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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 3
Hi Dyuti,

Wow! What an update!

I was right about the hijack.. Laksh as the hijacker.. Where is Ragini? Who would be the leader? Gosh.. This is turning to be a page turner.

Great job!

Cheers
Sharon
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Thanks for your lovely response dear!
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Originally posted by: Sparkler8

<font color="#006666">Chapter 1 &2</font>

<font color="#006666">Hi Dyuti,</font>

<font color="#006666">I don't think I have read a thriller based on SwaSan till day. While I am not a fan of watching thrillers, I think I am going to enjoy this ride for the hero Sanskaar is.😳</font>

<font color="#006666">A very interesting read so far. Is it going to be a bomb attack or hijack? Why are they behind Swara? I guess I will find out in upcoming chapters.</font>

<font color="#006666">Cheers</font>
<font color="#006666">Sharon</font>



Dear Sharon,
No no, our talented bunch of writers explored this genre as well!Nimmi's Angel I think I don't have to mention anything else... is the best and proper thriller on Swasan. You can call "Behind the mask" by Nita a thriller too. ZvT contentwise is a romantic thriller and very close to my heart as this is my first attempt at writing.
And that's why I'm mortified too! The first few chapters had lots of typos and grammatical errors... and the writing?😭 I didn't editthem here as I felt too lazy.

I hope you will have same amount of interest for the next chapters too. The plot demanded few slow chapters for build up. I know maximum readers here loves romance. But they gradually accepted this and made me delighted. They kept me going on... for reading and research... learning things those probably I wouldn't have ever tried.

As you've read chapter 3 already, I think you know why they were after Swara. Sanskar may be the hero but Swara is an equal counterpart in this story. And Laksh is the among one the hijackers. You were right about hijack! 😊 No one could predict that beforehand so kudos to you! 😃 Ragini will have an entry.

I'm chatty right? 😉 😃 😳

Love and cheers,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb dear..

Loved it..
Oh God, hope swara is safe
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Superb dear..

Loved it..
Oh God, hope swara is safe



Hi Manisha!
Sorry for the late reply dear! Having a bad wrist pain, practically lefty now! Thanks a lot for your lovely response! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Dyuti

Chapter 4:
Whoa!! What was that!!

Ok, I am over reacting..

But still, whoa!! The ending was mindblowing..

In fact, I wanted to ask you in this comment, is Sanskaar fibbing? Because when he first met Swara, both were strangers. Come to the chapter ending, he was fibbing. Careful, man..

I went back to Chapter 1 and he had introduced himself as Sanskaar Oberoi. Hmm.. interesting..

Welcome, Ragini. I was half expecting Agni to be Ragini.. May be this is weird, but I'm imagining, either Dadi or AP as Agni. Not very related, but thought of letting you know.

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Dear Sharon,
No no, our talented bunch of writers explored this genre as well!Nimmi's Angel I think I don't have to mention anything else... is the best and proper thriller on Swasan. You can call "Behind the mask" by Nita a thriller too. ZvT contentwise is a romantic thriller and very close to my heart as this is my first attempt at writing.
And that's why I'm mortified too! The first few chapters had lots of typos and grammatical errors... and the writing?😭 I didn't editthem here as I felt too lazy.

I hope you will have same amount of interest for the next chapters too. The plot demanded few slow chapters for build up. I know maximum readers here loves romance. But they gradually accepted this and made me delighted. They kept me going on... for reading and research... learning things those probably I wouldn't have ever tried.

As you've read chapter 3 already, I think you know why they were after Swara. Sanskar may be the hero but Swara is an equal counterpart in this story. And Laksh is the among one the hijackers. You were right about hijack! 😊 No one could predict that beforehand so kudos to you! 😃 Ragini will have an entry.

I'm chatty right? 😉 😃 😳

Love and cheers,
Dyuti


Hi Dyuti,

I can feel you. Till date, I regret not completing my first FF. Please keep going and complete this. It's a lot of satisfaction.

While I don't exactly prefer all romance, I do tend to stay away from thriller movies, because when I don't know the end, these stories will haunt me on lonely, sleepless nights. So possibly I have stayed away from FFs in that genre as well.

What attracted me to reading this is the title. It is unique and I like it 😊

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dyuti dear...
What a power packed update...swasan n gang worked hard to find what black wolves were planning...i loved whole mission..every one played their part nicely...climax was thrilling.. where swara is???inside or outside???sanky is super worried???hope nothing bad happen...excited for next...

Talia
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Originally posted by: Sparkler8

<font color="#006666">Hi Dyuti</font>

<font color="#006666">Chapter 4:</font>
<font color="#006666">Whoa!! What was that!!</font>

<font color="#006666">Ok, I am over reacting..</font>

<font color="#006666">But still, whoa!! The ending was mindblowing..</font>

<font color="#006666">In fact, I wanted to ask you in this comment, is Sanskaar fibbing? Because when he first met Swara, both were strangers. Come to the chapter ending, he was fibbing. Careful, man..</font>

<font color="#006666">I went back to Chapter 1 and he had introduced himself as Sanskaar Oberoi. Hmm.. interesting..</font>

<font color="#006666">Welcome, Ragini. I was half expecting Agni to be Ragini.. May be this is weird, but I'm imagining, either Dadi or AP as Agni. Not very related, but thought of letting you know.</font>

<font color="#006666">Cheers</font>
<font color="#006666">Sharon</font>



Dear Sharon,
Well I tried to give my readers surprises. Personally I won't mind anyone's overreaction. I know you'll have many questions but I assure you, you'll get the most of the answers you're searching for. Till chapter 4 Sanskar's real identity was not revealed. You're right though... He was fibbing.
Agni is a male character, so Ragini or AP can't be Agni. This FF has a huge character liSt and there's no relation with SR.

Happy reading!(hopefully 😊 😃 )

Love,
Dyuti
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Dyuti dear...

What a power packed update...swasan n gang worked hard to find what black wolves were planning...i loved whole mission..every one played their part nicely...climax was thrilling.. where swara is???inside or outside???sanky is super worried???hope nothing bad happen...excited for next...

Talia



Dear Talia,
Yup, Swasan and gang really worked hard to stop the wolves... Though Swara was in the the background all the time.Swara is in trouble either way. One Side THE WOLVES AND OTHER SIDE our angry young man Sunny boy!

Love,
Dyuti

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