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Sweet-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: idiot_box
hey really nice start...loved that line- "Loud noise is far better than silent thoughts, silent thoughts are poison"...
please update soon...and please do pm me!!😊

Yup..tht line is very true..will update soon😃

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Sweet-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk
Sorry for the late cmmnt
well loved the starting!! ..an intriguing one..do update soon..eager to read further :)

Thanks 😃

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Sweet-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Angel56
unwaah unwaaah i want next part soon ...

it was bang on ...

ahahhaha don't cry, will update soon 😃

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Sweet-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: kittu_arsha
The start ws Amazing !

PM me whenever u Update Next :)

Thanks..sure i will Pm u

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sweet-bird

Yup..tht line is very true..will update soon😃

please don't forget to pm me when you update!!

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Sweet-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

RaHi FF | Journey To My Heart |

Part 2

"When we are no longer able to change a situation, we are challenged to change ourselves"

She was changed. She was not that stupid Panchi anymore. She was tired. Tired of those irritating nasty people around her.They always dominated her. And her bad luck, Ranveer was one of them.

No..Not anymore. She wanted to feel special. Her dreams about a perfect partner, who will care for her, will understand her. She wanted someone for support. And again her bad luck, she thought Ranveer was her strongest support.

She didn't want many things from him. She had no interest about gifts, roses, teddys. She wanted a little time, a little time from his busy life. She wanted him to sit beside her, understand her.

She can remember all those times when her phone beeped.How eagerly she used to wait for his msg. He msgd her many times. Her phone was full with his msgs. But his msgd her how he should propose his next girl. What she should buy for his girl friend. Difference was that.

She was hurted everytime. She wanted to cry. But she was Panchi.Instead of crying she always gave her precious smile. But behind that smile..

"Behind my smile is a hurting heart, Behind my laugh I 'm falling apart
Look closely at me and you will see, the girl I'm not me"

She was not feeling well. She was tired.Tired of explaining herself, tired of fake smiles and the forced silence. She had tried and she was lost. If destiny wanted to play this cruel game, then she should participate but she she would not play.

And with that she closed her eyes. She fainted. But those strong arms. She wanted to scream ''let me fall".

"Moti! Moti! Open your eyes.are you ok? ", he shouted like someone was trying to steal his life. The thought of losing her scared him like hell. He can't imagine his life without her.

"Open your eyes!! Damn it!! everything will be ok", he shouted, tears falling from his face.

But less he knew he was falling for her.He was going to an unknown destination. He was falling..falling..

"You will always fall in love, and it will always be like having your throat cut, just that fast"

Sorry for this short update. Exams, so little busy.Hit like and comment.
Who want a PM for next part, send me a buddy req, it will help me.
Thanks_misti

Edited by Sweet-bird - 13 years ago

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

res

unres..

Yay!!!first one to comment😆...

good job misti!😃

really enjoyed reading the update!!😊

and tell me one thing how do you come up with such great lines??!!

im totally a fan of yours now!!!👏

looking forward to the next update...

so please update soon!!

and obviously pm me when you update!!

Edited by idiot_box - 13 years ago

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muzzy_sk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

you are seriously osam!!...i love the pace of this ss...
the way you penned down panchi's feeling ..damn gud!!
and hw the hell do you find those strips in between??!!..thy are so apt !!..love it..
update soon..m relli eagr to read further
p.s: i dnt receive a PM this time ..:(..i keep stalking this forum so came across this 😆..but want PM's from the next time!!..

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

fab update..short tha bt still awesome...cant w8 to c hw nonu gets her moti back...plz update soon n all d best for ur xams..👍🏼

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Sweet-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: idiot_box
res
unres..
Yay!!!first one to comment😆...
good job misti!😃
really enjoyed reading the update!!😊
and tell me one thing how do you come up with such great lines??!!
im totally a fan of yours now!!!👏
looking forward to the next update...
so please update soon!!
and obviously pm me when you update!!

Hey thanks..and about those lines, let me tell u I love to read quotes. So when i cme across with some good quotes, tht time I wrte it in my diary..n I have a collection of quotes :) Sure i will pm you next time 😃

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