Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

And Nimmi dear.. Have I said it enough.. Well I don't think so.. Here you go.. I love you my dear friend

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jess_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

nitaaa..:-)

thanks for updating dear.. i always look forward to your updates, and you never disappoint me.. the story is going so well.. sanskar is just perfect, and swara is gonna fall for him so hard..

cant wait to read more..

i hope everything in your personal life is well..

take your time, and i will be waiting for ur next update..

much love

Jessica..:-D

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Sushma Yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Hii dear

Its awesome, ohhh poor swara how much she has to bear and care for Sanskar. I love the way Sansakar declare like this without giving another thought to save swara.

Always looking forward for part.

Sushma

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Dear Nita, I love you

And now to see how many I have to unres, okay, let me count,

that is five chapters to unres for (all of them🤢), and I cannot even promise to do it soon😭🤢 but I will, and since you are such a sweet friend, you will not hold it against me.

love you🤗

Nyna

And I am finally back to unres this post - better late than never.

Okay, the start was normal, Sanskaar in his usual protector avatar though quite relieved that Swara had not used his name but worried about Laksh, for he does know his brother. And he is confused as well, (I like this trope, Sunny in FM is also quite confused because he does not want to analyse his feelings towards Swara😊) so he keeps her on as his PA

Good thing too, or else he would have never found out about Swara being forced to marry to a man twice her age. Shekhar is quite despicable, but here he appears to be the scum of the earth. Well, desperate times desperate measures, and Swara ends ups as his girlfriend😊

Nice twisty update.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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kojagorimalik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Nita di ...
Awesome...
Perfect song for situation to swara I would like to dedicate...
Zor ka jhatka Haye zoro se laga...
Awesome episode

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

ReS dear, Internet is very slow and I'm coming to India for 12 days after less than 7 days. So will be late. May be next month... chapter was really good. I loves the twist.

Love,
Dyuti

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Hi nita...

Well what can I say...totally unexpected update but utterly sweet just like chocolate...

I was thinking to res well heck just write what I think from my phone so I apologise in advance for any errors..

Getting bank to the update it was just amazing list like the perfect blend of a morning mocha..sweet yet bitter...for yes he is her boss yet she couldn't deny that she wanted to see her reasons of the betrayal and yet he couldn't let her go. ..just magical the way you portrayed the fact that love can arise like a sweet breeze and friendships can be formed in the most unlike of place...

Can I ask what made sanskaar react like that...was it his heart or mind...After all the both are strong willed and have both got a ego?

God and I am loving the mystery of shekhar character...but what really got me was how will lakhs react.?

Just lost for words magical as always and love the simplicity in the update...

Please don't stress yourself over updates...write when you can as each update is lovely surprise of happiness just like the one when is given his favourite candy...😆

I never say this enough but it's writers like yourself and the other nita to lucky, vijji, yasmin including banjaaran and the others whom have kept swasan alive...so just a big thank you 😛 🤗

Keep smiling and stay happy always...All the best with work and projects 😛

Till the next update u shall secretly be guessing of why he did what he did at the end? 😆 well that's the crazy swasan fan in me 😳

Take care...

Razia

P's sorry in advance if my comments upset you in anyway...😊

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: jess_27
nitaaa..:-)
thanks for updating dear.. i always look forward to your updates, and you never disappoint me.. the story is going so well.. sanskar is just perfect, and swara is gonna fall for him so hard..
cant wait to read more..
i hope everything in your personal life is well..
take your time, and i will be waiting for ur next update..
much love
Jessica..:-D

Thanks jess dearest for your lovely feedback.. You looking forward for my updates make me quite happy.. I am glad you are liking the story so far.. Sanskaar yeah just perfect with an secret.. Don't forget about it.. Swara the poor girl has no choice but fall for him indeed..

My personal life is good.. Just was bit stressed about the updates or the lack of updates in my works.. And this your assurance to wait makes me feel well understood.. So thanks once again dear for being understanding..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Sushma98999
Hii dear
Its awesome, ohhh poor swara how much she has to bear and care for Sanskar. I love the way Sansakar declare like this without giving another thought to save swara.
Always looking forward for part.

Sushma

Thanks sushma dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update.. Swara has been through a lot but our girl is strong she will pull through.. Don't worry.. Sanskaar just want to save Swara.. He is actually not thinking right now.. Will try to update soon..

Love

Nita