Thou art flame, my love : Chapter 6; P-20 - Page 12

Its really so emtional and tooo good dear

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res - and welcome to India. Enjoy your vacation.

Nynu dear,
This is why for the first time I've a bunch of res to unres. I was frantically packing and writing. Another secret is i've updated 1st chapter of Caged in wattpad ( you have read prologue). So missed your Spectrum, Lucky's Untamed , Nita's ACS and the list goes on and on! Hope to catch up on them and some ne ones after getting back!

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

Dyuti😃

Mindblowing update👏 Bike ride with cutie pie was😳

Sahil- creepo🤢The rest Swara- Sanskaar scene was so emotional😭Our Sanskaar is such a gem⭐️

Happy Vacation !!

Sandy Dear,
Frankly as a writer I'm enjoying writing the present parts. Because they were more challenging, more demanding. I've relieved that you loved thme. I thought this chapter is too dark for a romantic fiction.

Love,
Dyuti

P.s I made you a regular comment maker, right? 😊 😃 and thanks for wishes

Originally posted by: Sushma98999

Its really so emtional and tooo good dear

I love the way you show sanskar's emtions and his lovly nature and present time maturity level. Really a true lover who can do anything for his beloved.

Really love is magical which can make a beast to human and tranform a human to beast and you showed both in this part. I really felt in case of Jaggu and sunny.

Really can't wait for further story and the most amazing thing of ff is that you have taken a most sensitive and powerful topic.

Sushma

Dear Sushma,

It's extremely satisfying as a writer, when a reader notices and connects with the way she built the character graphs. The Story is about Swara but in a way it's more about Sanskar who grows from a sweet college lover to mature counterpart.

Moreover you've noticed a minor character Jaggu, for this I'll really give you credits.

I wish to create awareness by this ff. That's why every details about treatment and legal procedures mentioned here are facts.

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Awesome update

Thanks for your constant support

as always u rock it sadia di...
this is my first comment for u in IF soo let it be special...

I know i have said u this probably 100 of times that u r my inspirtion bt its the universal truth..

i love the way u write the way u show each things with minute detailings..

the best part in this story n the difficult one is writing both the past n the present a cheerful one n a melancohly one.. yet u manage hats offf..

sahil facing tortures by Jaggu ohh i m just waiting fr it despartely

n just come to india soon n send me ur pics...happy journey..

Aadyasha

Originally posted by: aadya2370

as always u rock it sadia di...
this is my first comment for u in IF soo let it be special...

I know i have said u this probably 100 of times that u r my inspirtion bt its the universal truth..

i love the way u write the way u show each things with minute detailings..

the best part in this story n the difficult one is writing both the past n the present a cheerful one n a melancohly one.. yet u manage hats offf..

sahil facing tortures by Jaggu ohh i m just waiting fr it despartely

n just come to india soon n send me ur pics...happy journey..

Aadyasha

Thanks dear!
But you've come a long path too!
It's a pity you've to wait for watching Sahil to suffer. As my SSR and Nymph are currently on the next.

About the prison scenario I wrote from what prisoners experience in reality in Mumbai central jail.

Love,
Dyuti

Hi dyuti...

Dyuti ..darling..im late...

Originally posted by: raaz19

Hi dyuti...

Finally read all parts of this beautiful story and was shying away from commenting...but for some reason couldn't stop myself...

Firstof all can I say a big thank you for taking this bold step of writing about such a big issue and trying to raise awareness about what a acid attack does not only to the victims but the people around them...I love the festivals you have shown bot in the emotional and medical part of the journey...It has been beautifully scripted...

Not only that one can feel the difference between the darkness and light that they once shared in there care free days as students to adult lovers...loving the small takes from a time gone by to the present...

There first meet to there bonding over the little scooter...It was a lovely touch...I can see that the message in each update focuses on the internal growth of both these characters...

But mostly love the ficus upon how will sanskaar react...from the past I have seen so far he has always been immature nut caring were as swara has always shown her strength to be her friends and family whom she loves and will fight for from destiny and beyond...

Love the take of lucky and nikhil too...perfect blend yo this update...

But for me the jaggu the prisoner made me connect with sk as he will be his fire to destroy sahil...

Lovely message if love can make you dream them love can make you destroy...but one is hurt the other is too..

Healing can only be done when people fight...and fighting together is the best way if moving forward...and maybe a small step towards accepting that it will be all okay in the end. ...

Update soon...and hope you have a lovely holiday...

Take care

Razia

P's if possible can you pm me in the next update would live yo see what happens next :)

Dear Razia,

Thanks for your warm response and the way you described about this humble attempt of mine about this very sensitive topic. I'm not that strong in writing emotions and have this habit of putting informations that may give my fiction a documentary feel. it's amazing that you could feel the pulse of the tale, about what I'm trying to portray. Every trauma has its after effect... like an earthquake... The place right next to its origin the most impactful shaking... Here's the same case..

I'm satisfied that people had noticed Jaggu in a positive way... I haven't expected such a warm welcome for him. Truly he will be Sanskar's weapon... or perhaps more than that.

Extremely sorry for late reply... I'm still on the move... .

Love,
Dyuti