Thou art flame, my love : Chapter 6; P-20 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

Dyuti😃

Once again a beautifully written update👏
Swara is miserable😭,Sahil😡
Admiring our Sanskaar more & more😳
Eagerly Waiting for ZVST !!



Dear Sandy,

Thanks for loving this chapter and commenting. Swara is hurt both physically and mentally. Facial disfiguration is nothing less than traumatic, especially for a girl. I hope you'll admire Sanskar more in the next chapters and enjoy their love story.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Want to see sahil suffer



He surely will!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg that was such an emotional update...loved it very much hun...cannot wait to read further to see how they overcome all this...thnx fr d pm hun!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: kriti_atharv

omg that was such an emotional update...loved it very much hun...cannot wait to read further to see how they overcome all this...thnx fr d pm hun!!



Dear Kriti,
I feel blessed that you could feel their emotions and loved it.. I too can't wait to write a love story that can pass all the obstacles that come into their way.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Dyuti,

I have not yet read ZvT yet but its on my to-read list. For now I have started reading TAF and the prologue has been intriguing.. Surely something happened with Swara and Sanskaar is going to make sure she will be alright and with him by end of this turmoil.

What I know I am going to like the most is the angry young man Sanskaar Maheshwari. Please keep writing.. I know the forum now feels very lonely but some of us still haunt this place time and again.

Thank you for the pm.

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Hi Dyuti,

The first Chapter does clear the picture a bit.. Is Sanskaar part of some band? Now that would be a sight to behold! 😆

The flirting and the start of the love story contrasting with the not so rosy present.. Is Sahil part of the college gang as well?

Moving over to Chapter 2..

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Hi Dyuti,

Wow... emotional drama.. I loved how Lucky is being portrayed here. He is Swara's best friend both past and present and is there to stay. He wouldn't spare even Sanskaar should he hurt Swara in any way. Looks like I was right in guessing Sahil was also in the same college as SwaSan and their enmity goes back to their college days. What happened that Sahil hates her so much?

Happy Valentines Day!

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

<font color="#330066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hi Dyuti,</font>

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<font color="#330066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I have not yet read ZvT yet but its on my to-read list. For now I have started reading TAF and the prologue has been intriguing.. Surely something happened with Swara and Sanskaar is going to make sure she will be alright and with him by end of this turmoil.</font>
<font color="#330066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">
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<font color="#330066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">What I know I am going to like the most is the angry young man Sanskaar Maheshwari. Please keep writing.. I know the forum now feels very lonely but some of us still haunt this place time and again.</font>
<font color="#330066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">
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<font color="#330066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank you for the pm.</font>
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<font color="#330066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Cheers</font>
<font color="#330066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sharon</font>



Dear Sharon,
I'm very much familiar of the situation... not being able to read others' stories. Personally I use my most of the free time on working on my updates. And unfortunately both of them need researchanging and groundwork. I left your whimsical corporation for too long and finally completed by binge reading. Still I have Fanaa on my list, and many stories on Wattpad.
Also have 20-25 books I kept for reading.

No forum is not completely empty. Surely they're not active but my ZvT still gets 1000+(I noticed it!) views per chapter.
More experienced writers get more views. So we do have silent members.

I love both version of Sanskar : lover boy and angry young man.You'll find them both.


Thanks,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330066">Hi Dyuti,</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330066">Wow... emotional drama.. I loved how Lucky is being portrayed here. He is Swara's best friend both past and present and is there to stay. He wouldn't spare even Sanskaar should he hurt Swara in any way. Looks like I was right in guessing Sahil was also in the same college as SwaSan and their enmity goes back to their college days. What happened that Sahil hates her so much?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330066">Happy Valentines Day!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330066">Cheers</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330066">Sharon</font>



Dear Sharon,

Chapter 1 &2: Lucky is another character who got special attention besides Swasan in this FF. Regular readers of my other FF know how much difference are there between both versions. For me a story should have strong supporting characters. Here Sanskar badly need a strong support when his family and own friends are not happy with his decision to stick to his love's side and his love is broken herself.

I'll reveal all about Sahil gradually. The connection of Sahil with Swasan, their enmity... everything.
Happy belated valentines day.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Dyuti...dear
chapter 2 was Amazing...

This chapter was well blended..happy n funny past ..n heart wrenching n painful present of swasan lives...relived both form of emotion of swasan ...enjoyed aswell asfelt bad for swasan...waiting to know more...what made sahil go that far n took revenge this way???curious to know swara's decision??hope she accept sanky...

Love u
Talia

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