Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71) - Page 41

Dyuti😃

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

Dyuti😃

As usual beautifully written👏..Totally enjoyed it !!

Thanks Sandy! I love your short yet sweet response.

nice update...love the arrow character's fusion. i hope felicity is in here too.

Dyuti dear...

Originally posted by: Asyalover

nice update...love the arrow character's fusion. i hope felicity is in here too.

Dearest,
At first I thought you posted on the wrong post. I"ve never watched Arrow. Though know about him from Smallville a little.
So if you find a fusion there I can't take the credit! 😳
I hope you loved whatever you read.

Love,
Dyuti 😊

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Dyuti dear...

Never say update is not up to our expectation...update was remarkable...

I just loved the jealousy streak in swara..n sanky doing his job perfectly...enjoying..flirting...spreading his charm.and clearly hearing swara's words ...haha it was epic...Miss chudail...soo enjoyed it...

Whole mission planning was nicely penned...very enjoyable read...

Love

Talia

Thanks Talia,

Recently I'm working on the detailing and language. I found I'm having problems in writing what I'm imagining. Like the dance steps. It's a big relief that you loved it. But wish to make the next update better, fast paced and thrilling. It's a pity given the current situation Swara has to take a back seat. But she will be with him even if she's not with him.

Love you for your encouraging words dear.
Dyuti

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res for 21

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">And finally unres for 21 - I had my fingers crossed, partly hoping you would not update before I got to unres the slot.😳</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Very skillfully described, though Swara's insistence that she accompany Sanskaar and Thea's ready acceptance has me worried. Swara's presence did lead to a very humourous incidents with her fuming over Sanskaar's professional flirting (😉) but I am scared, she has no combat training, she is still to recover from her injury and her ability not to think if she feels Sanskaar's in danger, could jeopardise the whole mission, not to mention causing a serious heart attack to Sanskaar. I hope she behaves with reason.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">So the chapter is all set to have Sanskaar search Pandora's room - are you drawing parallels with the greek myth, by using this name? Guess I have to read the next chapter to know.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Do update soon.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Lots of love,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Nyna</font>

Dear Nyna,
The course and result of the mission are already decided in my mind.I shouldn't give you any spoilers but I can tell you, after effects are not going to be same as before. A change is surely coming into the story.

I know Swara accompanying them was a bit irrational. But her presence is more or less important.

Pandora.. well...you know Black wolves' rule about names. So you're almost right.
(Just now I discovered I typed Prometheus instead of Epimetheus. Stupid me!)

Loved reading your analysis as usual!

Take care.
Dyuti

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dear Nyna,
The course and result of the mission are already decided in my mind.I shouldn't give you any spoilers but I can tell you, after effects are not going to be same as before. A change is surely coming into the story.

I know Swara accompanying them was a bit irrational. But her presence is more or less important.

Pandora.. well...you know Black wolves' rule about names. So you're almost right.
(Just now I discovered I typed Prometheus instead of Epimetheus. Stupid me!)

Loved reading your analysis as usual!

Take care.
Dyuti

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Okay, that saved me some time, I had made a note to myself to Google how Promethus was connected to Pandora and half hoped it would be a lost myth that you had stumbled upon😊</font>

Actually Epimetheus was Prometheus' brother. Pandora was 'gifted' to him to punish the mankind for Prometheus' daring attempt of stealing fire. So that's where I've goofed up.