Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17 - Page 7

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Razia...

I wanted to say this since long ..you are great with words..do start writing dear..I will surely read anything..for a change try an OS for starters. .I believe it will be excellent. ..

Talia

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nita doll...

Awesome update...

Well I'm cheating here...already read seven or six chapters on watpadd..hehe...I'm quite lazy ..so will comment here only...on other I will try my best...I cannot handle two platforms...but will try...

Update was great...sometimes I mix past/ present and future...but slowly I'm grabbing it..it's making me anxiously excited for more revelations. ..I loved swasan...both past n future...present story is very interesting. ..coz sanky is changing it.. im not sure if it's correct move or wrong...loved how both became friends ...relished it...im enjoying all complications of changing past..

Love u for this...muahhh

Talia

Originally posted by: raaz19

Dear nita...

I am late again or seems you are working at a quicker phase which I am loving ...

The updates are both intense and mysterious ...loving the time shifting between scenes and emotions...as I read I couldn't stop and wonder how would sanskaar react and this is what I felt chapter 3 was all about "hatred can be shown in the firm of pain...future destinations can be decided bonds can be formed nut can they truly ever be broken "

"Seeking to fix...fixing to seek...can one ever real do the things of the past and truly be happy...? "

I wonder if he will ever get his peace of mind or truly be happy...why do I see that there is far worse to come...wonder how his parents died and how it hit him...

Loving the dark side of him and the simplicity if swara...so wonder how cupid will strike? I do hope you share a flashback of this too. .

As always a amazing and awesome penned update...loved it loads...

Waiting as always. ...

Raz

Originally posted by: raaz19

Back to chapter 2...hehe reverse order...

What can I say what a bitter past...loved sk and his honesty...This is the side that I always like is sk in the show too...The no nonsense approach to dealing with issues...

So the met at the bar and once again it seems faith is playing a game...

Wonder how he will fair with swara is his life...He said he doesn't want to fall in love again but why dies it seem that as he cane back in time he already did ...?

Liking this side of kavi too...

Must say another amazing update ...loved it...

Raz

Originally posted by: Swasain

😉

Superb Update really love it . Now Sanskar will take revenge for his parents death and Rocking Update As Always😛😛

Waiting for more

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keep giving advance update

waiting for more mystery to unfold

Waiting already for Chapter:5 😆

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

It's awesome update

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res for 4...

Unres...

Nita dear...

Fab update...finally swasan got some lone time as both lucky and kavita went to college trip..sanky is indeed confused and in his thirst for revenge ..he is changing so many thing in past...due to his intact memory ..but things are not going in his favour...I felt bad when swara broke her friendship with him..just because of forehead kiss...ahh he helped her in such crucial time and still she behaved oddly...she should have ignore it...he was hurt...

Krish also broke bad news to sanky that his father and mother were killed in accident..and he believe that was also staged...his uncle involved...wondering what will he do now???

Waiting for next now...thank u for update

Love

Talia