Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

@Sharon and Dyuti : Thanks for the Res guys.. Will look forward to hear your feedback..

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: aamias
nita long long time loving this story eager to know the secret sorry dear little busy not able to reply to all the sweet people and u being the sweetest among them
take care

how r u?

Hi Asmita dear..

I am really good.. Hope you are doing great as well.. I am super happy to know you are liking this story and in understand being busy and you don't need to worry about anything.. I am just glad you took your time to read mine.. And really I am sweet.. I do keep hearing it often and one day I actually might believe it..😳.. Take care..

Love

Nita

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Hello sweet buddy.
Update as usual beautiful dear is someone intentionally gave false information or swara really did that.
so her past is laskh I guess is sanskar listen their conversation & see their position he already have bad ideas on swara hope it not increase more waiting for their face to face heart felt conversation.
Update soon update short though I like & used to ur long update but I can understand ur situation also.
Bye
Take care buddy
loads of love

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kritz4ever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Would love to read more

Pm when u next update

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Dear nita...

Wow what a wonderful story...liking the plot and twist of this tale a lot...

So it seems both have there own misunderstanding and concepts about life a day people..clash of egos loving it...

So sanskaar judges people on there actions and forms his opinion on that persons response...nice touch...so why was he in that cafe that lead him to swara has he seen her before...oh god the mystery of hm the unknown but that what makes your ff so magical :)

And on the other hand toy have swara whom feels she has been wronged by her evil family...like that she is a go getter and is trying to change her destiny and destination...wonder how sanskaar will react to her being his employee I see he is not keen that she used him to gain this but u don't blame her sometimes life does get complecated...and I like that she twisted the rules to make herself happy...

Poor swasan seems like they will clash more before they form any kind of bond...

Like there date so funny to see swara test sanskaar and make the role reverse seems like both cannot trust each other...

But the best part has to be the end if chappy 3 the entry of the mystery guy and sanskaar walking in on them...hod wonder what he will think and how he will react...? Already excited to read future...One thing is for sure he will believe that she is at fault without knowing all the facts..? Or will he help her?

Liking the short updates...and update when you can...looking forward to the office fights and romance too...

Liking the I deal that not all romance are based upon attractions at first sight...

Waiting...

Take care...

Raz

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

P's do pm me on the next update :)

Raz

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: showrav24
Hello sweet buddy.
Update as usual beautiful dear is someone intentionally gave false information or swara really did that.
so her past is laskh I guess is sanskar listen their conversation & see their position he already have bad ideas on swara hope it not increase more waiting for their face to face heart felt conversation.
Update soon update short though I like & used to ur long update but I can understand ur situation also.
Bye
Take care buddy
loads of love

Hi showrav,

I am super happy to know you are liking this FF.. And Regarding Swara next update will clear it up.. Yeah laksh is her past and no Sanskaar didn't listen in on their conversation he just entered the scene.. And regarding how will Sanskaar react to the new confrontation you got to wait and see.. He might surprise you.. Will try to update the next part tonight.. Yeah short update is easier for me.. But my other works that are yet to be completed will have long update though.. Like btm epilogue and another chance SS..

Take care showrav

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Would love to read more
Pm when u next update

Thanks.. I am glad you liked the story so far.. Just send you a buddy request.. Will send you PM when I update from now onwards..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: raaz19
Dear nita...
Wow what a wonderful story...liking the plot and twist of this tale a lot...

So it seems both have there own misunderstanding and concepts about life a day people..clash of egos loving it...

So sanskaar judges people on there actions and forms his opinion on that persons response...nice touch...so why was he in that cafe that lead him to swara has he seen her before...oh god the mystery of hm the unknown but that what makes your ff so magical :)

And on the other hand toy have swara whom feels she has been wronged by her evil family...like that she is a go getter and is trying to change her destiny and destination...wonder how sanskaar will react to her being his employee I see he is not keen that she used him to gain this but u don't blame her sometimes life does get complecated...and I like that she twisted the rules to make herself happy...

Poor swasan seems like they will clash more before they form any kind of bond...

Like there date so funny to see swara test sanskaar and make the role reverse seems like both cannot trust each other...

But the best part has to be the end if chappy 3 the entry of the mystery guy and sanskaar walking in on them...hod wonder what he will think and how he will react...? Already excited to read future...One thing is for sure he will believe that she is at fault without knowing all the facts..? Or will he help her?

Liking the short updates...and update when you can...looking forward to the office fights and romance too...

Liking the I deal that not all romance are based upon attractions at first sight...

Waiting...

Take care...

Raz

Hi Raz,

I am excited to know you are liking this story.. Thanks for the lovely feedback.. I read it and reread it few times 😃.. Yeah they both are different.. While Swara might be bit realistic and sanskar well let just say he is bit idealistic.. So bound to be clashes between their perspective

Sanskaar mystery answer is only with my brain.. Yeah I feel reveal it soon or maybe not but I think you will be able to guess it soon enough.. And he went to the cafe to meet Swara.. Why I won't answer..

Swara in this FF is bit different from my other works.. She is not a do gooder but she is not an bad person either.. She is different and you will learn a lot about her as chapter progresses..

The date was an test for Sanskaar.. But for Swara it was mild flirting in hopes it turns into something good.. The mystery guy.. Gonna update now so you can find it yourself.. Once again thanks for the lovely feedback..

Love

Nita