Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

This was beautiful!
One of the best updates...
So this was the opening to their new beginning...
The unfinished Diwali task also completed...
This was perfect
Loved it !!!

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indeedisa

@indeedisa

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

These two chapters were absolutely beautiful.
Chapter 42:
Wow. Finally I see Arnavs reaction to the small glimpse of Khushi we have finally gotten to see. You have no idea how happy I am to realise that Khushi has finally healed. Their conversation on the bonnet was just heart-wrenchingly sweet and beautiful. Arnav has just made his way into my heart again!

Chapter 43:
Woohoo. Two updates in one go (for me at least). The way that you have portrayed how vulnerable Arnav is and how sensitive to what he hears, says, and does etc, just show another, sweeter side of him that we haven't been able to see. And the symbolism of that pearl ring just made me sigh in contentment.
please update soon!
Lots of Love
Celiza xox

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

That was a beautiful update that was a very much needed talk. Loved how he made the ring for her and what it symbolised. Was beautifully written

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

wow fantastic update the emotions beautiful thanks for the pm

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sandani12

@sandani12

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

I am so happy u updated! I was waiting for them to kiss! But I really liked the way it came about. I glad that despite everything, Kushi is ready to move on. Can't wait for the Anjali /babuji convo! Great job!

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

What an update...the emotions were expressed so beautifully...I adored this chapter...I can't wait to read more! Thansk for the PM!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Lovely chapters.. Khushi has accepted him.. Loved how she kept telling him to let go of the past.. She is really a person with a golden heart.. I guess Arnav has told her everything abt how bad he was with her.. Its time to start afresh.. She has accepted the ring.. Looking forward to the coming chapters..

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Arnav sighed. 'They symbolise faith...charity...innocence...harmony...perfection...purity...in other words,' his hand cupped her chin, and he leaned forward enough to nudge his nose with hers, 'they symbolise you.'

As he heard her soft, surprised gasp, he backed away an inch, trying to convey his seriousness, his honesty through his eyes before he began speaking again, 'And that night...when we first might...I ripped that dori on your dress...the dori made of pearls...I ripped apart everything that was you, then and ever since...I fouled up your purity, your innocence, your perfection, because of my own inability to believe that something so pure, so innocent, so perfect...could actually exist..

awesome update loved it him lashing out at him self was so perfect the emotions were well written and described you could fell his self loathing and his khushi loved how she kept telling him to let go of the past and for them to move on awesome update beautifully thanks for the pm

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

omg that was bloody awsuuum...wow loved it very much dear...gosh why could not this be the story...i love arnav in this ff...sooo beautiful and so was the kisss...hae...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...

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mkd4020

@mkd4020

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

hello... Have i ever told you that you are the master of details. Your writing is so vivid. I can actually picture it all in my head as i read it.
About todays update, well what is there to say, for lack of a better word, beautidul. Loved it. Looking forward to how you will make khushi say those magical 3 words.
Keep the good work. Untill the next update... Love.