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Posted: 9 years ago
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Next day twinkle and kunj were sleeping hand in hand when bebe came in clearing her throat said o mere puttar ji abhi tak so rahe ho utthh bhi jao subah ke aath baj gaye. Both of them got up and said good morning bebe. Bebe said good morning jab room mein sote ho to darwaza to band kar liya karo. Twinj became red. Bebe main yeh batane aai thi ki tumhare behen myra aaj shaam ko aa rahi hai. Kunj was visibly shocked.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..queen..

twinkle pushed off his hand, dare he mess with an angry twinkle. she made a grumpy face and moved further to the edge of the bed, and kunj, in an attempt to save his girl from falling from the bed, extended his hand, but in vain, the duo fell off the bed kunj immediately and reflexively putting his hand under twinkle's head, so that her head wont hit the cold floor. twinkle clutched his shirt and squeezed shut her eyes, as they landed on the floor.

kunj stared at the epitome of beauty in front of his eyes, as his lips turned upwards in a soft smile. mesmerized again, after the changing room incident, second time that day. the girl was doing wonders to him, whether he accepted or not.

twinkle slowly opened her left eye, ad realizing she was in safe hands, she opened the other one, soon getting lost in those beautiful brown orbs which seemed to hold her world in that one moment.

"wow" he breathed, not very much in his coincence, "you are beautiful ,twinkle" and watching twinkle flush with happiness, he made his cute frustrated face and buried his face in her shoulder, his nose touching the hair that were sprawled on the floor.

"tu itni cute kaise ho sakti hai yaar" he groaned, making twinkle blush a lil harder, as she removed her hands from his chest and let him rest his body against his, her hands reaching his neck, playing with the baby hair there.

"yeh illegal hona chahiye, itna cute hone" kunj muttered in her ear, as twinkle smiled, and spoke in a little voice"illegal ki baat mat karo tum, kisi ruthe ko kaise illegal sweetness ke saath manaye, koi tumse seekhe"

kunj laughed, as he moved his hand from under her head to her back, to hug her properly, while twinkle hugged him back.


sorry, lamba ho gaya.
but now sombody else continue this

U don't have to be sorry...meri talent ki dukaannn...
I loved it...❤️
We have such so many talented writers here...
The cv's should take some ideas from here...
Edited by Shaveerkti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Myra aa rahi hai, woh bhi Aaj Shyam" Kunj says shocked. Twinkle's face lights up as she really wanted to meet her sister in law, she never got the oppurtunity. "Bebe aap pehle nahi Bata sakte the ki Myra aa rahi hai, Mujhe Shyam ko kaam hai Aur main usse pick up karne ke liye bhi nahi Jaa sakta hoon, she will kill me" he says. "Main Jaongi na" Twinkle says with excitement. Kunj folds his hands and says "Twinkle please, Meri Behen tujhse equally pagal hai, Aur agar Tum dono Pagli mil Gaye na, tho koi na koi bada siyappa Kar denge" Kunj says. "Kunj!" Twinkle shouts at him. "Jaane do na Twinkle puttar ko, Myra bhi khush hogi woh bhi apni Bhabhi ko Milna chahti hai" Bebe says. Kunj says okay.

It became Shyam more faster than ever. The Sarna family was getting everything ready for d arrival of Myra . Twinkle took her car and went to the airport to pick her Sister in law up. She reached the airport. Twinkles excitement had no limits she had only seen her sister in law in pictures . She stood there and waited. "Bhabhi ji" someone says keeping a hand on Twinkles shoulder. Twinkle smiles and turns back. It was her "Myra" She says hugging her.
Edited by harshi2000 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Both were equally excited meeting each other!!
M: pics main jitna dekha tha aap toh use bhi zyada sundae ho bhabhi!!!
T: acha to tum kum ho kya!!!
M: oh god bhabhi Im so eexcited!! Main humesha se sochti thi ki koi toh bhai ko tang Marne main mera saath de!! But an aap gaye ho na hum milke bhai ko pareshan karenge!!
T: OK pakka done!!
They reach home!!
Kunj also rreached home at that moment!!
Both Mayran twinkle giving naughty looks to each other!!
Kunj:(in mind) daal main much toh kala hai!! Yeh dono karne kya wali hai!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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At night twinkle was in her bedroom when kunj came from behind and hugged her!! He was in full romantic mood and wanted to love his wife
Twinkle: kunj kya kar rage ho!! Choro mujhe!! Bebe dekh Levi!!
Kunj: you dekhne de!! Kesse bhi mai tera pati noon!!
Twinkle: kunj!!
Knock knock on d door
M: bhai darwaza kholo na!!
K: aa gay I kabab main kaddi!!
He opened the door
M: bhabhi aaj aap mere sath sons mujhe apse bohot sari baaten karni hai!!
T: are haan Mayra main bhi yahi soch rahi thi!! (Giving teasing look to kunj)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kunj looked at twinkle as she giggled at his oh-so-cute please-don't-go expression, myra mentally adored the couple, she hadn't heard much of their love story, but she kinda knew it was a beautiful one.

"kyu?" kunj wondered suddenly, "myra, see yaar, I understand ki twinkle and tu pehli baar mil rahe ho, but fir bhi," he looked down and up and here and there"twinkle ko subah se kaam raha hai, tu ane wali thi toh itne saare preparations karne the, and us chakkar mein woh thak gyi hogi na," he sweetly looked up,"toh baatein kal kar lena, abhi ise sone de"

twinkle adoringly looked at her sadu sarna, such a cutie he was as myra raised her eyebrows,"acha Bhai?" kunj nodded, trying to look convincing. "srif bhabhi ki yaad hai apko? matlab, inke saamne apko kuch nahi dikhta?" she looked at twinkle, who shot her a smile. myra winked"look Bhai, bhabhi thak gyi hogi yeh aapko yaad hai, lekin yeh bhool gaye, ki mai poore din travel karke aa rahi hu?"

kunj looked at myra with an open mouth, and scratched his head, then helplessly looked at twinkle"bhabhi ki taraf kya dekh rahe ho? woh meri team mein hai, apki nahi" myra shot her words at kunj and he visibly cringed, then pressing his lips and narrowing his eyes, he spoke, "aisa kisne bola tughe? twinkle meri hi team mein rahegi, yeh tu samajh le" twinkle giggled as myra ran and looped her hand through hers, "agar good night kiss deni ho toh dedo, mai nahi dekh rahi hu, " myra spoke, closing her eyes with a smirk, she knew her brother was not brave enough to do that atleast, and when she heard kunj make a grumpy voice she smiled wider, war won, she could take her bhabhi to her room.

to say opening her eyes was a mistake would be an understatement. kunj and twinkle were kissing, noiselessly and adorably, her hands in his hair, and one of hir hand at her neck, other at her back, pulling her closer. she shut her eyes up and turned away, DAMN,her brother was braver than what he was a few months ago, her bhabhi was doing wonders to her brother. she heard kunj whisper a good night and twinkle whisper a good night back, as she opened her eyes again.

while dragging twinkle away from kunj, she did not miss seeing kunj mouthing an I love you to twinkle and her blowing a kiss to him.

those two were certainly amazing, and now it was time for some masti
Edited by ..queen.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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an hour passed.
myra and twinkle were having fun, myra decided that twinkle was her favourite member in the house. she was so much fun to hang out with. she had amazing fashion sense, a dozen contacts from london, a great sense of humour, a mind she could talk out and a heart she would listen to, he cute antics made myra laugh and she decided that twinkle and kunj actually fit very well. bhai was exactly waht twinkle bhabhi would need and twinkle bhabhi was all bhai needed. she smiled at how much they had talked in one hour. she then noticed twinkle run the area beneath her engagement ring, something written in black ink. she stroked it every other minute.
"bhabhi, apne tattoo karwaya hai? " this question made twinkle look up, and blush, she nodded slowly and looked at her SIL, she seemed nice enough, but she was already missing kunj so much. she was pretty sure he hadnt slept yet, and more sure than anything that he would be on the couch now.
"can i seee? please bhabhi?" and twinkle showed it to her, it was no big secret, everybody knew about this tattoo but none knew about the one on her neck, and kunj's neck for that matter. the hand could be shown but the neck tattoo was their secret.
myra gasped, it was beatiful. she knew that kunj and twinkle loved each other, but this much? she hadnt imagine. the tattoo was kunj's name, clear and sweet, inked in her skin, on her ring finger. she had heard about the vein to the heart talks but then, this was too beautiful. she then released her hand and twinkle pushed back her ring finger, which was pulled down by a centimeter. twinkle smiled sadly, "myra,'' as myra aww-ed loudly, "can i just go and see if he's okay ? like a minute only? please? i really need to" the longing nd love in her tone, made myra nod her head and twinkle gave her a quick hug"your the best sista !!" twinkle said as she rushed to teh door and then to their room.
"twinkle kahan gayi ?" myra turned suddenly to see kunj, a super worried expresssion on his face, as he looked about the room. turned out kunj had climbed up to myra's balcony to meet twinkle, but where was his girl ? he looked at myra,"kahan hai twinkle bol na?! woh theek toh hai?" myra aww-ed again, as the door flew open and a worried twinkle rushed in,"myra, kunj room mein nahi hai, i hope he's okay, mai check karne jaa rahi hu," she grabbed her phone and called him, only to be pulled into a hug. recognizing the scent and shape, she gave in to the hug, wrapping her arms around his frame, as she felt him holding her tightly.
"u okay ?" they both spoke together and smiled as the broke away, still in each others arms, and able to see their faces. kunj pushed back a strand, that was fluttering in the ac air, on her cheeks and she smiled slowly.
myra stood and admired the duo, romantic, caring and protective. perfect. she knew bhai was an amazing human, but he would turn out to be such a perfect husband and love, who would have imagined. she shook her head and smiled.

okay im seriosly sorry. i feel like writing but no current ideas, toh sab yahin likh rhi hu
sorry if you dont like these
Edited by ..queen.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..queen..


an hour passed.
myra and twinkle were having fun, myra decided that twinkle was her favourite member in the house. she was so much fun to hang out with. she had amazing fashion sense, a dozen contacts from london, a great sense of humour, a mind she could talk out and a heart she would listen to, he cute antics made myra laugh and she decided that twinkle and kunj actually fit very well. bhai was exactly waht twinkle bhabhi would need and twinkle bhabhi was all bhai needed. she smiled at how much they had talked in one hour. she then noticed twinkle run the area beneath her engagement ring, something written in black ink. she stroked it every other minute.
"bhabhi, apne tattoo karwaya hai? " this question made twinkle look up, and blush, she nodded slowly and looked at her SIL, she seemed nice enough, but she was already missing kunj so much. she was pretty sure he hadnt slept yet, and more sure than anything that he would be on the couch now.
"can i seee? please bhabhi?" and twinkle showed it to her, it was no big secret, everybody knew about this tattoo but none knew about the one on her neck, and kunj's neck for that matter. the hand could be shown but the neck tattoo was their secret.
myra gasped, it was beatiful. she knew that kunj and twinkle loved each other, but this much? she hadnt imagine. the tattoo was kunj's name, clear and sweet, inked in her skin, on her ring finger. she had heard about the vein to the heart talks but then, this was too beautiful. she then released her hand and twinkle pushed back her ring finger, which was pulled down by a centimeter. twinkle smiled sadly, "myra,'' as myra aww-ed loudly, "can i just go and see if he's okay ? like a minute only? please? i really need to" the longing nd love in her tone, made myra nod her head and twinkle gave her a quick hug"your the best sista !!" twinkle said as she rushed to teh door and then to their room.
"twinkle kahan gayi ?" myra turned suddenly to see kunj, a super worried expresssion on his face, as he looked about the room. turned out kunj had climbed up to myra's balcony to meet twinkle, but where was his girl ? he looked at myra,"kahan hai twinkle bol na?! woh theek toh hai?" myra aww-ed again, as the door flew open and a worried twinkle rushed in,"myra, kunj room mein nahi hai, i hope he's okay, mai check karne jaa rahi hu," she grabbed her phone and called him, only to be pulled into a hug. recognizing the scent and shape, she gave in to the hug, wrapping her arms around his frame, as she felt him holding her tightly.
"u okay ?" they both spoke together and smiled as the broke away, still in each others arms, and able to see their faces. kunj pushed back a strand, that was fluttering in the ac air, on her cheeks and she smiled slowly.
myra stood and admired the duo, romantic, caring and protective. perfect. she knew bhai was an amazing human, but he would turn out to be such a perfect husband and love, who would have imagined. she shook her head and smiled.

okay im seriosly sorry. i feel like writing but no current ideas, toh sab yahin likh rhi hu
sorry if you dont like these

don't feel sorry Sakshi
its really good to read everything you wrote here perfectly what I want to happen in the show
Edited by twinjlover9 - 9 years ago
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m really not good at writing that's why I never wrote a story or anything but m just trying to write a bit here what came in my mind after reading all these amazing stuffs by you all
continuation
Twinj is still standing in each others embrace and lost in each other eyes completely after two minutes Myra thought that they both of them are not going to leave each other so she cleared her throat showing her presence to them
Myra : now you both know naa that you two are all right and as you know Bhabhi is not going anywhere and will be with me so Bhai you may go now ,she said all this controlling her smile seeing kunj's face
but then Twinkle spoke seeing Kunj's state "I think Myra we have enough of our talks for today I want to go with Kunj now please " making Myra feel aweee again and Kunj was really happy listening to it he thought Twinkle will be supporting Myra only
Myra thought for a moment and then spoke " ummm okkk you both can go haa Bhabhi but you change parties very fast " acting like she is hurt
then Twinkle being twinkle can't see anyone hurt
T: agr aisi baat h toh Kunj tum jao m yahi pr soungi
K: Yr twinkle simple si baat h m unable to sleep there without you OK so now come with me
M :ohhhooo aap dono bhi naa m toh sirf aapko tease kr rahi thi jao Bhabhi warna aaj Bhai so hi ni payenge . said Myra winking at both of them
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They both said goodnight to Myra and headed to their room. As soon as twinkle closes the door of their mini world that was their room. Kunj just pulled her into his arms in his nice warm embrace. It was twinkle's only heaven!! She can give up anything for the comfort of his husband's warm embrace.
"Tu plz mujhe chor kar mat jaya kar plz I beg u!
Ek pal tu na dikhe na meri saasen ruk jati hai! " kunj said in a very loving tone!!
Twinkle awed at her kunj's plead and hugged him back even tighter. "Tumse door kesse ja sakti hoon kunj tumhe pata hain na that even I can't live without u!!"
They both look each other with fire of passion in their eyes which are partly teary. This all lead to a passionate kiss. They were digging into each others mouths as no air could pass!! They were in their world.

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