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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: NG162



I dont believe I m getting appreciation from d queen of writing!!
Thanks a lot!! I m trying to walk on ur stepping stones!!
Just love ur storylines!! N yeah iI m here with u to continue!!


Awww im flattered*hugs you* i woke up late and saw this and just got tis huge smile on my face,
thnk you ao much, km glad ur continuing though
Keep wiring more, im waitinggg
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Ur right, thoda drama toh banta h yaar

Kunj.glanced at twinkle, he knew her tendency to get attached to kids and also the fact that the girl was too small to leave alone on the road like that, he opened his.mouth to answer, but wad interrupted by some loud blabbering in bengali, both of them, turned to see a fat lady, in horrendous looks and an even fatter man, with a big mole on the nose, which made him look more evil than.he probably was.

"meera, tumi.ekdom boko !!" the lady screamed at meera as she grabbed her hand to pull her forcefully in her arms, twinkle noticed meeras scared expressions and realised it was the mama, meera told them.about.

Another glance at kunj and she knew they had another battle to fight together and that the trip was going to be a long one.


Okay somebody continue from here, im so glad that i dont have to apologize now, though i very well know.it wasn't a that good part

I wad hoping we could do something like the duo getting followed by gundays nd then getting lost in the forest, better scenes u know *wink wink*

Chalo continue.now
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Okay honest confession, im not bengali nor.do i know bengali
So forgive me.if i an not good, woh ek line.aati thi so likh di
If anybody does know.bengali then please help me.!!
Lets just let them get lost in the jungle na, before confession we got.cute romantic scenes, toh imagine post confession and the goa thing *dreamgirls* imagine what scenes we can get !!
Whos continuing ?! Cmon na jaldi jaldi
Edited by ..queen.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ..queen..

Okay honest confession, im not bengali nor.do i know bengali
So forgive me.if i an not good, woh ek line.aati thi so likh di
If anybody does know.bengali then please help me.!!
Lets just let them get lost in the jungle na, before confession we got.cute romantic scenes, toh imagine post confession and the goa thing *dreamgirls* imagine what scenes we can get !!
Whos continuing ?! Cmon na jaldi jaldi

Hey,
SAKSHI
I know Bengali quiet well...😳
So,if u need any help to let me know...

Shaveerkti..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ..queen..

Ur right, thoda drama toh banta h yaar

Kunj.glanced at twinkle, he knew her tendency to get attached to kids and also the fact that the girl was too small to leave alone on the road like that, he opened his.mouth to answer, but wad interrupted by some loud blabbering in bengali, both of them, turned to see a fat lady, in horrendous looks and an even fatter man, with a big mole on the nose, which made him look more evil than.he probably was.

"meera, tumi.ekdom boko !!" the lady screamed at meera as she grabbed her hand to pull her forcefully in her arms, twinkle noticed meeras scared expressions and realised it was the mama, meera told them.about.

Another glance at kunj and she knew they had another battle to fight together and that the trip was going to be a long one.


Okay somebody continue from here, im so glad that i dont have to apologize now, though i very well know.it wasn't a that good part

I wad hoping we could do something like the duo getting followed by gundays nd then getting lost in the forest, better scenes u know *wink wink*

Chalo continue.now

Hi Sakshi it is nice to see that ur idea takes its full motion.
@ Bold-Ekdum is not right,it will be eto.
Buddies please continue the story.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ..queen..

Ur right, thoda drama toh banta h yaar

Kunj.glanced at twinkle, he knew her tendency to get attached to kids and also the fact that the girl was too small to leave alone on the road like that, he opened his.mouth to answer, but wad interrupted by some loud blabbering in bengali, both of them, turned to see a fat lady, in horrendous looks and an even fatter man, with a big mole on the nose, which made him look more evil than.he probably was.

"meera, tumi.ekdom boko !!" the lady screamed at meera as she grabbed her hand to pull her forcefully in her arms, twinkle noticed meeras scared expressions and realised it was the mama, meera told them.about.

Another glance at kunj and she knew they had another battle to fight together and that the trip was going to be a long one.


Okay somebody continue from here, im so glad that i dont have to apologize now, though i very well know.it wasn't a that good part

I wad hoping we could do something like the duo getting followed by gundays nd then getting lost in the forest, better scenes u know *wink wink*

Chalo continue.now


"Tumi ekdom boko (Kolkata accent)/boka (normal Bengali accent)"=U r really fool...
"Tumi eto boko/boka"-U r so fool. ...

Waiting eagerly for continuation...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Okay okay
Seems like nobody iscontinuing, so i am

The man looked at the fake hugging duo and smirked. Looking at the new company they had, he asked twinj, "tum kauuun ho ?" in the weirdest of the tones, "Jao yahan se, yahan kya kar rahe ho" he screamed at them, pointedly at twinkle who had opened her mouth to answer his former question, and kunj being kunj wasn't in mood.to tolerate anybody screaming at his wife, "hum kaun hai, and humara kya kaam.hai yahan, hum dekhlenge," he held twinkles hand, "lekin itne fokat nahi hai ki yu, is tarah, gayro se baat karte rahe," he looked at meera, who seemed to be already crying, and looking at thhe bengali couple, he realised they were pure evil,and could possibly harm the young soul, just smiled in reassurance,and meera as if getting the message, nodded the smallest nod.possible.

He then.dragged twinkle to the car, opening the passenger door for her, looking at the small.excited smile on her face, he pulled her cheek slightly and closed the door. That was probably the best part bout their relationship, they never need words to express, bina bole, sab samajhte h dono. He got into tge car and fished out the key, looking at twinkle who looked back at him, and gave hkm the slightest nod ever, approving his plan. He pushed the key in and turned it, getting it on and driving away to a small distance, before pulling twinkle.in his lap and shielding her from the delineate crash into tge tree.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Queen...
I typed ur reply twice but send u pm. ...
It says queen have exceeded limit of receiving pm...😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Twinj immediatly touched the faces of their best halves anf getting the reassuring nod, that both were okay , they closed their.eyes as.they put the plan into motion once again.

They noticed the bengali couple walking away with meera and looked at each other, with twinkle.muttering"how mean are they, ek couple.ka accident ho gaya inke saamne anf police ya ambulance ko bhi bulaya nahi", kunj chuckled, "i guess inka.police ya ambulance ke.saath koi lafda ho ga, lets see," he opened rhe driver door and moved out with twinkle.in his arms, then gently placed twinkle.on her feet, they reached for each others hand at the same time and grabbing them, they started to walk fastly in the.direction of the bengali couple.

Kunj pulled twinkle behind a thick tree when they saw the trio walking towards a jeep with some 7 gundays in it already. The woman stopped in front of the jeep.

"how many times have i told u not to run away, tere ko ek baar mein samajh nhi aata kya?" the tone dripped with hatred as she raised her hand to smack the lil girl, when twinkle.ran and held it. Kunj smacked his head. Ho gaya siyappa.

Now.seriously some one continue
Do something like twinj run with meera anf the gundays behind them and then they run and find a small hut anf ge three of them ke cute cute scenes or something naaa, it'll be fun, pakka
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
twinkle held the hand of woman before she can touch Meera's face,the woman saw twinkle with hate in her eyes and then Kunj stepped near them and Twinkle spoke "tum ek maasum bachi p aise chilla rahi ho or use maarne bhi jaa rahi thi Ku haa kisne haq diya tumhe aisa krne ka" and the woman said "tumhe isse kya ho kaun tum lgte kya ho iske "
Kunj: lgte ho yaa naa lgte ho pr ek bachi p aise violence hote huye nahi dekh skte"
and then a gunda among them said " chodo ise or chle jayo yaha isse koi matlab nahi h tumhara warna bura haal kr denge tumhara"
T: Jo krna h kro pr hm ise yaha nahi chod skte
with that Twinkle pulled Lil girl from there and started walking towards the car taking meera with her and Kunj also started walking with both of them,then the woman signaled all the men in jeep to go towards them and they took some sticks and ran behind them Kunj saw all of them and with that he held Meera and Twinkle and started running they ran and ran ...suddenly twinkle's foot got hurt by pebble and she flipped Kunj saw this and bend to look after but also took a look towards the man behind them
and they were so near to them one of them is about to hit twinkle on her head but Kunj stopped him and held the stick in his hand with that the man fell on the ground Twinkle again started walking and Kunj fought with the man and turned them black and blue but 6 men are completely impossible for Kunj to handle so he took some sand in his hand and blew it towards them and he continued running with the girls ...

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