Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Swasain
Sorry for little late update! Coming back to update it was fabulous no wonder love swasan conversation
I am totally addicted and hook to it
Waiting for more revelations

Once again brilliant update
Update soon
Thanks for pm

Waiting for more

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃.. I am glad you liked the conversation.. Will be updating soon.. Hope it clears up and bring more revelations..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Wow Nita...
Chapter 1 was marvellous. .I have never imagined story could move this way too. .n I'm enjoying it a lot...
Sanky thinks by changing his past, kavita will be with him...but fate brought swara in picture too..under different circumstances. ..her very presence is breaking his plans...I really figured out kavi fate...she will die eventually...but now sanky is trying to change everything. .her way of dying will probably change too..
Here she is friend's with swara...wondering what role others will play..especially laksh n ragini..???
Very excited for next..

Love
Talia

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃.. I am glad you liked the update.. Sanskaar made it more complex for everyone.. I would love to answer your questions.. But I can't break the suspense..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Interesting

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

@Nimmi.. - That why I say you are the sweetest person in the whole wide world.. Love you dear.. Miss you lots and lots as well..

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Nita

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nimmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: NitaReid
@Nimmi.. - That why I say you are the sweetest person in the whole wide world.. Love you dear.. Miss you lots and lots as well..

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Nita

Nita.
🤗.

haven't we reached the conclusion and decided that you are the sweetest one?

love you back and love you more my sweetest thing.
and miss you loads. and then some more.

big big squishy hugs.

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

Nita.
🤗.

haven't we reached the conclusion and decided that you are the sweetest one?

love you back and love you more my sweetest thing.
and miss you loads. and then some more.

big big squishy hugs.

🤗 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Just One Thing Outstanding Really Love it from the Core

I just LOVE Swara and Sanskar Conversation also love it how Sanskar help Swara! Eagerly waiting the Next part of the Story as its building more and more Suspense Day by Day

if you have Written the Chapter more please Update me in Advance I am Waiting as this is my most Fav

Can't wait for more
lovely update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

P.s Sorry for Little Late Update but please Continue Soon. Cant wait more mystery to unfold!

🤗

ONE Thing in your FF is True that Sanskar is more grey shade , more mysterious then ever we have seen in Serial

if possible Please , please Give me one advance update i am fallen in love with it . i just LOVE IT

LOVE IT , LOVE IT . dont have words to describe how much i love it

Please Continue Soon , and if possible PM ME advance Chapter of it!

Thanks for PM

😃

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Nita doll...

Awesome update...

Well I'm cheating here...already read seven or six chapters on watpadd..hehe...I'm quite lazy ..so will comment here only...on other I will try my best...I cannot handle two platforms...but will try...

Update was great...sometimes I mix past/ present and future...but slowly I'm grabbing it..it's making me anxiously excited for more revelations. ..I loved swasan...both past n future...present story is very interesting. ..coz sanky is changing it.. im not sure if it's correct move or wrong...loved how both became friends ...relished it...im enjoying all complications of changing past..

Love u for this...muahhh

Talia

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Dear nita...

I am late again or seems you are working at a quicker phase which I am loving ...

The updates are both intense and mysterious ...loving the time shifting between scenes and emotions...as I read I couldn't stop and wonder how would sanskaar react and this is what I felt chapter 3 was all about "hatred can be shown in the firm of pain...future destinations can be decided bonds can be formed nut can they truly ever be broken "

"Seeking to fix...fixing to seek...can one ever real do the things of the past and truly be happy...? "

I wonder if he will ever get his peace of mind or truly be happy...why do I see that there is far worse to come...wonder how his parents died and how it hit him...

Loving the dark side of him and the simplicity if swara...so wonder how cupid will strike? I do hope you share a flashback of this too. .

As always a amazing and awesome penned update...loved it loads...

Waiting as always. ...

Raz