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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 40
They drove off outside the lanes of Amritsar and he abruptly saw him stop and park it was a secluded temple less crowded surrounded by greenary how come she dint know about this temple ever
"Kunj mene ye mandir toa kabhi dekha hi nahi...aur tumne toa kaha ki hum tumhare dost se milne ja rahe hai...?''
"Haan.. toa yahi milenge.. na.. tum chalo toa..."
They passed by the local stalls selling puja items and started climbing the stairs...and they reached the entrance
"Kaha hai tumhara friend " she looked around the small tree shades and benches around where people were relaxing...
"Vaha..!"
She looked in his direction...and she saw...
His friend had a calm face... sharp eyes... a small peaceful smile he was sitting calmly his legs folded... she looked surprised thinking about Kunj... and his friend... she looked back at Kunj... but the look and devotion in his eyes left her spellbound...
She smiled and walked ahead holding his hand...pulled over the duppatta over her head... folded her hands and...chantd in her mind
'Om Namah Shivay'
He too bowed down panditji came forward handed them the prasad...
"Beta bhot dino bad dikhe.. kahi sheher se bahar gaye the kya?"
"Nahi panditji..". he could not bring up the reason for not visiting inspite of him being in town... he was in regret...
"Vo bas... panditji... ahmm.. ye meri patni hai... humari parso hi shadi hui hai..."
And he held her hand and bowed down to his feet... taking his blessings...
"Beta humesha khush raho... sada suhagan raho Mahadev tum dono ki har manokamna puri kare..."
And the panditji left...
As they were walking back...
"Kunj tumhare friend se toa tumne mera intro hi nahi karvaya..."twinkle asked sensing his silence...
"Karvaya toa... abhi andar...tum bhi toa thi..."
And they walked of under a tree taking in the view it was beautiful as the sun was about to set ... the sky was painted saffron...
"Twinkle tum muje pagal samaj rahi hogi..."
"Nahi meri itni majaal ki.. me Kunj Sarna ko... pagal samju... infact... I know that feeling..."
"Me bhi toa babaji se kitni baat aise hi baat krti rehti hu... toa mere pati hone k nate tumhe bhi thoda crazy hona banta hai na.."
And she winked... he was taken by a surprise... and her winking the sparkle in her eyes... made his heart to race... faster...
They left as the sun was down...
"Kunj vo panditji aise kyu keh rhe the ki bhot dino k bad tumko dekha..."
"Ha.. vo... me ye sab shadi ki preparation start hui tabse yaha aya hi nhi... varna mein.. mahine k har ekad do monday ata tha..."
"Oh... jab bhi tum aoo muje bhi le aana... okay.. next time se.. muje pehle pata hota is mandir k bare mein toa... humesha ati... kitna beautiful hai na.."
"Haan... as he drove towards Sarna House.."

"Aa gaye tum dono... Twinkle mene toa tumko Kunj ko lunch dene bhja tha... ab toa aise lagta hai.. ki dinner bhi akele hi kar k aa gaye..."
"Nhi... bebe vo... hum bas.. gurudwara gaye the..."
"Toa kya gurudwara mein... 4 ghante baithe rahe... hainn... Twinkle Bahurani..."surjeet added while going through a magazine...
"Vo bebe me aur Twinkle uske bad.. Shiv Mandir bhi gaye the..."kunj spoke up as twinkle shrugged his shoulder to supprot her...
And every1 laughed out...
"Khush raho... tum log toa aise dat rhe ho jaise koi chori pakdi gayi ho... nayi nayi shaadi hui hai... ghumo firo.. yahi toa din hai..."
"Aur kunj tune toa apne Tauji ki naak katva di"...
"Kyu tauji kya hua"
"Mera puttar ho k... tu Twinkle ko sheher k bhakti sthano me le gaya... ab khane k samay aye ho toa... bahar achi si hotel me kha k hi ate... bebe inko dekh k toa lagta hai... ki ye log... toa kahi ghumne jayenege toa bhi Haridwar jayenege..."
Anand and Bebe chuckled...
They both escaped from there

"Yeh sab tumhari vajah se hua... hai... kitna chidhaya bebe aur tauji ne hume..."
"Meri vajah se... kyu... gurudwara janeka idea kiska tha... Tumhara..."
"Ohh... toa apne friend ko milane muje kon le gaya tha...Tum... agar gurudwara se... vapas aa jate ... toa time pe pohoch jate..."

And the servant called them for dinner...
The dinner was a silent affair... and they retired to their rooms...
He handed over the remote to twinkle to watch the TV and not disturb him...
She tyrned on to watch a movie and award show some daily soaps...
But the most she watched was him... in their room
"Hello Akash.. haan.. mein kam kar rha hu us file pe... tum.. final draft tayar karo... and baki members ko ping kar dena is bare mein..."
His couch was all placed with multiple papers... and laptop...
He was furiously typing...and noting down somethongs.. maybe imp points she thought...

She saw him walking out of the room.. he walked backwards and.. asked... "coffee??"
She nodded in a yes... she was feeling sleepy but wanted to watch the movie... he came back with two mugs... both hot... and smelling delicious...
He handed her one and.. walked back.. toqards the couch... he attached the laptop to a printer gave command to print a number of pges...
He sat on the edge of the bed..she was sitting in a corner where she slept yesterday with a blanket covering till her waist... sipping coffee he noticed for the first time what was she watching... she shuffled through an award show... and... a movie... 'Knight and Day'
He remembered it had been long since he last watched it... and the laptop binged marking the completion of all the prints...

As the movie finished... she last glanced at him... his eyes were going through the prints...and checking something on the laptop screen...
He looked at her and caught her... watching him... she cursed that moment but tried not to look flustered...
"Tum so jao... muje abhi kaam hai me late sounga..."
Not understanding what to reply... she did what.she did best with him.. taint him...
"Haa toa me konsa wait kar rahi thi... tumhara..."
He looked at her confused registering what she spoke he just shook his head... with a sigh.. and resumed his work...
'Acha khasa din tha... kya zarurat thi aise taunt marke end karne ki...koi baat nahi... kal ka din bhi aaj ki tarah acha hi hoga.."
Only Mahadev and her Babaji knew how much she was wrong...



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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it very much 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
To all those who read comment and like this FF...
This FF was something what I poured out imagining this great couple in my own way. I just wanted it to be a short one with few 20 25 chapters... ending it with a happy note after Twinjs marriage... but after writing 5 chapters the amount of positive reviews I got for it changed my mind and its been 40 long chapters with views crossing over 10000😊
But from now on I m getting busy😕 so those back to back updates would happen only on some lucky days. Till then I can promise atleast 2 updates per day.
Thank you all and.. keep reading..
Yours Always!!
Joe😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yayyy!! I was waiting for your update. I kept refreshing the page through out the day.
Aww. Kunj is a devotee of Lord Mahadev.
This guy is just too perfect!!!
Awesome update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: joe10

<font color="#ff0000">To all those who read comment and like this FF...</font>

<font color="#0000ff">This FF was something what I poured out imagining this great couple in my own way. I just wanted it to be a short one with few 20 25 chapters... ending it with a happy note after Twinjs marriage... but after writing 5 chapters the amount of positive reviews I got for it changed my mind and its been 40 long chapters with views crossing over 10000😊</font><font color="#0000ff"></font>
<font color="#0000ff">But from now on I m getting busy😕 so those back to back updates would happen only on some lucky days. Till then I can promise atleast 2 updates per day.</font>
<font color="#0000ff"></font>
<font color="#0000ff">Thank you all and.. keep reading..</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Yours Always!!</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Joe😉</font>

Aww. No problem.
Work comes first. :)
Thanks for giving us 2 updates per day even between your work commitments. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: joe10

To all those who read comment and like this FF...

This FF was something what I poured out imagining this great couple in my own way. I just wanted it to be a short one with few 20 25 chapters... ending it with a happy note after Twinjs marriage... but after writing 5 chapters the amount of positive reviews I got for it changed my mind and its been 40 long chapters with views crossing over 10000😊
But from now on I m getting busy😕 so those back to back updates would happen only on some lucky days. Till then I can promise atleast 2 updates per day.
Thank you all and.. keep reading..
Yours Always!!
Joe😉

joe no problem dear
give us update when u r free
donn't take stress dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update Joe 😳
IN the end it Means something drastic twist to take place in twinj life 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 41
The next morning she woke up. She found him sleeping on the couch in sitting position the laptop and the file was as it is...lying around... she got up from bed and reached near him there was a note placed.
"Agar tum utho tab me so raha hou toa muje utha dena..."
She also had a text from him incase she wouldnt notice the paper note...the message had the same thing written on the paper... it timed.. 4.12AM she was surpriased..
'Matlab kunj itne baje tak jag kar kam kar rha tha...'

She thought of playing some mischief...
She woke him up and...
"Twinkle kya time hua..."
"8 hi baje hai Kunj.."
"Kya muje late ho gya.. muje 8.40 tal office pohchna hai.. shit..."
As he ran towards the bathroom... she pulled him and.. herself.. latched the door.
"Pehle me uthi toa..pehle bathroom pe mera hak banta hai.."
"Twinkle ye games badme khel lena...mera jaldi pohchna bhot hi zaruri hai... try to undrstand..."
"Kunj muje disturb mat karo...let me get ready..abhi toa brush bhi nhi kiya"
"Twinkle yaar... ye kya bachpana hai.. muje late ho rha hai... "he could not go to any1 elses bathroom.. what would they think.. and no one would underatand his urgency..
"Twinkle plz.. bhot hi imp meeting hai... meri... badme tang khinch lena meri jitno chaho...muje pata hai... tum jan buch kar aise kar rhi ho"
"Offo Kunj... agar me late ho gyi toa.. Mummyji fir muje sunyengi..."
"Twinkle yaar.."
He kept pacing the room... adjusting the file.. she came out of the bathroom... he barged in walking past her... glaring at her.
He quickly hurried and.. got ready...gathering his files he hasted away out of the house..
"Twinkle Kunj nashta karke bhi nhi gaya... kya hua"
"Kuch nhi bebe vo bas koi meeting k liye jaa raha tha.."
She thought Kunj would be just making up she dint know he would miss breakfast.
Just then the the driver was seen walking around
"Arey Ramesh yaha kya kar rha hai.. Kunj ko le jane vala tha na tu aaj office"
Surjeet asked...from the dining table..
"Malik vo Kunj baba bhot hi jaldi me aye aur... chabi li aur nikal gaye.. mene kaha ki me le chalta hu.. toa unhone mana kar diya"Twinkle listened and got sad.
"Ye Kunj bhi na kuch bhi karta hai... pata nahi.. kya chalta rehta hai iske dimag mein"surjeet said to himself...
They all had their breakfast except Twinkle she was not feeling like eating...she saw the papers lying around from yesterdays prints...and started sorting them in order and cleaning the room... it was 10AM
'Ab tak toa meeting ho gyi hogi... usko phone karke puchti hu...khane k bare mein... lunch leke jaungi tab sorrie bol dungi...subah k liye.."
No one picked up the phone..
She came downstairs in the kitchen she started helping out.. just then her phone rang...
"WHATTT.."
Bebe Usha all got scared... as they heard Twinkle speak in shock... and her mobile slipping out of her hand..
"Kya hua puttar... ro kyu rahi hai.. kuch bol"
"Bebe vo Kunj...bebe..bb"
"Kya hua Kunj ko.."usha chipped in...
"Kunj ka accidant hua hai..."

Surjeet checked in the details of the hospitals and... rushed qith the entire family... Anand was reaching from his office...
Twinkle could not imagine something like this could happen... she just remebered some1 saying appke pati ka accidant all the things happening after that went blank from her eyes...
She was held by bebe and Usha... throughout the ride till the hospital...what would have happened to him...??'plz babaji plz.. Kunj ko kuch...plz..she cried in her heart... the way he left flashed in front of her eyes... agar use zyda chot ayi ho toa...vo serious hua toa... mein kya karungi... abhi shadi ko 2 di bhi nhi hue...
Plz I want to see him... plz...once...

Surjeet inquired about his admission... the receptionist directed him towards the ward...they all rushed towrds the room Twinkle ran as fast as she could... ahead of all... she needed to see him...but
The bed was empty...
They looked around the corridoor...
He was not around...
"Oye puttar yaha mera beta admit tha receptionist ne bataya.abhi...par...vo abhi yaha nahi hai...kaha chala gaya..." surjeet asked a nurse walking by fighting back tears trying to be strong but failed...
"Maaf kijiye ka chachaji... jo patients pe operation successful nahi hote unko casualty ward me shift kar diya jata hai... post mortum k liye..."the nurse spoke unable to understand the effect her words would have on them...
Twinkle walked back shaking her head tears rolled till her neck... eyes beimming with more to come... she walked backwards till she hit the wall... Kunj nhi ja sakta aise hi... nhi ja sakta...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: joe10

To all those who read comment and like this FF...

This FF was something what I poured out imagining this great couple in my own way. I just wanted it to be a short one with few 20 25 chapters... ending it with a happy note after Twinjs marriage... but after writing 5 chapters the amount of positive reviews I got for it changed my mind and its been 40 long chapters with views crossing over 10000😊
But from now on I m getting busy😕 so those back to back updates would happen only on some lucky days. Till then I can promise atleast 2 updates per day.
Thank you all and.. keep reading..
Yours Always!!
Joe😉

no problem
we will waiting for ur updates
update when u r free
and don't feel sad okay
we can understand 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
twinkle fighting for bathroom was nice
hope nothing happen to kunj

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