Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
nita..:-)
lovely update..
so the truth is all out.. but sanskar is still by her side.. there might be some genuine feelings developing in swaras heart for sanskar..<3
waiting to see how you go ahead with the story..<3
love..
Jessica..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Accepted already and wow thanks for the update and excited already 😛

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Will do.. Just sent you an buddy request.. So I can send the PM in my regular group PM..

Love

Nita

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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
what her life is God. she is in a crazy mess it seems.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Dear Nita,
I'm extremely sorry for the strings of res I've left in this story. It feels bad when you start some thing new and lack opinions of others.

Swara messed up her life in the worst way. This Cinderella is really dumped inside a large heap of cinders. Laksh is as usuAl the spoilt brat.He really suits this role! 😆 Like Sanky me too liked the fact that Swara didn't used him. Swara dumped lucky for his shitty attitude I guess. I loved when Sanskar said he already knew and asked to say sorry.

Swara and Sanskar both are slowly getting attracted towards each other, even with all the imperfect scenario and mistakes... Swara's last reckless act... not giving a damn to her job and future career probably will be turning point of their... For Sanskar it'll be change of perception and for Swara change of intention and way to perfection.

Lovely chapter.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
res - will unres for all - hopefully by end of this week

Dear Nita,

Finally here for Chapter 3 and 4 (I did not even res for one of them🤢)

Chapter 3 - So the update is about confrontation and anger (not overt, but still there). Sanskaar upset that Swara appeared to have blatantly misused his name to obtain the job. But is is one who wants to play fair, so since she appears to be a good worker, he is willing to forgive her but wants her to realise how much of a mistake it was.

Swara guilty of the same but has a secret to hide, rather, more than one. First is her boyfriend, who longer is and the other that she is falling for Sanskaar, more than a crust, much less than love or affections, but the stirrings of the heart are there. Which is why when she runs or rather walks away from her boyfriend, she is upset that it is Sanskaar whom she has run into and his expressions are not very comforting, so she thinks of the worst case scenario.



Chapter 4

So some of the misconceptions have been laid to rest. When Swara mentioned that Mr. Maheshwari was her boyfriend, she meant Laksh (so she did not know that Sanskaar was also a Maheshwari, despite going out on a date with him?)

But Sanskaar is also a little stunned to know that Swara is, or rather was (after she clarified that she broke up with him) his brother's girlfriend. And Laksh does not like it either, when she blurts out the truth.

Laksh is the serial one here, no even worse, irresponsible and arrogant to boot, willing to play with girls but hates it when one of them pays him back with the same coin. But he is in for a ruder shock, when Sanskaar asks him to apologise to Swara (so is she, for different reasons). Guess she is fighting too many emotion, foremost being, what did Sanskaar plan to do with her?

I am sure even Sanskaar does not know the answer to that one.

love,
Nyna



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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Awesome loved it ...but something is missing swara will not use someone's name and get job knowingly something is not right after all the righteous and self respect swara I have read this seems to be a change not a pleasant one yet a change

Moumita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Hi nita..
Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late reply and what can I say i was not expecting that twist at all lakhs was swara ex wow 😲 and she used his name to land the job...that are me go well done girl... teaches him right for being so arrogant...

Anyway back to swasan I loved the way you kept the balance of the chapter so true to there characters his ego didn't let him see the bigger picture yet he wanted to help her and her insecurity because of her family made her guilty but still she didn't care of the repercussions...loved that she stood up for herself and for once sanskaar didn't have to dissolve the situation ...

Like how he watched and made his own judgement...loved that you kept his reaction a mystery as I know want to know what they will talk about in his office...excited already

Also did I deduct a sense of jealousy from sanskaar if so I am still waiting to find out how he knew swara from before he took her for a date..?

As always a beautiful update full of suspense and shuttle romance...

Update soon. ..waiting already. ...

Razia



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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Hey nita my doll...
How r u???

Well im little behind...but im enjoying this quick and short updates...alot...not have to wait much...
As..i was waiting for update...badly...little busy in personal life...so replying late...

Coming to update.chapter 3n 4 jointly were fabulous...swara lands in karma n co by crook...but made her place easily with her hardwork...though swasan never crossed path...both had thought lot about each other...swara n maheswari boy had past but hearing swara n laksh names together gives me creeps.literally..i never join their name..as im diehard swasan fan...never liked swa lak...soo here laksh is swara's ex...n she is quite embarressed that sanky now knows this...sanky behaved quite calmly.during whole fiasco..i loved when he lashedout at laksh for calling swara names...total gentlemen i tell u..waiting for swasanscene...
Well as update was short..it left me unsatisfied...my thirst was not quinch properly...soo update next...soon..anxious to know more...

Love u loads
Talia

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Nita dear
How are you buddy hope everything is fine. I assume u sad cuz Nadal lost again but what can u do lok like Federer is his pick form end of his career he playing some good tennis since AO.
what can I say about update u may be know my take on this.
just one thing I say now swara is in totally mess how she overcome it that's the point let see.
like sanskar how he stand for swara despite disliking her or hate her.
Update soon dear
Bye
Take care

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