Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
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Nynu🤗

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jess_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Wonderful story.. i was waiting for your update.. loved it to the care..

Like i said, i have become fan of your writing..

Looking forward to reading more..

Love,

Jessica..

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Dearest Lucky,

I read this in afternoon but was so caught up in working on my own. Also my thoughts were incoherent that time! Chapter 3 clouded my intellect to that extent! Untamed emotions, untamed self restraints, untamed desires... How I loved Sujoy, for knocking some sense in that thick skulled lover! He tried so hard to stay away yet ached for her one glimpse, one touch, one word! And Swara! She could sense Sanskar's every untold emotions, every heartbeat, every uneasiness. She moved out to gazebo from the restaurant to remove his unease... and that sweet gesture was rewarded. ... in form of bliss... of being aware how much love and smoldering passion was stored in his heart for her!

See? I'm still rambling!!! I'm afraid! God knows what type of crap I've typed today! I think I should stop writing detailed comments for you people's story! At the end of the day I only embarrass myself!

Love you a lot! And update soon!

Dyuti

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Hello lucky dear
thanks a lot for the update u know how impatiently waiting for know what happen head & what an update u bring to u make me emotional & fall in love swasan again.
you know I like infact loved every bit of it.
sujoy such a sweetheart loved his conversation with sanskar & At last put some brain in sanskar head.
& after that the much awaited part the swasan moments u know whenever I read some beautiful writing on swasan I visualise them infront of my eyes like I watching vahe as a swasan on my screen & this part one of this I connect myself every emotions of swasan their fight with their innerself & last their heart to heart talking sharing everything with each other.
& at last their confession & romance let their emotions flow with kisses & need for each other.
Now I waiting for their hot romance like sanskar said so don't u dare to cut it like cvs who always cessor swasan scenes like they don't show what sanskar video records for swara & many more so u not trying to do this.
hehehe I want swasan romance.
Bye
Take care dear
loved u buddy

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phoenix27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Hi Lucky,

I read this chapter in Wattpad and then came here. It's so beautiful their raw emotions her heartache to have him for her, his love and longing for her. I sometimes think if this kind of love exists in real world, so soft yet fierce, delicate yet powerful clear yet confounding, total contrast. Then I think this is what love is, the supreme emotion which can make anyone do anything.

Coming to the story it's finally relieving to see Sanskar giving chance to them. It would be interesting to see why Swara tricked him to marry as you mentioned in chapter 2 when he was giving them a chance.

Thanks for writing dear loved it. please update next chapter soon.

PS: Please update Fanaa as well.

Love,

Ria

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Lucky..dear

Chapter 3 was brilliant...

Sanky's denial n swara constant showing n giving hints to him..it was cute...

Sujoy n sanky part was great...i loved jeeja n saala bond..sanky caught his matchmaking scheme...sujoy knocked some sense in him...but somewhere i did not like when sujoy left..i felt something bad will happen now in his absence...fingers crossed...

raglak date n swasan stolen moments were amazing..confrontation lead to a soul stirring passionate confession..i soo enjoyed n loved it...waiting for next..

Love u

Talia

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res for ch-2 Lucky. 😳
Unresed. 😃
I really loved the bro-sis bonding between Sujoy-Swara. 😃 Such an adorable bonding. 😳 Sujoy knows that SwaSan loves each other so he helped them to get together. 😉 I loved SwaSan scenes very much be it the flashback scenes or the present scenes. 😳 All was going well so suddenly what happened that Sanskar thinks that Swara tricked him to wed her?? 😕 He loves her right? Then?? 😕 OMG! Can't wait to read the next part dear. 😉 Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Aheli Sweet heart🤗

Sorry for the super delay in revert.

Glad you loved the adorable bonding of Sujoy and Swara .I wanted Swara to have a super solid support and who could be better than sibling. Yes he knows Swasan love each other though Sanskaar had not confessed yet..which he did in next part.

We need to have some twists in the tale na😆 ...You will have your answers in coming parts

Next part updated .. will wait to know your thoughts

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Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb..u r a awesome writer 👏

Thank you sneha😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Kaveetha
Wow... Wonderful... I'm loving this a lot... 😛
Lucky dear, I think this is the first time, i'm dropping my idea in your stories. But i'm a secret follower of your fanaa.. 😃 i love that a lot..
Frankly speaking, i landed up in this story accidentally and fell in love with it. I have to say this story is very intriguing. I'm loving this shona & sanskaar. Sujoy is a caring brother & a friend. Shek-shomi are loving parents. But Shekhar was a surprise for me.. 😉 Ragini & dadi.. As expected.. 🤢
I loved all swasan scenes. 😳 Their love & care for each other was amazing..
Then came the twist in the tale.. Everything was going so smooth, then what happen so suddenly causing their marriage? I know they loved each other.. But i know this also, that ragini, dadi & shomi won't let that happen so easily... They were searching some good proposals for swara & they were againt swasan's closer.Then how could they approve this? 😕 And why that sanskaar thinks that his shona has tricked him to marry her?
Oh god.. I have so many questions. Update soon lucky..
Cannot wait for it..
Love u
Kavi

Hi Kaveeta🤗

Good to see you coming out of cloak😆.Sorry for the delay in revert.

Its always good to read views from different readers and great to know they are loving thisstory and Swasan Scenes and other characters as well.I wanted Sekhar to have a nice role as unlike serial in serial..I want him to be liked😆

Ragini and Dadi .My fav choice for bringing twist in tales and Shomi going by tale will have a crucial role to play in coming parts.You will have answer to all your questions in coming parts

Updated the next part . Do read and let me know your views..Will PM you next update

Thanks again

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Lucky,
was that HAWT or WHAT? Simply marvelous. Swasan scenes were great to read especially the kiss scene ☺️ ☺️. I myself was left blushing reading that part. Finally sanskar has realisation that it was, is and always only him whom swara wants or to say needs like oxygen to breathe. She loves him in her own way. Adamant on sticking with him still not turning it as an obsession. I'm in love with the untamed love of swasan. Please don't end it do soon.
Love
Nivi

😳😳 Nivi .🤗.

Thank you😳...Yes Finally hero had realization..tubelight😆Its good to know that Swara's adamant nature didnt come out or seem like obsession.May be 2 or 3 parts to go ..thats it ..since its a simple story ..but so happy to know you don't want this to end soon😊

Love

Lucky

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