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Puppy05

@Puppy05

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

@ kowsi ka... Don't worry ka...surely they will sure repentence...but be4 that truth has to come out, only then he will come to know that he was not wrong and...vasu truth i need it to be exposed very soon...

And that dogwala dialog, inclufing that feetmwater drink statement also ,my blood is boiling, its getting on my nerves diii...that to for myyy bihaaan...bechara kya kya sahega wo????is selfish maa ke liye...

@kapiri, me too prefer to kill that chudail...HiFi...

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Deepu T D

@..dtd...

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

di it was awesome portraying imotional sentiment click on the core no words 👏

Edited by deepu_t_d09 - 9 years ago

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Preeti126

@Preeti126

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Thank u so much for writing abt bauji..i really love his bonding with bihaan..
And for vasu no words yaar..she is out of mind..kaisi maa he ye..
It was nice..loved it..

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riffat

@shanzanoor

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

dplee aapi such an emotional update👍🏼 loved every word of it😳 i liked how beautifully u portrayed bauji emotions.

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alina.b

@alina.b

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Wow that was powerful! Please update soon!

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manaan

@manaan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Uff, too good, and yes I want each and every family member to think once, that how much they hurt him, and give punishment to him without any mistake.

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Karaali

@Karaali

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

It was very nice to read from Bauji's perspective. Vasu is still old selfish self even in the middle of all the chaos. Very well written. Do update soon.

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rtms

@rtms

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Bauji 's pov is really heart touching.you have written it beautifully. One of the best writings dplee.

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P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Ohh my that made me so emotional 😭
I can totally understand Bauji and I'm very proud of his thinking here! Loved it Dips! I thought Vasu-Thapki confrontation will have some drama but it was simple and clear. Liked that too. She simply refused, aana-kaani nahi ki! I really liked Bauji's POV and you again made me feel Bihaan's pain through Bauji's eyes!!

Plz update fast! Whenever I see your updates, my heart starts beating fast😃

Thanks Sanya. I initially thought to add some drama in Vasu Thapki scene but we are having so much angst nd dramma in the the show so I skipped it.

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P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: pupra
Waa dii...what an awesome update...no words at all diii...such a wonderful one...loved it..loved each and every word, every phrase of the post...meri bihaan kahan diii?????thank god, thapki uska inthazaar kar rahi hai!!!!!well

And bihaan-bauji relation...couldn't be decorated in words...that's more than that...till date in epi also, i loved the most when bihaan said his feelings to him amd bauji declared it as love...
Soon come up with next awesomewala part dii...
What an emotional treat it was ,u don't know diii...i was sobbing for my bihaan...

Thanks pupi. Bauji and Bihaan's relation is very deep and it fills every heart with love. I just tried to portray some of it.