TPK SS: Orphan Part 4 updated at Page 20 - Page 12

Originally posted by: kapiri

Diii👏

wt a brlnt prt

i rly loved it

i have a rqst, plz kill dt stupid vasu😡

jab deko Dhruv...dhruv...Oooh🤬

bechara Bihaan yadash kokar beti hoon😭 par vasu ko abhi bhi Dhruv ki pain dika deti he😡

Di your updates are always a treat for me.. it made my day.. thank you for this update

Originally posted by: deepu_t_d09

di it was awesome portraying imotional sentiment click on the core no words 👏

Originally posted by: shanzanoor

dplee aapi such an emotional update👍🏼 loved every word of it😳 i liked how beautifully u portrayed bauji emotions.

Originally posted by: PHP_069

Didi..emotional update..khub bhalo lagse..

Originally posted by: shweta2728

Wow that was powerful! Please update soon!

Originally posted by: Katori

It was very nice to read from Bauji's perspective. Vasu is still old selfish self even in the middle of all the chaos. Very well written. Do update soon.

Originally posted by: rtms

Bauji 's pov is really heart touching.you have written it beautifully. One of the best writings dplee.

It was great to read from Bauji's perspective...was very good...do update soon.

Glad u included baujis pov n even then felt bihaans pain bcz it was evident from baujis words bauji is hurt bihaan is hurt everyone is hurt but vasu couldnt forget about ds ki khushi...
Good to read that thapki is gonna wait for bihaan
Loved it n loving ur idea of including everyones pov 👏