Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17) - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago
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what a jerk he is so much over confidence own self but he not value one rupees.
he played with a girl it doesn't matter to hI'm his brother with that girl & they are close make this jerk jealous & now spill the bean between swasan.
why swara manipulated so easily by others & she didn't know how laksh is & how sanskar is don't know when this misconception clear.
clearly seeing both love each other but both silent & it increase distance.
very good update dear
Bye
Take care buddy
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Nita dear
How are you my sweet buddy.
unres 10

another beautiful update
like Nyna said her comment laksh still my hate list & will remain he try to manipulate sanskar also but our hero is smarter than his brother always & I also know sanskar not damn head laksh talk he know his brother is a jerk.
but some extend he manipulated both but that get them to confession.
& their romance let's not talk about it the way u complete their romance in few lines *lol* our sanskar become love sick puppy after confession *he he he* he already start imagine kids their future.
atlast swara open up her biggest secret As expected sanskar shake but glad he want to listen all her.
hope swara also listen sanskar side.
Take care buddy
Bye
love you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nita another brilliant update & longer too.
atlast all secrets revealed & everything become good.
like how u portrait their emotions dear just beautiful.
swara at last have family now & father for which love she curving long long time.
& sanskar also now guilt free.
marriage secret such a disgusted person laksh is just for bet again became her life & played with her. thank God swara come to know about him before late.
& now I want to see what is reaction after knowing swasan relation.
hope u fulfilled this wish ur next part if not then 😭
Take care buddy
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Posted: 8 years ago
so at last happily ever after after some dramas
laksh serve u right u got best partner as a wife just like u & I hate u both & u got a great FIL also totally spineless shame of the name of a father.

Mr. dumbo maheshari in business first class & when it come to proposal pusss there girl is standing one leg to say yes & here you are nervous.
but like ur lines at last.
yayy swasan married atlast & swara got her father as a wedding gift.

thanks for the story dear it's beautiful.
Take care buddy
Bye
love you buddy

ps. still need to 2 stories of ur.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the epilogue otherwise u finished this story as like that.
I think u like Asha name ur every swasan stories u named their kid name this.
like everyone pov &
their special dates why girls behind this date make boys life hell don't think I had experienced me still very much single & I forget my birth date also that's why fear about my future God pls give a good pertner 😆

Take care buddy
Bye
lots of love & best wishes
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Posted: 8 years ago
And I have done it,

unresed for Chapter 12 on page 27 and for epilogue on page 29😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
I know.. I have yet to reply back to lovely feedbacks from you guys.. I feel bad about the delay but will try to get back to replying them soon.. Sorry
Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! Just.. WOW!!
It was really beautiful dear.. In this whole journey you made me go through a hell of a lot of emotions.. And especially reading the story through POVs makes you feel the characters more powerfully.. Great work there, dear. 👏 👏
The Epilouge was wanderful.. It's 'A Cinderella Story', So it't deserves the perfect 'fairy tale ending'..
Loved it.. ❤️

PS: Nita dear, I'm Eranga. My old account (Eranga) have some problems.. So can you please send your PMs about your work to this account.. 😊

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