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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updates

loving all the updates

sorry busy thts commenting late


pls write OS too
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Amazing update.
Sorry for late commenting.
Thanks for the back to back updates.
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Read the whole story in one go! Very nice!
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Chapter 28

Before he could react the lady started screaming and ran towards her husband
"Jaanu acha hua tum aa gye varna pata nahi ye mere sath kya karta"
"Dekhiye aap ko jaisa dikh raha hai vaisa kuch bhi nahi hai... galat femi hai.."Kunj fumbled
"Tumne meri biwi par nazar dali tumhe toa me chodunga nahi..". and he tried to drive Kunj out of the room... the manager was called and a few staff arrived...
"Dekhiye me galti se is room me ghus gaya tha... ye 'do not disturb' ka tag dekh k andar gaya..tha mein"
"Do not disturb jis door pe laga ho... uske andar kaun jata hai" manager asked amusingly...
"Are par mera kamra hai toa me jaunga na"kunj objected...
"Aapka kamra hai toa aap Do Not Disturb lagake aap apne room k bahar kya kar rahe the.." the husband spoke... angrily...
"Dekhiye manager saab aap police ko bulaiiye.."
"Arey police ko bulane ki kya zarurat hai..."
Twinkle hearing the commotion outside her room came out to see the corridoor crowded...
After hearing the conversation she understood that Kunj was targeted...
"Dekhiye manager saab meri biwi bhi aa gyi... Twinkle batao ki me tumhara pati hu aur me thodi der k liye bahar gaya tha... aur ye humara room hai.."Twinkle wanted to have some fun...
"Pati kaisa pati... kon pati... aap logo ne itna shor kyu macha rakha hai.."
Manager apologised to Twinkle and Kunj again warned her not to play this game with him... but she gave an evil smirk to him...
Manager asked every1 to come near the reception... and before Kunj realised Police arrived ... who called them he dint see any1 calling the police...
Twinkle got tensed as Kunj was not back... she thought that he would convince the people and be back in the room in few minutes she headed towards the reception to search for Kunj...
"Inspector saab is aadmi ne meri biwi k sath zabardasti karne ki koshish ki"...
Inspector asked the lady and she fumbled but matched her husbands words Kunj looked towards her in disgust and she looked down in guilt...but dint speak the truth... "arrest kar lijiye ise.."
"Dekhiye inspector saab bhot badi galat femi ho gyi hai.. and Kunj explained the whole matter"
"Dekhiye bhaisaab ye koi picture ki shooting nahi chal rahi ki aap hume aisi kahaniya sunayenge aur hum man lenge.. aur muje lagta hai ki mene aapko kahi par dekha hai "
Just then the constable whispered something in the inspectors ears...
"Haaan... aap toa vahi ho na jisne ek do week pehle ek ladki ka fayda uthane ki koshish ki thi... kaaafi dino tak charcha me rahe the... vaise tab koi action nhi liya gaya tha... ab toa pura action lenge hum...news me kafi famous ho gye the aap... toa aap se aisi hi umeed ki ja sakti hai..." and the entire staff was staring at Kunj with accusing eyes remembering him from the news...
Kunj dint imagine that such a petty issue would lead to this... his anger rose.. and he looked the inspector in the eye..."Inspector saab aap midea ki baato ki buniyad pe mujpe inzaam nahi laga sakte..."
Inspector asked him to shut up and held Kunjs wrist ... Kunj shoved his hand from his grip and warned the inspector..
"Aap jante bhi hai ki me kon hu... "
Twinkle reached there in time just as the inspectors arrived and she could not blame herself more for what the scene converted into... she thought that it was a small issue and a little leg pulling would do no harm... she never imagined that police would be called... and when she saw Kunj was angry and upset she knew that she was in trouble ...
"Inspector saab.. rukiye.."
"Ye mere pati hai.. I m sorry.. manager saab vo tab mere aur inke bich zagda chal raha tha isliye mene inko pehchanne se mana kar diya tha... muje nahi pata tha ki aap police bula loge ."
"Ye sab kya ho raha hai manager"the inspector asked..
"Dekhiye mam me janti hu ki aap jhuth bol rhi hai.. mere pati aise nahi kar sakte... vo galti se aapke kamre me aa gye honge.."
After a lot of convincing the lady spoke the entire truth and accepted that she was the one to change the Do Not Disturb sign...
And everbody disperesed... ofcourse after a little levture from the Inspector.. for making a false call...
Kunj entered the room with twinkle anger evident on his face...
Twinkle thought of keeping quiet...
He ordered some coffee from the manager and the manager was more than obliged to do so as an apology for mis treating him...he dialed a number and kept the phone on speaker...and moved towards the window staring at the sky sipping coffee...
It was his habit to always talk on speaker mode... as he was habituated to do something else while talking with the person...
The rings finished no one picked up...
Twinkle asked him who he was calling so late... but she only got a cold look in return...she decided to keep mum...
At the second time... the receiver answere...
"Damnit akash...Itna time kyu laga phone uthane me"
"Sir raat k 1 baj rahe hai so raha tha...isliye.."
Kunj stared at the fancy wall clock in the room and again looked outside the window...Twinkle got confused why was Kunj calling akash so late...
"Akash do teen hafto pehle jo meri media me news ayi thi vo kon kon si channels pe ayi thi aur un mese konsi channels ki Sarnas se tie ups hai...?"
"Sir konsi news... "
"Akash tum apne bed se utho... thande pani se nha k aao fir baat karo mujse"
Akash quickly got straighten up... Twinkle giggled in her mind at Kunjs commnt...
"Sorry sir... ,,sir kya ap us news ki baat kar ahe hai.. jisme aap pe..."akash could not complete the sentence as he knew Kunj dint like to talk about it...
"Ha usi ki baat kar raha hu"...
"Sir usme toa kuch local news channels hai.. koi badi channel nahi hai... aur us vaqt press conference bhi Mr Manohar Sarna ne hi bulayi thi... aur statements bhi unhi ne diye the"
"Vo sab pata hai muje akash... I want you to break their contracts with the Sarna condtruction on the breach of malignimg my name..."
"Lekin sir jab aaphi ke bade papa ne bulaya tha toa aise"
"Jitna bola hai utna karo...Akash.."
Twinkle thought this was getting serious..
"Sir I want you to consider this again... "
"Abhi is contract breach ka approximate kitna amount milega..?"
"Kuch 8 10 crores..,, but sir long run me humari company ko hi loss hoga... aur fir future me vo channels humse tie up karna consider nahi karegi..."
"Tum ye sab abhi karo...Mehra ko call karke... papers ready karo"
"But sir itna amount ka karenge kya "..
Kunj looked back.. im the room and thought for a while... twinkles eyes were on him...he took a sip..
"Un paiso se kisi promising co.panies me shares kharidke.. Ishaan aur Juhi k naam kar do..."
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Chapter 29
"Ishaan aur Juhi?"akash asked surprised..
But sir vo shares toa kisi k bhi naam kar sakte hai...
"You know ki baki Sarna empire ki halat kharab hai...I dont know what bade papa is upto par itna pata hai.. ki koi problem hone vali hai... ek toa unhone un Luthras k sath deal sign ki hai jiske bare me kuch pata nahi muje... Anand bhaiya toa bade papa k samne kuch bol nhi pate... aur me bolu toa muje interfere karne se mana karte hai...
bas yahi sense karke muje ye khayal aya... shares bacho k naam kar do.. kal ko kuch problem ho toa unko...affect nhi hona chahiye..."
Akash understood his bosses emotions and cut the call assuring him what he asked for would be done...
"Kunj par tum ye sab Anand bhaiya aur bhabhi k naam bhi kar sakte the na...,toa fir ?"twinkle asked Kunj forgetting that he was angry on her...
When she got no reply... she saw him place the finished mug on the table and close his eyes leaning on the chair...
"Kunj I m sorry Muje nahi pata tha ...
"Twinkle tumhe kya pata hota hai... btaoa kuch pata hota bhi hai kya tumhe..."
Kunj reacted... his tone low filled with hurt..
"I m sorry,, "
"Tumahara sorry muje meri izzat nahi dilane vala... meri jo insults hui hai... vo vapas nhi lene vala...nyways chodo... ye sab..
He calmed down and spoke sweetly looking her in the eye..." Twinkle I m sorry I reacted this way...Twinkle me tumse gussa nahi hu... bas is situation se gussa hu...kuch hafto pehle muje pe kisi ki ungli uthane ki himmat nahi hoti thi.. aur ajj...bade papa ne sabke samne muje gunhegar theraya... press me muje blame kiya... khud unhone bulaya media ko... jab mere parivar me hi dosh hai toa me tumpar kyu gussa hounga..."twinkle realised the pain and genuinty in his voice... though he wasnt angry on her... but she was also the one to blame him... and he knew that she was not still convinced about that night...
She got up and sat on the chair beside him...
"Me tumhari patni hu Kunj"
Kunj looked at her... surprised the way she said the words... she was asking him to share his pain...with her... she saw Kunjs calm eyes she asked...
"Kunj but tum agar Anand bhaiya ya bade papa k nam karte shares.. toa vo ache se istmal kar pate na... "
"Nahi twinkle aisa nahi hota... agar kal ko kuch problem ho toa vo apni lifestyle maintain karne vo paiso ka istmal karte... Ishaan aur Juhu se sab pyar karte hai.. but agar kahi compromise karna hua toa .. un dono k future me hoga...ye soch k ki vo dono abhi bache hai... aur me ye nahi chahta ki unke studies ya future k sath koi bhi compromise ho...unke naam shares hue toa legal issues me agar kahi property chali gayi toa bhi... bacho k naam se nahi jani chahiye..."
"Kunj ek baat puchu" she asked as he got up ..
He nodded his head...
"Tum Ishaan ayr Juhi se itna pyar kyu karte ho... aur ye sab unke lie kyu kar rahe ho... I mean bhaiya aur bhabhi bhi unse utna hi pyar karte honge na.."
Kunj looked at her.."Twinkle vo dono bache hai... unse kon pyar nahi karga... vo family members hai... aur bhaiya aur bhabhi bhi unse pyar karte hai.. but vo dono insaan hai... unse agar kahi kuch galti ho jaye toa.. in future..."he paused...and looking at a distance from the wondow he spoke
"Twinkle mene ek baat humesha se dhyan me rakhi hai life mein...
Maa baap k galtiyo ki sazaa kabhi bacho ko nahi bhugadtni chahiye..."
Twinkle stared at him not understanding the man in front of her... she thought she had faced enough problems in her life... her father and little sister being snatched away... her mother and zhe fighting the world alone... her lonely cries when she needed her father... and then Yuvis torture...but now she knew that she was not the only person being played by fate... Kunj was an orphan ... he had no family despite having one.. just in the form of name... and the way he spoke about his past only made her think that he had suffered a lot... maybe even more than her... she atleast had her mother for support but he had no one... a lone tear escaped her eye...
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Posted: 9 years ago
AMAZING👏
LOVED IT!!!
WAITING FOR THE UPDATE..
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Chapter 30

Every1 got up from the tiring night and had their breakfast together... in hotel...
The manager was more cautious with Kunj and also he placed a bouqet on Twinkles and Kunjs table... and asking for apologies for last night... Kunj just nodded his head...
"Vaise Mr Kunj Sarna... manna padega aapko toa special treatment mil rahi hai..."
Trying to grab his attention from the phone in which he was furiously typing god knows what..
"Special treatment muje nhi... mere samne baithi hui sundar ladki ko mil rhi hai..."he spoke absent mindedly ... just as he realised what he spoke... he smacked himslef several times inside his head...
Twinkles face thrned crimson she was just trying to have a mild conversation with him and... here he... oh godd.. muje itni sharam kyu aa rhi hai... and she touched her cheeks...
Kunj looked at her and they both realised that the awkwardness would eat them away... Twine gathered herself and... even she did not want to leave this chance...
"Matlab tum mante ho ki me bhot sundar hu..."
"Mene aisa kab kaha...?"
"Abhi toa..."
"Mene kaha Sundar.. bhot namak shabd ka istmal mene nahi kiya"...
"Whatever ye toa hona hi tha... ki tum accept kar lo ki tum kitne lucky ho... tumko itni Sundar biwi mili..."she spoke moving her hand through her hai like a queen...
Kunj shook his head looking at her drama..he began playing with his phone again...
Just then a waitress arrived ...
"Sir would you like to have somethinng more..."
She stressed on the word MORE seductively...
Twinkle had obsereved the waitress eyeing Kunj at the begining of breakfast... it was a gift girls had... that they could make out any1 laying eyes on their partner...
She purposely chose a table away from her serving area... but as the crowd reduced she got a chance to come over to their table..
Kunj looked up.. clearly noticing... the tone of the lady...
His mouth opened to speak something..
"No we r done... and about to leave... "
Twinkle spoke and trying to get up...
Kunj was not in mood to tease her... as she always got cranky... in these situation...
"Yes... you can place the bill" Kunj said and again got busy in his phone...waitress a bit dis appointed... but still platered a smile... and started clearing the table... Twinkle smiled at her sheepishly... sensing victory...
The waitress placed the bill and quickly swifed away...
As Kunj placed the amount... he sae something...
"Ye kya hai.."he asked looking at the bill flap... turning his head...
Twinkle looked at what he was looking... he picked it up and started walking with her.. trying to read it...
It was a tissue... with a number written on it with underlined..."Call Me"

Kunj smirked...he was used to get such gestures in foreign as the culture there was forward... he used to ignore them...but what he forgot now was that he had married a lioness who was just walking beside him... she grabbed the paper and read it
"Kya hai ye... ,"she roared...
"Pata nahi.. us bill me tha"...Kunj replied innocently with a smile...
"Kunj tum jante nahi in ladkiyo ko... us waitress ko toa me... "her nose was flaring.. and she would pull out all the hairs on yhe waitresses head and scratch her face... if possible... that was what the expression on her face told..
"Twinkle ruko..twinkle... ruko... yar... "he grabbed her her hand... and shoulders... still trying to free and... looking where they were sitting trying to find her ...
"Calm down Twinkle... shant ho jao k.."
He said and.."dekho.. me ye tissue fad deta hu.. k tunhare hi samne... k "as he tore the tissue into pieces..."
Her brwath was still high... and she looked at him... and slightly calm down...
And they both went towrds their car... as Kunj rolled his eyes...man he never thought Twinkle could get this possessive or rebellious...but she did look cute all jealous and angry...
To tease her... in the car...
"Twinkle ... "
"Hhmm"..
"Vaise tumhe kya pata.. agar mene vo number usi vaqt yad kar liya ho toa... you know my memory is too sharp..."
"Kunj tum.." and she started hittin him on shoulders... "arey kya kar rhi ho twinkle gaadi chala raha hu..."he spoke as he chuckled..
"Kunj tumne sachme uska number yad nahi kiya hai na.. kasam kaho.."
"Haa baba... nahi kiya hai.. bas.. khush"
And she folded her hands grumpily...and looked outside...
All the members reached together...
As they were about to enter the house.. the watchman stopped them... they noticed that he wasnt their regular watchman..
"Aap log andar nahi ja sakte"
"Kyu... aur tum kaun ho hume rokne vale..."Manohar spoke up..
Just then their old watchman arrived at the scene...
"Ramesh chacha.. ye kya hai.. kaun hai ye... aur darwaza kyu nahi khol raha.."
"Kunj baba hume nahi pata... bas ye log subah subah aye... police k sath aur... humko baki naukaro ko nikal diya... keh rahe hai ki aaj se ghar ka malik badal gaya hai..."
Just then the watchman over the door got a call...
"Jii sab bhejta hu unko..."
"Jaiiye maalik aapko bula rahe hai.."
Manhohar was the first to march ahead... angrily... Kunj Twinkle Usha and others followed ... it was grah pravesh today and what was happening ...
Kunj waited outside the door... with her..
They saw a large Royal chair placed at the center of hall and some1 sitting on it...
"Kaun he be tu .. aur teri himmat kaise hui.. humare ghar me ghusne ki"
As he got up and turned..
"Yuvi" twinkle mumbled under her breath...

Edited by joe10 - 9 years ago
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Chapter 31

Kunj joined the dots together and understood that this was his motive... he clenched his fist but.. he did not wanted to enter the house... as a married man without his wife... he thought how would Twinkle feel... it was her first day.. to enter and.. here this.. freak... was...
"Mr Sarna ... apni awaz niche rakhiye ... vo kya hai na.. muje apne ghar me shor sharaba pasand nahi hai..."
"Manohar grabbed his collar... but Yuvi freed himself...
"Izzat se baat kijiye..mujse...aapne news nhi dekhi kya aaj ki... aap barbad ho chuke hai.. Sarna empire barbad ho chuka hai... lagta hai shadi ki khusiya manane me itne kho gaye ki... company ka dhyan hi nahi raha... haina.."
Just then the police and Kapoor arrived at the scene...
Kunj had to think straight...he saw twinkle angrily moving ahead to confront Yuvi.. but he grabbed her hand... and geatured a NO... he brought her... out of the house...
"Chodo mera hath.. kunj... us Yuvi ko me chodungi nahi... "
"Shant ho jao twinkle...gussa muje bhi aa raha hai.. but usse koi solution nahi nikalne vala... tumhara grah pravesh nahi hua ... aur me nhi chahta ki tumhara pehla din ghar me aise guzare..."
Hearing his words she... calmed down..
"Hello... Mr. Mishra.. aap plz jaldi se ghar aa jayiye.. yaha problem.ho gyi hai bhot badi..."
Kapoor and Mishra had a confrontation... and by the look of defeat on Mishras face... it was evident that all not looked right..
Manohar was holding his head and Usha supporting him...just then Leela arrived at the scene...
"Kya hua puttar.. mene news me dekha.. sab thik toa hai na..."
Mishra spoke up...explaining the situation
"Sarna saab... papers saare hai unke pas.. bankrupcy me.. aapka ghar inke naam kar diya gaya.. ye sab nilame me hua...hai.. aise papers legally kaise bana diye pata... nahi... muje abhi bhi doubt hai.. but bina saboot koi bhi inquiry karna mushkil hai... agar inquiry shuru bhi ki toa sab prove karte karte time lag jayega..."
Usha Manohar Leela were in tears... Anand and his wife were in shock...
The inspector arrived.. and tried to insult them... and drive them away...
He tried to push Manohar and Anand... but Kunj came in the way..
"Inspector saab dhakka marne ki zarurat nahi hai..." Kunj warned him...as they came out of the gate...
"Chinta mat kijiye bade papa... sab thik ho jayega.."
"Kya theek ho jayega...han... aur tujhe kya padi hai... tune toa apni company alag kar hi di thin na... teri company toa abhi bhi khadi hai... barbad toa hum hue hai... "manohar vented out on Kunj... he was still in shock...
Kunj understanding the state... stayed silent...
"Papa aap Kunj ko kyu suna rahe ho... aap hi ne... kunj ko alag kiya hai... vo kahi chhod k nahi gaya tha... aap hi ne..use apna alag business karne par majboor kiya...apne ghamand me rehke.. Kunj ki madad nhi mangi... mere baar baar.. kehne par bhi...mere bacho ka kya hoga ab.."anand was in tears remembering the kids... it was a relief they had left for a picnic just after the wedding...
Twinkle remembered that nights Manohar and Ushas conversation..and Anand words made her realise it totally
As always... the media hovered around...
"Mr Sarna.. pura sarna empire gir gaya hai... apko kya lagta hai... kis vajah se hua ye sab... kisi opponent ki chal hai ya kuch aur?""...
Manohar wasnt ready to face it...
"Mr Sarna... pure empire mese sirf Sarna Constructions... safe hai... iski kya vajah ho sakti hai... kya ye sabit karta hai.. ki is barbadi k piche Kunj Sarna ka hatha hai..,,kuch dino pehle aapne duniya k samne use apna beta na hone ka sach bataya... kya.. isi ka badla le raha hai vo?"
Kunj never understood why all the arrows flying in several directions always pointed at him in the end...
Twinkle was not able to digest... the statements made... then she realised that how it must have felt to him the last time it happened...now even she felt it...
Anand shut the reporters and got rid of them...
"Dekhiye samdhiji... ye vaqt... umeed chodne ka nahi.. shanti se baith k sochne ka hai.. aap log mere ghar chaliye.. vaha baith k iska hal nikalte hai.."
Kunj looked towards Leela with a thanking smile..and she assurd him...

At Tanejas...
Twinkle served Tea to all.. and saw Kunj in the corner continously making calls... and getting a dis appointed look after every call...
She took his tea and tried to hand it over... he picked up the cup from saucer which was still in her hand...he mimed a thank you...
"Kunj" she spoke as he sipped in the tea...
He looked at her...
She placed his hand over his...
"Sab thik ho jayega.."
In return he smiled..
"Ye chaii tumne banai hai...?"
"Haa"..
"Achi hai.. muje laga aisi chaii sirf me hi bana sakta hu..."
"Vo sangeet k din mene dekha tha tumko banate hue...yad hai..toa vaise hi bana di..." she realised what she spoke and looked away...
He got a call
"Haan.. Mr Mehra.. aapne pichle mahine k stats check kiye... kaha gadbad hui.. pata chala..
Lekin sare board members ne ek sath kaise support hata diya...
Ha.. company weak ho rhi thi... but aisa kuch nhi tha ki they loose all hope...
Aap pata kijiye ki Luthras ne un board members mese kisse contract sign kiye the..."

She was observing him... Manohar Usha and ..all were sitting idly dejected.. and only Kunj was the one making a try...even Anand was not around he had moved to get some help from his friends...
As he disconnected ...he called again...
"Akash... ek kaam karna hai.. bhot hi savdhani se... Luthras k lawyer Mr Kapoor ka background check karke muje batao..."
he listened intently for a while... and then she heard...
"WHATT..."

Edited by joe10 - 9 years ago
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Nice😳
Pls update soon.😉
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Amazimg updates joe 😛
Plz do continue soon 😳😳

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