Dil Se Di Dua... saubhagyavati Bhav ? Chapter:13 :pg:6 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Going good Yasmin
Enjoyed the updates
Get well soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The story is a bit fast paced, for me at least. But it's going good. Pls try to slow down the pace. Let us savour each scene. I don't mind the updates being short but don't make the story a fast paced one.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter: 12

Confess room:

Sanskar sitting and wondering why still the detective not came yet. He is pacing here and there and suddenly he hears the knock at the door the detective enters and conversation between Sanskar and detective:-

Sahil: Sir I have collected a lot of information regarding the Person you asked me to do! But sir not to be mined why you want to enquire it?

Sanskar: That's none of your business! Just Say me what information you have!

Sahil: Her full Name is Swara Randhir Singhania, Age 23 yrs. old, She is married one of the top business man at Manali, Her Husband is very much abusive with Her, She try to told everything to her Parents but Her Parents did not listen to her Once, So One Day She Ran Away from the house with the help of Nidhi whose Swara Best friend and lawyer. Well that's all information I have about her.

Sanskar: Could not believe but he control his emotions and Gave money to Detective Sahil and send him off.

After Detective Went Sanskar Was shocked and could not believe what Detective Told and doesn't how to react he think Swara Really Suffered a lot. He decided to feel color of Love, happiness in her life again. And about Randhir Singhania He decided he won't spare him. He wills Make Randhir Punish for Every Deeds and Pain that Cause Swara.

Swara Cabin:

Swara has little Smile on Her Face and She Started See Sanskar Every Where and Suddenly it getting Disappearing Swara Thinks Why I am feeling sudden kind of happiness in my heart? What kind of Feeling it is? This can't be love! But Every time I See Sanskar I feel like I am losing my heart for him. Why, is it Love? She wrote a diary about it.

Swara is wrote that how changed after coming to Mumbai. How she started feeling happy all of a sudden, even mirror says to her that she wasn't like this before. She asks what I should call this. Season's magic or something else? She says yes, I have fallen in love with Sanskar ji and I feel like shouting and tell everyone that I am in love but I can't do this now. I will have to share these feelings with diary's blank pages only for now'. Until I tell Sanskar about my past. But Fears Remain the Same Will He Accepts me with my Past? And Swara Felt little Sad...

Precap: - Twist... Think what it could be?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Teaser of chapter: 13 (dill se di Dua)

A girl drawing picture of Sanskar and coloring it and Saying Dear papa I miss you so much mom used to say about you. Another lady came and that girl smiles looking at that lady while saying will you take me to my papa. And Lady says yes I will take you to your papa and in mind says A Bigger Revenge to complete as Girl hugs that lady. Ragini is shown and she smirk and tell Your Bad time have come MR. Sanskar Pratap Singh.

Who is this Ragini and why Does she wants to Take Revenge from Sanskar will Swara comes to know about this and who is this girl what is the Relationship with Sanskar? Do stay tune for this exciting twist.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey yasmin...
I have bookmarked this post for so long...wow this teaser is amazing...raging came to take revenge from sanky...it means sanky also had bad past with ragini...it made me intriguied..waiting for more..

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well Ramadan are about to start..I'm not sure if I would be regular but will try my best..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter:13

Randhir tells Swara to prepare something for him as he is hungry. He offers to help her in the kitchen On entering the kitchen, Randhir tells Swara that he'd like to have Aloo paneer ki sabzi (for those who dont know, Paneer is Cottage cheese) *Randhir fav dish* Swara agrees and searches the refrigerator. Randhir sits right behind her, slowly he tries to get close to her. Swara feels slightly uncomfortable. Later, she starts cutting onions. Randhir attention is focussed entirely on Swara . He tells Swara that he cant see any tears. Swara looks at him so Randhir elaborates, normally people tend to have tears in their eyes while cutting onions. Swara tells that she is used to it.

Swara serves Randhir and immediately leaves for Her room Randhir gets angry and removes the letter that Swara was hiding. Flashback: Randhir notices the letter on the ground. Swara is busy on the phone. He replaces the letter with a blank paper.

Swara decides to tear the letter. However, she finds that its a blank paper. Swara understands Randhir trick. Back in Randhir room, Sexy as usual irritates Randhir . Randhir holds himself responsible for bringing Priya home and making her Swara . He thinks that Swara is angry. He further says that NO ONE can replace Swara and the person who'll enter his palace will ONLY BE Swara . Both of them have their own boy talk and Randhir yells aloud. Swara is shocked. She is scared but eventually musters courage to face him.

Swara stands in Randhir room. Randhir greets her in his usual style: Swara ... I am Come!! Swara just stands there frozen. Randhir hugs her from behind and tells that he missed her alot. Not a single day went when he did not think about her. Swara just stares at him.

Randhir says he did memory loss drama just to get her back and start to kiss Swara. Swara says enough of your obsession and everything I am not your Swara any more. Randhir says I don't know how much you will become mean after separating from me but now you have to come with me and marry me please don't say No because if you say no this family will have to suffer because of you.

Swara says I will do as you say but please don't do anything to this family. Randhir went from there but Swara thinks she have to make sure to Randhir that she has been agreed to do anything what he says. And she have to escape here and also tell the whole truth to Sanskar.BR]
Precape: Randhir is happy that Finally Swara is coming to him and also asked unniyal to keep eyes on Swara. Other hand Swara tell whole truth to Sanskar and Sanskar listen quietly..

P.S I know I am posting it after long time do comment when time permits and hit like button if you like




Edited by Swasain - 8 years ago

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