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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh such awesome updates joe 😳
Plz continue soon😳
Even surjeet seems to be positive here 😳don't let him marry Anita 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome...just amazing...read all the parts at one go...continue soon and pm me if possible...
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG i read it in one go..amazing 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful updates bhaiyya👏👏👏
I love surjeet uncle...authoritative type..thats good...bebe she is already my favourite...cherry is there??if he is there plzz make him positive ...
what I loved was twinkle saying to kunj that she was his wife😳😳...I loved that part
usha and Manohar...thank u bhiyya for not making them kunjs parents in this ff...I am soo relieved by the fact that they r his uncle and aunt
how low can they stoop..??🤢🤢no expectations from both of them...
twinjs concern for each other...sooo good😳😳
waiting for ur next set of updates
cont soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 35
Rukiye" she heard him speak...all looked towards him...
"Bebe vo twinkle ka grah pravesh nahi hua hai"..
"Arey vaah,..kunj tu kabse rasam aur rivaj me manne laga.."Surjeet taunted him...
Kunj was always a rebellious child doing what he felt was right.. he still was.. but with Twinkle he dint wanted to make her entry in the house.. less event ful..
Twinkle was more than happy .. she herself had forgotten in all the chaos..
Bebe and .. usha did her grah pravesh..
And all retired to their rooms...
They were tired after all the drama...

She saw Kunj hurrying towrds the room beside theirs.. to check on it...
He found it as it was just.. a bit like some1s been in the room.. he placed the things as they were used to be.. she saw him.. and helped him with adjusting the bed sheets...

She pulled her luggage.. and opened the cupboard..
And saw it dumped like a garbage.. there was enough space.. but the dump made it look full...
"Yeh kya kar rahi hai.."
"Kya... muje apna saman rakhna hai..."
"Par ye mera cupboard hai...tere liye dusra cupboard mangva lunga.."
"Aur usko rakhenge kaha.. Kunj sarna... haan.. koi jagah khali dikh rahi hai is room mein.."
He looked arounf she was right... but he felt.. his privacy being hampered.. but shrugged it off.. as he had to admit that she was gointo live here in this room itself..first he thought he could over power bade papa and.. she would live in a different room.. peacefully... but now... with bebe and tauji.. there is no way they could escape...he sighed..
"Par twinkle muje meri cheeze kaise milengi.. muje abhi jaise rakhi hai.. vaise hi milti hai.."
"Kaha se is kabad khane mese.. Kunj tum rehne do.. tum jo pehle kapde hath me ate honge unko utha k pehen lete hoge.. ye cup board ki halat dekh k toa yahi lag raha hai..."
"Aisa kuch nhi hai.. '"
"Tum chup raho ab muje mera kaam karne do.. "did she ask him to keep quiet... it felt like he was back to school...he just thanked god.. and murmered...she dint ask to finger on his lips...
"Kya kaha tumne..??"she asked... as she heard him taunt...
"Kuch nhi.. tum karo.. mere cupboarf k sath jo bhi karna ho"
"Ab ye mera bhi cupboard hai.. samje.."
He just looked at her and turned on the TV... and got busy watching... English Entertainment.. channels...
To her surprise her husband had a wide range of clothes... and of mainly Blue White black Green and Maroon... unlike hers.. she had many dresses on a single colour all colours included... she had packed her stuff keeping in mind.. she would only be able to wear.. suits and sarees . .. she avoided packing western...
Or else.. her clothes would have made three four packed suitcases...
He saw her totally engrossdd.. and humming some songs tune...
He registered the tune was of the song...
Hate story "Vajah tum ho"..maybe it was one of her favourite...
She pulled out all his clothes first...
And placed them on the bed...
He was sitting in the center.. his long frame covering the bed till the end...
She sighed and gestured him to move towards the sighed hitting his leg...
He did as told...
She arranged... all his clothes... all casuals..
All party wear.. all office wear... all traditional... my godd this guy had a collection she thought... she always felt boys were never fond of clothes.. guess she was wrong about it and Kunj was an exception...
The most number of clothes he owned were suits.. all branded.. maybe some of those he must have never worn... she made a note to place them.. carefully...
She adjusted all his clothes.. in half of his cupboard... Kunj was surprised his cup board looked different...he stole glances at her... she was not doing it bcoz she had to do it.. but she was doing it with fun .. he looked confused at her... how could some1 have fun arranging a boring cupboard...
She looked at him raising eyebrows...
"Kya hua.."
"Kuch nhi.."
She asked him to come forward and...explained himm..the way she arranged everything and where to find what...
He just kept nodding...
And she clapped her hands..
"Kitna mast lag raha hai na... pura order mein arranged..."she had the brightest smile looking at the cupboard...
"Hhmm.. itna bura bhi nhi hai.."
He knew she would not let him live in peace.. for the rest of his life..
He noted his wife was some1 who dint like stuff lying here and there...
He thought the amount of siyaapas and blunders she commits she must be quiet linient and haphazard like him but she was not...
He too liked order and everythin arranged...but he never got the time from work to give importance to such things...
He looked at her stariting to arrange the other half of the cupboard with her stuff his mind ... sending him messages..
"This is just the beggining..."
Edited by joe10 - 9 years ago
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Chapter 36

He was tired and she wasnt yet done with the arranging.. he made his way to the kitchen to have some milk... retyrned and dozed off on the bed... on one side..he was too tired to think about what she did in the hotel...maybe her kicking wont wake him up guessing the deep sleep he would be in..
She closed the cupboard.. quiet contented by the work she did.. and patted her back..
"Wow Twinkle kitni smart hai na.. tu.. ab is room ko bhi thik kar denge dheere dheere..."
As she looked back... she saw him sleeping.. on one side on his stomach with sheets covered till.. his shoulders...
"Ye kya.. cupboard thik karne me.. tu bhul gyi bed k bare me.. ye toa yaha so gaya.. ab tu kaha soyegi..."
She made herself comfortable on the couch but.. she was used to a bed and.. she couldnt sleep giving up..she slept on the other side... and building.. a wall of pillows...
But she herself was worried .. and doubted her..antics while sleeping... maybe she would be the one his side... guessing the amount of twists and turns she takes while sleeping...

Next morning.. as she woke up... it was 7.30... she herself was surprised at her being awake so early...and thought.. vo Sarna toa ghode bech k so rha hoga...
And she looked towards his side...
The wall of pillows was gone.. and she was in the center...but he was no where to be seen...

The bathroom door opened ... she saw him coming out in a formal shirt..tucked in all dressed up... wiping his face with a towel...
"Babaji ye toa tayar bhi ho gaya" and she was in sitting position
"Good morning" she heard him say looking in the mirror...adjusting his shirt ...
"Kunj tum kitne baje uthe.. aur muje uthaya kyu nahi..."
"Kyu tumhe kuch kam hai kya abhi"
"Nhi .. par... maa ne kaha tha ki sasural me jaldi uthna chahiye.."she spoke innocently looking at him..
He smiled he was still not looking at her .. he was busy in getting ready...
She got frustrated..
"Babaji kya me subah subah itni buri lagti hu kya ki e muje dekh bhi nhi raha..." she thought and pouted...
She saw him taking a gel bottle...and was about to open the cap..
"Ye baalo k liye sahi nahi hota isse baal jaldi kharab ho jate hai.."
He looked at her confused...
He too dint like to apply gel.. but he also could not afford to now and then keep track of his hair .. that they were combed properly... he dint get time for such..things..
"Par mein toa ye roz lagata ..hu.."
"Ab se nhi lagaoge.. isse baal jaldi jhadh jate hai.. aur safed bhi ho jate hai... fir log kya kahenge.. ki itni jawan khoobsurat ladki ki shadi ek buddhe se ho gyi..."
"Khood ki shakal dekh shishe me.. pata chal jayega kaun jawan hai aur kaun buddhi.."
She got up.. and snatched the gel bottle .. from his hand..
"Twinkle kya kr rhi hai.. yar.. muje office jana hai... de na.."
She made herself clear that.. there would be no applying of gel from now onwards . And he sighed...
She looked herslef . Standing in front of him...
"Ab pata chala kaun buddha hai... "
"Haan.. toa... subah subah sab aise hi lagte hai... tum toa nha dho k tayar ho gaye ho isliye..."
And she headed towards the bathroom...
He smiled and... left downstairs...
She got ready and... joined every1...
Greeted bebe.. and...tauji and Usha..
"Itni der tak koi sota hai kya.. ghar ki bahuyein... sabse pehle utb jatu hai... aur ye ladki..."
Usha.. taunted her...
Bebe looked dis approvingly...
Kunj was in the hall going through a file...first of all he was angry on his bade papa andb badi ma... for what they did with bebe and tauji ... hiw they were going to loose their house bcoz of that stupid deal with luthras... and now it wasnt even a day.. inspite of being in guilt... they were charging over to Twinkle...
He couldnt bear..it . He moved towards the dining area where they were standing...but before he could speak...
"Ab ulta chor kotuwal ko date ... Usha is hisab se toa tuje bhi uth jana tha na.. bebe se pehle... tu bhi toa bahu hai is ghar ki..."surjeet spoke.. up... it was not like he wanted to take Twinkles side but . Usha... speaking up and . . Breaking the little girls respect... that too after he allowed them to live in this house on Twinkles request...
Kunj was more than relieved... that Tauji spoke up... he saw him sitting in the head seat at the dining table...
He made himself comfortable... beside him... greeted him...
"Oye puttar tu uth gaya... "...tauji patted his back... and clearly it was visible purposely he was hitting him hard...
"Tauji kya kr rhe ho aap... lag rahi hai.."and Kunj shifted in his chair...
Bebe and Twinkle laughed...
"Yahi hai.. shehri logo ki... badan me jan toa hoti nhi... desi ghee khaya kar meri tarah... mangva dunga tere liye... pind se..."
Kunj hated eating ghee and his tauji and bebe of course knew it... it was the habit of his tauji to... tease him all the time...
"Twinkle mere liye ek coffee le aana..."he just wanted to make her comfortable... and drift her mind away from the negativity of usha... bebe followed her .. inside the kitchen...

"Puttar Kunj k liye coffee bana rahi hai?"
"Ji bebe...usko office k lie late ho raha hoga..."
"Muje bhi sikha de.. muje sabhi cheeze ati hai banani... bas ye.. coffee... pasta.. noodles ye sab nahi ata...aur e jo tera pati hai na.. videsh me reh reh k... usko is sab ka bhi shaukh ho gaya hai..."
"Bebe muje sirf Indian nhi ata... baki sab ata hai.. pasta.. noodles... chinese.. .."twinkle spoke with bright sparkle in her eyes.. and feeling comfortable.. with bebe.. she knew it was bebes way to... have a small talk with her... and she wanted to know her more... and twinkle was more than happy to see a positive member in the family...
"Ye lo kunj coffee,,"
"Aur surjeete ye chaii.. Twinkle ne banayi hai..."
"Hhmmm.. badhiya chaii hai puttar.. dimag me taazgi chha gayi..."
Twinkle smiled as she remembere how she felt a jolt of energy when Kunj had offered her ...she now made tea his way...
"Twinkle tu bhi baith ja nashta kar le..."kunj spoke..casualy...
Bebe knew about Kunjs unorthodox ways... ofcourse Surjeet and Kunj shared a special bond... but thier ideologies were now different... Surjeet living in Pind for so long was a bit conventional...
He looked confused on Kunjs suggestion...
Twinkle however felt it... not right as Tauji was too sitting there and bebe standing how could she sit and casually have breakfast...
"Nhi kunj tum ayr Tauji kha.. lo.. me aur bebe bad me sath me kar lenge"
"Kya tum bhi... Bebe aap bhi baith jaiiye na..."
Surjeet realised may be this was the generation gap.. people used to talk about...
They both looked modern and Kunj living in foreign... made him all together a different persnality.. but it was all for good... and accepting change... was always a step to progress...
They maybe a different and modern from us ... but atleast Kunj and his Wife respected... him and bebe... the way their eyes held admjration... Surjeet knew.. they were good souls...and her tea had all together a different effect on him...
"Baith ja puttar..bebe aap bhi nashta kar lo... bhot acha bana hai...baith puttar... tumhara pati itna keh raha hai...toa.. ."he looked towards his plate... and spoke "lagta hai.. kamre me akele me bhi uska man nahi bhara...ki tumko yaha bhi akela nahi chhod raha..."
Bebe chuckled and hided a laugh on surjeets remark... she knew even being the eldest... he was.. quiet naughty with kids.. when he felt comfortable with them...
Twinkle could not believe that Tauji.. would make.. such comment...
To her surprise... she saw Kunj looking flushed...
"Kya ap bhi tauji... shadi ho gyi hai meri.. ab toa chidhana chhod dijiye..."he whispered to his tauji.. only to be heard by bebe and Twinkle...
"Mein aur juice leke ati hu..."twinkle hasted in the Kitchen and.. bebe made herslf comfortable... on the chair... beside surjeet...
Edited by joe10 - 9 years ago
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Chapter 37
Twinkle returned back.. only to find Kunj sitting ... she thought how long was she in the kitchen that.. both Taauji and Bebe finshed their breakfast... maybe too long.. as she had to get rid of that flushed face...
How would she survive...all these teasing and all.. that too from Tauji and.. from the look of Bebe it felt... she too was not going to spare her...she was not used to such teasing even in schools and colleges... she used to shut every1s mouth up... and then there was Yuvi... ohh godd.. why did his thought came to hr mind... she could not imagine how much she hated that man... no he was not a man at all.. she corrected herself...
then she looked at Kunj... and calmed down... she wondered how all the negativity vanished away just looking at him once... he had some thing in him... as she renembered his blood group B+ve...
he was engrossed in a file.. sipping his coffee...
She sat in the chair front of him.. placd some fruits and... poured in some juice.. Kunj looked over her.. she tried to pass on the jug over to him gesturing if he needed some... he nodded a No... and showed her the mug of coffee in his hand...as he took in the last sip and.. got up... she liked the fact how they communicated without speaking...
He took his plate and mug and marced towards the kitchen... she looked confused and watched in his direction... he placed his plate over the sink... came back.. and mimed a Good bye to her... took his file and.. sprinted out of the house...it happened so fast.. and she made a note... 'Kunj Sarna liked to do his work on his own... ' he dint wait for any servant to pick his plate... not even his wife.. as she was having her breakfast...she smiled as she took a bite of a sliced apple...

It was afternoon... and servants Usha and Bebe were making lunch... Twinkle had a long talk with her mother... informing that everything was okay and.. yesterdays events... she also informed about bebe and tauji... leela was happy to know about them... the way her child described them.. she felt that.. there was an elder to look over them in her new house...
She entered the kitchen...and found every1 working... "bebe me kuch help karu..."
"Puttar puch kyu rahi hai.. .. teri hi rasoi hai..."
"Huhh ...Madad karne k liye kuch ana bhi chahiye".. usha remarked.. making sure surjeet bhaisaab was not around
Bebe looked over to usha with warning...
"Puttar idhar aa.. dekh me Kunj k liye.. lauki bana rahi hu .. tu bhi sikh le... fir muje koi apni videshi dish sikhana thik hai"
Twinkle nodded her head like and agreeing child... she sat on the dining beside bebe... and observed her... as she spoke.. about the dish and.. in between about her favourite grandson Kunj.."
"Puttar tuje pata hai.. aaj tak kisi ko pata nahi ki Kunj ko kya.. sabse zyda pasand hai aur kya.. nahi..."
"Bebe but aise kaise ho sakta hai.. sabki koi na koi favourite dish hoti hai..."
"Par Kunj sab khata hai.. usko koi bhi cheez pasand na ho aisa ho hi nhi sakta...vo kehta hai... sab khane k liye toa bana hai... aur sabka apna swad hai.. toa isme bhed bhav kyu karna..."
"Koi baat nahi me.. janne ki koshish karungi... ki uski favourite cheez kya hai..."
"Haan... puttar...dekh na... kitne saal ho gye.. Kunj sirf 12 saal ka tha..jab hum ye ghar chhodkar gaye the... Anand 15 saal ka...vo boarding school me tha isliye... jab tak chhutiya nhi hui unko pata bhi nahi tha... bahut yad karte the... hum unko... pind mein..."
Bebe had tears in her eyes...
"Vaqt kitni jaldi bit jata hai na.. puttar... kab sab bade ho gaye.. pata hi nahi chala...puttar Kunj ne bhot hi choti umar mein... bhot dard sahe hai... sach kahu toa jabse tujse shadi hui.. tabse.. usme alag khusi dikhti hai... me mehsoos kar sakti hu..uski ankho mein... aur iske liye me tera jitna shukriya karu utna kam hai..."
"Bebe ye aap kaisi bate kar rahi hai"..
"Sach hai puttar... varna.. Kunj jab bhi pind humse milne ata tha.. bhot dard dikhta tha uski ankho mein... kabhi batata nahi tha...humne bhi usko sach nhi bataya..kabhi... kyuki agar batate toa vo bhi ye ghar chhod ke pind chala ata... aur uska bhavishya barbaad kaise hone dete hum...jabse kaam shuru kiya hai.. tabse kaam hi dikhayi deta hai usko... tere ane k bad shayad koi badlav nazar ayega usme..."
Twinkle smiled... looking at bebe... they were now alone in the kitchen...
"Puttar tu surjeete ki baato ka bura mat manna... kabhi kabhi.. vo purane khayalt mein.. bol de toa... ...aur haan aise bacho ko chidhane ki adat hai use... Kunj ko itna chidhate hai vo... bachpan se hi.. ab toa aise lagta hai.. ki vi uska Tauji nhi balki dost hai... aur vaise bhi tere chehre pe ye jo laali aa jati hai na.. kunj ka naam sunte hi... vo sabut hai.. is baat ka.. ki kitna pyar karti hai tu usse... "
Twinkle was surprised Pyar aur Kunj se... she could not speak... anything and kept mum... as bebe was right... she did feel her stomach whirling... when anybody teased..themm.. but what would she do...
"Kya soch rhi hai... ki iss sabse kaise picha chudhaya jaye... tu ab zindagi bhar k liye picha nahi chuda sakti is sab se... kya bolegi sabko...
Akhir hai toa vo ter pati hi..."bebe spoke naughtily...
"Bebe aap bhi... ek toa pehle hi Tauji ne subah chidhaya... aur ab aap...Anand bhaiya ya bhabhi ne muje kabhi nahi chidhaya... jitna is ghar mein bade muje chidha rahe hai... acha hua kunj ka koi.. aur bhai ya behan nahi hai... varna.. hum dono ko chidha chidha k... pata nahi kya haal kar dete...
Bebe smiled thinking... kya hoga in dono ka.. jab VO ayega... tab toa ghar mein tufaan hi much jyega...for now she kept quiet let it be a surprise...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story 👏 and bebe is so cute 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow awesome updates dear
loved it dear
bebe and tauji are really good people
so i think either kunjs sister yah bro is about to enter nah
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome updates joe 😳😛
Plz do continue soon 😃

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