommy malik kya kar rahi hain...
ridhima - armaan ghar mein kya karungi mein... khana bana rahii hun...
armaan - aur ardhan kya kar raha hai..
ridhima - so raha hai...
armaan - kitna sota hai tumhare beta...
ridhima - papa malik aapka beta abhi 2 weeks ka hai.. koi big boy nahi hai jo utha rahega...
ardhan starts crying
armaan - ridhima dhanu ke kan par phone karko plz...
ridhima - okay lo...
armaan - aale alle mela dhanu kyun lo la hai... mommy ne mela dhanu ko kuch bola.. ruko jab daddy ghar aayenga toh mommy ko khub datenga...*dhanu giggle listing his daddy*
ridhima - hooo ... oh mera khilaf baatein ho rahe hain...
armaan - ridhima meein abhi call karta hun.. emergency hai... bye... luv u
ridhima - love u to bye... jaldi aana... bye


after 8 months of Adrhan's birthday...
after armaan comes from hospital...he goes toh ridhima in kitchen and then hug her from back
ridhima - aa gaye ...
armaan - hmmm **nuzzling in her hairs and neck**
ridhima - aate hi badmashi shuru ho gai...
armaan - i miss u soo much basket... tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahi maan lagta hai...
ridhima - **turning her face to him and hug him ** i too missed u armaan... tumhare bina maan nahi lagta mera bhi...tum chutti le lo na kuch din ki...
armaan - jo hukum meri basket ke...mein ne aaj hi aapni leave aplication di thi and approved... aab mein pura ek week tum logo ke saath rahunga 24*7...
basket dhanu kahan hai...
ridhima - aapne room mein hai...
armaan -mein aabhi aaya aapne dhanu ko milke..
armaan moved to ardhan's room and saw ardhan on the floor sitting...
armaan - basket tumne mera beta ko floor par kyun bethaya ... usse chot lag jati toh *picking ardhan in his arms*
ridhima - armaan aagar tum aise hi karoge toh tumhara dhanu chalna nahi sikhega... abhii tak usne crawl bhi nahi karna shuru kiya tumhare pyaar ne usse jameen par pair hi nahi rakhne deta...
armaan - koi nahi vo sikh jayega basket..
ridhima - kaise sikhega armaan jab tak tum usse aapni god se nahi utaroge..
armaan - basket...
ridhima - no basket aabhi niche utharo dhanu ko...
armaan - nahi ... mein nahi usse lag jayegi...
ridhima - armaan dhanu ko niche utaro aabhi ...*glaring*
armaan put him down heartlessly...
and dhanu sit there only near his fathers legs... and look up to armaan and ridhima...and strech his arms... indicating to pick him up...**very cutly he was looking to armaan*
armaan - basket usse nahi betna niche.. plz basket..
dhanu was having tears a little in his eyes as his father is not picking up* but he still has his arms spread towards armaan*
ridhima - nahi armaan agar aise hi raha toh vo chalna nahi seekhega kabhi...
armaan - ridhima hum...DHANU..DHANU...
armaan - basket dhanu!!!!..kahan..
armaan look at ridhima who was smilling having tears...
ridhima - wahan dekho...
armaan turn to see at the direction ridhima was indicating.. and saw ardhan crawling...
armaan went to ardhan and pick him up and kissed him over his face every where due to happiness then ridhima came to them and armaan forwarded dhanu in his arms and ridhima too kiss him ... and ardhan was giggling and giggling due to shower of kisses from his parents...
then armaan hug ardhan and ridhima tightly yet softly and kissed both ardhan and ridhima...
its 6 pm when all this happen ...

armana kept crawling with ardhan... and play hide and seek with him while crawling...
armaan was crawling with ardhan side by side ... and ardhan sometyms crawl faster from armaan as if they were racing with each other and when armaan remain back then ardhan stops after some distance and see back to see where is his father and smile cutly as if saying i won daddy...
then ridhima call armaan for dinner...
then armaan take dhanu and make him sit in his laps and feed him lovingly *dhanu is giggling throughly*
and through the giggle of ardhan armaan and ridhima's hearts were dancing with the happpiness that god is showering on them...


Edited by mishs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!! The part was simply adorable:) just luvd the small and sweet moments and i hope that dr. Shashank doesn't becomes some villan in this story... May all issues get solved:) continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update😊😊
and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Shoo cute!
their family noments were so adorable!
cont soonish
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very cute part.
armaan is a very protective father and riddhima is a strict mother.
loved father-son bond.

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