Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Freaking amazinggg !! Soo beautifully written !!! loved the reason behind d pearl !!

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

wow. I feel like every chatper keeps leaving me speechless. wow. that was beautiful. The emotion, the words, the memories- every single aspect gelled together to make this complete picture of perfection.

After reading that I see it no other way. there is no other way that it could be so perfect.

I am slighly emotional after that. And I swear my heartbeat picked up.

I was hoping she would say I love you but no this moment would have been too much.

He steals my breath away in you writing.

THANK YOU!

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

LOVED this chapter! Finally they have become true partners for life! They have shared.. and let go of their past finally!!

Lovely! also they Kissed!!! yayayaya

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

simply awesome

i am so happy for their engagement and the way khushi accepted arnav😃

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amv63

@amv63

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

This chapter more than lived up to our expectations, sweetie. It was a beautiful, sensitive portrayal of the deep love Khushi and Arnav share.

Khushi will in time move ahead and forget all the unhappiness and pain Arnav has given her, but I doubt if Arnav will ever completely forget it or forgive himself. There will be times when the guilt will override all other emotions, but the burden will be borne easier with Khushi by his side.

My heart breaks for Anjali. I do hope Shashi is able to offer some solace.

And yes, looking forward to Khushi's "hum bhi aapse I love you dammit".

Thanks for the PM.

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amritab

@amritab

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

This chapter, the last two chapters really, are very well done - Arnav expressing all of his doubts, his regrets, the meaning behind the ring, the meaning behind the pearl - just beautifully expressed. It really does mark a new beginning for this couple - although Khushi needs to express her love in words too :)
I hope that Anjali can find some solace in Shashi's company as well - she is sorely lacking in a father figure - hope that she finds one in him.

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Finally Arnav rectifies All his mistakes.Wonderful updates👏

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Very beautiful chapters. I've got tears in my eyes...it was that wonderful! :-)

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Very nice. I like how it's so detailed and deep. Please pms me the updates.

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#310

omg that was beautifull, absolutely brilliant, it was so sweet and emotional, i love the way he discribed the meaning of a pearl and how all that were her attributes,beautifully said.
thanx for the pm and please continue soon