Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: raaz19
Dear nita...
Awesome start to a unique concept and I see it had to do with time travel hooked already...

Thank u so much for the pm and sorry for the late reply :)

Back to the update and all I will say is "a broken heart is like a broken soul...One seeks to forget and the he other seeks to destroy...If only the mind could agree with the heart...that some events in the past are better forgotten..."

Like the way you showed sk wanting to forget and correct his mistakes but will he be able too..? That the real question sometimes we seek answers for events we xanthine control but like every story told before one can only learn from the actions it seeks...

Let'ssee whom wins his mind or heart...

Dear a beautifully scripted start full if suspense and thanks for sharing...

Loved it loads...

Take care

Razia

Hi Razia dear,

Thanks dear.. Really happy to know you liked the update and concept.. You are not late please no need for sorry..

Sanskaar shouldn't have decided to change past.. But he was an man who was hell bent on saving her.. So yeah he choose something that is for too dangerous..

While this is an swasan FF.. It will be more about Sanskaar journey.. How he changes his past and the consequences.. Will update the next part now.. So you will learn more.. Thanks once again for the lovely feedback.. Will reply to your other lovely comments soon..

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey Nita...

Sorry I'm late...ramzan started...n now im packed with pretty tight schedule. ...but will surely read this masterpiece...prologue was brilliant..

Wohooo.whistle...just prologue was enough to make me fascinated and prettymuch hooked to this story...well u have made me super excited. ...dying to read this one...now what will Sanky do???he is fighting with his fate...Awww ...I'm curious...muahhh

waiting for more...

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Talia

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Wow Nita...

Chapter 1 was marvellous. .I have never imagined story could move this way too. .n I'm enjoying it a lot...

Sanky thinks by changing his past, kavita will be with him...but fate brought swara in picture too..under different circumstances. ..her very presence is breaking his plans...I really figured out kavi fate...she will die eventually...but now sanky is trying to change everything. .her way of dying will probably change too..

Here she is friend's with swara...wondering what role others will play..especially laksh n ragini..???

Very excited for next..

Love

Talia

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Nita doll...

Chapter 2 was awesome...I did make me quite curious and inquisitive ...Sanky is trying hard to change his fate...by stopping kavita's death..but he is indeed changing everyone else fate too .right??.swara n others...

will Other characters come like laksh or gadodia family???

I'm worried if he fails n kavi dies on same time in 2015...how hard he tries...then swara will be with vivek till 2017...ahhh...nooo..I'm confused...but this is if fate does play its role...just like earlier...

N if like Sanky plan everything happened according to his way...what will happen then??? Swasan are end game..I know..but what exactly will happen with kavita? ??my logical brain started working...

Will he actually destroy his family???like earlier.. help my brain...give some hints???

Anyway coming to update again...

I loved swasan conversation, which is your forte...just casual n carefree...I loved swara here...soo bubbly..but i believe she had lived a hard life...

Last line made my heart thutter...

Update soon ..ok...muahhh

Love u

Talia

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Sorry for little late update! Coming back to update it was fabulous no wonder love swasan conversation
I am totally addicted and hook to it
Waiting for more revelations

Once again brilliant update
Update soon
Thanks for pm

Waiting for more

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res for 2

Take your time dear.. 😊

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Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice Update.. 👍🏼

Thanks Sneha dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃

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Juanita

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Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hey Nita...
Sorry I'm late...ramzan started...n now im packed with pretty tight schedule. ...but will surely read this masterpiece...prologue was brilliant..

Wohooo.whistle...just prologue was enough to make me fascinated and prettymuch hooked to this story...well u have made me super excited. ...dying to read this one...now what will Sanky do???he is fighting with his fate...Awww ...I'm curious...muahhh
waiting for more...

Love
Talia

Hi Talia dearest.. Please dear.. No sorry.. I am glad you liked it.. I am the one who is late in updating on IF.. I wrote upto chapter five.. Will be posting it soon..

Well I am so glad you liked it that much.. Let hope it lives upto your expectations.. This is more about Sanskaar and his struggles indeed

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: krishuuu
Nita doll...
Chapter 2 was awesome...I did make me quite curious and inquisitive ...Sanky is trying hard to change his fate...by stopping kavita's death..but he is indeed changing everyone else fate too .right??.swara n others...

will Other characters come like laksh or gadodia family???
I'm worried if he fails n kavi dies on same time in 2015...how hard he tries...then swara will be with vivek till 2017...ahhh...nooo..I'm confused...but this is if fate does play its role...just like earlier...

N if like Sanky plan everything happened according to his way...what will happen then??? Swasan are end game..I know..but what exactly will happen with kavita? ??my logical brain started working...

Will he actually destroy his family???like earlier.. help my brain...give some hints???

Anyway coming to update again...

I loved swasan conversation, which is your forte...just casual n carefree...I loved swara here...soo bubbly..but i believe she had lived a hard life...
Last line made my heart thutter...

Update soon ..ok...muahhh

Love u
Talia

Hi Talia dear,

Thanks dear.. I am glad you liked chapter two.. Sanskaar is changing everyone fate.. Laksh and everyone will make appearance soon..

I think I confused a lot.. Will be updating the next chapter soon.. Hope you find your answers.. And yeah you got questions but I can't answer them without breaking the suspense.. So will stay quiet for now..

Love

Nita

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