Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve
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It much better that my comments dear . because I know when you unres you makey day.I want to say lot on forgotten ..and yet My comments never reflect what I want to convey

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Lovely update

Thanks dearest, really happy to know you liked the updates

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Sorry for being little late dear
Once again out standing update
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi dear...just read the prologue...super interesting...wanna read at one go but i have exams...so I will read it little by little...awesome story...so Sanskaar loved Kavita while Swara loved him but i guess post kavi's death he has fallen for Swara too...loved the story...plz pm me nxt time

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Swasain
Sorry for being little late dear
Once again out standing update
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I am late at replying back as well ..thanks dear ..I am glad you liked the updates

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: chemgirl
Hi dear...just read the prologue...super interesting...wanna read at one go but i have exams...so I will read it little by little...awesome story...so Sanskaar loved Kavita while Swara loved him but i guess post kavi's death he has fallen for Swara too...loved the story...plz pm me nxt time

Thanks dear , happy to know the prologue got your interest .And I Hope you continue to like it as you read further. All the best for your exams.. Will send you the PM.. Just accept my Buddy request

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Dearest Nita...

Thank u for dedication that was a lovely present is deed and wow super long updates...

But I also owe you a apology for the late reply :(

So for the first part he finally let her in wow...He did suffer from the loss of his parents to his lady love so much pain. ...

I can really feel his sorrow after all he just wanted someone to comfort him...be a friend...

Sometimes like you have put words cannot be enough but our actions say it all...He really needs her warmth...will he realise how much she will change him...I see that he fears love because he has never been blessed to see it blossom...

Beautiful :)

Then we go to the next update that was nice rwad about the present were she feared about losing him and his love...we're she wanted his friendship more then anything...so why did he walk away...

He cares and let her in so why did he not see that she was scared to...I see she has her flaws too...and I am sure that stems for not having her farher and must say I do love dida on this story...she is there little cupid. ...

And what a twist at the end dear...so this is how she met lakhs again...will be forgive and forget or was this the start to his revenge...

I know sometimes we seek the truth nut not all truths can bring happiness...I so hope for his sake he learns what is important in this journey ...cannot wait to learn more of kavi...?

Also indo hope to see a jealous sanskaar soon... ;)

Update soon...

P's this update made me cry...as always it was just perfect :)

Take care

Razia

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: raaz19
Dearest Nita...
Thank u for dedication that was a lovely present is deed and wow super long updates...

But I also owe you a apology for the late reply :(

So for the first part he finally let her in wow...He did suffer from the loss of his parents to his lady love so much pain. ...
I can really feel his sorrow after all he just wanted someone to comfort him...be a friend...

Sometimes like you have put words cannot be enough but our actions say it all...He really needs her warmth...will he realise how much she will change him...I see that he fears love because he has never been blessed to see it blossom...

Beautiful :)

Then we go to the next update that was nice rwad about the present were she feared about losing him and his love...we're she wanted his friendship more then anything...so why did he walk away...

He cares and let her in so why did he not see that she was scared to...I see she has her flaws too...and I am sure that stems for not having her farher and must say I do love dida on this story...she is there little cupid. ...

And what a twist at the end dear...so this is how she met lakhs again...will be forgive and forget or was this the start to his revenge...

I know sometimes we seek the truth nut not all truths can bring happiness...I so hope for his sake he learns what is important in this journey ...cannot wait to learn more of kavi...?

Also indo hope to see a jealous sanskaar soon... ;)

Update soon...

P's this update made me cry...as always it was just perfect :)

Take care

Razia

Hi Razia dear,

When I read such lovely comment like yours it makes me so happy.. Ofcourse I had to dedicate it to you.. Honestly I feel speechless on how to respond to such an lovely comments and I keep rereading them..

Please.. Look how late I am.. So no need for apologies.. Yeah the first part about him finally accepting her as his friend.. And he definitely needed one.. He fears love because he think moving on or falling in love with someone other than Kavita is like betrayal towards her..

Seeing her with laksh was kind of shocking to him.. That why he walked away.. And I am glad you liked the update.. Will be updating next.. Hope it lives upto your expectations..

As always I feel bad that my reply back was not enough to express how happy your feedback made me.. So thanks razia dear once again for such a lovely feedback

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Nita