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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

well, change in the story, the piece of paper comes later into view, this is right after the round started.

twinkle raised her finger to her mouth, and just before she could start nibbling, kunj pulled it down again,"siyappa queen, tu kisi ki baat nahi sunti. maa ne kitni baar bola hai, ki nakhun ke paas wali skin mat nikala kar,(im sorry, my friends do this a lot, nail biting nahi skin biting, it pains though) " he rubbed his wife's finger as she pouted"tughe dard nahi hota kya? mughe isko dekh ke pain hone lagta hai," kunj pouted even more cutely, and twinkle could do nothing but pull his cheeks and smile as he pressed a small kiss on her forhead.
"SO CONTESTANTS, Ap sabko rules pata hai, yeh rahe hamare helpers, ko ki apke hath aur pair bandhege, please cooperate." the sound of one of the judeges alerted both the couples.
two men entered the room, both a little evil looking, kunj dismissed the fact by saying that maybe his features are something like that, or whatever, he held twinkle's waist and hugged her close to his body.
the worse of the guys walked towards twinj and kunj automatically held twinkle's hand, the guy looked in a weird sort of way at twinkle, which twinkle didnt notice but kunj did, he pulled twinkle backwards, and hid her body against his.
"your hand, my lady," the man in some broken english as he bent quite ungracefully to grab twinkle's hand as she pulled herself back and was pulled even more by her husband,
"she's mine, so mind it," kunj narrowed his eyes at the guy in front,"zyada touchy hone ki zaroorat nahi hai, so keep your distance,"
the guy merely rolled his eyes, and kunj held their hands, which were in a tight enough lock, but kept a big gap b/w the hands and teh man, thanks to kunj he could not even touch twinkle's wrist, and his eyes that were boring into twinkle each second, were making her immensly uncomfortable.
the hands and legs tied and done, the man got up and dusted his hands.
"OW" the man recieved a big punch on his nose, "WHAT WAS THAT FOR?" he screamed at kunj who did hard to keep his face straight, and twinkle muffled her giggle in her husbad's shoulder as he replied"for staring at my wife, you moron." and with that the duo walked away.
"waise," twinkle blew her nails of the left hand, which was free, as the couple walked-or should i say TRIED to walk-"mughe protective ladke ache lagte hai" twinkle almost fell, thanks to kunj stopping mid way, she turned back to give him a glare, when she noticed kunj with a sort of angry face, "ab kya hua, mai gir jati,kunjjj, dhyan do, im talking to you, "she waved her hand infront of his eyes, earning a snort, "tughe protective LADKE pasand hai?" twinkle nodded simply, as for her it had been a mere compliment for her husband."as in LADKE? " twinkle looked at her husband, "kunj? for the love of teh lord, im strsight, obvoisly ladke hi ache lage ge na, ladkiya thodi!" she flipped her hair as she walked ahead, again almost falling due to her husband, "kunj!!"she shreiked, "tumhe mughe girana hai kya??"
kunj looked at her "giregi bhi toh kya hoga? tere protective ladke tughe bacha lenge!" he turned his face away, "kunj? kya baat hai? itne weird kyu behave kar rahe ho? " twinkel pulled his face with her left hand, as he avoided her gaze, "kunj? baby whats up ? kya hua tumhe?" he shook his simply, as things clicked to twinkle,
"arre, mere pyare buddhu husband, mera matlab woh nahi tha, " she pulled his cheek, "maine toh novels and movies wale ladko ka reference diya tha, as in mughe humesha se ek protective husband chahiye tha, and tum exactly waise hi ho," he last line cheered him up slightly and his lips lifted from on side in a slight smile, "tumhare siva, kisi aur ki shakal nahi dekhni mughe, tum ho toh mai hu, " she said as she pressed a kiss to his cheek, "i love you " she murmured against his face, as she noticed him glowing, she smiled as she continued walking, almost falling again,"kunj?" she looked back with a fake threatening look, as kunj smiled, "i love you too siyappa queen, " as he pressed a kiss to the back of her head, and continued walking with his smiling wife.
Edited by ..queen.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Brilliant my queen writer...
I don't think iss janam me I 'll be able to continue...
U ppl r too much good
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

Brilliant my queen writer...

I don't think iss janam me I 'll be able to continue...
U ppl r too much good


pleasseee pleaseee
please na, I wanna read something by you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ..queen..


pleasseee pleaseee
please na, I wanna read something by you

U r such a sweetheat...
Tell me one thing why u want me to write?
I m really not a good writer but a loyal reader...😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
@ queen
Where were u?
Missed u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

@ queen

Where were u?
Missed u

cuz I am a good judge of people, and I predict you have some cool writing qualities which probably even you don't know
give it a shot na, please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
nice continuation
possessive part was so good
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
SAKSHI...I don't know why u have so much belief in my writing even though i never wrote anything...I don't know how or what it is...Since i gave my word that I'll continue so I did...This for u SAKSHI...
This is the Second time I m typing this as 1st one got deleted..
I even forgot few things what I wrote in the 1st one...
NO MORE BAKBAK...


Now,
Let the competition begin...Where all the couples were lost in the sea of thoughts our twinj was lost in the ocean of eachothers eyes..
They only came out of their own world being disturbed by the Host of the competition who will soon announce what task they'll be doing in this round...
Host:Welcome dear contestants, Lets begin..
Host:this round is divided into 3 sub rounds. So
1st round -our lovely ladies will fix the button of their beloved
2nd round -the handsome lads will make their beloved wear earring & apply a little make up. ...
3rd round -u ppl will have to make a painting together. ..with tied up hands & legs...

1st round begins-
The host came near kunj & forwarded his hand to open the shirt button to which kunj asked "What the hell he was trying to do?"
The host repliied "i m doing my job".Then he left afer finishing his job leaving an embarrassed kunj & giggling twinkle...
While twinkle was sewing all our kunj sarna could manage to say was, "Pls jara sambhalke Siyaapa Queen, Apne hot se pati ke hot body pe iss needle se koi Siyaapa maat karna. "
Twinkle looked up at him with a "what the hell "look. ...
Then she lowered her head to cut the thread. This sent shivers & current ran through kunj's veins...
They win this round...

2nd round begins -
While other couples were struggling & almost fighting to get things right. KUNJ was lost in twinkle's beauty...
Now while applying lipstick all he was thinking was why so many ppl r around...I can't even kiss my beautiful wife...
Like our Punjabi kuri Twinkle KUNJ was also perfect in his every work...
So,They win this round too...

3rd round begins -
Organizers were arranging painting materials. And
Twinkle was lost in her thoughts.
KUNJ saw this and asked,"What Siyaapa r u planning? "
To which twinkle replied like baby,"How r we gonna paint with tied up hands & what will we paint ?"
kunj:We'll paint ourself, us.
Twinkle :What...
Kunj:I mean we'll paint our reflection..
Twinkle was still confused...
Kunj:Arre , tu chalna.NOTHING TO FEAR WHEN KUNJ SARNA THE GENIUS THE GREAT IS HERE.!"
Twinkle :Chalo, Lets see what kunj sarna the great can do.
They started their work...They didn't even realize how well coordinated they were until the Judge came up to them & praised their work...
Eventhough Twinkle & KUNJ didn't notice how Perfect they were, it didn't go unnoticed by the Judges who were mesmerized seeing the bond & Love they share...

Twinkle was lost in the painting. ..
Twinkle thought her husband is not only great but also genius.
The painting was looking beautiful.It was indeed THEIR REFLECTION...
In the painting "There are two love birds sitting on the branch of A Oak tree under the limitless vast sky & under the shadow of the tree was anther pair of Lovebird, two SOULMATES & the sky , air, nature & Almighty is the witness & Protector of their Eternal & True Love"
Twinkle was even more delighted to see the position of their Reflection that is her head restiing on his Shoulder & his head on her head & fingrs entwined...
Twinkle was brought back to the real world by kunj's word
Kunj:"Told ya. WE'LL win..So, YOU win."
Twinkle looked at kunj lovingly & said,"Not 'you win' , We win".
Now kunj was also looking at her lovingly being touched by her words...But that was not it .What Twinkle did next shocked Him...His SiyaappaQueen kissed him infront of everyone. KUNJ was on Cloud nine...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

SAKSHI...I don't know why u have so much belief in my writing even though i never wrote anything...I don't know how or what it is...Since i gave my word that I'll continue so I did...This for u SAKSHI...

This is the Second time I m typing this as 1st one got deleted..
I even forgot few things what I wrote in the 1st one...
NO MORE BAKBAK...


Now,
Let the competition begin...Where all the couples were lost in the sea of thoughts our twinj was lost in the ocean of eachothers eyes..
They only came out of their own world being disturbed by the Host of the competition who will soon announce what task they'll be doing in this round...
Host:Welcome dear contestants, Lets begin..
Host:this round is divided into 3 sub rounds. So
1st round -our lovely ladies will fix the button of their beloved
2nd round -the handsome lads will make their beloved wear earring & apply a little make up. ...
3rd round -u ppl will have to make a painting together. ..with tied up hands & legs...

1st round begins-
The host came near kunj & forwarded his hand to open the shirt button to which kunj asked "What the hell he was trying to do?"
The host repliied "i m doing my job".Then he left afer finishing his job leaving an embarrassed kunj & giggling twinkle...
While twinkle was sewing all our kunj sarna could manage to say was, "Pls jara sambhalke Siyaapa Queen, Apne hot se pati ke hot body pe iss needle se koi Siyaapa maat karna. "
Twinkle looked up at him with a "what the hell "look. ...
Then she lowered her head to cut the thread. This sent shivers & current ran through kunj's veins...
They win this round...

2nd round begins -
While other couples were struggling & almost fighting to get things right. KUNJ was lost in twinkle's beauty...
Now while applying lipstick all he was thinking was why so many ppl r around...I can't even kiss my beautiful wife...
Like our Punjabi kuri Twinkle KUNJ was also perfect in his every work...
So,They win this round too...

3rd round begins -
Organizers were arranging painting materials. And
Twinkle was lost in her thoughts.
KUNJ saw this and asked,"What Siyaapa r u planning? "
To which twinkle replied like baby,"How r we gonna paint with tied up hands & what will we paint ?"
kunj:We'll paint ourself, us.
Twinkle :What...
Kunj:I mean we'll paint our reflection..
Twinkle was still confused...
Kunj:Arre , tu chalna.NOTHING TO FEAR WHEN KUNJ SARNA THE GENIUS THE GREAT IS HERE.!"
Twinkle :Chalo, Lets see what kunj sarna the great can do.
They started their work...They didn't even realize how well coordinated they were until the Judge came up to them & praised their work...
Eventhough Twinkle & KUNJ didn't notice how Perfect they were, it didn't go unnoticed by the Judges who were mesmerized seeing the bond & Love they share...

Twinkle was lost in the painting. ..
Twinkle thought her husband is not only great but also genius.
The painting was looking beautiful.It was indeed THEIR REFLECTION...
In the painting "There are two love birds sitting on the branch of A Oak tree under the limitless vast sky & under the shadow of the tree was anther pair of Lovebird, two SOULMATES & the sky , air, nature & Almighty is the witness & Protector of their Eternal & True Love"
Twinkle was even more delighted to see the position of their Reflection that is her head restiing on his Shoulder & his head on her head & fingrs entwined...
Twinkle was brought back to the real world by kunj's word
Kunj:"Told ya. WE'LL win..So, YOU win."
Twinkle looked at kunj lovingly & said,"Not 'you win' , We win".
Now kunj was also looking at her lovingly being touched by her words...But that was not it .What Twinkle did next shocked Him...His SiyaappaQueen kissed him infront of everyone. KUNJ was on Cloud nine...



Sakshi was right! You have great talent in you. You should start writing more we all love what you write. Keep writing!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

SAKSHI...I don't know why u have so much belief in my writing even though i never wrote anything...I don't know how or what it is...Since i gave my word that I'll continue so I did...This for u SAKSHI...

This is the Second time I m typing this as 1st one got deleted..
I even forgot few things what I wrote in the 1st one...
NO MORE BAKBAK...


Now,
Let the competition begin...Where all the couples were lost in the sea of thoughts our twinj was lost in the ocean of eachothers eyes..
They only came out of their own world being disturbed by the Host of the competition who will soon announce what task they'll be doing in this round...
Host:Welcome dear contestants, Lets begin..
Host:this round is divided into 3 sub rounds. So
1st round -our lovely ladies will fix the button of their beloved
2nd round -the handsome lads will make their beloved wear earring & apply a little make up. ...
3rd round -u ppl will have to make a painting together. ..with tied up hands & legs...

1st round begins-
The host came near kunj & forwarded his hand to open the shirt button to which kunj asked "What the hell he was trying to do?"
The host repliied "i m doing my job".Then he left afer finishing his job leaving an embarrassed kunj & giggling twinkle...
While twinkle was sewing all our kunj sarna could manage to say was, "Pls jara sambhalke Siyaapa Queen, Apne hot se pati ke hot body pe iss needle se koi Siyaapa maat karna. "
Twinkle looked up at him with a "what the hell "look. ...
Then she lowered her head to cut the thread. This sent shivers & current ran through kunj's veins...
They win this round...

2nd round begins -
While other couples were struggling & almost fighting to get things right. KUNJ was lost in twinkle's beauty...
Now while applying lipstick all he was thinking was why so many ppl r around...I can't even kiss my beautiful wife...
Like our Punjabi kuri Twinkle KUNJ was also perfect in his every work...
So,They win this round too...

3rd round begins -
Organizers were arranging painting materials. And
Twinkle was lost in her thoughts.
KUNJ saw this and asked,"What Siyaapa r u planning? "
To which twinkle replied like baby,"How r we gonna paint with tied up hands & what will we paint ?"
kunj:We'll paint ourself, us.
Twinkle :What...
Kunj:I mean we'll paint our reflection..
Twinkle was still confused...
Kunj:Arre , tu chalna.NOTHING TO FEAR WHEN KUNJ SARNA THE GENIUS THE GREAT IS HERE.!"
Twinkle :Chalo, Lets see what kunj sarna the great can do.
They started their work...They didn't even realize how well coordinated they were until the Judge came up to them & praised their work...
Eventhough Twinkle & KUNJ didn't notice how Perfect they were, it didn't go unnoticed by the Judges who were mesmerized seeing the bond & Love they share...

Twinkle was lost in the painting. ..
Twinkle thought her husband is not only great but also genius.
The painting was looking beautiful.It was indeed THEIR REFLECTION...
In the painting "There are two love birds sitting on the branch of A Oak tree under the limitless vast sky & under the shadow of the tree was anther pair of Lovebird, two SOULMATES & the sky , air, nature & Almighty is the witness & Protector of their Eternal & True Love"
Twinkle was even more delighted to see the position of their Reflection that is her head restiing on his Shoulder & his head on her head & fingrs entwined...
Twinkle was brought back to the real world by kunj's word
Kunj:"Told ya. WE'LL win..So, YOU win."
Twinkle looked at kunj lovingly & said,"Not 'you win' , We win".
Now kunj was also looking at her lovingly being touched by her words...But that was not it .What Twinkle did next shocked Him...His SiyaappaQueen kissed him infront of everyone. KUNJ was on Cloud nine...


you really write so well buddy
Thanks Sakshi to motivate her to write,as only because of you we get a very good new writer
Do write more Shaveerkti
Edited by twinjlover9 - 9 years ago

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