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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sbsmartness4


Sakshi was right! You have great talent in you. You should start writing more we all love what you write. Keep writing!!


Thank you so much...
I m so flattered...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinjlover9

you really write so well buddy
Thanks Sakshi to motivate her to write,as only because of you we get a very good new writer
Do write more Shaveerkti


Yup...I would've never tried writing. ...but shakshi made me write...& u ppl liked it...so Thanks a lot..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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on it babe
coming up a part for thelady
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
well well, sorry shaveerkti, bohot late update kiya, but girl, this one is for you...

kunj had this self satisfactory grin on his face through the ride home. he got a kiss. again. what better than that ? he gazed at twinkle, who was facing him, but eyes closed and a light blush adorned her cheeks. he could bet she was thinking about the kiss. he then gazed at their intwined hands that lay in twinkle's lap. she was subconciously drawing patterns on his skin.
"rasta bhi dekh lo" kunj giggled at her statement, even with close eyes she knew he was looking at her. he glanced at the road once. clear. he turned and placed a soft kiss on her nose. twinkle opened her eyes and smiled widely.
few minutes later they made their way into the sarna mansion. the main gates were open and kunj turned off the engion after parking the car. he gave a baby look to twinkle who laughed.
"ab kya hua tumhe ?" she ruffled his hair with her free hand.
"mughe andar nahi jana, wahan sab tumhe aur mughe spotlight mein dalkar ek dusre se baat tak nahi karne denge" she aww-ed at his antics as he pouted and gave her a look from his irresistable expression collection.
twinkle shook her head laughingly and grabbed his chin with her free hand. keeping his face in the position she wanted, she leaned over and kissed him on the lips. kunj was taken by surprise and took a small moment to register the fact that she was kissing him. he pulled his hand from her hold and held her face and her arm, as they deepened the kiss. his hand reached her waist and he pulled her from her seat to his lap. they kissed for a long time and then pulled apart.
one hand of twinkle's was looped loosely around his neck and the other cradled his face. his one hand cradled twinkle's face and the other was tightly wound aroung her waist. she laughed at his smile, and he grinned at the sound of her laugher.
"ab chale mr.sarna ?" she spoke, trying to get off his lap.
"aise jao gi ?" he pointed towards her face, and she looked at him with confusion. "waise toh mughe tu aise bhi achi lag rahi hai, but ghar walo ke samne," he turned the mirror towards her, and laughed as she gasped.
hair a mess and lipstick smudged, lips slightly swollen, but they could not do anything about that, could they?
"ho gaya siyappa" she smacked her forehead as kunj nudged his head on her shoulder, laughing.
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they walked in the sarna mansion, hand in hand. twinkle had combed her hair and redone her makeup, looking composed they were welcomed by bebe and usha who seemed at their happy best.
myra ran in and grabbed twinkle's arm"bhabbhhhiii" she screamed as kunj cringed and twinkle laughed. she double hugged the duo and then pulled twinkle along.
"mughe na, apko ek bohot bohot bohot special cheez dikhani hai" she spoke as she grabbed twinkle along. twinkle looked at kunj who was being pampered by bebe and mummiji, and was looking at her with baby eyes and an i-told-you-so look as she sadly smiled and walked away.
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twinkle walked out of the washroom after changing into her night kurta and salwar, only to see kunj with his head in his hands, a pained look on his face.
"kunj?" she ran to him dumping the clothes on the table. he looked up from his spot on the couch and smiled as if nothing was the matter.
"kya hua tumhe?" she looked on as he shook his head, and even on her multiple questions, just said it was nothing.
"tumhe meri kasam kunj," she pointed at him"batao kya hua hai?" she stood with hands on her hips. she was almost trembling now. the SCA moments were still fresh and she did not want her life, kunj, to be going through anymore pain, or have to take those medicines.
"arre meri ma, tu nahi manegi na" kunj laughed"headache ho raha hai"he said softly, drawing patterns on the couch.
"aur yeh baat tum mughe ab bata rahe ho?" she spoke in whispers as she made her was to the dressing table. she knew if she screamed, his head woudl hurt more, and that would mean more pain to him. and she would not appreciate that.
she grabbed oil and a painkiller and moved towards him. he had that tablet and twinkle went and stood behind him. he was leaning against the couch back. which covered only half of his back.
she started oiling his head slowly. and slowly enough, he felt his body relax under the effect of the meds or her champi, she did not know.
he gently lean back, so that his head was now resting against her chest as she continued with the massage.
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kunj was now fast alseep on the bed,(dont even ask how twinkle dragged him there) and twinkle sat beside him, his head in her lap, patting him gently and letting him sleep. the boy was already deep in slumber and his girl had her eyelids drooping effortlessly. she yawned and looked at kunj, silently asleep in her lap. she smiled involuntarily at him and bent down to press a kiss to his cheek. his face was now adorned with a small smile. she caressed his hair as sleep engulfed her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
I was just feeling bored so i thought to give a try

Kunj woke up due to disturbing sunrays but a smile crept on his face when he found himself in the arms of his queen he just cannot be happy he left twinkle to sleep some more kissed her forehead n headed to downstairs he saw mum n bebe working in kitchen and myra heading to dinning table n papa n bhaiya sitting there he went there n wished every one good morning papa said why dont we keep a celebration for twinkle n kunj as they have won d competition twinkle came down n saw everyone n was angry wid kunj she went back to room angrily widout talking to kunj he went back her he saw her n asked her why she was angry
K:Kya hua twinkle tu ghusse me kyu h
T:tum rehne do kunj
K;bol na meri jaan
T;kunj tum uth gaye the toh mujhe uthya kyu nhi tumhe pta h na mujhe akele uthna pasnd nhi h
K:i am sorry baby mujhe laga tu thak gyi hogi isliye i am sorry plzz
T okay par phir aisa mat karna
K pakka chl ab bta tu kya pehnegi mai kuch colour coordinated pehnu
T mai soch rahi thi ki saree pehnu
K yaar twinkle kyu tu mujhe behosh karne pe tuli h
Tujhe pta h tijhe me saree me dekh kar khud ko control nhi kar paunga
T laughs" kunj tum kitne cute ho
N down the preps for celebration began

Plzz someone continue i would if u'll comment i just gave a try thanku
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
All the updates were amazing.
Loved it.

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