SS: My destiny Part6 page12 (The last) - Page 4

very well written..😊

Originally posted by: DarkDove

AAAwwn!!! You dedicated it to me!!?? How sweet of you dear!!!

Sorry I am late :(

RES! for a big comment! :)

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*Dances around* You continued! And aawwn! You really think I am a good writer!!? *blush* Why thank you dear!

Oh eem gee!!! I loved the flashback of 4 months! So in this OS, this is how he saw Khushi for the first time!! Haye! He immediately fell for her 😳

And then arnav silently thanking Akash for coming to the gupta's! Loved the kitchen scene!

And wow!!!! He was letting rose petals fall on her! And then he proposed to her in front of the whole family on the marriage day itself!

Hehe I had to laugh thinking about how arnav proposed to Khushi in my saga of the wicked 😆

But here, I love this Arnav!!! It was so cute and sweet!!!!

Amazing update!!

And thank you again for the dedication dear!!!! Love you!

And me is waiting for more! 😳 I know I am evil!😆

When I read this I became like 'What the' a big comment😳. Thanks for it!!!
You are really a brilliant writer. I just love every piece you write <3
And I continued because you asked me for it.

The flashback is nice and he fell for her immediately though it wasn't easy to write about the first meeting for me. I thanked God for giving me such a idea for it!!!
Yeah he thanked him after all this meeting coz of him (He could admit this).
And the kitchen scene!!!! This Arnav is soo cute!!! His throat dried in front of her and he couldn't act normal!!!

I love reading your 'Saga of the wicked' yeah it's completely different the way he proposed to her between the two update!!!

Thanks again!!! Love you too!!!

You have to wait a lot as my brain is unavailable now coz of the exams!!!
my next part will be after 29th. LONG!!!!

hey...

Originally posted by: anodaksgfan

hey...

im finally done with exams and i read it...

i always tell everyone dat cvs drag every single track endlessly but y didnt they drag this cute lovey dovey track a lil longer..

i so wish they wud have..

but anyway..

uve witten it so welll..

romantic and cute..

hey...

Hello dearies!!!!

"Will you be mera jeevan saathi?" he asked her again.

His offer stole her breath. Before uttering any word, she looked at the both families. They were astonished but happy at the same time for them.

Anjali nodded her head and whispered to her 'Say yes'. Nani smiled at her. Her Amaa, buaji, and bauji were hapy and contented for her. All wanted her to accept this proposal. All agree that they are made for each other. They were the perfect jodi in everyone's eyes.

Suddenly the guests broke this silence and cried out "Yes", "Say yes", "Agree".

She said beaming, "Yes, I want to be your jeevan saathi," All listened carefully. Her voice was the only one to be audible. She continued, "I want to live the rest of my life with you."

He put the ring in her ring finger, and kissed her hand.

Khushi went to take the blessing from the two families. Nani wished her happiness and long life while Anjali hugged her and called her 'Bhabi'. Shyam congratulated her and mamaji welcomed her in the family.

When she bent down to touch mamiji's feet, her response was "Bas, bas. Helo Hi Bye Bye."

Her own family hugged her one by one and cried from happiness for her. Arnav was standing with some clients around him who were conveying their congratulations. Someone asked her to call Khushi to greet her and congratulate her, so he went and excused the members of the family and grabbed Khushi with him.

"This is my fiancee, Khushi," he said and Khushi stared at him she loved the word 'fiancee' which said by him.

"And this is Mrs. Mehta. One of our best clients." He introduced them to each other.

"You are lucky, ASR. She is so beautiful." Khushi thanked her and Arnav told her that he knows this. After recieving many congrats from the guests, they joined the family's conversation.

They heard nani saying, "OK. We will wait a month to take our elder Bahu from you."

"What?! why a month?!" asked Arnav.

"You know chotte it's the last year for Khushi at college and After 4 weeks she is going to graduate, so we thought to hold the wedding after a month and you know the rituals and this is the auspicious time."

"Ok, fine. If you want this, it's fine by me," answered Arnav who wasn't content with this decision.

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Awesome update dr!!
plz plz update soon!!

WOW! the story is flowing so well..please continue

Originally posted by: jnfrjnfr

Awesome update dr!!
plz plz update soon!!

Thank you😊

Part: 4

When they realized it's Akaash's and Payal's marriage, they stopped talking about Arnav and Khushi. Anjali started in her sisterly fashion to joke with her brother 'The Groom'

"Look! He is blushing. Now you have to carry Payal. It's a tradition in this family," Anjali said and looked at the others with laughter, "Com'n. You have to do this."

Arnav couldn't miss up this opportunity, so he grabbed Khushi, who was waiting for her jija ji to carry her sister with a smile, by the arm.

"Khushi, come with me."

"But, Where?!"

"Don't ask. Just come."

When they reached his room, he opened the door and said, "This is our room." It wasn't the first time for Khushi to see his room, but he wanted to make sure that she has the right on him and he too on her, and they will share everything together after the marriage; and the room is nothing compaing with their feelings of happiness and sadness, their dreams and wishes.

"You mean after the marriage," she wanted to irritate him.

"It's yours from now. No, from the day I met you I chose you to be my Partner."

She loved his words, but suddenly a laughter covered her face. "What happened now? Why are you laughing?!" he exclaimed.

"I just remembered our first meeting and your proposal," Khushi answered and laughed again.

"Don't act smart. You felt something for me from that day,"

* * * * * *

2.5 months ago ( 2 weeks after their firs meeting. It was the engagement)

Nani and the family suggested to hold it in a hall as they invited a big number of people for the engagement.

Arnav was waiting for her to come. He looked more than five times at his watch in the same minute. The waiting made him nervous. 'Couldn't she come early? Why is this late?!' he thought.

When he saw her entering the hall, he felt relief as his soul returned to him. He was stunned and mesmerized by her beauty. He stared at her; and when she noticed that, she closed her eyes to calm herself down and this made her look more beautiful for him- Her breath became heavy and abnormal. 'What's happening to him now?! Why is he staring at me like this.'

His gaze made her nervous. She wanted to hide herself somewhere far away from him, but she couldn't; his gaze was set straight on her.

She was wearing a pink sari, and her hair was curled and a light make-up adorned her. The kajal drew her eyes beautifully and attractively.

He walked towards her. Her family were with her except Payal , who went to a room to put the last touches, and Khushi thought of the first meeting and was tensed 'What if he said something in front of them?'

"Hello!" Arnav greeted her family.

"Hello, son. How are you?" Shashi asked him.

"I'm fine, uncle. And you?"

"How can't I be the happiest in my sister engagement! What does a father want more than seeing her own daughter as a bride!!!" Aranv looked at Khushi and imagined her with a bridal lenehga, then he came back to the world and said, "You are right, uncle." Khushi excused herself and went to see Payal.

After ten minutes, Khushi brought Payal with her. The sisters were cute and beautiful, and people started to talk about them.

Anjali asked the guests for attention as the time came for exchanging the rings.

All gathered hands and applaused for them. Arnav looked at Khushi, who was looking at him, but then she pretended that she was looking at someone behind him and she waved for nobody.

'What happened to me?! Why I was looking at him like this?!' then she looked at him again. She actually was studying him. He was wearing a black outfit. 'He is handsome and attractive. He has deep eyes, which you can't understand their expressions. So deep, so mysterious; these chocolate brown eyes are bewitched. His smile adds more brightness to his face. The way he's combed his hair is just perfect for him.' She was bewildered as she thought like this. His charisma magnetized her. He noticed her, but decided to ignore her, and he didn't look at her for a good 15 minutes. This was hard for him, but he had to see her reaction.

She noticed his ignorance and thought 'What an arrogance!' she became habitual to his looks and gaze, so someone inside her couldn't tolerate his behavior. She huffed and decided to ignore him too and not to look at him whatever happens 'What does he think of himself. I can ignore him too' she thought stubbornly.

When they were about to leave, she had a glance at him for the last time; he looked at her this time.

Their restless hearts couldn't find peace that night, and both of them spent it thinking of the other.

The end of the flashback.

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"Maybe I did" she said hesitantly

" Maybe," he said with a smirk.

So, how was their eyes challenge?! Like a cold war by looks and eyes😆.

I hope it's not short and you liked it.