It was always you...!!! Twinj FF

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{Any type of posting of the content of this story to any other site will lead to a serious action. I was not much into this plagiarism thing, But due to some recent events and copying of one of the IF member's works has led to me posting this. This is a theft of the writer's intellectual property and an insult to the hard work and the time they put in...}

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The story starts from the farmhouse night...
In this story kunj is not the son of Manohar Sarna and Usha... he is the son of Rajveer Sarna and Urmila Sarna ,,Rajveer is the younger brother of Manohar. Kunjs parents are no more they died in an accidant when he was 6 yrs. From then on he has lived with his bade papa(Manohar Sarna) but Manohar and Usha dont treat him as their own , the always showed difference between their own son and kunj... They had kept kunj with them just bcoz of bebe. Surjeet is the eldest of all three he loves kunj as his own but bebe and surjeet are kicked out of the house by manohar in his greed of Sarna empire.
Twinkle is as the same as in the serial totally in love with yuvraj and having a tashan e relation with kunj
Yuvi is a grey shade character for now he is the villain. To show his other shades is upto the readers as the story progresses.
Leela has recognized what gem of a person kunj is so she heartily wants to marry twinkle to him. Also he is the son of Sarnas so she was content that twinkle who lived like a princess will get a royal life even after marriage. But here the twist is no one knows that kunj isnt Manohar Sarnas son.. Manohar introduced Kunj to leela as his own just to get him married to twinkle. Also Manohar is too desperate for this marriage. He wants this marriage to happen by hook or crook. (As we see in the scene where manohar blackmails kunj by placing gun on his head that he would commit suicide if kunj dosent marry) on the other hand usha wants kunj to marry alisha as she is her friends daughter and wants to maintain her standard in her social circle. Kunj too wants to give in to ushas demanda as he too finds alisha better than twinkle. By the way kunj isnt interested in marriage he is just doing it for the sake of family. He has other things on his mind...

After that fateful night at farmhouse the dynamics of love and relations changed... In this web of name, fame, power, money, old rivalries, hidden past, obssession... how will TwiNj survive...

Foundation Chapter, Ch 1,2 - pg 1
Ch 3,4,5 - pg2
Ch 6,7,8,9 - pg3
Ch 10,11 - pg4
Ch 12,13 - pg5
Ch 14,15 - pg6
Ch 16 - pg7
Ch 17,18 - pg8
Ch 19 - pg9
Ch 20,21 - pg10
Ch 22 - pg11
Ch 23 - pg13
Ch 24,25,26,27 - pg14
Ch 28,29,30,31 - pg15
Ch 32,33,34 - pg17
Ch 35,36,37 - pg19
Ch 38,39 - pg20
Ch 40 - pg 21
Ch 41 - pg22
Ch 42 - pg23
Ch 43,44 - pg24
Ch 45 - pg25
Ch 46 - pg26
Ch 47 - pg27
Ch 48 - pg28
Ch 49,50 - pg29
Ch 51 - pg31
Ch 52 - pg32
Ch 53,54 - pg33
Ch 55 - pg35
Ch 56,57A - pg39
Ch 57B - pg40
Ch 58 - pg41
Ch 59 - pg42
Ch 60 - pg43
Ch 61 - pg44
Ch 62 - pg45
Ch 63 - pg46
Ch 64 - pg47
Ch 65 - pg48
Ch 66 - pg49
Ch 67 - pg50
Ch 68 - pg52
Ch 69 - pg53
Ch 70 - pg54
Ch 71 - pg55
Ch 72 - pg56
Ch 73 - pg58
Ch 74 - pg61
Ch 75 - pg63
Ch 76(MahaShivrartri) - pg65
Ch 77 - pg68
Ch 78 - pg70
Ch 79 - pg77
Ch 80 - pg78
Ch 81 - pf79
Ch 82 - pg80
Ch 83 - pg81
Ch 84 - pg82
Ch 85 - pg83
Ch 86 - pg84
Ch 87 - pg86
Ch 88 - pg87
Ch 89 - pg88

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Foundation Chapter (this is just a background to form the base of story..chapters will start from next update)
KUNJ!!
!!everybody looks on as leeela and others find kunj shirtless on top of twinkle. hearing her mothers voice twinkle gains conciousness she takes in her surrounding and kunj who had started to take a special trust in her heart was on top of her shirtless and his shirt was trying to cover her. Then she noticed herself below him with torn clothes she realised that kunj had taken advantage of her. Seeing her mother horrified she could imagine how was it looking.
Just then media rushed in who had called them. Kunj was happy that the family had arrived he was oblivious to what it looked like to them. As he got got and offered twinkle his hand she sunk back in the grass he looked confused. He looked at leela walking towards her he started to speak
"Acha hua aunty aap aa"...
SLAPP.. before he could take in what happened. "Teri himmat kaise hui meri kudi k sath aisi harkat karne ki , mene tere par inna bharosa kiya...meri bachi ki shadi tere sath karane ka socha... par tu itna gira hua niklega mene socha na tha..."
" aunty aap galat samaj rahe ho me toa yaha twinkle ko dhundte aaya tha aur muje yea is halat "
"BASS menu jitna dekhna tha vo dekh liya"
"Mera yqkin ki jiye ,,"kunj looking at twinkle" twinkle bata na kya hua yaha par tu yaha pe ayi aur mene tuje aise dekha bata na chup kyu hai"
Twinkle in her usual tone of dis belief "kunj tumhi ne toa muje msg karke yaha bulaya tha... aur ye jacket toa tumhara hi hai na"
Kunj couldnt believe that even twinkle dint believe him after all those encounters even if they dint develop a relation there was a tiny bit of trust between them... kunj could not digest all this accuses but he was not going to get his name into this wrongly"
All reached taneja's mansion there the press followed them kunj was standing there half heartedly.. twinkle having tears in her mothers embrace Raman throwing daggers at kunj. Manohar was to face the press he had to answer.
Manohars POV
Kunj ne sab gadbad kar diya itni mushkil se ye rishta tay kiya tha aur sab kiya karaye pe pani fer diya. Meri reputation aur company ke shares niche girne se bacha na hoga.. kuch sochna padega muje. Varna ye press vale kahin ka nahi chodenge...
Mr. Sarna aapka kya kehna hai is mudde par kya aapka beta bhi bade baap ki bigdi aulad hai. Kya aapne apne bete ko aurto ki izzat karna nahi sikhaya
Aapke bete ne apni hi honevali biwi ka fayda uthane ki koshish kyu ki
""""Kunj mera beta nahi hai""""
That was a mear calm statement that manohar voiced out. All looked horrified usha couldnt believe that her husband took it all out in public. There was no chance that she could get alisha marry kunj leela could not believe her ears. All this time they lied to them. Twinkle looked at manohar and then kunj.
Kunj was filled with disgust of all the bad things he imagined he did not think that manohar would bring this up to save his image. Kunj had it enough he was flaring with anger all this drama he put up with just for the sake of his bade papas blackmail..he dint know why was he desperate but now he was firm that now he is not going to play by the orders of anyone else... he was ready to play his cards on his own terms
Ye aap kya keh rahe hai Mr Sarna.. ye kaise possible hai...
Manohar managed a fake disappointed look..yahi sach hai bachpan se mene isko pala aur bada kiya..par vo kehte hai na ki apna khoon hi apna hota hai... he also manged some crocodile tears..kbhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki kunj aisa kuch karega...
That was enough for now...Raman pushed out the press from their house..leela came forward she questioned aap itni badi baat kaise chupa sakte the mujse...
"Muje maaf kar dijiye leelaji par muje nahi pata tha ki kunj aisa kich kar dega aur bhale hi vo mera beta na ho par sarna hi hai..."Manohar looked at kunj... kunj was throwing daggers at him..there was a warning in kunjs eyes that Manohar should nit speak further but...
" mere chote bhai ka beta hai vo...aur aj jo hua usse sabit ho gya hai ki kunj me usi ka ganda khoon daud raha hai"
SmaaasshHH..there was a sound of glass vase shattering...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Liked the start can't wait for what you have in store for us next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

There were broken vase pieces lying on floor and beside them was Kunj...but he was not recognizable he was filled with blood red eyes... he had it enough...
BAS.. ek lafz aur nahin... mere dad ya meri mom k bare me aap kuch nhi bolenge..
"Kunj tumne hi muje majboor kiya hai"
There to add more drama leela entered with yuvi...Yuvi went near twinkle and held her by shoulders that, "tu thik hai na twinkle , mene tujse kaha tha na ki ye thik nahi hai isse dur reh..ab aa gaya na asli chehra sabke samne"
Leela pushed yuvi away dur reh meri bachi se.."Yeh galat hai leela ... galti koi aur kare aur tu gussa mere bete pe nikale;,,badi shan se kehti thi na ki teri beti ki shadi bade ghar me karegi...bade khandan me... dekh li asliyat... ye toa inka beta bhi nahi hai... anath hai ye... aur jaha tak muje pata hai Sarna khandan k dubne k din aa gaye hai..""
"Chupkar anita .. jale par namak zidakna toa teri fidrat hai..."Anita not wanting to miss the chance" Sarnaji aap kuch keh rahe the kunj ke papa ganda khoon n all"
Kunj,"aunty please,,.."
It was like only twinkle could hear the pleading in kunjs voice ... she found it genuine .. had it been some other time she would have shut up anita and not let any1 insult kunj ... but after today what she saw... her mind and heart were on different tracks... she was disturbed by the incident ... so cud not bring herself up to speak anything...
Just then Manohar not wanting to miss the opportunity to come clean in front of leela.."kunj ke pita bhot ayash the unke bhot affairs the shadi k bad bhi... kunj ki maa chup chap sab sehti thi kch bolti nhi thi khandan ki izzat ke karan.."
Kunj could not believe that dark past those... taunts he used to hear when he was just a child .. all that what he had buried deep inside... manohar just dug that out...
Kunj had lost all hope to cope up with what was just revealed in front of all ... which was his little secret...He thought now what wud twinkle think.. that hope to convince twinkle of him being inmocent was also lost ... as all would connect the dots and declare him the culprit as his fathers blood ran in him and his father was a womanizer...
Kunj sarna removed the helpless look of his face and came forward.
"Twinkle , aunty muje nahi pata ki aap log mera vishwas karenge ki nahi par me kuch kehna chahta hu.."
Yuvi came to kunj, "hame kuch nahi sunna hame pata chal gya hai ki tu kis ghatia kism ka insaan hai...kunj... koi safai dene ki zarurat nahi hai.. sabne dekh liya tuje ki tu kis tarah se twinkle ka fayda uthane vala tha...sabko pata hai ki tune hi twinkle ko msg karke 6.00 baje farmhouse par bulaya tha..""
Meanwhile kunj closed his eyes ... clenched his fist to overcome the anger and the urge to knock the hell out of yuvi..but his mind lingered on yuvis last sentence... no one noticed .. how could yuvi know the time mentioned in the msg...infact he did not even know that twinkle went to farmhouse coz kunj messaged her... kunj clicked his mind.. yuvi was the one who did all that to twinkle... before he blamed yuvi he stopped he did not have any solid proof...no one would believe him... his urge to prove himself innocent changed to anger against yuvi to even try something like that on twinkle... suddenly he wanted to protect twinkle.. twinkle still loved yuvi he knew that... how would he protect her..
"Bolti band ho gyi na kunj sarna ... man le apna gunah...""yuvi mocked him
Kunj spoke, " muje bas yeh kehna hai ki aap log jo soch rahe hai vaisa kuch nhi hua hai .. me twinkle ko dhundte hue gaya tha vaha ... vo behos thi aur uske kapde phate hue the usko cover karne hi mene apna jacket utara tha... aunty aap muje janti hai ki me aisa nahi kar sakta... meri baat ka yakin ki jiye... akhir muje twinkle k sath aisi harkat karke kya milega... meri hone vali biwi hai vo ... me kyu karunga uske sath aisa...""
Yuvi spoke"" simple twinkle ko badnam karne.." ,"Aise khayal tere dimag me hi aa sakte hai yuvi .. kyuki me ladkiyo ki izzat karna muje ata hai,"
"Bas karo kunj bhot ho gya...tum YUVI pe inzam kaise laga sakte ho.." Twinkle defended yuvi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
welcome to forum
and interesting FF
pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

Kunj looked in disbelief...and disappointment as twinkle defended yuvi...
Yuvi with his evil smirk just shifted behind twinkle as ... twinkle took the lead to confront kunj... he knew he was in for a good show as his girlfriend was here fighting for him...
The smirk went unnoitced to all except kunj
Kunj thought ," kaise batau twinkle tuje ki yahi hai tumahra gunhegar... par tu iske pyar me andhi ho gyi hai ki tuje kuch dikhayi nahi de raha ...all his protectiveness vanished in thin air he was filled with anger as he heard twinkle speak the next dreaded insult which kunj never imagined that twinkle would hurl at him,,
"Kunj tumne jo aaj kiya hai vo sabit karta hai ki tum inke bete nahi ho... itni badi baat chupayi... aur sach sirf vahi log chupate hai jinhone kuch galat kiya ho... jaise Manohar uncle ne bataya tum bhi apne dad ki tarah hi ho..."
ENOUGHH" roared kunj
Twinkle just realised what she spoke in a fit of anger .. that kunj was acusing and insulting yuvi... in a disturbed state she spoke something which she would not be able to take back.. she realised the damged done when she heard kunj shout...
Kunj controlled his anger in a dead whisper.." only audible to people around.." Tumhe mere parents k bare me kuch bhi bura bhala bolne ka hak nahi hai.."
. tumhe lagta hai mene ye jo kuch bhi hua hai vo kiya hai toa muje jitna sunnana hai suna do but I dare you ... nothing against my parents..."
Kunj was about to mention her relation with yuvi but stopped as he realised that no one in the room knew about it
Twinkle got a bit scared listening to kunjs such tone... before she could speak up...to apologise..."kunj I m sorr"
"Maafi mangne ki koi zarurat nahi hai... kyuki maafi unse mangte hai jinse koi rishta ho...
Kunj was now over the head... he could not bear this drama... he realised he dosent need to care about any1... else than himself...before he cud shut yuvi or any elses mouth he had to settle the scores with his so called family for whom he agreed to this marriage in first place
"Muje jo kehna tha keh diya... app logo ko mera vishwas karna ho to kijiye... par mene twinkle ka kisi bhi tarah se faya uthane ki koshish nahi ki hai" with that he walked out of Taneja mansion...
Twinkle was still confused as to believe what she saw or trust kunj...
Leela was after some thinking convinced that kunj may not have done such cheap act... after all she was the one that chose kunj for her daughter..
Manohar and Usha were tensed as how would they face kunj in the house.
Raman just wanted to settle things down but did nit understand how...
Yuvi was the only prson happy as everything turned out as planned also kunjs dark secret turned out to be icing on the cake...

Meanwhile in twinkles room
Twinkle heard her phone ringing. She thought it may be kunj trying to convince her n all...
But it was yuvi... she thought to herself why was I expecting call from kunj..
"Bolo Yuvi, muje abhi baat karne ka mood nhi hai"
" tumhe mujse baat nahi karni ... apne yuvi se baat nahi karni... "
With that he cut the call...
Twinkle in frustration called him.. but he did not pick up.. she thought I hope yuvi dosent hurt himself...she tried to call him several times.. she got tensed and frustrated at everytime yuvi behavd in this way and she did not like it.. she messaged him an apology and went to sleep..
Next morning she woke up there was no reply... she decided to go n meet yuvi..
Getting a chance as she saw anita move out of the house.. she stepped in..
" yuvi tum kaha ho.. kaha ho yuvi... yuvi m sorry... me kal bhot upset thi jo kuch bhi hua usse isliye aise bol diya.. galti ho gyi.. maf kar do.."
She was jolted in some1s hold.. as someone wrapped his arms around her waist...she felt uncomfortable and removed the persons arms..
It was yuvi..she kept thinkin why did she feel uncomfortable in yuvis hold.. she loves him it should feel good na... lost in thought yuvi came near her... trying to kiss her...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
like the progress
thanks for back to back chapters
hoe Kunj is proven not guilty soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the double update.
Amazing update loved both chapters.
Poor Kunj 😭 felt bad for him. Hope he will be able to bring Yuvi truth in front of everyone.
Continue soon.plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

Before he could come futher... twinkle stopped him .. yuvi mene tujshe kitni baar kaha hai ki shadi se pehle ye sab nahi!!
Yuvi looked away in frustration ... twinkle did not understand what happened to her yesterday... " babaji ye kya ho gya hai muje kal se... yuvi ko jhat se mana leti thi par aisa kya ho gaya ki muje abhi farak nahi pad raha ... kyu kunj ka khayal aa raha hai bar bar... kal jo hua uske bad kispe vishwas karu mein..."
"Shadi..twinkle.. sab kuch shadi k bad... twinkle bore ho gya hu tmhare is purane khayalat se... mujse toa shado karni nahi tumko tumne apni maa se bhi ab tak humare rishte k bare me nahi bataya... chal twinkle aaj hi bhag k shadi kar lete hai..."
Twinkle who was once ready to marry yuvi was now in second thoughts... taking her mothers permission was it her good up bringing or she wanted to escape marrying yuvi... she was very much confused... she needed to think...clearly...
"Yuvi me maa se bahana banake ayi hu muje ab jana hoga... me tumse badme baat karti hu"
Yuvi grabbed her wrist " yuvi chodo mera hath...dard ho rha hai... "some how she managed to break from his hold.. and went out from anitas house.. uttering "bye Yuvi, maa mera wait kar rahi hogi..."..

Meanwhile in Sarna house...
"Aapke kehne par mene ye shadi k liye haa ki... mene ye baat bhi chupayi ki aap mere dad nahi hai... black mail kiya apne muje.. aur kal jab puri duniya mujpe sawal utha rahi thi aap..ne hath chhod diya mera...apni image kharab na ho uske liye muje paraya kar diya...vo toa thik hai apne mere maa baap paf bhi kichad uchala...kaise kar sakte hai aap aise"
Kunj shant ho jao.." usha trying to calm down kunj"
"Kaise shant ho jau badima..kaise"...
Bhot ho gya kunj.. zyda over react mat karo.. "manohar spoke looking away from kunj" tumko pata hai business me aise chote mote gamble karna padta hai.. hum apni company ki image down nhi hone de sakte... tumne toa apna business alag sambhal rakha hai but baki sarna empire ki halat sahhi nhi hai"
"Aur uske zimmedar aap khud hai aapko ye pata hona chahiye"
" kunj tum mujse chote ho is tone me baat mat karo mujse... awaz niche rakho... vaise galat kya kaha mene jo sach tha vahi kaha na..."
"Nahi aap apne aap ko bachane me rishto ko bhul rahe ho... jab tak mera business acha chal raha tha aapne.. muje apna beta bana diya sirf apni image k liye... kal jab media me mera naam uchala gaya toa aapne hath khade kar diye.."
Mannohar spoke in a firm voice " bas bhot behas ho gyi is baat par.. hum aaj hi leelaji k yaha jaa kar unse maafi mang lenge.. is shadi ko bachane ka yahi ek akhri mauka hai.."
"Kya aap ab bhi meri shadi us ladki se karane ki soch rhe hai,(kunj is still angry qnd hurt on twinkles insults), aur kya aapko lagta hai ki aunty mujse apni beti ki shadi karvayegi...jabki vo sab muje hi culprit manye hai.."
"Tum unki fikar mat karo.. baki sab mujpe chod do... Leelaji apni beti k liye rahis khandan chahti hai.. jo ki hum abhi bhi hai... upar se anita luthra se unki dushmani.. hai.. agar ye shadi tut gayi toa anita luthra ko mauka mil jayega sunane ka jo leelaji nahi chahengi... .. bas hum vaha jayenge.. aur maafi mangege"
" me kisise maafi nhi mangne vala jab mene koi galti ki hi nhi toa maafi kis baat ki"
":Suniye ji chodiye tanejas ko... mein alisha ki maa se baat karti hu... vo kunj ko apna damaad zaroor banayegi..""usha spoke
"Nahi ek bar k liye me us twinkle se shadi kar sakta hu.. par alisha se bilkul nhi krunga... uska asli chehra mene kal hi dekh liya..."kunj clarified...((after al the trauma kunj wanted to talk to some1 he went to alishas place but.. there he found her bitching about him.. with her friends where he understood alishas intentions were never good))

Sarna family enter the taneja mansion.. manohar first speaks up..leelaji kal jo kuch bhi hua uske liye hum dil se maafi mangte hai... jo hua uspe mitte daliye... hum is shadi ko tutte hue nhi dekh sakte... aap se binti hai ki aap jo hua uski vjah se apna faisla na badle"
How much kunj dint wanted to see her his eyes were searching for her in the house...why was she missing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon please.

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