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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict
Brilliant work... loving it.

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All the best for exams.

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Sweet-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

RaHi FF | Journey To My Heart |

Part 3

He drove the car too fast. Why it was so hard for him to see senseless Panchi beside him? He didn't know the answer. He didn't know..

"Some says this, some says that, Indications are serious, doubtfully noticing that
Really! Don't know what is happening to me..."

"I should inform aunty", he muttered.But he knew Savitri Roy, Panchi's mother would be worried. She loves her daughter too much. "Now we should go home first, then we will see", he decided.

Moti! Are you ok now? Though he knew she was not ok, he was asking her continuously. "Please open your eyes. You know I can't take you in my arms, you are fat", he was crying, tears falling from his eyes.

"Open your eyes and see me,Tell me that it's not too late.
Open your arms and hold me,Tell me it'll be alright..."

He pressed the doorbell.

She was scared. She was scared to see her daughter like this. After death of Panchi's father, Panchi was the only reason for her to live.

Ranveer, what's happen? Everything all right? Why she is senseless??", she was shouting n throwing thousands question to Ranveer, her daughter's best friend.

"Aunty , aunty relax. Nothing happened. She just fainted. I think she didn't eat anything from morning". He lied. He didn't wanna say anything about her dance in nightclub. He lied.

"Please, call the doctor now. We can't wait too much", he said with a choked voice.

Without wasting further time he placed her on the bed and covered her with quilt.

"Relax. Don't panic. Nothing to worry. She will be fine physically. I m giving some medicines. Hope she will be fine", Dr.Ahmed said.

"Wait, wait, she will be fine physically means??", Ranveer asked with anger in his voice.

"She is going though depression. There is something which is the reason fr her depression. Talk with her. Understand her, Hope she will be fine", Dr.Ahmed said with a sad tone.

He was shocked. She was shocked. Two most important people in her life had no idea about her depression. She was her mother, who thought she knew her daughter too well. And other her best friend, who even didn't care to ask her, if she was happy n everything ok in her life.

"Ranveer, can you stay here some more time? I m really scared", Panchi's mother asked him.

"It's ok aunty. I will stay. I can't left my Moti like this", he answered.

He was scared. Scared like hell. "He is the reason fr her depression??", his unconscious mind said.

"Mom, I can't come home today. I have to stay in Savitri aunty's house. Panchi is not well. Savitri aunty can't handle all these. Hope you can understand", Ranveer said to his mother.

As usually his mother had no problem. She was too busy with her own life. She had no time to care for his only son.

She was sleeping. Sleeping like a princess. Life is a game. He was thinking about all incidents. After their fight, misunderstanding now he was in her home, in her bedroom, sitting beside her. Life is unbelievable.

He came near her bed to to take the bottle of water, when his eyes caught her, her hair flying in the breeze. His hand removed her hairs which kept on falling on her face.

"Let me feel the breeze around you. let my eyes admire you"

He started tracing his fingers on her face, all lost in her beauty. He didn't understand what made him to do the next thing. He kissed her forehead and while admiring her he leaned further towards her lips.

"Let the night come and my heart drown in love
Let me live the moment, let me drink the love..."

Hope this part is long. This is what I can manage, as my exams are scaring me like hell. Personally I love this part. plz let me know that if u love this part or not.For PM, send me buddy req. It will help me. Hit like and comment.
Thanks_Misti.

Edited by Sweet-bird - 13 years ago

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Piya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

It was beautiful as usual <3

True,Sometime we don't understand what we do ..why we do!.

Lovely update..:)

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Priyanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Loved it Mishti.

It's beautiful.

I love those small parts you put in the middle. Are they some lyrics or you wrote them?

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Mistii...d story is gettin more n more interstin...n evry update is gettin more n more awesome...n i jst loved loved d way u r usin beautiful quotes vich truly reflect the scenes...totally yet another fab update...👏👏👏👏...thnx soo much for pm n plz continue soon...😊

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

When you realise that you might have caused someone pain, it's hard to live with that.
Ranveer must've gone through the same.
And now for the first she takes a new place in his life
Good job dear!
Ah! The torture of when creativity and exam clashes!
Facing the same right now.

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Sweet-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict
Loved it Mishti.

It's beautiful.

I love those small parts you put in the middle. Are they some lyrics or you wrote them?

Thanks..Yup some of them are lyrics like let the night come and my heart drown in love...this is a beangali song, i translate it in english..I have a big collection of quotes, when i cme across with any good quotes i wrte it in diary.."let me feel the breeze around you..., i wrote this :)

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Krati Choudhary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Mistii..Againnn You Came Up with an Amazingly Written Update ! :)

I Loved It !

Sometimes even we don't know what is Happening..Why ?
we Just don't have the Answer To It.. :)

The Story Seems to b at a Turning Point..I Liked it how Savitri Trusts Ranveer with all Her Heart..Aww :)

Please Update Soon n Thanks fr the PM :

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Sweet-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

So I can't stop myself from giving this teaser..Read it with open mind. Don't judge any character now. They are hell confused. SS should be complete witing five and six chapters. But I think I can't complete it within fifth chapter. So This is FF now😃..My first FF, plz be gentle with me.

Teaser for next chapter:

Suddenly she cupped his face with one hand and touched her lips with his..he gasped...and sucked her...from his side it was more of an apologic kiss...which grew into a miss you one...they kissed caring each other...but after sometime it grew with I hate you one..Ranveer gasp in the ignition. He wanted to pull back but he was surprised that she sucked it back making his groan her name for the first time.

Ok..so more turning points are wating, like Ranveer's girlfriend and a new entry. Let them realise their love, they are confused, because in present their love is unconscious.Share your thoughts about this teaser. What will happen after this?? A kiss will turn their life or this moment they spent, is just a mistake?

Thanks_Misti