Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Back to chapter 2...hehe reverse order...

What can I say what a bitter past...loved sk and his honesty...This is the side that I always like is sk in the show too...The no nonsense approach to dealing with issues...

So the met at the bar and once again it seems faith is playing a game...

Wonder how he will fair with swara is his life...He said he doesn't want to fall in love again but why dies it seem that as he cane back in time he already did ...?

Liking this side of kavi too...

Must say another amazing update ...loved it...

Raz

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

@Nimmi : Words fails me to express how much happy you make me.. You are an darling.. Love you so so so so much 🤗

Love

Nita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

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Superb Update really love it . Now Sanskar will take revenge for his parents death and Rocking Update As Always😛😛

Waiting for more

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keep giving advance update

waiting for more mystery to unfold

Waiting already for Chapter:5 😆

Edited by Swasain - 8 years ago

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: NitaReid
@Nimmi : Words fails me to express how much happy you make me.. You are an darling.. Love you so so so so much 🤗
Love

Nita

and i say... DITTO my sweetest thing.🤗🤗

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: raaz19
Dear nita...
I am late again or seems you are working at a quicker phase which I am loving ...

The updates are both intense and mysterious ...loving the time shifting between scenes and emotions...as I read I couldn't stop and wonder how would sanskaar react and this is what I felt chapter 3 was all about "hatred can be shown in the firm of pain...future destinations can be decided bonds can be formed nut can they truly ever be broken "

"Seeking to fix...fixing to seek...can one ever real do the things of the past and truly be happy...? "

I wonder if he will ever get his peace of mind or truly be happy...why do I see that there is far worse to come...wonder how his parents died and how it hit him...

Loving the dark side of him and the simplicity if swara...so wonder how cupid will strike? I do hope you share a flashback of this too. .

As always a amazing and awesome penned update...loved it loads...

Waiting as always. ...

Raz

Razia...

I wanted to say this since long ..you are great with words..do start writing dear..I will surely read anything..for a change try an OS for starters. .I believe it will be excellent. ..

Talia

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Res for 4...

Unres...

Nita dear...

Fab update...finally swasan got some lone time as both lucky and kavita went to college trip..sanky is indeed confused and in his thirst for revenge ..he is changing so many thing in past...due to his intact memory ..but things are not going in his favour...I felt bad when swara broke her friendship with him..just because of forehead kiss...ahh he helped her in such crucial time and still she behaved oddly...she should have ignore it...he was hurt...

Krish also broke bad news to sanky that his father and mother were killed in accident..and he believe that was also staged...his uncle involved...wondering what will he do now???

Waiting for next now...thank u for update

Love

Talia

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Loving the vibe and living the story as we speak ;)

Back to the update dear what cab I say besides "a touch so deadly...can be as light as a feather...yet a kiss can create magic we seek or destroy what we already have "

Perfectly said dear he had it all yet he felt that don't hung was missing...He has fine bs yet he feels incomplete...sometimes it's better to leave the what ifs be...

How will sanskaar fair without his shona? Will she forgive him...?

Lovely update as always and waiting for more already

Take care

Razia

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

res...😳

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Swasain
Just One Thing Outstanding Really Love it from the Core

I just LOVE Swara and Sanskar Conversation also love it how Sanskar help Swara! Eagerly waiting the Next part of the Story as its building more and more Suspense Day by Day

if you have Written the Chapter more please Update me in Advance I am Waiting as this is my most Fav

Can't wait for more
lovely update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

P.s Sorry for Little Late Update but please Continue Soon. Cant wait more mystery to unfold!

🤗

ONE Thing in your FF is True that Sanskar is more grey shade , more mysterious then ever we have seen in Serial

if possible Please , please Give me one advance update i am fallen in love with it . i just LOVE IT

LOVE IT , LOVE IT . dont have words to describe how much i love it

Please Continue Soon , and if possible PM ME advance Chapter of it!

Thanks for PM
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Thanks Yasmin dear.. Really happy to know you liked the update.. I really loved reading your feedback.. It sure made me very happy.. So thanks dear for the support.. I am glad you liked the story so far

Love

Nita

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