SwaSan Spectrum - OS Series - Page 3

😳 Nynu 🤗.🤗..This is just awesome Bangaram..I loved it loved it loved it .👏⭐️

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Riya,

I never thought I could appear saintlike - and am glad that misconception is laid to rest. 😉 I am more like - I have to fly, wings or broomsticks - pretty flexible either way.

I will get back to reply to your comment in a while.

Viji,

I have no doubts about you being saint like - no way on earth - though you do hold the crown for the Queen of all writings especially of the ML track😊

love,

Nyna

Hello nyna dear
its a beautiful & hot sensuous update I loved it dear.
lol swara behave like a typical wife & poor sanskar without noticed sunny Leone jhelling wife angryness.
first time her behena suggest something worthy for swasan & there fans hehe haha.
swara devi ur husband already latto on u see it hard work went vain that also itna latto that not give u chance to complete 3 step poor girl.
loved their moments dear & their deal also.
thanks u.
waiting for ur next part of this series update soon
Take care
Bye.

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Nynu ..

Phil collins version of true colors is beautiful .. but I like this cover more for the song it was by a participant in The Voice ..

https://youtu.be/UmnJksAn3yM

And I loved the writing style .. I think it is a bit difficult to write like that .. if I was in your place I would end with a confused mind .. though reading it is not confusing at all ..

Love

Khushi

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

O.M.G😲😳

f**k.

Ok. Now that's out of the way. . .

And, Okay, I take those as a compliment😉

😆👏😆

First of all, I can't believe you can write this. Seriously, my version of you Sakura24 Banjaaran Tootiefrootie and Coritoergosum is pretty saint like . . . I expect soul crushing angst, sex minus the crude names of body part and scenes from.show somehow Incorporated into your AU stories. Something beyond this make me go😲😲😲 in a good way, really.

Par yeh to . . .

I guess this misconception has been laid to rest, by Viji too. Though I had to go back to read my tale the first time I read this line (crude names??? - I was sure I had not even mentioned the word "lips" so where did this come from😕 - okay I checked, 0nce😆😆😆 But it was completely implied - I guess your 'sexy imagination' took over😉

I guess the absence of anything remotely serious made me so surprised. Man, Sunny Leone🤪 And I can't believe Swara went to learn dance! Was that lap dance or Pole dance? Which tutor she could find who won't be judgmental of her actions and also could give such amazing ideas! Ragini and Tanu is my new fav. Kudos👏 Raat akeli hai! It's my ultimate seduction song . . If I had a playlist it would be on top. Next is Aa Zara kareeb se😆😛

Once in a while, it is good to go against established routines, this was a light hearted story, though I could not resist a slight seriousness (the advice from the instructor). Swara had no choice, not when Tanu also gave her stamp of approval. Pole dance (too ambitious for Swara and not practical - imagine that on the roof top of the MM🤣. Lap Dance - not that either, Sanskaar would never sit through and there is no way Swara would tie him to the chair.

Raat akeli hai - my absolute favourite. The other one, is a new song, so I really would not know much.

Sanskaar's that dialogue about celibate priest losing it 🤣

That was for her benefit, she had to know that she could even break the most celibate priest, so Sanskaar cannot be blamed for his...

Now that you wrote it, there has to be a story where Sanskaar gets jealous of someone hitting on Swara and she makes fun of him. You can even write a HBO level sex in that😉😆 take this advice into consideration pretty please.

Now that is a tad difficult, Sanskaar in my world, can never be jealous, he is confident of himself and Swara, but maybe I could twist it so that Swara thinks he is jealous, he lets her think and then...let me see, if I do get it, you will be the first to know.

Thanks for pm Hon🤗

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Khushi,

I had a horrendous weekend, had to work for most of the time, will listen to the song today.

I am glad, no make that relieved that you liked the style. And do not think your style is confusing (that is nervousness) you write well.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Res Nyna...

Just came home from bowling game so my fingers are hurting.. I will read this in the morning and leave a detailed comment.

I am glad that you have chosen to construct a new OS instead of an epilogue so that it can be a standalone read. I see that there are certain readers who read OS but not SS and FF.. this would be a way to reach out to them.

As a writer, I feel epilogue are a new beginning for the tales. I normally have a string resolve to not write an epilogue and close all sub plots with the last chapter. However someone dear comes along, requesting for an epilogue. I can't help but go back, read the whole story and write an epilogue.

I wrote it as a new story, because I did not want an epilogue, I was and firm on that. I usually structure my stories much ahead and there was no way I could have an epilogue here. For my other SS - I actually had to restructure the whole story to included the epilogue. I have a strange fetish, as a reader and which has now extended to me as a writer, I need to know the ending. I read a book only after I have read the ending first (which is why I am thankful for Shru's DK which got me hooked to reading serial stories without knowing what the ending was - earlier I would only read completed FF /SS😆😆😆) So if I have not written an epilogue, I cannot even go back and write one😕😕

I hope you have a link on the last part of Amaranthine linking to this one shot so that those who read the play don't miss out on this. If you haven't, please take this as a suggestion.

I did not, but have now done so. That is a good suggestion.

Also looks like your obsession for color is back.. Amaranth to Gold, I guess I have to read to understand the transition or the nexus ..

My chromatic obsession is quite well known - I wrote three OS that had as many colours as possible, in fact the last in that series, I had to hunt up new / made up words for colours😆😆

Ab mujhse aur nahi hota.. will pakka be back tomorrow.. have a good night😊

Will wait.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Viji,

Take all the time you need.

Baby Doll😆 - I could recall only that song of Sunny Leone, you must be aware that I prefer old songs, but then it is quite suitable (I actually had to watch the song all over again, and yes, I also ended up staring vacuously at the laptop screen🤣)

I do not think it would have made any difference to Swara as to who was dancing on the screen, she would have simply flammed up

Poor Sunny, in the doghouse, for ogling at Sunny when he was actually staring into space where there was no Sun😆😆😆

Rumi is a genius, I love all his quotes, they are the first I search for - but here I loved this quote, it had a butterfly in it, which reminded me of the story - The butterfly that stomped.

love,

Nyna

Nynu...🤗


Still battling with paucity of time, but wanted to quickly drop in and say---how much I love the song selection. 'Raat Akeli hai'...haaye haaye. 😳 ☺️ One of Asha's gems; another great one being 'Aao Na, Gale Lagao Na...' . Both of them steamingly sensual, without being ribald or bawdy. No wonder Sunny couldn't keep his hands off Swara for more than 3 moves. 😉

So Sunny is a Asha fan in your fics. 😆 Just as SwaSan are Lata/ Rafi/ Manna Dey fans in mine. 😉 BTW your faves are Rafi and Asha na? Or is it Manna Dey and Asha?

Another lovely number which springs to mind is 'Baahon mein chali aao'--again Asha I guess? But the mood there is different, more naughty and sprite like, not steamy seductress. 😉

If Sunny was a more modern song/ Madhuri Dixit fan, Swara could have done a 'Dhak Dhak karne laga' as well. 😆 Though that would have ahem! moved from the suggestive category to a rather more open declaration of intent! 😆 No 'suggestion' or 'reading between the lines' left no? 😆 Though I have always been a Madhuri fangirl, and will be one for life!

Lots of Love,

----Viji

@ Viji

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nyna deariee...

I must tell u i soo enjoyed this style of writing...

Also want to confess, i so wanted epilogue of amaranthine as their was vacant space under chapter 7..but still could not unreserve to ask for it...n now u gave a curtain call.it was nice too..but ...but you gave .. this spin off journey...im literally jumping with sheer joy n happiness...thanku ..thank u so much babes...it was outclass...

First spectrum..one shade ..colour golden..it was awesome...sanky n swara stupid fight...over sunny leone.which was cute..i agree with ragini sanky can never see anyone other than swara...but fight purposely stretched soo much by swara.as she planned a surprise...b the outcome it yield was what every swasan crazy fan wanted..pure bliss...ethereal jaan...im in dazze...hehe...

Love u...

Talia