Thou art flame, my love : Chapter 6; P-20

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting..

Thanks for your response. 😊

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Res for 3

Unres

Again an interesting chapter - the past shows the growing closeness (which at that point only Laksh seems to have realised) with Sanskaar's irritation and Swara being quite unaware of the emotions she is causing in Sanskaar. And that subtle humour about her Scooty (very understandable, I loved my bike a lot too, though now that I have a car, I have shifted my loyalties😳😳😳)

Then we cut to the painful present where there appears to be a faint glimmer of hope. It is easier to say that scars prove that we have fought battles and survived, but often the scars are also a brutal reminder of the losses we have undergone.

Sanskaar indeed understands this, more than anyone else that Swara's heart, mind and sould need more healing that her body(which would heal, on its own). And that is exactly what Sahil fails to understand, by hurting Swara he has wounded Sanskaar - and a wounded raging tiger is a sight to be feared, not to be taunted.

Hope he gets a taste of his own medicine, soon.

love,

Nyna

PS: I am not sure if you will believe this, but in my draft chapters (yet to be posted) I have Sanskaar say similar lines, tum meri Aadat ho, aur Zaroorat bhi, a little differently. Now you have gone and used them here,😕😕😕 maybe I will still use them

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Nupur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Truth to be told, Sahil is behaving like an overconfident idiot! He is underestimating Sanskaar Maheshwari & Sanskaar's love for his Swara, and making more mistakes! He already dig his grave by assaulting & throwing acid on Swara that Sanskaar will rip him into tiniest pieces bt now he will face more hell and I'm so waiting for that!

If I could, I would have killed that moron with my bare hands!
Bt no worries, Sanskaar is there to do this noble thing!

Poor Swara! She is so broken, both physically & mentally!
Sanskaar don't care about her physical appearance bcoz he loves her so much!
Bt he will have a difficult time to heal her mentally & mend her soul.
Bt I'm sure his love will heal her!

Awesome update, like always Dyuti :)
Both past & present is so beautiful & balanced! Enjoyed both phases of SwaSan!

Love,
~ Nupur

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shruti_pakki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

res for chapter 3...I will unres all my posts of Z vs T and of this chapter on wednesday...I have my last paper that day

with love

~Shruti

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Truth to be told, Sahil is behaving like an overconfident idiot! He is underestimating Sanskaar Maheshwari & Sanskaar's love for his Swara, and making more mistakes! He already dig his grave by assaulting & throwing acid on Swara that Sanskaar will rip him into tiniest pieces bt now he will face more hell and I'm so waiting for that!

If I could, I would have killed that moron with my bare hands!
Bt no worries, Sanskaar is there to do this noble thing!

Poor Swara! She is so broken, both physically & mentally!
Sanskaar don't care about her physical appearance bcoz he loves her so much!
Bt he will have a difficult time to heal her mentally & mend her soul.
Bt I'm sure his love will heal her!

Awesome update, like always Dyuti :)
Both past & present is so beautiful & balanced! Enjoyed both phases of SwaSan!

Love,
~ Nupur

Dearest Nupur,
Sincerest apologies for my delayed reply. Your detailed comment made me very happy but I was busy in editing the typos... You mirrored my thoughts about Sahil, Sanskar and Swara. Sahil is reckless because he thinks he doesn't have to lose anything. Whereas Swasan's perfect universe has turned upside down all of a sudden.Two pure souls like them couldn't probably even think a person would do such a vicious crime. So they're shaken up. Soon the tables will turn again.

Thanks for your warm response and compliments. 😳
Love,
Dyuti

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago

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kritz4ever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Very emotional update

Love to see sahils condition when he gets what he deserves

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Very emotional update
Love to see sahils condition when he gets what he deserves

Yeah Sahil will surely get punishment he deserves. I hope faint hearted readers will be able to handle it.
Thanks for your kind response.
Love,
Dyuti

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chemgirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

God...read all the parts together...awesome story...so touching...i am crying right now...way to go... waiting for the next update

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: chemgirl
God...read all the parts together...awesome story...so touching...i am crying right now...way to go... waiting for the next update

Aww dear, so sorry for making you cry... But as a writer I'm happy... Till now few writers have made me cry... I started here as a thriller writer and emotions weren't my cup of tea...

I tried to make you smile by giving their beautiful past. If you feel too down read the past portion again.

Love,
Dyuti