Thou art flame, my love : Chapter 6; P-20

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Dear friends,

I know currently I'm kind of struggling with "Zephyr vs Tempest" and the forum is somehow empty. But the idea of an SS/ few shots came to me this morning. I couldn't help but penned it down. I only wrote the Prologue. Please help me to decide should I continue it or drop the idea? If you think I should continue, I'll post it between my ZvT updates.

Dyuti

PROLOGUE : BELOW

1. First time I ever saw your face : Page 5

2.When you're looking like that: page 10

3. Cutie Pie: Page 13

4. Don't go home without me -Page 16

5 . Everything I do (I do it for you)

6.Crazy little things called love- Page 20

Edited by Anahita_Leve - 7 years ago

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi dyuti

I have started reading zv/s T

Liking it a lot

Pls do post this one as well egar to read

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

PROLOGUE

" Mr Maheshwari, the patient has refused to meet you all, especially you. She is already in a vulnerable condition, both physically and mentally. We can't give her more stress!I think you should leave." Doctor looked at the anxious young man, who was desperate to see the patient.

"How can you suggest such a ridiculous idea, doctor? How can I leave her here?" He was sad and furious at the same time. His close friends and family were present. They too tried to convince him.

" I told you before, you should leave her. See? She too knows you two can't be together anymore! She is not fit for you buddy!"

" ROHAN! Mind your language! Say one more rubbish about her and I'll not hesitate to break our 20 years' friendship."

" What wrong he said, devar ji? She was your fiance and I know that, but after what had happened with her, marriage with her means destroying your life."

" Bhabi! How could you say that? You all know how and why it happened. How much she is suffering? Still... "

" BetaI know she is not even at fault here. She is as innocent as a flower. But how can you too embrace that same misfortune she's bearing now for the lifetime? "

"She is not any misfortune Ma! I'll be lucky to hold her hand all my life! She is as precious as she was before. She is broken and... hurt! I won't leave that animal who has hurt her in such despicable way!"He vowed.

He entered the cabin pushing everyone out of the way.
" Swara, you can't avoid me this way! I love you damn it! You can't stay away from your future husband!" He pleaded

"Go away Sanskar! I can't marry you now! You don't deserve a wife like me! I can't even face you anymore!" she covered her face with the bed sheet and wailed incessantly.

Sanskar eyes too had tears. His heart ached seeing the condition of his beloved. At the same time he had rage that he never felt before! His jaw hardened, fists were so tight that the knuckles turned white, venomous words came through his clenched teeth, " You bloody b*****d!!! I'llmake you suffer! You have to pay for every drop of tears my Shona is shedding now! I'll make sure you'll feel the pain million folds than her! You'll see the worst of Sanskar Maheshwari, Mr Sahil Sengupta!"

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

Dyuti di...it's awesome...😳

Looks like she has been harassed badly😔 make him pay😡

Tani

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kojagorimalik

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Posted: 8 years ago

Woah dyuti dii loved the prologue oops sanky in angry young man Avatar and Sahil is in deeeppp trouble...
Awesome
Mind blowing
Moumita

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: elsanna
Dyuti di...it's awesome...😳
Looks like she has been harassed badly😔make him pay😡

Tani

Dear Tani,
I'll reveal exactly what happened to her in later chapter. ( if I get chance to continue that means If I have enough positive response. Already I'm struggling with ZvT. I think a change is needed when you write a longer story. This project may be my getaway.)

Thanks for your response

Love you a loads
Dyuti

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1
Hi dyuti
I have started reading zv/s T
Liking it a lot
Pls do post this one as well egar to read

Let me know how's the Prologue

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
Woah dyuti dii loved the prologue oops sanky in angry young man Avatar and Sahil is in deeeppp trouble...
Awesome
Mind blowing
Moumita

Baccha,
This is not going to be happy happy, Our Swasan will remain sad for a long time. But of course Sahil would get a good pitai.

Love,
Dyuti di

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

Dear Dyuti,

Haha major fanfiction crush alert!!! I liked the tone it sets. A woman who lost everything except a man who is now burning in the darkest pit of revenge. There is always a charm in bitter prologues even though they make you wince once in a while at the same time they make you look forward for some sharp edged progress too.

Hopefully waiting to read further. I liked the way you set the backdrop. Continue soon.

Love,

Sakura