Dil Se Di Dua... saubhagyavati Bhav ? Chapter:13 :pg:6

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Introduction:-


The Story focused on struggle of a woman to save herself
from her obsessive, abusive husband.


Characters:-


Swara Randhir Singhania:
Swara is one regular girl with small dreams and getting happiness in
small small things. She dreams of having prince charming and thought she found
one but soon her world turns upside down. She becomes victim of domestic
violence with her over possessive husband punishing her for every mere thing.
She silently endures everything in hope of changing Randhir and not to let anything
happen to her family.


Randhir Singhania played by Karan Singh Grover: Randhir is a complex character. He is over
possessive about his wife and has grown up in an environment wherein he was
taught what was right and what was wrong. He had a deprived childhood which has
lead him to be a paranoid human being.


Sanskar Pratap Singh: Sanskar is one fearless young lad
whose actions are on reactions of his heart. Not just name but his personality
is synonymous to Lord Ram as well, who was savior for many, same way he is a
savior for many though his ways can be different given account to his intensity
and angst but all he wants is no injustice with anyone but he does not like
fighting for them, he likes making them capable to fight for themselves. He
does not speak much as his actions does the job and is often being
misinterpreted for the same. His fearless attitudes, strong will, passion to
set everything right and for that going to any limits is what sets him apart
from the crowd.


Geeta Singhania played by Zahida Praveen: She is Randhir mother.
She loves her son very much but did not get the opportunity to shower her love
on him as her son was taken away from her in his childhood by her husband. And
like Swara she too was a victim of domestic violence.


Uma Joshi Played by Sonica Handa: She is Swara Mother

Ram Joshi Played by Amar Sharma - He is Swara Father


Parvati Joshi Played by Alka Kausal: She is Swara Dadi. An
intelligent old woman who understand all Randhir antics and tries to save her
from him.


Plot:


This Is Story about
the struggle of Swara who is faced with any girl's worst fears - an over-possessive
and abusive husband, Randhir To the outside world, Randhir is suave and
charming, at home he is a different man. Randhir, who has had an abusive childhood,
is irrationally dominating while being sweet, polite and nice. While everyone
sees Randhir as the perfect husband, it is only Swara who knows and deals with
the manipulative and irrational side of him. Will Swara be able to bear Randhir
atrocities or will she be able to find a way out of her pain?

Chapter : 1 updated pg:1 down Chapter :2 updated pg:2 Chapter :3 updated pg:2 Chapter :4 updated pg:3 Chapter :5 updated pg:3 Chapter :6 updated pg:3 Chapter :7 updated pg:4 Chapter :8 updated pg:4 Chapter :9 updated pg:4 Chapter :10 updated pg:5 Chapter :11 updated pg:5 Chapter :12 updated pg:6 Chapter :13 - Teaser Updated pg:6




Chapter:13 -Updated pg:6
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice concept, yasmin. Is there Swasan love story too. I would be double happy. Your account got banned naa, then how did you post? Hope you don't mind answering this question.
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Originally posted by: Nivijo

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc6600">Nice concept, yasmin. Is there Swasan love story too. I would be double happy. Your account got banned naa, then how did you post? Hope you don't mind answering this question.</font>

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Yes I got banned but I talk to administer with it and they help me with it and yes it have Swasan story too
Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yasmin...dear
Great concept...i have seen a serial on this topic..it was good.but the cvs ruined the story afterwards...

Hoping u handle this story well...it could be extra ordinary if handled correctly.all the best..excited..fingers crossed...waiting for this swasan journey...

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Talia
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Chapter:1



the Episode starts with a woman running barefoot in some isolated place...4 men running after her...the girl is running on a bridge when a white Mercedes stops infrontof her...a guy comes out of the car n walks upto the girl...the men who were running after her go back...the guy is a strange person who tell the women is that why she jogging in the night

the girl's name is Swara and her husband's name is randhir


they both reach home...randhir opens the door of the car for Swara ...as she puts her foot on the grass it hurts...so randhir carries her in his arms...he puts her on the sofa and tells her that he is getting medicine for her...


he plays a music cd of the song "humein tumse pyar kitna yeh hum nahi jaante"..


he goes to the kitchen...nothing has been cooked for dinner...so he prepares dinner for himself...he takes a large cooking spoon n puts on the gas stove...he is having his dinner alone...in the back we see Swara hands n legs tied up with a rope n her mouth tied with a cloth...Swara is pleading to randhir to let her free...


he takes the hot spoon and says its the medicine n touches it with Swara feet...
n tells her why does she force him to do this..


in the morning Swara is sleeping with her hands n legs tied up...randhir comes with breakfast n wakes her up...


she is all frightened...he opens the her hands n legs n applies medicine on her wounds...n forcefully makes her promise not to leave him...he tells Swara to freshen up


Swara has flashbacks of how she liked him from the day she saw his photo n what all dreams she had about her husband


Swara comes out...randhir asks why did she take 10 mins to come out..she should have been out in 7 mins...


he gives her tea n asks her to finish the breakfast...he tells that he is going for a meeting n is locking the house from outside...


he locks the house n warns the guards not to let anyone in n not let Swara come out...


Swara all alone in house...sitting by the window...


precap: Swara n Randhir suhaag raat...suddenly Swara notices a cockroach on her dress n screams...Randhir takes the cockroah in his hand n starts torturing him
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This randhir is too cruel,isn't he? Such a disgusting man. Koi apne biwi ke pairon ko garam spoon se jalata hai kya. Please introduce sanskar soon. Want to see him doing band-baaja of this randhir 😆. Update soon.
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Nice update yasmin..

Swara was running away from randhir but he caught her..felt bad for her...he is abusive n possessive person...waiting to know more...want tosee how swara escapes???

Talia
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It resembles a story if i am nt wrong bt i hate such ppl who takes sadistic pleasure by torturing others...
Looking forward to it
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Chapter:2

Swara thinking about the panditji was saying that hers and Randhir horoscopes match really really well, when Randhir first came to her house with the rishta.

Flashback:

Swara Dadi called her dad into the kitchen, and he praised Randhir , saying that Swara luck has now really changed. Even though he's really rich and well off, he's really a good man at heart. Dadi is still really hesitant, and Randhir himself then comes and reassures them, saying that he's rich in terms of wealth, but he's also very poor when it comes to relationships. I don't have a grandma or two loving parents, and I know that by marrying Swara , then I'll gain these relationships as well. And then, folding his hands, he leaves the room.

End Flashback

Swara in the kitchen, thinking if only they had listened to Dadi that day.

Flashback:

A car that's completely decorated stops in front of house, and Randhir brings a smiling and really happy bride home all lovingly. He introduces her to everyone, including the dog Hitler, who's to take care of her when he's not home.

Swara enters the home for the first time, clearly very happy, and she then asks Randhir if no one else lives there, and he says no, but now I have everything I want, and she becomes a blushing bride. He carries her in his hands, and tells her if it was upto him he wouldn't even let her put her feet on the floor.

End Flashback:

Swara perched on a windowsill, as she looks down at her feet and how he burned them yesterday.

Right then, she sees one of the watchmen and calls out to him, asking him if he can do her a favor. He tells her not to ask him to open the door and shows his broken hand, because Swara tried to run away and Randhir punished him. Swara pleads with him to please giverher his mobile phone, and he runs away, saying that if the sir found out, he would kill her. She's crying, knocking on the window desperately, pleading with him.

Swara once again decides she won't live there anymore, and as she desperately tries to find a way out, she finds that all the doors are locked and the windows are all barred.

She thinks that maybe she can find the keys to one of the doors in his dresser, and takes out all of his clothes as she searches, but she can't find anything. And she sits on the bed crying, wondering how she can talk to her parents, tell them the state of her living at the moment. She holds her wedding outfit, and thinks back to her wedding night.

Flashback:
He sits her on the bed, and asks her if she's happy, and promises her that he'll keep her happy for the rest of her life. And she stops him and says that he's pretty perfect. He tells her that many want to fall in love and then get married, but me, I've always wanted to get married and then fall in love.

You see a cockroach crawling up her outfit, and she screams as soon as she realizes, jumping away from the bed and yelling at him to take it away. He's about to kill it and she tells him not to, and he says that that cockroach disturbed his Suhaag Raath, and tries to find ways to hurt it, and then drops it in the glass of milk.
Swara staring at him, stunned, as he watches the cockroach struggle in the glass of milk, and watches him drinking that same mllk, along with the cockroach. Swara almost ready to puke and she faints right then and there.
End of Flashback
Swara sees one of the watchmen giving her a phone to call her parents, and he tells her that he has a daughter at home, and quickly tells her to call. Swara hurries and calls her parents, and is crying on the phone to her Dadi but right then, she turns around to see Randhir standing there, looking murderously angry.

Precap: Randhir gets Swara ready to meet her parents, and her mom asks her if she's happy.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear yasmin,
I really felt bad for swara. But didn't swara's parents know about randhir. Or they simply wanted to marry their daughter off to someone. Happy to know that there's at least one person who cares for swara. Looking forward for the next update.
Love,
Nivi

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