TPK SS: Orphan Part 4 updated at Page 20

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Neet

@Neett

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Aww.. kya haal ho gya bihaan ka aur vasu ko ab bhi dhruv ki hi padi hai.. bauji ki bihaan ke liye ye pain dekhi nnhi jaati.

Bht khoob likha dplee bt i m crying to read it 😭 so painful.

Nxt part jaldi dena.

Quote

Lakshmi G Reghunath

@-Ila-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

OK I am very very sad... its very depressing ...that dog waala dialogue I just couldnt bear that diaogue...loved the update dips

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Kowsi

@Kowsi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Amazing Di!! It is not everyday that we have Bauji's side of story! He was the only one who knew that Bihaan loved Thapki and he is the one who loved Bihaan so much

I hope even in TPK they show Bauji's repentance about what he said to Bihaan!

You just wrote it beautifully Di! My fav part was when you wrote "she could think obly of her son when his son was sinking to nothingness" the separation between Dhruv and Bihaan here was awesome!

And you know I am so glad that you made Bauji aware of Thapki's feelings

I am just hoping that you would allow Thapki to come besides Bihaan and take care of him

But maybe you are going to write about all the members of the family before writing about Thapki?

Quote

P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: oceanbubble
Loving it more with each passing update...😳
So it was a 3rd person POV regd. Thapki-Dhruv alliance...I loved that u chose Bauji for that...

It was really difficult to read it...Though Bihaan was not there...his pain was still there...& I loved that Bauji is also repenting for what he said...about him belonging to the road...

& Vasu...she deserves to be sent to the tabela...😡😡 Bohot bol rahi thi ki Thahaan waha bade aaram se reh rhe h...i think she should also enjoy the comforts of tabela...in the company of Gulabo & RP...😆😆

Anyways...thank u for the update & next part asap...😆

I always wanted to write about Bauji and Bihaan's relationship. And it gave me good opportunity to write it.

Thanks for reading

Quote

P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Neett
Aww.. kya haal ho gya bihaan ka aur vasu ko ab bhi dhruv ki hi padi hai.. bauji ki bihaan ke liye ye pain dekhi nnhi jaati.
Bht khoob likha dplee bt i m crying to read it 😭 so painful.

Nxt part jaldi dena.

Thanks Neet...Bauji show mein bhi dukhi hinge jab woh dekhenge ki Bihaan kitna dukhi hain

Quote

P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: -Lachu-
OK I am very very sad... its very depressing ...that dog waala dialogue I just couldnt bear that diaogue...loved the update dips

I know..every time I remember those lines, my blood boil.

Thanks for reading.

Quote

P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Kowsi
Amazing Di!! It is not everyday that we have Bauji's side of story! He was the only one who knew that Bihaan loved Thapki and he is the one who loved Bihaan so much
I hope even in TPK they show Bauji's repentance about what he said to Bihaan!

You just wrote it beautifully Di! My fav part was when you wrote "she could think obly of her son when his son was sinking to nothingness" the separation between Dhruv and Bihaan here was awesome!

And you know I am so glad that you made Bauji aware of Thapki's feelings

I am just hoping that you would allow Thapki to come besides Bihaan and take care of him
But maybe you are going to write about all the members of the family before writing about Thapki?

Thanks Kowsi..I want to write about how the family feels about Bihaan but an idea struck me amidst this and now thinking about how to collaborate everything.

Quote

PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Ohh my that made me so emotional 😭

I can totally understand Bauji and I'm very proud of his thinking here! Loved it Dips! I thought Vasu-Thapki confrontation will have some drama but it was simple and clear. Liked that too. She simply refused, aana-kaani nahi ki! I really liked Bauji's POV and you again made me feel Bihaan's pain through Bauji's eyes!!

Plz update fast! Whenever I see your updates, my heart starts beating fast😃

Quote

Puppy05

@Puppy05

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Waa dii...what an awesome update...no words at all diii...such a wonderful one...loved it..loved each and every word, every phrase of the post...meri bihaan kahan diii?????thank god, thapki uska inthazaar kar rahi hai!!!!!well

And bihaan-bauji relation...couldn't be decorated in words...that's more than that...till date in epi also, i loved the most when bihaan said his feelings to him amd bauji declared it as love...
Soon come up with next awesomewala part dii...
What an emotional treat it was ,u don't know diii...i was sobbing for my bihaan...

Edited by pupra - 9 years ago