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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter:8 It's 7:00pm and everyone in the office is leaving...Kavya comes to Swara to take her with her but Swara tells her that she can't leave right now. As well as Sanskar is still working...she is scared that Sanskar will yell at her again. Kavya is worried that she won't be able to get home since she doesn't know the way but Swara assures her that she'll be fine. Sanskar comes into the room...playing with his cellphone and asks for the Project file...Swara presents it to him...it seems as if he shocked at that .Sanskar keeps staring at her face and Swara is uncaring...to get back at her he says don't repeat what I already told you. He snatches the file and leaves...while Swara says that he doesn't care about anyone!

Swara looks at the time and one hour has passed already...she is scared that it is 8 already and Sanskar is still working. She decides she'll work from home...

Sanskar starts to pack up and there is a phone call...its Sanskar Mom Annapurna scolds Sanskar that why did he refuse to pick up his call...Sanskar is confused. He walks into Swara room in anger and notices that she has fallen asleep... and then he goes into a dreamy state He walks up to her to room but obviously stops himself from doing so. He taps the desk to wake her up but she doesn't budge. He even calls out to her...and then is about to tap her on the shoulder but is unsure ...though he does it anyways. He yells Swara and she wake up with a startle...almost hugging him. Staring contest again!

Sanskar snaps out of it and asks if there was a call for him...she replies yes...he asks why didn't she give him the call...she replies because you said so...Sanskar turns around Sanskar is angry that the call was from my house...Swara replies well if you had told me that to transfer every call from home then I would have...he says should I give you a list of whose call is more important...Swara replies why not!

Swara is Maha pissed that he just yells at her...instead of appreciating her! she just rants on about him while Sanskar says that this girl will drive me insane but then aww he is worried about how she will get home so late at night. Was she sitting there so late for me? But reasons that if there was someone else that person would have waited as well. Swara is worried about getting home...she wants to go ask Sanskar about the taxi stand but concludes that he'll just yell at her. I'll go on my own!

Swara is on the road worried about getting a taxi since its way too late...some idiots come on the bike...obviously drunk out of their wits! They stop upon seeing her...and then talks rubbish with her ...they want to drop her home. Swara is scared...

Sanskar gets out of the car give one big Punch to guy and tells them to get lost for their own good. Sanskar went to Swara and offers her to drop her home She refuses, he says you will not get taxi this late, she says do not worry, but he Just grabs her arm when she starts walking, she starts yelling at him to leave her of course Sanskar does not leave her and kind of pushes in the car and asks for her address she gives back him nicely saying that he is boss in office so he better not give order to her after office hours. He tells her to stop and not to talk when she does not know what to say. He goes that my mom is sick she has called and you did not even give me her call. She is waiting for me whole day and here I'm hell bent to drop you home do not know why so do not give me attitude. He himself and Swara both are shocked and both Shared Eye Locked.

Precap: Swara comes to say sorry to Sanskar with coffee and then they struggle with it since she wants to go make a new one...and the coffee ends up on Some Important Document Sanskar is highly pissed! Randhir Arrived in Mumbai and Says Your Randhir have Come Swara. While giving Villainous Smile.

Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey yasmin...
Read few updated together...they were good..but plzz take story little slow..ur going very fast...im enjoying swasan nokh jhok...alot

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update...
Swasan was cute
Eagerly waiting for your next update..
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter:9

The episode starts with Sanskar allowing Swara inside. She quickly places the coffee on his desk and stirs it - thinking to herself that after he drinks the coffee, he'll be happy. He picks it up and takes a sip - before spitting it out immediately and wiping his mouth with a tissue

Sanskar asks Swara what this drink is. Swara sniffs it and says its coffee... does it taste more like tea? He asks her if she knows how to make coffee. Swara innocently replies yes, there are milk, coffee and sugar. Sanskar wonders how much sugar she put in and Swara replies five cubes. He asks if the sugar had run out. Swara starts tearing up and stammers before saying that if he finds too sweet, she'll make him a new one.

She reaches for the cup, but Sanskar refuses to let go, and in the struggle while she tells him she was trying to say sorry, the coffee spills on Some Important Papers. Swara looks on in shock, and Sanskar turns to her with a lot of anger. Swara starts saying how all she came to do was to say sorry because of how much she said the night before, and his Mom was sick as well. Sanskar softens towards her... and Swara tells him to give her his shirt, she'll clean it, and she'll clean his papers as well.

She goes to unbutton his vest and Sanskar holds her wrists... and they share an intense eye lock. He lets go of her hands, and she fixes her dupatta. Sanskar realizes what he's doing, closes his eyes and tells Swara to go away before he really loses it. Swara again says she wanted to say sorry to him for everything... but Sanskar wants her out immediately. Swara swears that all she wanted to do was say sorry, and Sanskar eyes widen.

He snatches the paper off her, and walks out, leaving Swara standing there in shock.

Sasha and Tasha are walking downstairs with coffee in their hands. Tasha says it looks like the 'behnji' type secretary is gone! Sasha smiles, and says that it was an unnecessary try as Swara is a walking, talking disaster queen. Tasha calls her a silly girl and they giggle.

Back in Swara office, Swara wonders how she thinks one thing, but something else happens. She then sits up and says Sanskar is such a demon - he won't even let her say sorry. Just then a towel drops onto her desk, and Sasha tells her that if Swara made a mess, she needs to clean it up. Sasha also tells Tasha to clean out Swara desk while Swara is cleaning, because it's obvious Swara won't stay here now.

Swara stop Tasha, and says thank you... But she isn't leaving this job, not until Sanskar throws her out. She excuses herself to clean Sanskar desk.

Sasha cannot believe Swara just gave her attitude, and that Tasha stop clearing out Swara desk! Tasha runs after Sasha.

Sanskar is in a conference room, and complains that in half an hour, he's got clients coming, and his shirt is dirty. This girl will drive him up the wall. And on top of it, the papers are ruined which means now he has to get new ones.

At the Pratap building, Annapurna has just walked inside, and everyone greets her. She walks into Sanskar office, where Swara is standing there muttering about Sanskar. She notices Annapurna and looks up. Annapurna mentions that she came to meet Sanskar. Swara introduces herself and Annapurna replies she's Annapurna Singh. Swara innocently asks if Annapurna has an appointment. Annapurna looks a bit shocked but says she called reception.

Swara gets worried that Annapurna doesn't have an appointment, and starts going on "Please do one thing, and wait outside. If sir finds you here, he'll get very angry. He doesn't like it if someone comes into his office without permission. And anyway, because of me, he's in a very bad mood. But you know, I've never seen him in a good mood. But please, wait outside. (Here Annapurna asks if Sanskar really is an angry man) Please don't ask ma'am. Anger sits on his nose, it doesn't matter if you're young or old, and he takes no notice. I mean, you tell me, you've called in to say you're coming, you come here to wait, and he's still not here. He doesn't even care! This is why I'm telling you to wait in my office, you can't trust this man. God knows, he says anything whenever he likes. In fact, since I've known this person, all he does is lecture!"

Annapurna says that she believes Sanskar is definitely wicked, and Swara says not only is he wicked, he's a devil. She tells Annapurna that all the girls call Sanskar DD - 'dhak, dhak'. But Swara thinks that 'Dust Danav' suits him better. Annapurna agrees, and says she's noticed his attitude. Swara says Sanskar always goes on about how tolerating torture and humiliation is wrong but the fact that Annapurna is still waiting is also wrong. Swara softens and repeats for Annapurna to sit in her cabin as Swara looks for him. Swara walks away, and Annapurna comments 'Interesting'.

Precap: Sanskar calls Swara into his office for dictation. Sanskar tells Swara that in his office his employees do what they are allocated to do and do not step on some other person's toes...that's why there has never been any mistake in his office...He tells her that she is just a secretary here...Today, for the first time, a client has come to his office and shouted at him...and that's all because of her...Swara starts crying and defends herself, that it wasn't her mistake...She took copies of the file, he had handed to her...Sanskar tells her not to make excuses...He would not consider her mistakes as his mistakes...She makes mistakes and not he...He leaves from there leaving Swara dejected...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update..but yasmin
i feel im reading GEET or Is pyar ko kya naam doon story...same to same...plzzz change something in it..

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update...
The conversation between Swara and Annapoorna was interesting...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter: 10

Kavya and Swara are sitting near the Beach and Kavya Says Past is Part of Life Which Never Stops following Wherever You Go Kavya Says She is Happy that You Decided to Move on in life.

Swara Says Right since the Time I am Away from My Family I felt that Randhir might Hurt but Very Soon I will Call Them Here and inform them everything about my Whereabouts. But For me Each and Every moment with Randhir is like a hell I am Very Glad that Nidhi Have Help me a lot.

Randhir sends Priya to the mental asylum and sends Unniyal to gather information from the maid. He talks to Swara photo and says that very soon Swara will be back. There will be love again in this house. He leaves to meet Nidhi.

Sanskar sees an upset Swara sitting alone and decides to bring a smile on her face. Both he and Some Little kids strike a deal and Kids takes Swara to play with him. He runs around the bench and Swara slowly follows him. Sanskar indirectly taunts Swara by telling Kids to slow down as Swara can't run fast. Swara gets annoyed and runs faster. Both of them are running and Sanskar looks lovingly at them. Finally Swara catches one of the Kids and hugs him.

Randhir is driving. He receives a call from Unniyal who says that Swara is alive and the maid saw her boarding a bus to Mumbai. Randhir heads to meet Nidhi. Lawyer Nidhi has returned home and is shocked to see a teddy bear on the couch. She gets a little scared and tries to leave but Randhir greets her in the car. He ties Nidhi hands and a rope around her neck from the ceiling. She is supporting herself on the chair. *If it moves she'll die* Randhir asks her about Swara but Nidhi says Swara is in Chennai. Randhir threatens her to speak the truth or else he'll push the chair.

Swara remembers her family and is in tears. Sanskar gives her a phone and tells her to speak to her family but Swara refuses. However Sanskar leaves the phone beside her. After sometime Swara thanks Sanskar who is carrying a sleepy One Little Boy Aryan. Sanskar denies but Swara says she knows that he bought her here.

Precap: Randhir is sitting on the bed. Swara steps in and Randhir looks at her. Swara asks why he has come here. The Swara whom he wants to take back is dead. You have killed Swara. Randhir just stares at her. He gets up and walks ahead to touch her.

*Sorry for the Short Update As i am not keeping well and I have Fever and cold besides all this i have kept my promise. Sorry if you think its fast paced story. Will Continue Soon the next part

Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great plot di... Enjoyed all the parts in 1 go

Update soon

Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yasmin...
Interesting update dear...

I agree story is fast paced..but i liked this part...swara was upset...nsanky made her smile..but he was angry at her na????? Story took few weeks leap or something...randhir had finally found out about swaran want to confirm through nidhi...im worried he would kill her...precap seems good..waiting for next..

Talia
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A/N - Swara is now staying with Sanskar as due to Kavya sister behaviour Swara left the house and so now she is staying at Sanskar house at the outhouse and Sanskar and Swara are now become friends and he start to like her company.

Chapter:11

Randhir
searching Audio Records in Nidhi Computer and Succeed in finding Swara number.
He throws a teddy bear at Unniyal and Says he has traced her. Unniyal gets
excited and Askes where she is at the moment. Randhir calls on that number,
Sanskar asks his friend to pick up the phone. His Friend firstly stares at the
phone and then brings it to Sanskar. He Receive the Call, Randhir Says Hello in
a very impatient tone. Sanskar replies to it in arrogant manner, Randhir says
he wants to speak to Swara. Sanskar says he should check the number once again
as he don't have any idea about it. As Sanskar about to cut the Call. Randhir
yells at him, but Sanskar asks him to Stay in his limits otherwise you will be
in great trouble. For Messing up with him. Randhir throws his headphones and
wonders about the guy he was talking to, He says he would show drag him to the
hell if he ever get a chance to meet that guy. He asks Unniyal to follow him.
Unniyal asks what to do with Nidhi. Randhir ask Unniyal to tie the Chair to the
door with the rope and jump off the window.


Sanskar
in his Cabin (Point of View)


Till
yesterday everything was fine I was happy and lead a joyful life... but after
seeing her everything changed. Why I am thinking so much about her? No I can't
think that she is Just a Secretary. Why I am Thinking So much for Her? Every
time I see her I don't why I feel attractive towards her. Is it love? Whatever
it is she deserves more happiness I need to Enquire about her Past? I will give
her more happiness and Respect which she needed and this is my vow to myself.


Randhir is driving and talking to himself about how they will be together in Menali. he sees her and decides to meet her. as he is about to scream "Swara " he sees swara bump into Sanskar. Sanskar grabs a hold of her hand. Randhir devastated, says "how could you Swara?" he gets angry and starts running towards the couple (in a terminator style) and ends up colliding into a car. Swara and Sanskar are about to go towards theunconscious Randhir but Aryan runs towards some toys. a new character, who hit Randhir takes Randhir to her house. they show Randhir being bandaged


Swara is standing in Randhir room. Sanskar enters and sees Swara trembling. He tells her that he knows she cannot see anyone in pain. Komal tells Swara to take care of Randhir as she has to leave due to an emergency in the hospital. Swara hesitates but agrees. She goes upstairs and sits outside his room.


Swara falls asleep only to wake up due to the thundering sound. She hears some sound (bottle of medicine falling down) and goes in to check Randhir . Swara slowly walks towards the bed. Randhir is sleeping. Swara turns to go back but Randhir holds her hand and says "Jaan". Swara is shocked. She somehow manages to free herself as Randhir was sleepy and runs away from the Mansion.

Randhir holds a gun and threatens family. He calls out to Swara . Tanisha and Grandma say that there is no Swara in the house but Randhir refuses to listen. He says he wants her at any cost or else he'll kill Aryan . Sanskar and Komal also come home. Randhir tells them that the girl who stays in this house is his wife Swara . All are shocked. Randhir points the gun towards Aryan and fires.

Scene shifts to Swara who is all drenched. Swara realises thats its only her dream. She remembers all the people who helped her become brave and face her fear- Geeta, Nidhi and Sanskar Swara thinks so many people helped her. She just cant back out like that. She has to overcome her fear, for her safety as well as for others. Swara goes back to the Mansion, straight to Randhir room.


Randhir is sitting on the bed. Swara steps in and Randhir looks at her. Swara asks why he has come here. The Swara whom he wants to take back is dead. You have killed Swara Randhir just stares at her. He gets up and walks ahead to touch her.


Precap:Sanskar
comes to know Something Related to Swara Past.


Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago

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