Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: jess_27
nita..:-)
lovely update..
so the truth is all out.. but sanskar is still by her side.. there might be some genuine feelings developing in swaras heart for sanskar..<3
waiting to see how you go ahead with the story..<3
love..
Jessica..

Thanks jess dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃.. Yeah Sanskaar might have his impressions but he will still stand by her side.. Swara already have developed a crush for Sanskaar and soon she will simply be bowled over by her prince charming 😉.. Will be updating the next one when I finished replying back to all the lovely comments.. So you can find out just exactly how the story progress..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ria2794
what her life is God. she is in a crazy mess it seems.

You have just seen only half of her life Ria dearest .. Wait till you learn about the rest 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: iamreader
Dear Nita,
I'm extremely sorry for the strings of res I've left in this story. It feels bad when you start some thing new and lack opinions of others.

Swara messed up her life in the worst way. This Cinderella is really dumped inside a large heap of cinders. Laksh is as usuAl the spoilt brat.He really suits this role! 😆 Like Sanky me too liked the fact that Swara didn't used him. Swara dumped lucky for his shitty attitude I guess. I loved when Sanskar said he already knew and asked to say sorry.

Swara and Sanskar both are slowly getting attracted towards each other, even with all the imperfect scenario and mistakes... Swara's last reckless act... not giving a damn to her job and future career probably will be turning point of their... For Sanskar it'll be change of perception and for Swara change of intention and way to perfection.

Lovely chapter.

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Dyuti

Hi dyuti dearest..

Please let us not apologize then I have to spend all day apologizing to you, Lucky, Nyna and Viji for my tardiness.. I love you girls and I know you get me but that still doesn't make me feel any less sad..

Swara is modern day Cinderella.. She is selfish and will bend the rules to her liking.. Yeah laksh is really spoilt in the ff.. I never before in my other works made Laksh anything but annoying and loving.. This time he is going to be quite the game changer for the story..

Well I can't have her using Sanskaar name . Can I 😉.. Our guy is perfect prince after all.. Well you are right.. Things are gonna change between them for sure.. Just how you got to find out when I update.. Until then thanks dear for being so awesome and taking your time to let me know your feedback..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
res - will unres for all - hopefully by end of this week

I love you girl.. As you said let both if us stick together and finish everything we started..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
Awesome loved it ...but something is missing swara will not use someone's name and get job knowingly something is not right after all the righteous and self respect swara I have read this seems to be a change not a pleasant one yet a change

Moumita

Thanks Moumita dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update.. Sorry about changing your perfect Swara into this version.. As I already mentioned Swara is not perfect in this FF.. Years of suffering kind of made her selfish.. It doesn't mean she like what she is doing, she feels terrible about it.. But she wants to survive in the cut throat world as well.. I hope you give this Swara an chance as well

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Lovely update

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: raaz19
Hi nita..
Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late reply and what can I say i was not expecting that twist at all lakhs was swara ex wow 😲 and she used his name to land the job...that are me go well done girl... teaches him right for being so arrogant...

Anyway back to swasan I loved the way you kept the balance of the chapter so true to there characters his ego didn't let him see the bigger picture yet he wanted to help her and her insecurity because of her family made her guilty but still she didn't care of the repercussions...loved that she stood up for herself and for once sanskaar didn't have to dissolve the situation ...

Like how he watched and made his own judgement...loved that you kept his reaction a mystery as I know want to know what they will talk about in his office...excited already

Also did I deduct a sense of jealousy from sanskaar if so I am still waiting to find out how he knew swara from before he took her for a date..?

As always a beautiful update full of suspense and shuttle romance...

Update soon. ..waiting already. ...

Razia

Hi Razia dear,

Please don't say sorry.. Then I have to start my apologies and I don't know when that will end given my delayed response to all my lovely friends.. Yeah laksh is Swara ex.. And she used his name for the job as an payback indeed.. She hates him with passion..

Swara will stand for herself.. While Sanskar is yet to see the big picture.. He will still will not let her get hurt by anything.. Will post soon.. You can find his reaction 😉

How he know Swara.. That won't be revealed now.. But I will throw the clues in the upcoming update.. Will update soon.. And thanks dear for the lovely feedback..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hey nita my doll...
How r u???

Well im little behind...but im enjoying this quick and short updates...alot...not have to wait much...
As..i was waiting for update...badly...little busy in personal life...so replying late...

Coming to update.chapter 3n 4 jointly were fabulous...swara lands in karma n co by crook...but made her place easily with her hardwork...though swasan never crossed path...both had thought lot about each other...swara n maheswari boy had past but hearing swara n laksh names together gives me creeps.literally..i never join their name..as im diehard swasan fan...never liked swa lak...soo here laksh is swara's ex...n she is quite embarressed that sanky now knows this...sanky behaved quite calmly.during whole fiasco..i loved when he lashedout at laksh for calling swara names...total gentlemen i tell u..waiting for swasanscene...
Well as update was short..it left me unsatisfied...my thirst was not quinch properly...soo update next...soon..anxious to know more...

Love u loads
Talia

Hi Talia dearest..

I am good.. I hope you are doing good as well.. You can take your sweet time to read and comment dear.. The fact I know you are still around in IF is the only thing that makes posting here so much fun..

I understand your aversion towards Swara and laksh.. I never did that too.. Though I made them almost get married in btm.. I never let the marriage happen did I. So you can relax.. The only feeling Swara have for laksh right now is pure hate.. And only hate.. But you might get yourself prepared for the time before hate.. Sanskaar will always be an gentleman.. If lashing out at laksh was good wait till you see what he do in next update

Will be updating soon dear.. Let hope you like it.. Thanks dear for your lovely feedback..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: showrav24
Hello Nita dear
How are you buddy hope everything is fine. I assume u sad cuz Nadal lost again but what can u do lok like Federer is his pick form end of his career he playing some good tennis since AO.
what can I say about update u may be know my take on this.
just one thing I say now swara is in totally mess how she overcome it that's the point let see.
like sanskar how he stand for swara despite disliking her or hate her.
Update soon dear
Bye
Take care

Hi showrav..

I am good.. Yeah was sad with Rafa loss.. Very sad.. But now I am okay with that..

I hope you like the update.. I really do.. Yeah Swara is in an mess and it will get bigger from this point onwards.. You might think it won't be worse from now onwards but wait till you read the next update..

Sanskaar don't hate or dislike Swara.. He just have set of opinions about her that kind of make him not trust her.. Going to update soon.. Will send you the PM when I do..

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